Disclaimer: I don't own G-Gundam or any for the show's characters
By: Alimoe =0D
AN: At the bottom after my last AN I have a shout out to anyone who reviewed.
The Man with the Blue and Pink Hair, Chapter 6
I look at the cement, then at the beach that's beside me. Chibodee says this was the perfect place to learn how to skate. The cement was even, and when I learn how to skate it will only be a ten-minute skate back to where we met. Not only that but this part of the boardwalk wasn't crowded, and the view and sea breeze was nice. I try to stand up with white skates on my feet. Okay, one movement at a time. Okay I think I got the balanc. . .
"Chibodee!!!!" - "Ack!!!" I start to fall once again, but I never touched the ground because of a pair of muscular belonging to a man with a very good sense of humor, or at least at the moment.
He sits me back down. "Are you okay Allenby?"
I put my arms on my lap, and look at him. "Yeah thanks for the catch Chibodee. But did you see me I almost had complete balance for more than fifteen seconds!"
He put his arms behind his neck, and smiles at me. "Yeah I saw, you were doing really well! What made you lose your balance anyways?"
"Well I'm pretty sure I heard someone call out. . ." - "Chibodee!!!"
"What?" Both of us say as we turn our heads towards the voice.
"Ack! Bunny!" He has that surprised look on his face with an arm bent toward his face. "I'll be right back Allenby, sorry!"
"It's okay, go." I say as he gives a grateful look and skates towards Bunny on his full of Neo-America pride roller-skates.
I watch Chibodee talk to Bunny, as the rest of his cast shows up. I can't hear what they're saying, but just watching Chibodee's facial expressions seem to amuse me enough. Man I wish I had a camera, he looks embarrassed, I mean like when the middle-school bully pants you right in front of your crush, embarrassed! Ha ha ha! I wonder what happened to the man with the cocky grin?
I continue to watch, trying to at least get a feel what they're talking about. I don't know, but the blond girl just clapped her hands together with a happy look on her face. The girl with the dark hair just began to smile. The one with the glasses, I think Chibodee said her name was Bunny, began to look a little disappointed. And the leader (or the one who looked like the leader) just listened and gave me a few glances, like she was examining me. Hmm. Now I really want to know what they're talking about.
I see Chibodee wave good-bye as he comes skating towards me. Man every time I see those skates I want to laugh. I mean there's nothing wrong with showing pride in one's colony, but I think Chibodee went through a little TOO much effort to show his pride.
He has Red, white, and blue laces and wheels, and I think his once white skates are now drawn with Neo-America flags ALL OVER IT! Not only that but his helmet is gleaming with red and white stripes, and two blue squares (one on each side) each with four white stars with a yellow 'N' in the middle of the squares. Great. . . even his helmet adds more of Neo- America's flag to his skating equipment. He he he. He kinda looks like a dork! He he he he he. . .
"What are you giggling about?" He asks as he pulls into the area I'm in.
"Nothing. I'm ready to try again!"
"Okay, I ready." He stands there in perfect balance in his skates ready to catch me in case I fall. It's kinda nice to know that he'll catch me, but it's sickening knowing that he has the otter most perfect balance on skates and I don't.
"Okay. I'm getting up. I'm almost there. And I'm standing. And. I HAVE BALANCE!" I hear him clap. Yah! I'm balanced! I'm balanced!
"Now are you ready to start moving."
Huh? I stop celebrating. Moving? Moving. . . NOOOOO! I don't want to move! I look at him only to find out that his face is right in front of mine. And extremely close. . .
"Don't worry, you'll be fine!" He says while checking the neck strap on my plain white helmet we bought after breakfast.
"But!"
He pulls back from my face. "Don't worry!" Is all he says while he grabs my hands. "Just take things one stroll at a time. Besides I'm holding onto your hands and I'm right in front of you! All you have to do is trust me!"
I tightened the grip on his hands. "Okay, one glide at a time." I look down at my feet, and start to move my right foot; it's trembling a little. I stop and move my left foot it's also trembling. "Chibodee," I look up at him, "I feel out of balance."
"That's cause you're not flowing."
