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**Kurama's POV**
I felt as though someone was watching me. It was a strange feeling that I was use to though from all the girls at school. Still...
"I can sense something up a little further you guys. Better prepare yourselves." Kuwabara said.
I nodded as well as the others.
"Welcome to the first test Spirit Detectives." I heard a female voice say, echoing off the walls. "I Hope you have fun. My only warning to you is don't look into his eyes." With that she was gone.
As soon as her voice left the corridor we were a gigantic door appeared and opened revealing a piercing white light. I had to shield my eyes it was so bright.
"Well, well, well. A new meal for me. How lucky." I heard a loud low voice say to us through the blinding light; a few minutes later the light disappeared.
"Welcome to the test, spirit detectives. I am the demon Ruu." When I finally say the figure to match the mighty voice to 'Ruu', I gasped.
Ruu was probably the most vile looking creature that I have ever seen. A large, hairy blue body covered with nothing but a loin cloth. His hair was an oily mess of gray locks and his teeth were a decaying yellow color with a faint hue of red...probably from blood. I think the worst was his eyes though. Huge and yellow with small veins, the color green, where the eyeball met the socket. A truly disgusting creature.
"The only way for you to get through my obstacle is to-"Yusuke cut the mighty beast off.
"What? We have to fight you? Is that it?"
"Human do not interrupt me. You will have to solve the riddle that I have conjured up for you." Ruu finished with an annoyed tone.
"A...riddle?" Kuwabara asked slowly.
"Yes. What are you deaf?" Ruu retorted in that loud annoying voice of his. "Now listen closely for I will only say thins once."
I got ready, my body tense. This was a test of The Black Hole of Unforgivness. I knew it must be hard.
"The riddle is...I have many feathers to help me fly. I have a body and a head, but I am not alive. It is your strength which determines how far I go. You hold me in your hand, but I am never thrown. What am I?"
"What?" Kuwabara asked scratching his head.
"Aw man. I can hardly remember the question!" Yusuke whined.
Hiei said nothing, but I knew that he had no clue either. This riddle is hard, but I am determined to find the answer. Lets start with the first part. 'I have many feathers to help me fly. I have a body and a head, but I'm not alive.' What has a body and head with feathers, flies buts not alive? I looked around nervously. I couldn't guess!
Just then, Yusuke fell over. Why, I don't know.
"Ow!" He whined, distracting me. "That rock over there is as sharp as an arrow!"
A...arrow...wait! That's it! An arrow! They have feathers, body, head, fly, not alive! Your strength does determine how far one goes, and you don't throw them! It has to be right!
"I believe the answer is a arrow." I called out to Ruu.
He looked at me in shock. "How did you guess?"
"Well I-"Ruu cut me off.
"I don't care how you did it! Never mind. Just go already." Ruu said in a disheartening voice.
As we walked out of the room confused I heard Ruu mumble. "Great now I'm going to have to find new riddles." For some reason this test seemed just too easy.
"Well, it seems you have defeated the first test. Only two more to go." I heard that woman's voice.
"Who are you?" Yusuke asked.
**Hiei's POV**
This was getting irritating. The first test was too easy. Something wasn't right. Plus, for some reason that woman's voice sounded oddly familiar.
"Why you know..." The lady answered Yusuke. "Don't you recognize my voice?"
"No..." Said Yusuke slowly.
Did we know this lady from somewhere? Her voice if familiar...perhaps she only knows Yusuke since the question was directed at him...
"Well that's a shame. Because I know you." With that she was gone.
"I wonder who she is..." Kurama pondered out loud.
"Well I bet we'll find our if we defeat all the tests." Kuwabara stated.
"Yes. Probably."
"Hn."
Just then, the next door opened up. Instead of being greeted with a blinding light, we were greeted with...black.
"Welcome to my obstacle, I do hope you can stay forever." I heard I scratching voice.
"What is your test?" Kurama asked bluntly.
"My, my. Impatient are we? I was hoping you could stay. It's been far too long since anyone has ever visited me."
"Well, I guess we could stay for a little bit." I suddenly heard Kuwabara say.
"What are you saying, you fool?!" I asked angrily.
"Well why not?" Yusuke joined in with him.
I tried to see through the darkness, but I could hardly see anything...wait...what was that? I looked closer and struggled to see through the pitch black darkness. Was that a...string?
"Hiei...join us..." I heard that scratchy voice say again.
"What have you done, demon?" I asked annoyed. Now we would be wasting time.
"Nothing. It just seems that your friends rather stay with me...forever..."
**Strange women's POV**
"Well...it seems that they are not stupid at least." I mumbled to myself.
"Its just payback, Hiei...friends. It's just payback." I looked at my dark purple painted finger nails. "What you said to me...I'll never forgive...Though..." I laughed. "Thankfully this warp has helped me! It says it will help me get revenge! Just wait...you don't even know that what your searching is gone..."
Well that's the end of this Chapter! Please review!!!!
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Preview: As the spirit detectives have to face the two final rounds of The Black Hole of Unforgivness. This Mysterious lady has big plans of our heroes, and where's Kagome? Perhaps we will see what she's been up to next time. Though the truth might surprise you...
Enjoy!
