Cinn: I'm back. This might just be a whole loada random p.o.v.s but if there's a change I'll tell you. R&R.
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Clarification,
Most things need clarifiing, so does this. (random p.o.v.s)
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Mez's p.o.v.
They must have been too busy laughing to continue talking. But things were coming back to me. I knew I'd had an accident that caused me to loose some of my memory, but I remembered certain things and cetain people.... But Trinity can't be Zoë, can she?? But if she's Zoë then Neo must be someone we both knew back then, he knew about the weird drawing, that DID look like a pig... Only 3 boys I can think of know about that Dan, Kenny and Thomas....
They couldn't be, could it. Dare I ask? If Trinity's Zoë and Neo's Thomas, but what if one's right, but the other is a totally diffrent person? I could end up upsetting one of 'em... I'm in a difficult situation....
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Trinity's p.o.v.
" Frog geek! "
" I would tell you to shut-up now if you didn't kick when people tell you to shut-up! "
I smirked, he opened his mouth as if to say something but decided against it. I hadn't acted like this in years, I didn't often act like this. I only acted like this when I was alone with Neo, I never acted like this when we were fighting, or if we were about to fight or go in. That's when I become deadly, somtimes literally deadly, serious.
10 minutes later, (Kro's p.o.v.)
" Kro.. "
" Hey Mez. "
" Kro, do you ever get a creepy feeling that you already knew Trinity and Neo? "
" No, I don't. " What the hecks gotton into her head?
" Do you remember in 4th grade, Zoë drew a picture that was supposed to be a person, but looked like a pig... "
" Too well. " God, that was funny. Why've you brought THAT up?
" They were talking about that a couple of minutes ago.. "
" You shouldn't listen in on other poeple's conversations... Wait a minute, you said they were discusing the picuture? "
" Yeah. Then the one Thomas drew that looked like a frog... "
" They were both talking about that? They couldn't be could they? "
" I dunno.. "
" Wouldn't they say something, I mean surely if they were they'd recognise us? "
" Unless they want to forget the matrix lives they had and make a 'fresh start' "
" Maybe, I have watch tonight. "
" So? "
" There'll be files on 'em, I could have a look around.. "
" They'll be classified.. "
" So? If they are, who we think they are, everything fits.. Zoë went missing around the age of 16, unplugged, she was always busy, IRSD-base... "
" Yeeeaaahhh. But Thomas never went missing... "
" Maybe he's only been unplugged recently... "
" Or only one of them's who we think and the other's someone else.. "
" Could be. " Why the heck are we discusing this, why don't we just ask???? Oh yeah, the last reason... What to do??
" What should we do? "
" How the f*ck should I know?? "
" Sor-ry, I was only asking. I don't know, but I want to find out.... "
" Me too. Maybe Morpheus or Tank'd know? "
" That'd be rude. "
" Like you'd care about being rude. "
" But if Trinity is Zoë.. Zoë was my best friend... "
" You're being rude about both of 'em now.. "
" Shut-up.. "
3 hours later, Trinity's p.o.v.
" Not as funny as the time you decided to muck up our assembly.. "
" Not my fault... "
" It was clear as anything that it was there. "
" So? "
" You fall over, get even more totally embarresed with thw wonderful comment 'Thomas Anderson geek of all geeks. ' How long did that keep up? "
" Too long... "
Meanwhile, Mez's p.o.v.
" You fall over, get even more totally embarresed with thw wonderful comment 'Thomas Anderson geek of all geeks. ' How long did that keep up? "
" Too long... "
Well, I was right with geek, definatly. And with Zoë. They ARE the same people... I've just heard 'em practically say it! But do I ask about it? I have a right to don't I? Trinity, or Zoë, was my best friend....
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Cinn: Bla bla bla. I'm mad, I'll admit. And I can be a cr*p writer. Acctually, I should stop giving myself so much credit at being a bad writer. Think positive. Positive. 'Cause I can write. And I'm improving all the time. I think/hope. Practise makes perfect.. I have a brilliant saying that applies to all flamers! Especially people that critisise the person not the fic. "I don't say I'm no better than anybody else.. But I'll be damned if I ain't just as good. "
Anyways, back to my original point about ff.net originally being something to help with my english. I used to be helpless at english. I'm still not too good, but it's helped. I think, can you please tell me whether I have improved or not?
Anyways thanks to: -
Trinity on the run: i think you've already answered the question above. Thanks. Review much apreciated.