"Flowing?"
"Well, when you walk do you pick up your foot take a step, stop, then pick up your other foot and take a step?"
"No. . ." I put my head slightly down, I feel a little stupid. . .
"Same with skating! Just go right left, right left. Don't worry about it you're learning! I made the same mistake when I was learning." He tilts my chin up. "Want to make learning a little more fun?"
I smile, "Sure! What do you have in mind?"
"When I move my right foot back you bring your left foot forward. When I put my left foot back you put your right foot forward! It's like you're trying to catch my feet!"
"Hmm. . . I guess that might help. Okay let's give it a try!"
I look down and we start to skate again. Right, left, right, left, right, left. Hey I think I'm getting this! "I'm getting this Chibodee!"
"Good! Now try to catch my feet now." He started moving a little faster.
Hmm. . . I can do this. . . Right left right left. HA! I got the beat! "Hey Chibodee do I get a prize if I do catch your feet?" I don't know why, but I just thought of the question. I tried to glace up to see his face, but my efforts failed, I think skating is more important right now.
"Well . . . How about a good I.O.U.? It can be used on whatever the other wants okay?"
"Sure that sounds good!"
"But if you trip or fall you owe me an I.O.U. deal?"
"Deal!" I'll make sure I never trip or fall!
"Chibodee!" A male voice calls.
I look up and once more to the voice that's calling Chibodee. (He's just Mr. Popular today isn't he?) "Huh? Ack!" I just tripped and fell on Chibodee. It's not fair I only looked up for a few seconds!
"Ha ha ha." He laughs well heartedly. "Guess you owe me!"
"Guess so . . ." I look away, how embarrassing, I feel myself blush. Then I look at my position and his and blush more, I have to get up fast! I try to stand, and I almost . . . fall! Well at least the position is slightly better, instead of me looking like I pinned him onto the ground now it looks like I fell diagonally onto his abs, well my abs on his my head is close to his chest.
"Hi George. What brings you out here?" Chibodee says while pushing his arms behind him, trying to put himself into a sitting position.
"Well. . . I came to. . ." I can see that George is in his normal knight clothes and he's looking to the side with a hand on his forehead. If he's embarrassed just looking at us, think how the people living the sight are!
"What a funny picture!" ::Click:: "Thanks Chibodee, I'm sure everyone will laugh when they see this picture!" Great now there's a picture of this.
"Miss. Marie I don't think it was appropriate to take a photo when the two are obvious um. . . difficult position."
The blond princess of Neo-France giggles as Chibodee helps me up now that we caught a break.
"Sorry George, but it was too amusing to pass up not taking a photo!"
George smiles at her, with a very familiar look that I think I've before. "Well, if it makes you happy. . ." She returns the smile, and I get the feeling that we could go away right now and those two wouldn't notice. "I apologize for Miss. Marie for she just got a camera and she takes pictures of any sight that amuses her in the slightest way."
"That's okay George, don't worry about it. I want to see the picture when you get them back, I'm sure she saw many funny sights that I would also want to see."
The princess' face lights up and she happily replies. "Sure Chibodee, I'll show them to you as soon as I get them back!"
"Cool! I'll be looking forward to it!" He returns a smile, then directs his attention back to George. "So what did you call me for anyways George?"
"Oh! I came to invite you to come skiing!"
"Skiing?"
"Yes, skiing. Everyone from the Shuffle Alliance is going, well except for maybe you. You can bring Allenby too of course, if you want to. We were going to tell Rain to invite you, Allenby, but since you're here. . ."
"You two should come! I'll be sure to take pictures!" Marie says while holding up her camera.
Chibodee looks at me, and I nod. Why not go I'm sure it'll be fun! "I know we can go but I have to ask my."
"Pardon Chibodee, but if you're talking about your crew I already saw them and they all said yes without a second thought. In fact there are the ones who told us that we'd find you here." Interrupted George.
"Sounds good to me then. When is the trip?" "In about two and a half months, December 7th is the exact date." Explained the blond.
"Okay, I'm sure we'll see you before then."
"Yes of course, until then; Chibodee, Allenby." George waved.
