Ok, for anyone who has read my previous chapters, they had a good
plot but not very good writing, but it has been almost a year since
then so I think i have matured and this chapter should be longer
and more enjoyable. I am considering editing my other chapters,
please tell me in ur review if u think I should. Enjoy :-D
CH.4
Kagome felt like the walls were closing in around here,
and the fog was warm,causing her to sweat.She said to herself,don't
panic there is nothing to fear. She sat down and breathed heavily.
I'll just wait until inuyasha finds me Kagome thought to herself.
Meanwhile, at the campfire Inuyasha was beginning to pace around
their camp site. Miroku and Sango were sitting next to each other
waiting for their food to cook. SLAP "What i was reaching for my
staff!!" said Miroku. "Right" replied Sango. "Inuyasha why are u pacing?
If you are so worried about Kagome just go find her!" "Who said i was
worrying about Kagome!" he replied haughtily.Sango gave him a doubtful
stare while Miroku continued to rub his red face. " I'll be back"
Inuyasha said quickly and ran in the direction Kagome had gone just
minutes ago.
Kagome sat on the moist forest floor and tried to convince
herself she was not scared. This is not the same as the dream, Inuyasha
is coming, and everything will be fine. O FORGET THIS!!"INUYASHA,
INUYASHA!" she screamed out as loud as she could. Kagome heard
nothing and regained her seat on the ground. Even if he was right
next to me i would not be able to see him in this fog, she thought
to herself.pat pat pat Kagome heard the sound of running feet.
" Could it be Inuyasha?" she thought aloud."Hehehe!" she head shippo's
laughter. " Are you guys there?" she said warily. "Kagome?" she heard
Sango's voice. Kagome to spin around searching for where the sound was
coming from, she kept spinning and spinning, until she fell back on to
the forest floor with a thud, losing conciousness.
Inuyasha continued to run through the ever thickening fog,
searching for Kagome."Inuyasha" he heard someone whisper his name.
"Hahaha!" Maniacal laughter reverberated around him." I know your not real!"
he yelled out to a an enemy he could not see."AHH!!" He yelled out and sprinted
in the direction of Kagome's vary faint smell. He passed through the thick
fog and found himself in a clearing of the forest. "Kagome!" Inuyasha
screamed as he saw her limp form on the ground. He lfted her body off the ground
and spoke softly to her. "Kagome?"no response. He layed her back down
on the forest floor, and held her hand. "Please Kagome?" he said weakly.
"She won't wake up that way" he heard a voice say in the distance. Inuyasha
jumped to his feet. " Then tell me how she will!" he said angrily.
"Hahaha! Fool of a man! Think about it, what does she want more than anything?
what is something men are so often incapable of giving?" " I'm not sure what
you mean." " Of course you don't, she wants your love you fool! If you cant give
it to her by sunrise, she dies!For what is the point of living when u have no love?
Hahahaha! Hahahaha!" THe odd female voice slowly faded away. Inuyasha growled softly.
He genlty picked her up again and carried her slowly out of the forest.
plot but not very good writing, but it has been almost a year since
then so I think i have matured and this chapter should be longer
and more enjoyable. I am considering editing my other chapters,
please tell me in ur review if u think I should. Enjoy :-D
CH.4
Kagome felt like the walls were closing in around here,
and the fog was warm,causing her to sweat.She said to herself,don't
panic there is nothing to fear. She sat down and breathed heavily.
I'll just wait until inuyasha finds me Kagome thought to herself.
Meanwhile, at the campfire Inuyasha was beginning to pace around
their camp site. Miroku and Sango were sitting next to each other
waiting for their food to cook. SLAP "What i was reaching for my
staff!!" said Miroku. "Right" replied Sango. "Inuyasha why are u pacing?
If you are so worried about Kagome just go find her!" "Who said i was
worrying about Kagome!" he replied haughtily.Sango gave him a doubtful
stare while Miroku continued to rub his red face. " I'll be back"
Inuyasha said quickly and ran in the direction Kagome had gone just
minutes ago.
Kagome sat on the moist forest floor and tried to convince
herself she was not scared. This is not the same as the dream, Inuyasha
is coming, and everything will be fine. O FORGET THIS!!"INUYASHA,
INUYASHA!" she screamed out as loud as she could. Kagome heard
nothing and regained her seat on the ground. Even if he was right
next to me i would not be able to see him in this fog, she thought
to herself.pat pat pat Kagome heard the sound of running feet.
" Could it be Inuyasha?" she thought aloud."Hehehe!" she head shippo's
laughter. " Are you guys there?" she said warily. "Kagome?" she heard
Sango's voice. Kagome to spin around searching for where the sound was
coming from, she kept spinning and spinning, until she fell back on to
the forest floor with a thud, losing conciousness.
Inuyasha continued to run through the ever thickening fog,
searching for Kagome."Inuyasha" he heard someone whisper his name.
"Hahaha!" Maniacal laughter reverberated around him." I know your not real!"
he yelled out to a an enemy he could not see."AHH!!" He yelled out and sprinted
in the direction of Kagome's vary faint smell. He passed through the thick
fog and found himself in a clearing of the forest. "Kagome!" Inuyasha
screamed as he saw her limp form on the ground. He lfted her body off the ground
and spoke softly to her. "Kagome?"no response. He layed her back down
on the forest floor, and held her hand. "Please Kagome?" he said weakly.
"She won't wake up that way" he heard a voice say in the distance. Inuyasha
jumped to his feet. " Then tell me how she will!" he said angrily.
"Hahaha! Fool of a man! Think about it, what does she want more than anything?
what is something men are so often incapable of giving?" " I'm not sure what
you mean." " Of course you don't, she wants your love you fool! If you cant give
it to her by sunrise, she dies!For what is the point of living when u have no love?
Hahahaha! Hahahaha!" THe odd female voice slowly faded away. Inuyasha growled softly.
He genlty picked her up again and carried her slowly out of the forest.