AUTHORS NOTES: Okay, I finally done chapter 2! The character is kind of out
of characters especially Kikyo, sorry for making her so evil in this
story I have to made her evil in order to keep on with the story. Haha I
hope my bad grammars doesn't bother you reading the story! Haha ok on to
the story!
[The hardest thing]
Chapter 2 [The hardest thing]
"Say you...say you LOVE ME!" Kagome replied.
"Che! He's not gonna say that to you, you stupid! Inuyasha only loves me! And forever and more! If you are not dumb, you better leave now or peoples going to call you a shameless whore!" said Kikyo aside.
"YOU!" said Kagome angrily, her face was facing down and her hand is on tie.
Inuyasha can't believe all the rude stuff that Kikyo said to Kagome, it must be a big hit to her..."Kikyo! DON'T SAY THAT!" Inuyasha shouted.
"WHY? She is one! AND DON'T TELL ME THAT YOU DON'T LOVE ME ANYMORE!" yelled Kikyo.
"I, I don't know!" said Inuyasha, getting annoyed.
"INUYASHA! TELL ME! WHO DO YOU LOVE?" asked Kikyo loudly.
"I." Inuyasha don't know what to say except saying "I", he never knew that there was a question that are so unanswerable for him. But he have to answer. He wanted to say Kagome but he can't. Because Kikyo once threaten him that if Inuyasha hurts her, she will kill Kagome for good.
"I, I love...I love K-..." said Inuyasha stammered.
"K...?" asked Kikyo.
"K-KIKYO! I LOVE KIKYO!" shouted Inuyasha with tears. He can't believe he said that although he knows that he loves Kagome not Kikyo. He has to lie or Kagome will die...
"YES INUYASHA! That is the answer I've been waiting for!" yelled Kikyo happily.
"Yeah, yeah, ok..." Inuyasha force himself a fake smile. Nobody know how hurt his heart is, oh come on peoples! Lying to himself is really killing him. "Kagome?..." Inuyasha asked softly.
Chapter 3 is finished! Is really short isn't it? Well, I'm going to write a longer chapter after, but anyways, how was the story so far? Any suggestions? Lol I must have a lot of grammar problems...-- this is the bad thing about being an ESL student... but peoples! I'm only trying to improve my grammars...Please review thx a lot -
[The hardest thing]
Chapter 2 [The hardest thing]
"Say you...say you LOVE ME!" Kagome replied.
"Che! He's not gonna say that to you, you stupid! Inuyasha only loves me! And forever and more! If you are not dumb, you better leave now or peoples going to call you a shameless whore!" said Kikyo aside.
"YOU!" said Kagome angrily, her face was facing down and her hand is on tie.
Inuyasha can't believe all the rude stuff that Kikyo said to Kagome, it must be a big hit to her..."Kikyo! DON'T SAY THAT!" Inuyasha shouted.
"WHY? She is one! AND DON'T TELL ME THAT YOU DON'T LOVE ME ANYMORE!" yelled Kikyo.
"I, I don't know!" said Inuyasha, getting annoyed.
"INUYASHA! TELL ME! WHO DO YOU LOVE?" asked Kikyo loudly.
"I." Inuyasha don't know what to say except saying "I", he never knew that there was a question that are so unanswerable for him. But he have to answer. He wanted to say Kagome but he can't. Because Kikyo once threaten him that if Inuyasha hurts her, she will kill Kagome for good.
"I, I love...I love K-..." said Inuyasha stammered.
"K...?" asked Kikyo.
"K-KIKYO! I LOVE KIKYO!" shouted Inuyasha with tears. He can't believe he said that although he knows that he loves Kagome not Kikyo. He has to lie or Kagome will die...
"YES INUYASHA! That is the answer I've been waiting for!" yelled Kikyo happily.
"Yeah, yeah, ok..." Inuyasha force himself a fake smile. Nobody know how hurt his heart is, oh come on peoples! Lying to himself is really killing him. "Kagome?..." Inuyasha asked softly.
Chapter 3 is finished! Is really short isn't it? Well, I'm going to write a longer chapter after, but anyways, how was the story so far? Any suggestions? Lol I must have a lot of grammar problems...-- this is the bad thing about being an ESL student... but peoples! I'm only trying to improve my grammars...Please review thx a lot -