"Wait, Maria do you have a picture of you and George?" How sweet of Chibodee to think of it! Hmm. . . I'm kinda surprised too. Sweet and Chibodee? Well. . . I guess sometimes they can go together. I guess this is one of those times.
"No, not yet Chibodee." She turned back around and sounded a little confused "Unless you would be so kind as to take a picture for me!" A huge smile spread across her face.
"Of course, I figured you'd like one." Marie gave the camera to Chibodee, and he carefully took it. "Okay now get closer together."
Ha ha, it seems that George is really shy when it comes to showing his affections for the princess in public; he's turning slightly pink.
"Closer George! Closer, closer, come on closer! Okay one, two, three." ::Click::
I giggle, what a cute picture that will be! Those two are leaning in to one another, and George, put his arm around her. I can't wait to see those pictures now.
"Okay here you go princess." Chibodee gave back the camera.
"Thank-you so much Chibodee, I'm going to love that picture when it comes out! Thanks!" She turns to run off with George.
"Um. Miss Maria?" I feel awkward addressing her, I don't really know her, and she's a princess so maybe I should have said 'princess' instead.
She turns back around "Yes Miss. Allenby?"
"When you get those pictures back, can you let me look at them too. Please."
"Sure! I'll be sure to inform you as well Miss. Allenby."
"Thank-you, and please call me Allenby."
"Okay, Allenby, and me Maria. Bye-bye!" She waved and left with George.
I heave a sigh I guess I was nervous. I feel an arm on my shoulder; I look up and see Chibodee smiling at me. "Don't worry you did fine." I give a smile as a thank-you and we stay like that for a moment, just looking at each other. Whoa! Snap out of it Allenby o'girl!
"Ready to get started again?" I rushed the question while moving away from his arm.
"Sure." Was his short and simple reply, as he once more took my hands and we began to skate. This time I tried not to look at his feet as much. Every time I looked up at him, I would see him looking back at me with a grin on his face and a look in his eyes. The look makes me feel scared and special at the same time. Hmm. . . haven't I seen that look before? I can swear I have seen it somewhere, maybe I'll figure it out in the future. But right now I don't want to think too much cause I'm feeling pretty good in this moment.
~*~ End Of Chapter 6 ~*~
A/N: Well what do you think? I had more people in this chapter! Like George and Marie/Maria.
~*~
Oh if you're confused about that name thing, I'm also kinda confused, in the episodes that I have George calls her Maria in the beginning and Marie towards the end, odd huh? So in order to save any more confusion I just decided only George can call her by her real name 'Marie' and that 'Maria' will be like a nick-name for everyone else. That way it makes George even more special to Marie/Maria.
~*~
He he can you begin to see how the story is going to go? I think a few can! Depending how busy I am (or how much sleep I need) I'll update again soon. (I have the next few chapters in my head).
Well, like always, I have responses to those of you people who were so kind as to review my story.
~*~ Review Responces! ~*~ I got 8 reviews for the last chapter and 1 review for chapter 1! (cool! =0D )
To: Qui-ti
Hi! Hehe I look forward to your reviews so much! Thry always make me feel like I'm doing a good job with the story! I always want to right the next chapter right away. (But other people/things drag me away =0( But in the summer I'll update more often!) I'm glad I made your day with my last AN I hope this one makes you happy too! I want to know the name of the magazine your friend drew for! I promise to read one of your stories in the summer (I was beginning to read the FFX, but then I had to go eat dinner ^.^ ' ) so expect a review sometime in mid June or sooner depending on finals. Bye! I hope you enjoyed this chapter!
Alimoe =0)
To: BlueFrosting()
Hehe thanks! You're VERY kind in your review! I'll try to update more often, but I'm busy until after school gets out =0( But after that I'll try to update once a week! Hehehe I agree the Chibodee/Allenby pairing is awesome! You should put some stories up! I promise I'll read one I'm interested in during the summer! I'm sure they're great! And I'm sure that you're a better writer than me! (I know this cause I know I'm not that good =0) ) Anyways like I said before you're really too kind in your review, so thank you it was nice! Hehe it made me smile a big smile! I hope you liked this chapter!
