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**Hiei's POV**
"There is a way to save Kagome. I know this, because I once too was stuck in this situation." I heard Kurama say this and I couldn't believe it. I could save Kagome! She could be free from that time warp!
"How? How do we get there?" I asked impatiently. I had to save Kagome NOW.
"Hold on Hiei. I know all of you want to save Kagome right now, but this takes proper planning. There are deadly obstacle courts you will have to face. I hardly got out of there alive when I was still Youko." Kurama explained to us in his normal and collected aura.
But that wasn't like me. I wasn't GOOD at planning. I was GOOD at action. Not planning.
Kurama must have known what I was thinking because he said, "We will leave for battle soon though. We will probably leave today to find out more about the obstacles."
"Ok. We'll meet back here in two hours. Get anything that you will need on the trip. See ya in two hours." With that Yusuke left and soon Kuwabara left too.
Kurama and I stayed behind; soon it began to rain.
"We should probably get going, Hiei. Don't want to catch a cold, do you?" Kurama asked me. He didn't move.
"Hn. I don't catch colds." I replied annoyed a little.
"That is true, I suppose. Demons immune senses are stronger than humans." Kurama answered. He was beating around the bush about something. I planned to find out what it was.
"Cut to the chase, Fox." I said, voicing my thoughts.
"Well, there is something else you need to know about the time warp..." He started.
"Get on with it." I didn't like were this was going so I wanted the fox to cut right to the chase.
"The warp...it's filled with negative energy. That's where all unwanted negative goes...it can...how should I put this? Warp people's minds."
"What do you mean by 'warp'?"
"The negative energy fills them and, well...you know."
This wasn't good. I can remember that happening with Kagome when Shido was around. She killed people. Making up my mind, I decided that we must get Kagome out of there as soon as possible.
I looked at Kurama and he nodded knowing exactly what I was thinking: Get Kagome out of there. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*! The two hours passed more like days to me. When the two humans finally came I said, "Finally. I've been waiting here forever."
They said nothing, but waited for Kurama since he left a little while ago to get a change of clothes and such.
A few minutes later I saw Kurama walk up to us. "Ready?" he asked us.
"Yeah."
"Let's get this party started!"
"Hn."
He nodded and gently pressed a seed into the ground.
"Hey Kurama, this is no time to start a garden, we gotta save Kagome." Yusuke said having no idea what Kurama was doing. Fool.
"I'm not. This plant will cut a rip into our dimension into the one Kagome's in. I think it's called The Black Hole of Unforgiveness." Kurama explained just as the seed started to sprout purplish leaves with veins on the underside.
**Kagome's POV**
Alone. Dark. Cold. That was all there was were Kagome. Sometimes she felt as though someone-or something- was watching her, but brushed it off as her growing want for company.
"Kagome..." I heard someone say. Their voice was like the wind. Cold and low.
"Who's there?" I asked a little scared. I wanted company but...
"..." no one answered.
Sighing, I mumbled, "I must be imagining things again."
"Kagome!" I heard another voice. This one was more sharp, and yet somewhat familiar.
"Who's there?" I asked getting more frightened by the minute. Was someone really there?
"I can't believe you fell for it! Like I would really love you!" That same sharp voice as before spoke again. It really seemed very familiar, but I was never good at placing voices.
Soon, a shadow of a figure started to appear in front of me.
"H-Hiei?!"
"What? Surprised? You're such a gullible fool Kagome." He said as though he had a deep hatred for me.
I could feel small buds of tears form in my eyes. "What are you saying? That you lied to me?"
"Isn't that what I just said? Have you gone deaf or what?!" Hiei snapped at me.
I could feel my self started to feel sad-no wait...why didn't I feel sad? I tried to...nothing happened. Why can't I feel sad? Have I lost the ability to? Instead I felt this other emotion fill its place...anger? Why do I feel angry?
"What?" Hiei asked me in his cold voice. "Too stunned to stay anything?"
"No! Just thinking of ways to get revenge!" I yelled suddenly. Quickly I put my hands to my mouth. Did I just say that? Whats going on?
Think hard Kagome. Think hard. I tried as hard as I could to find some sadness. Any kind of sadness, it didn't have to be because of Hiei's cruel words. It could be from anything! My family! Killing my friends! Anything...but I could find none. Not a single sad emotion was in me, and the strangest thing was that instead of feeling sad because of Hiei, my family, etc. I felt...disgust...anger...malice...no hurt. Just all the different stages of negative energy. Why is this happening? What is happening? Where are my friends, love, and family?
"We're right here Kagome." I heard a bunch of voices say in union.
"Now who's there?" I whined annoyed. I couldn't be sad so for some reason I was annoyed.
"Why it's your dear old friends, wench. What? Are you too good to speak to us now?" I heard a very familiar voice say.
"Inu yasha?" I asked narrowing my eyes. The emotion hate suddenly took over my body when I heard his voice. I don't know why though.
"Kagome, you're so stupid! I hate you!" I heard a child like voice to say to me.