**Kurama's POV**
I felt as though someone was watching me. It was a strange feeling that I was use to though from all the girls at school. Still...
"I can sense something up a little further you guys. Better prepare yourselves." Kuwabara said.
I nodded as well as the others.
"Welcome to the first test Spirit Detectives." I heard a female voice say, echoing off the walls. "I Hope you have fun. My only warning to you is don't look into his eyes." With that she was gone.
As soon as her voice left the corridor we were a gigantic door appeared and opened revealing a piercing white light. I had to shield my eyes it was so bright.
"Well, well, well. A new meal for me. How lucky." I heard a loud low voice say to us through the blinding light; a few minutes later the light disappeared.
"Welcome to the test, spirit detectives. I am the demon Ruu." When I finally say the figure to match the mighty voice to 'Ruu', I gasped.
Ruu was probably the most vile looking creature that I have ever seen. A large, hairy blue body covered with nothing but a loin cloth. His hair was an oily mess of gray locks and his teeth were a decaying yellow color with a faint hue of red...probably from blood. I think the worst was his eyes though. Huge and yellow with small veins, the color green, where the eyeball met the socket. A truly disgusting creature.
"The only way for you to get through my obstacle is to-"Yusuke cut the mighty beast off.
"What? We have to fight you? Is that it?"
"Human do not interrupt me. You will have to solve the riddle that I have conjured up for you." Ruu finished with an annoyed tone.
"A...riddle?" Kuwabara asked slowly.
"Yes. What are you deaf?" Ruu retorted in that loud annoying voice of his. "Now listen closely for I will only say thins once."
I got ready, my body tense. This was a test of The Black Hole of Unforgivness. I knew it must be hard.
"The riddle is...I have many feathers to help me fly. I have a body and a head, but I am not alive. It is your strength which determines how far I go. You hold me in your hand, but I am never thrown. What am I?"
"What?" Kuwabara asked scratching his head.
"Aw man. I can hardly remember the question!" Yusuke whined.
Hiei said nothing, but I knew that he had no clue either. This riddle is hard, but I am determined to find the answer. Lets start with the first part. 'I have many feathers to help me fly. I have a body and a head, but I'm not alive.' What has a body and head with feathers, flies buts not alive? I looked around nervously. I couldn't guess!
Just then, Yusuke fell over. Why, I don't know.
"Ow!" He whined, distracting me. "That rock over there is as sharp as an arrow!"
A...arrow...wait! That's it! An arrow! They have feathers, body, head, fly, not alive! Your strength does determine how far one goes, and you don't throw them! It has to be right!
"I believe the answer is a arrow." I called out to Ruu.
He looked at me in shock. "How did you guess?"
"Well I-"Ruu cut me off.
"I don't care how you did it! Never mind. Just go already." Ruu said in a disheartening voice.
As we walked out of the room confused I heard Ruu mumble. "Great now I'm going to have to find new riddles." For some reason this test seemed just too easy.
"Well, it seems you have defeated the first test. Only two more to go." I heard that woman's voice.
"Who are you?" Yusuke asked.
**Hiei's POV**
This was getting irritating. The first test was too easy. Something wasn't right. Plus, for some reason that woman's voice sounded oddly familiar.
"Why you know..." The lady answered Yusuke. "Don't you recognize my voice?"
"No..." Said Yusuke slowly.
Did we know this lady from somewhere? Her voice if familiar...perhaps she only knows Yusuke since the question was directed at him...
"Well that's a shame. Because I know you." With that she was gone.
"I wonder who she is..." Kurama pondered out loud.
"Well I bet we'll find our if we defeat all the tests." Kuwabara stated.
"Yes. Probably."
"Hn."
Just then, the next door opened up. Instead of being greeted with a blinding light, we were greeted with...black.
"Welcome to my obstacle, I do hope you can stay forever." I heard I scratching voice.
"What is your test?" Kurama asked bluntly.
"My, my. Impatient are we? I was hoping you could stay. It's been far too long since anyone has ever visited me."
"Well, I guess we could stay for a little bit." I suddenly heard Kuwabara say.
"What are you saying, you fool?!" I asked angrily.
"Well why not?" Yusuke joined in with him.
I tried to see through the darkness, but I could hardly see anything...wait...what was that? I looked closer and struggled to see through the pitch black darkness. Was that a...string?
"Hiei...join us..." I heard that scratchy voice say again.
"What have you done, demon?" I asked annoyed. Now we would be wasting time.
"Nothing. It just seems that your friends rather stay with me...forever..."
**Strange women's POV**
"Well...it seems that they are not stupid at least." I mumbled to myself.
"Its just payback, Hiei...friends. It's just payback." I looked at my dark purple painted finger nails. "What you said to me...I'll never forgive...Though..." I laughed. "Thankfully this warp has helped me! It says it will help me get revenge! Just wait...you don't even know that what your searching is gone..."
Well that's the end of this Chapter! Please review!!!!
REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!
Preview: As the spirit detectives have to face the two final rounds of The Black Hole of Unforgivness. This Mysterious lady has big plans of our heroes, and where's Kagome? Perhaps we will see what she's been up to next time. Though the truth might surprise you...