Alimoe =0)
To: Slimslyde
Haha. You're a very funny person I can tell. The last line was funny! It made me giggle, I'm sure you're very good at humor stories. I can just tell. Well I hope you liked this chapter and I look forward to earning more reviews from you.
Alimoe =0)
To: Cloud_Light_Feather
Your review was short up sweet, thank you for taking the time to give me some feed back on how the story was going.
Alimoe =0)
To: Black Joker Lady
Haha a "bad" page in Ranma ½, hehe I know what it is. poor you. Thanks for the spell check tip (I did, but I obviously missed a few ^.^, but I checked this one a few times so hopefully there's none). As for any details on how the story is going to go, hotter. colder. (If that's possible) I'm not saying anything =0! Sorry, you'll just have to keep reading.
Alimoe =0)
To: Liza Akita
Hehe, thanks for the review! If I have a good mind for romance fics it's probally cause I read a lot. =0D Hehe your review was a very nice push to get me to write this one . I hope this chapter wasn't disappointing to you. Thanks for the review!
Alimoe =0)
PS: Hehe I love the phase "kudos to ya" I say it too! =0)
To: Sissi
Hi Sissi! Hehe you and me have the same view on constructive criticism. It only improves your story, so in the long run it's VERY good!
I hope you like this chapter. I don't know if you can kinda see where this story is going, but I'll tell you that from here, more events will start taking place. Well, maybe not this next chapter but the chapter after.
If you want I'll send you some good sites for Marmalade Boy if you want me too. I haven't talked to you lately, but when I talk to you again I can give you some good sites if you want, just let me know.
Alimoe =0)
To: Emma
I'm glad that you like the fic so far; I hope that this chapter was no exception to that opinion. =0) I don't think I can end the fic soon, but I'll try to get more chapters up more quickly.
Alimoe =0)
For Chapter: 1
To: PhoenixStarwind
Thanks for the review. I hope you continue to read the story, as for the Bunny, Shirley, Janet, and Cath point; well. it'll be addressed later. Thanks again for the review!
Alimoe =0)
By: Alimoe =0D
AN: At the bottom after my last AN I have a shout out to anyone who reviewed.
The Man with the Blue and Pink Hair, Chapter 6
I look at the cement, then at the beach that's beside me. Chibodee says this was the perfect place to learn how to skate. The cement was even, and when I learn how to skate it will only be a ten-minute skate back to where we met. Not only that but this part of the boardwalk wasn't crowded, and the view and sea breeze was nice. I try to stand up with white skates on my feet. Okay, one movement at a time. Okay I think I got the balanc. . .
"Chibodee!!!!" - "Ack!!!" I start to fall once again, but I never touched the ground because of a pair of muscular belonging to a man with a very good sense of humor, or at least at the moment.
He sits me back down. "Are you okay Allenby?"
I put my arms on my lap, and look at him. "Yeah thanks for the catch Chibodee. But did you see me I almost had complete balance for more than fifteen seconds!"
He put his arms behind his neck, and smiles at me. "Yeah I saw, you were doing really well! What made you lose your balance anyways?"
"Well I'm pretty sure I heard someone call out. . ." - "Chibodee!!!"
"What?" Both of us say as we turn our heads towards the voice.
"Ack! Bunny!" He has that surprised look on his face with an arm bent toward his face. "I'll be right back Allenby, sorry!"
"It's okay, go." I say as he gives a grateful look and skates towards Bunny on his full of Neo-America pride roller-skates.
I watch Chibodee talk to Bunny, as the rest of his cast shows up. I can't hear what they're saying, but just watching Chibodee's facial expressions seem to amuse me enough. Man I wish I had a camera, he looks embarrassed, I mean like when the middle-school bully pants you right in front of your crush, embarrassed! Ha ha ha! I wonder what happened to the man with the cocky grin?
I continue to watch, trying to at least get a feel what they're talking about. I don't know, but the blond girl just clapped her hands together with a happy look on her face. The girl with the dark hair just began to smile. The one with the glasses, I think Chibodee said her name was Bunny, began to look a little disappointed. And the leader (or the one who looked like the leader) just listened and gave me a few glances, like she was examining me. Hmm. Now I really want to know what they're talking about.
