Chapter 2
Disclaimer: I don't own Danny Phantom, (BUT I WANT TO!!!) Jack, Maddie, Jazz, Tucker, or Sam. All the other characters are mine. Feel free to use their names, but their personalities are copyrighted!!! The rating of this story has changed to rated R for Language and character torture. Oh, minor note: I'm not going to eat you if you review my story. PLZ!!!!!
review responses:
lightning streak: I'm glad u like it. Hope I didn't make you wait too long!
Cheerleader4life: Thanks for reviewing.
Tora-Kitsune, Danny and Y.Link: Thanks. I'm glad you like my writing. Here's some more.
K.... here's Chapter 2
It was pitch black. His knees were killing him, and the biting chill sent shivers up his spine. He realized that he was in ghost mode; the faint glow about him gave him a dim view of his surroundings. He was chained on his knees between two tall stone pillars, the rusty manacles digging slightly into his wrists.
All of a sudden the room was blazing with light; torches along the wall burst into life. A high- pitched laugh echoed through the room as a transparent, dimly glowing figure stepped from the shadows. "Danny Phantom," the ghost chuckled, " I'm glad you could join us."
Zero bounded toward Danny, transforming into the great black tiger and slashing the boy's right cheek as he leapt over him. "I see you've already met Sarina. It's because of her you were able to attend. I suspect that you have no idea who I am. No, I suppose you don't. I am Rith, and I believe it was you, halfa, that sent my brother where I could not follow."
Danny looked into the red eyes of his captor and grimaced. He remembered that incident all too well.
"Yes, you did... I can read it in your face. Well, now it is time to pay for it." Rith brought his hand from behind his back, revealing an ancient- looking, multi- pronged whip curled in his hand. Sarina hissed and retreated into the shadows; she had often felt the bite of that whip.
"This tickler's got quite a bite," Rith whispered, allowing the end of the whip to brush the ground, "let's see how long it takes to make you scream."
Danny paused, coughing hard. Blood flecked his bed sheets, staining them with crimson dots. Sam leaped up and ran into the hall, calling for Doctor Moorhead, who came bustling down the hall, looking concerned. He sent Sam and Tucker into the hallway and closed the door firmly behind him. Dimly, the two friends could hear him talking to Danny as he worked.
Almost an hour later, Dr. Moorhead came out, flicking the light off before shutting the door. "He's sleeping now. You two should go home; he's not going to wake up again tonight." With that the doctor left them, standing side by side in the long hallway.
Sorry it's so short... I'll write more really soon. Just a reminder: you will not be struck by lightning if you review my story! Chap. 3 up really soon!
Disclaimer: I don't own Danny Phantom, (BUT I WANT TO!!!) Jack, Maddie, Jazz, Tucker, or Sam. All the other characters are mine. Feel free to use their names, but their personalities are copyrighted!!! The rating of this story has changed to rated R for Language and character torture. Oh, minor note: I'm not going to eat you if you review my story. PLZ!!!!!
review responses:
lightning streak: I'm glad u like it. Hope I didn't make you wait too long!
Cheerleader4life: Thanks for reviewing.
Tora-Kitsune, Danny and Y.Link: Thanks. I'm glad you like my writing. Here's some more.
K.... here's Chapter 2
It was pitch black. His knees were killing him, and the biting chill sent shivers up his spine. He realized that he was in ghost mode; the faint glow about him gave him a dim view of his surroundings. He was chained on his knees between two tall stone pillars, the rusty manacles digging slightly into his wrists.
All of a sudden the room was blazing with light; torches along the wall burst into life. A high- pitched laugh echoed through the room as a transparent, dimly glowing figure stepped from the shadows. "Danny Phantom," the ghost chuckled, " I'm glad you could join us."
Zero bounded toward Danny, transforming into the great black tiger and slashing the boy's right cheek as he leapt over him. "I see you've already met Sarina. It's because of her you were able to attend. I suspect that you have no idea who I am. No, I suppose you don't. I am Rith, and I believe it was you, halfa, that sent my brother where I could not follow."
Danny looked into the red eyes of his captor and grimaced. He remembered that incident all too well.
"Yes, you did... I can read it in your face. Well, now it is time to pay for it." Rith brought his hand from behind his back, revealing an ancient- looking, multi- pronged whip curled in his hand. Sarina hissed and retreated into the shadows; she had often felt the bite of that whip.
"This tickler's got quite a bite," Rith whispered, allowing the end of the whip to brush the ground, "let's see how long it takes to make you scream."
Danny paused, coughing hard. Blood flecked his bed sheets, staining them with crimson dots. Sam leaped up and ran into the hall, calling for Doctor Moorhead, who came bustling down the hall, looking concerned. He sent Sam and Tucker into the hallway and closed the door firmly behind him. Dimly, the two friends could hear him talking to Danny as he worked.
Almost an hour later, Dr. Moorhead came out, flicking the light off before shutting the door. "He's sleeping now. You two should go home; he's not going to wake up again tonight." With that the doctor left them, standing side by side in the long hallway.
Sorry it's so short... I'll write more really soon. Just a reminder: you will not be struck by lightning if you review my story! Chap. 3 up really soon!