AN: Here are some reviews I answered.
Alyssium: Thanks for your input, I plan on to keep writing. I have an idea on a story but I don't know how to start it.Anyway
Your a great writer, can't wait till you update again.
Kelsey: Thanks for your idea about making it into a story. Ive decided to do that.
harryluver422: There was a difference in the ending you might not have paid attention to it and please stick to constuctive
criticism.
AN: Well here is the second chapter.
The sunlight streamed through the open curtains at the. Hermione signs and groggly got up."Great anouther day."she
says to herself. She starts walking to the bathroom to get ready. Fifteen minutes later shes out the door and on her way to her favorite
coffee shop.
(AN This is set in Hermiones POV it didnt sound right in narrative POV...ok just saying so no one gets confused)
I park my red Viper (an thats the kinda car i want...so i just used it ok no more an i promise to the end of the chap) in front
and walk in. Madalyn waves to me while shes waiting on anouther table. Shes a young girl with dirty blonde hair and dark blue eye. I
sit down at my regular spot just as Madalyn walks over.
"Hey Hermione, the usual I presume" she asks "Yes, thank you" I reply. She smiles and walks away.
Five minutes later she comes back with my coffee, a mocha frap and a bagel. " So, how are you today?" Madalyn asks as I
try to find change to pay her with. " The same as always" I answer as I hand her the money. This is a daily routin with us. She knows all
about Draco and is a really nice person to talk to. " Well... see you tomorrow." she says as she walks away. " Yeah, thanks." I mumble.
I pick up my bagel and start to put cream cheese on it while I look out the window. As I'm watching the people outside I
thought I saw someone fimilar. I squint my eyes to try and get a good look at the person I feel a razor sharp pain in my hand. As I look
down I realized I cut my hand with the knife. Cursing I take out my wand and mutter a healing spell. I sign and look back up to try and get
a good look at this guy but I couldn't find him anywhere. 'He looked so familiar. That hair was just like his.' I thought. Shaking my head I
think ' I'm going crazy, hes been gon for two years theres no way.' I look down at my watch " Oh bloody hell Im going to be late." I grab my
coffee and run out of the shop. I hop into my car and head to wrok completely forgetting the familiar stranger and not know what the day
was going to lead to.
AN: Ok well there it is. I thought it would be longer. O well I promise to try and make the next chapter longer but I don't know. Well,
Review all you have to do is click the little button at the bottom that says ok and please no flames. If you have any ideas for the story I'm
open to them but please be nice about it. thanx
Alyssium: Thanks for your input, I plan on to keep writing. I have an idea on a story but I don't know how to start it.Anyway
Your a great writer, can't wait till you update again.
Kelsey: Thanks for your idea about making it into a story. Ive decided to do that.
harryluver422: There was a difference in the ending you might not have paid attention to it and please stick to constuctive
criticism.
AN: Well here is the second chapter.
The sunlight streamed through the open curtains at the. Hermione signs and groggly got up."Great anouther day."she
says to herself. She starts walking to the bathroom to get ready. Fifteen minutes later shes out the door and on her way to her favorite
coffee shop.
(AN This is set in Hermiones POV it didnt sound right in narrative POV...ok just saying so no one gets confused)
I park my red Viper (an thats the kinda car i want...so i just used it ok no more an i promise to the end of the chap) in front
and walk in. Madalyn waves to me while shes waiting on anouther table. Shes a young girl with dirty blonde hair and dark blue eye. I
sit down at my regular spot just as Madalyn walks over.
"Hey Hermione, the usual I presume" she asks "Yes, thank you" I reply. She smiles and walks away.
Five minutes later she comes back with my coffee, a mocha frap and a bagel. " So, how are you today?" Madalyn asks as I
try to find change to pay her with. " The same as always" I answer as I hand her the money. This is a daily routin with us. She knows all
about Draco and is a really nice person to talk to. " Well... see you tomorrow." she says as she walks away. " Yeah, thanks." I mumble.
I pick up my bagel and start to put cream cheese on it while I look out the window. As I'm watching the people outside I
thought I saw someone fimilar. I squint my eyes to try and get a good look at the person I feel a razor sharp pain in my hand. As I look
down I realized I cut my hand with the knife. Cursing I take out my wand and mutter a healing spell. I sign and look back up to try and get
a good look at this guy but I couldn't find him anywhere. 'He looked so familiar. That hair was just like his.' I thought. Shaking my head I
think ' I'm going crazy, hes been gon for two years theres no way.' I look down at my watch " Oh bloody hell Im going to be late." I grab my
coffee and run out of the shop. I hop into my car and head to wrok completely forgetting the familiar stranger and not know what the day
was going to lead to.
AN: Ok well there it is. I thought it would be longer. O well I promise to try and make the next chapter longer but I don't know. Well,
Review all you have to do is click the little button at the bottom that says ok and please no flames. If you have any ideas for the story I'm
open to them but please be nice about it. thanx