I see Chibodee wave good-bye as he comes skating towards me. Man every time I see those skates I want to laugh. I mean there's nothing wrong with showing pride in one's colony, but I think Chibodee went through a little TOO much effort to show his pride.
He has Red, white, and blue laces and wheels, and I think his once white skates are now drawn with Neo-America flags ALL OVER IT! Not only that but his helmet is gleaming with red and white stripes, and two blue squares (one on each side) each with four white stars with a yellow 'N' in the middle of the squares. Great. . . even his helmet adds more of Neo- America's flag to his skating equipment. He he he. He kinda looks like a dork! He he he he he. . .
"What are you giggling about?" He asks as he pulls into the area I'm in.
"Nothing. I'm ready to try again!"
"Okay, I ready." He stands there in perfect balance in his skates ready to catch me in case I fall. It's kinda nice to know that he'll catch me, but it's sickening knowing that he has the otter most perfect balance on skates and I don't.
"Okay. I'm getting up. I'm almost there. And I'm standing. And. I HAVE BALANCE!" I hear him clap. Yah! I'm balanced! I'm balanced!
"Now are you ready to start moving."
Huh? I stop celebrating. Moving? Moving. . . NOOOOO! I don't want to move! I look at him only to find out that his face is right in front of mine. And extremely close. . .
"Don't worry, you'll be fine!" He says while checking the neck strap on my plain white helmet we bought after breakfast.
"But!"
He pulls back from my face. "Don't worry!" Is all he says while he grabs my hands. "Just take things one stroll at a time. Besides I'm holding onto your hands and I'm right in front of you! All you have to do is trust me!"
I tightened the grip on his hands. "Okay, one glide at a time." I look down at my feet, and start to move my right foot; it's trembling a little. I stop and move my left foot it's also trembling. "Chibodee," I look up at him, "I feel out of balance."
"That's cause you're not flowing."
"Flowing?"
"Well, when you walk do you pick up your foot take a step, stop, then pick up your other foot and take a step?"
"No. . ." I put my head slightly down, I feel a little stupid. . .
"Same with skating! Just go right left, right left. Don't worry about it you're learning! I made the same mistake when I was learning." He tilts my chin up. "Want to make learning a little more fun?"
I smile, "Sure! What do you have in mind?"
"When I move my right foot back you bring your left foot forward. When I put my left foot back you put your right foot forward! It's like you're trying to catch my feet!"
"Hmm. . . I guess that might help. Okay let's give it a try!"
I look down and we start to skate again. Right, left, right, left, right, left. Hey I think I'm getting this! "I'm getting this Chibodee!"
"Good! Now try to catch my feet now." He started moving a little faster.
Hmm. . . I can do this. . . Right left right left. HA! I got the beat! "Hey Chibodee do I get a prize if I do catch your feet?" I don't know why, but I just thought of the question. I tried to glace up to see his face, but my efforts failed, I think skating is more important right now.
"Well . . . How about a good I.O.U.? It can be used on whatever the other wants okay?"
"Sure that sounds good!"
"But if you trip or fall you owe me an I.O.U. deal?"
"Deal!" I'll make sure I never trip or fall!
"Chibodee!" A male voice calls.
I look up and once more to the voice that's calling Chibodee. (He's just Mr. Popular today isn't he?) "Huh? Ack!" I just tripped and fell on Chibodee. It's not fair I only looked up for a few seconds!
"Ha ha ha." He laughs well heartedly. "Guess you owe me!"
"Guess so . . ." I look away, how embarrassing, I feel myself blush. Then I look at my position and his and blush more, I have to get up fast! I try to stand, and I almost . . . fall! Well at least the position is slightly better, instead of me looking like I pinned him onto the ground now it looks like I fell diagonally onto his abs, well my abs on his my head is close to his chest.
"Hi George. What brings you out here?" Chibodee says while pushing his arms behind him, trying to put himself into a sitting position.