"Shippo?" I asked. I wanted to feel sad. I knew I would have cried waterfalls if I heard him say that if I wasn't in this weird black hole. All I felt now was annoyance.
"Yeah well I hate you too." I said with out thinking about it.
"Lady Kagome, it's your fault that Naraku has most of the jewel! How could you be so thoughtless?"
"Miroku?"
"Kagome, you make me sick. I hate you! We all hate you! So stupid. You deserve to die! I can't believe you tricked me and killed me!" an angry female voice said sharply to me.
"Sango?"
Why were they all acting like this? Were they being controlled?...no. I can't sense any magic on them. Why do I feel so mad though? I asked myself. This question was eating away at me. I had to know why my emotions were acting haywire. The problem: Why can't I feel sad?!
**Yusuke's POV**
I watched in awe as a weird purplish plant came our of the small seed and cut open a hole in our dimension to get to the one Kagome was in. then, there was a loud roaring sound. Like a vacuum cleaner that had its horse power timed a hundred.
"Hurry! Portals to that dimension and this one close very fast!" Kurama yelled as he and Hiei jumped into a gray swirl.
"Come on Kuwabara!" I shouted as I jumped into with Kuwabara right on my tail. *~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*! I felt like I was floating. I had wings and could fly anywhere I wanted too. I was just getting use to this dreamy feeling when reality kicked into high gear and I felt my self fall onto the floor.
"Hurry. The first test awaits." Kurama said to us as we started to run.
**somewhere in the black hole of unforgiveness**
A lady smile. Her dark purple lips curled into a smirk. She played with her long black hair; read eyes sparkled.
"Run, run, run as fast as you can. You can't catch me I'm..." She started to laugh. "I'm your worst nightmare." She said all of this in a sort of sing- song like voice.
She put down the whine glass she had in her hand on the round glass table next her.
"You can't beat," she stopped and gave a small chuckle. "What you're looking for, can you? Besides you brought this upon yourselves."
The lady picked up a small circular disk and pushed a small black button on it. Instantly a screen appeared with Yusuke and the gang running to the first door. "You won't beat me because one of you can't fight me." With that the lady laughed and started to watch the screen.
Well that was a good chapter to me. I like it and I hope you like it too. Just give me at least 7 reviews and I'll post more. ^_^
Preview: Kagome has fallen under the misty spell of The Black Hole of Unforgiveness. Id there any way to save her? There is? Really? But will the spirit detectives get to her in time to perform the ritual? Find out next time on Red Roses and Black Thorns.
Enjoy!
**Hiei's POV**
"There is a way to save Kagome. I know this, because I once too was stuck in this situation." I heard Kurama say this and I couldn't believe it. I could save Kagome! She could be free from that time warp!
"How? How do we get there?" I asked impatiently. I had to save Kagome NOW.
"Hold on Hiei. I know all of you want to save Kagome right now, but this takes proper planning. There are deadly obstacle courts you will have to face. I hardly got out of there alive when I was still Youko." Kurama explained to us in his normal and collected aura.
But that wasn't like me. I wasn't GOOD at planning. I was GOOD at action. Not planning.
Kurama must have known what I was thinking because he said, "We will leave for battle soon though. We will probably leave today to find out more about the obstacles."
"Ok. We'll meet back here in two hours. Get anything that you will need on the trip. See ya in two hours." With that Yusuke left and soon Kuwabara left too.
Kurama and I stayed behind; soon it began to rain.
"We should probably get going, Hiei. Don't want to catch a cold, do you?" Kurama asked me. He didn't move.
"Hn. I don't catch colds." I replied annoyed a little.
"That is true, I suppose. Demons immune senses are stronger than humans." Kurama answered. He was beating around the bush about something. I planned to find out what it was.
"Cut to the chase, Fox." I said, voicing my thoughts.
"Well, there is something else you need to know about the time warp..." He started.
"Get on with it." I didn't like were this was going so I wanted the fox to cut right to the chase.
"The warp...it's filled with negative energy. That's where all unwanted negative goes...it can...how should I put this? Warp people's minds."
"What do you mean by 'warp'?"
"The negative energy fills them and, well...you know."
This wasn't good. I can remember that happening with Kagome when Shido was around. She killed people. Making up my mind, I decided that we must get Kagome out of there as soon as possible.
I looked at Kurama and he nodded knowing exactly what I was thinking: Get Kagome out of there. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*! The two hours passed more like days to me. When the two humans finally came I said, "Finally. I've been waiting here forever."
They said nothing, but waited for Kurama since he left a little while ago to get a change of clothes and such.
A few minutes later I saw Kurama walk up to us. "Ready?" he asked us.
"Yeah."
"Let's get this party started!"
"Hn."
He nodded and gently pressed a seed into the ground.
"Hey Kurama, this is no time to start a garden, we gotta save Kagome." Yusuke said having no idea what Kurama was doing. Fool.
"I'm not. This plant will cut a rip into our dimension into the one Kagome's in. I think it's called The Black Hole of Unforgiveness." Kurama explained just as the seed started to sprout purplish leaves with veins on the underside.