Angelina: hm, I've had at least 16 flames, so I'm kinda used to it. Thanks. Review much apreciated.
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Clarification,
Most things need clarifiing, so does this. (random p.o.v.s)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Mez's p.o.v.
They must have been too busy laughing to continue talking. But things were coming back to me. I knew I'd had an accident that caused me to loose some of my memory, but I remembered certain things and cetain people.... But Trinity can't be Zoë, can she?? But if she's Zoë then Neo must be someone we both knew back then, he knew about the weird drawing, that DID look like a pig... Only 3 boys I can think of know about that Dan, Kenny and Thomas....
They couldn't be, could it. Dare I ask? If Trinity's Zoë and Neo's Thomas, but what if one's right, but the other is a totally diffrent person? I could end up upsetting one of 'em... I'm in a difficult situation....
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Trinity's p.o.v.
" Frog geek! "
" I would tell you to shut-up now if you didn't kick when people tell you to shut-up! "
I smirked, he opened his mouth as if to say something but decided against it. I hadn't acted like this in years, I didn't often act like this. I only acted like this when I was alone with Neo, I never acted like this when we were fighting, or if we were about to fight or go in. That's when I become deadly, somtimes literally deadly, serious.
10 minutes later, (Kro's p.o.v.)
" Kro.. "
" Hey Mez. "
" Kro, do you ever get a creepy feeling that you already knew Trinity and Neo? "
" No, I don't. " What the hecks gotton into her head?
" Do you remember in 4th grade, Zoë drew a picture that was supposed to be a person, but looked like a pig... "
" Too well. " God, that was funny. Why've you brought THAT up?
" They were talking about that a couple of minutes ago.. "
" You shouldn't listen in on other poeple's conversations... Wait a minute, you said they were discusing the picuture? "
" Yeah. Then the one Thomas drew that looked like a frog... "
" They were both talking about that? They couldn't be could they? "
" I dunno.. "
" Wouldn't they say something, I mean surely if they were they'd recognise us? "
" Unless they want to forget the matrix lives they had and make a 'fresh start' "
" Maybe, I have watch tonight. "
" So? "
" There'll be files on 'em, I could have a look around.. "
" They'll be classified.. "
" So? If they are, who we think they are, everything fits.. Zoë went missing around the age of 16, unplugged, she was always busy, IRSD-base... "
" Yeeeaaahhh. But Thomas never went missing... "
" Maybe he's only been unplugged recently... "
" Or only one of them's who we think and the other's someone else.. "
" Could be. " Why the heck are we discusing this, why don't we just ask???? Oh yeah, the last reason... What to do??
" What should we do? "
" How the f*ck should I know?? "
" Sor-ry, I was only asking. I don't know, but I want to find out.... "
" Me too. Maybe Morpheus or Tank'd know? "
" That'd be rude. "
" Like you'd care about being rude. "
" But if Trinity is Zoë.. Zoë was my best friend... "
" You're being rude about both of 'em now.. "
" Shut-up.. "
3 hours later, Trinity's p.o.v.
" Not as funny as the time you decided to muck up our assembly.. "
" Not my fault... "
" It was clear as anything that it was there. "
" So? "
" You fall over, get even more totally embarresed with thw wonderful comment 'Thomas Anderson geek of all geeks. ' How long did that keep up? "
" Too long... "
Meanwhile, Mez's p.o.v.
" You fall over, get even more totally embarresed with thw wonderful comment 'Thomas Anderson geek of all geeks. ' How long did that keep up? "
" Too long... "
Well, I was right with geek, definatly. And with Zoë. They ARE the same people... I've just heard 'em practically say it! But do I ask about it? I have a right to don't I? Trinity, or Zoë, was my best friend....
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Cinn: Bla bla bla. I'm mad, I'll admit. And I can be a cr*p writer. Acctually, I should stop giving myself so much credit at being a bad writer. Think positive. Positive. 'Cause I can write. And I'm improving all the time. I think/hope. Practise makes perfect.. I have a brilliant saying that applies to all flamers! Especially people that critisise the person not the fic. "I don't say I'm no better than anybody else.. But I'll be damned if I ain't just as good. "
Anyways, back to my original point about ff.net originally being something to help with my english. I used to be helpless at english. I'm still not too good, but it's helped. I think, can you please tell me whether I have improved or not?
Anyways thanks to: -
Trinity on the run: i think you've already answered the question above. Thanks. Review much apreciated.
Angelina: hm, I've had at least 16 flames, so I'm kinda used to it. Thanks. Review much apreciated.