"Well. . . I came to. . ." I can see that George is in his normal knight clothes and he's looking to the side with a hand on his forehead. If he's embarrassed just looking at us, think how the people living the sight are!
"What a funny picture!" ::Click:: "Thanks Chibodee, I'm sure everyone will laugh when they see this picture!" Great now there's a picture of this.
"Miss. Marie I don't think it was appropriate to take a photo when the two are obvious um. . . difficult position."
The blond princess of Neo-France giggles as Chibodee helps me up now that we caught a break.
"Sorry George, but it was too amusing to pass up not taking a photo!"
George smiles at her, with a very familiar look that I think I've before. "Well, if it makes you happy. . ." She returns the smile, and I get the feeling that we could go away right now and those two wouldn't notice. "I apologize for Miss. Marie for she just got a camera and she takes pictures of any sight that amuses her in the slightest way."
"That's okay George, don't worry about it. I want to see the picture when you get them back, I'm sure she saw many funny sights that I would also want to see."
The princess' face lights up and she happily replies. "Sure Chibodee, I'll show them to you as soon as I get them back!"
"Cool! I'll be looking forward to it!" He returns a smile, then directs his attention back to George. "So what did you call me for anyways George?"
"Oh! I came to invite you to come skiing!"
"Skiing?"
"Yes, skiing. Everyone from the Shuffle Alliance is going, well except for maybe you. You can bring Allenby too of course, if you want to. We were going to tell Rain to invite you, Allenby, but since you're here. . ."
"You two should come! I'll be sure to take pictures!" Marie says while holding up her camera.
Chibodee looks at me, and I nod. Why not go I'm sure it'll be fun! "I know we can go but I have to ask my."
"Pardon Chibodee, but if you're talking about your crew I already saw them and they all said yes without a second thought. In fact there are the ones who told us that we'd find you here." Interrupted George.
"Sounds good to me then. When is the trip?" "In about two and a half months, December 7th is the exact date." Explained the blond.
"Okay, I'm sure we'll see you before then."
"Yes of course, until then; Chibodee, Allenby." George waved.
"Wait, Maria do you have a picture of you and George?" How sweet of Chibodee to think of it! Hmm. . . I'm kinda surprised too. Sweet and Chibodee? Well. . . I guess sometimes they can go together. I guess this is one of those times.
"No, not yet Chibodee." She turned back around and sounded a little confused "Unless you would be so kind as to take a picture for me!" A huge smile spread across her face.
"Of course, I figured you'd like one." Marie gave the camera to Chibodee, and he carefully took it. "Okay now get closer together."
Ha ha, it seems that George is really shy when it comes to showing his affections for the princess in public; he's turning slightly pink.
"Closer George! Closer, closer, come on closer! Okay one, two, three." ::Click::
I giggle, what a cute picture that will be! Those two are leaning in to one another, and George, put his arm around her. I can't wait to see those pictures now.
"Okay here you go princess." Chibodee gave back the camera.
"Thank-you so much Chibodee, I'm going to love that picture when it comes out! Thanks!" She turns to run off with George.
"Um. Miss Maria?" I feel awkward addressing her, I don't really know her, and she's a princess so maybe I should have said 'princess' instead.
She turns back around "Yes Miss. Allenby?"
"When you get those pictures back, can you let me look at them too. Please."
"Sure! I'll be sure to inform you as well Miss. Allenby."
"Thank-you, and please call me Allenby."
"Okay, Allenby, and me Maria. Bye-bye!" She waved and left with George.
I heave a sigh I guess I was nervous. I feel an arm on my shoulder; I look up and see Chibodee smiling at me. "Don't worry you did fine." I give a smile as a thank-you and we stay like that for a moment, just looking at each other. Whoa! Snap out of it Allenby o'girl!
"Ready to get started again?" I rushed the question while moving away from his arm.
"Sure." Was his short and simple reply, as he once more took my hands and we began to skate. This time I tried not to look at his feet as much. Every time I looked up at him, I would see him looking back at me with a grin on his face and a look in his eyes. The look makes me feel scared and special at the same time. Hmm. . . haven't I seen that look before? I can swear I have seen it somewhere, maybe I'll figure it out in the future. But right now I don't want to think too much cause I'm feeling pretty good in this moment.