**Kagome's POV**
Alone. Dark. Cold. That was all there was were Kagome. Sometimes she felt as though someone-or something- was watching her, but brushed it off as her growing want for company.
"Kagome..." I heard someone say. Their voice was like the wind. Cold and low.
"Who's there?" I asked a little scared. I wanted company but...
"..." no one answered.
Sighing, I mumbled, "I must be imagining things again."
"Kagome!" I heard another voice. This one was more sharp, and yet somewhat familiar.
"Who's there?" I asked getting more frightened by the minute. Was someone really there?
"I can't believe you fell for it! Like I would really love you!" That same sharp voice as before spoke again. It really seemed very familiar, but I was never good at placing voices.
Soon, a shadow of a figure started to appear in front of me.
"H-Hiei?!"
"What? Surprised? You're such a gullible fool Kagome." He said as though he had a deep hatred for me.
I could feel small buds of tears form in my eyes. "What are you saying? That you lied to me?"
"Isn't that what I just said? Have you gone deaf or what?!" Hiei snapped at me.
I could feel my self started to feel sad-no wait...why didn't I feel sad? I tried to...nothing happened. Why can't I feel sad? Have I lost the ability to? Instead I felt this other emotion fill its place...anger? Why do I feel angry?
"What?" Hiei asked me in his cold voice. "Too stunned to stay anything?"
"No! Just thinking of ways to get revenge!" I yelled suddenly. Quickly I put my hands to my mouth. Did I just say that? Whats going on?
Think hard Kagome. Think hard. I tried as hard as I could to find some sadness. Any kind of sadness, it didn't have to be because of Hiei's cruel words. It could be from anything! My family! Killing my friends! Anything...but I could find none. Not a single sad emotion was in me, and the strangest thing was that instead of feeling sad because of Hiei, my family, etc. I felt...disgust...anger...malice...no hurt. Just all the different stages of negative energy. Why is this happening? What is happening? Where are my friends, love, and family?
"We're right here Kagome." I heard a bunch of voices say in union.
"Now who's there?" I whined annoyed. I couldn't be sad so for some reason I was annoyed.
"Why it's your dear old friends, wench. What? Are you too good to speak to us now?" I heard a very familiar voice say.
"Inu yasha?" I asked narrowing my eyes. The emotion hate suddenly took over my body when I heard his voice. I don't know why though.
"Kagome, you're so stupid! I hate you!" I heard a child like voice to say to me.
"Shippo?" I asked. I wanted to feel sad. I knew I would have cried waterfalls if I heard him say that if I wasn't in this weird black hole. All I felt now was annoyance.
"Yeah well I hate you too." I said with out thinking about it.
"Lady Kagome, it's your fault that Naraku has most of the jewel! How could you be so thoughtless?"
"Miroku?"
"Kagome, you make me sick. I hate you! We all hate you! So stupid. You deserve to die! I can't believe you tricked me and killed me!" an angry female voice said sharply to me.
"Sango?"
Why were they all acting like this? Were they being controlled?...no. I can't sense any magic on them. Why do I feel so mad though? I asked myself. This question was eating away at me. I had to know why my emotions were acting haywire. The problem: Why can't I feel sad?!
**Yusuke's POV**
I watched in awe as a weird purplish plant came our of the small seed and cut open a hole in our dimension to get to the one Kagome was in. then, there was a loud roaring sound. Like a vacuum cleaner that had its horse power timed a hundred.
"Hurry! Portals to that dimension and this one close very fast!" Kurama yelled as he and Hiei jumped into a gray swirl.
"Come on Kuwabara!" I shouted as I jumped into with Kuwabara right on my tail. *~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*! I felt like I was floating. I had wings and could fly anywhere I wanted too. I was just getting use to this dreamy feeling when reality kicked into high gear and I felt my self fall onto the floor.
"Hurry. The first test awaits." Kurama said to us as we started to run.
**somewhere in the black hole of unforgiveness**
A lady smile. Her dark purple lips curled into a smirk. She played with her long black hair; read eyes sparkled.
"Run, run, run as fast as you can. You can't catch me I'm..." She started to laugh. "I'm your worst nightmare." She said all of this in a sort of sing- song like voice.
She put down the whine glass she had in her hand on the round glass table next her.
"You can't beat," she stopped and gave a small chuckle. "What you're looking for, can you? Besides you brought this upon yourselves."
The lady picked up a small circular disk and pushed a small black button on it. Instantly a screen appeared with Yusuke and the gang running to the first door. "You won't beat me because one of you can't fight me." With that the lady laughed and started to watch the screen.
Well that was a good chapter to me. I like it and I hope you like it too. Just give me at least 7 reviews and I'll post more. ^_^
Preview: Kagome has fallen under the misty spell of The Black Hole of Unforgiveness. Id there any way to save her? There is? Really? But will the spirit detectives get to her in time to perform the ritual? Find out next time on Red Roses and Black Thorns.