~*~ End Of Chapter 6 ~*~
A/N: Well what do you think? I had more people in this chapter! Like George and Marie/Maria.
~*~
Oh if you're confused about that name thing, I'm also kinda confused, in the episodes that I have George calls her Maria in the beginning and Marie towards the end, odd huh? So in order to save any more confusion I just decided only George can call her by her real name 'Marie' and that 'Maria' will be like a nick-name for everyone else. That way it makes George even more special to Marie/Maria.
~*~
He he can you begin to see how the story is going to go? I think a few can! Depending how busy I am (or how much sleep I need) I'll update again soon. (I have the next few chapters in my head).
Well, like always, I have responses to those of you people who were so kind as to review my story.
~*~ Review Responces! ~*~ I got 8 reviews for the last chapter and 1 review for chapter 1! (cool! =0D )
To: Qui-ti
Hi! Hehe I look forward to your reviews so much! Thry always make me feel like I'm doing a good job with the story! I always want to right the next chapter right away. (But other people/things drag me away =0( But in the summer I'll update more often!) I'm glad I made your day with my last AN I hope this one makes you happy too! I want to know the name of the magazine your friend drew for! I promise to read one of your stories in the summer (I was beginning to read the FFX, but then I had to go eat dinner ^.^ ' ) so expect a review sometime in mid June or sooner depending on finals. Bye! I hope you enjoyed this chapter!
Alimoe =0)
To: BlueFrosting()
Hehe thanks! You're VERY kind in your review! I'll try to update more often, but I'm busy until after school gets out =0( But after that I'll try to update once a week! Hehehe I agree the Chibodee/Allenby pairing is awesome! You should put some stories up! I promise I'll read one I'm interested in during the summer! I'm sure they're great! And I'm sure that you're a better writer than me! (I know this cause I know I'm not that good =0) ) Anyways like I said before you're really too kind in your review, so thank you it was nice! Hehe it made me smile a big smile! I hope you liked this chapter!
Alimoe =0)
To: Slimslyde
Haha. You're a very funny person I can tell. The last line was funny! It made me giggle, I'm sure you're very good at humor stories. I can just tell. Well I hope you liked this chapter and I look forward to earning more reviews from you.
Alimoe =0)
To: Cloud_Light_Feather
Your review was short up sweet, thank you for taking the time to give me some feed back on how the story was going.
Alimoe =0)
To: Black Joker Lady
Haha a "bad" page in Ranma ½, hehe I know what it is. poor you. Thanks for the spell check tip (I did, but I obviously missed a few ^.^, but I checked this one a few times so hopefully there's none). As for any details on how the story is going to go, hotter. colder. (If that's possible) I'm not saying anything =0! Sorry, you'll just have to keep reading.
Alimoe =0)
To: Liza Akita
Hehe, thanks for the review! If I have a good mind for romance fics it's probally cause I read a lot. =0D Hehe your review was a very nice push to get me to write this one . I hope this chapter wasn't disappointing to you. Thanks for the review!
Alimoe =0)
PS: Hehe I love the phase "kudos to ya" I say it too! =0)
To: Sissi
Hi Sissi! Hehe you and me have the same view on constructive criticism. It only improves your story, so in the long run it's VERY good!
I hope you like this chapter. I don't know if you can kinda see where this story is going, but I'll tell you that from here, more events will start taking place. Well, maybe not this next chapter but the chapter after.
If you want I'll send you some good sites for Marmalade Boy if you want me too. I haven't talked to you lately, but when I talk to you again I can give you some good sites if you want, just let me know.
Alimoe =0)
To: Emma
I'm glad that you like the fic so far; I hope that this chapter was no exception to that opinion. =0) I don't think I can end the fic soon, but I'll try to get more chapters up more quickly.
Alimoe =0)
For Chapter: 1
To: PhoenixStarwind
Thanks for the review. I hope you continue to read the story, as for the Bunny, Shirley, Janet, and Cath point; well. it'll be addressed later. Thanks again for the review!
Alimoe =0)