Cinn: I'm getting the feeling that this fic is becoming more and more pointless by the minute. Oh well, R&R. And also I feel like a short chappie...
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Setting a scene,
Anything can set a scene, but nothing can change it once it's been set. Trinity' p.o.v.
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1 week later,
I've just about got used to the fact Tank's dead. It wasn't easy, but I'm getting there.
" One thing I definately miss from the matrix is better food. "
" That's the only thing? "
" Pretty much, you don't notice much else... " I replied.
" I suppose, but there's a lot more that I miss. "
" what, being superman in the matrix? " I joked.
" Jealous I can fly? "
" No, I prefer motorbikes.. "
" I'd noticed... "
" What? Just because I drive a little dangerously.. "
" A 'little' dangerously? "
" Neo, shut-up. "
" Nope. "
" Why not? Not like there's anything to talk about anymore.. "
" Suppose. " You're favorite word.
" I'm gonna go see if there's anything else that needs doing.. "
" O.K. "
I headed off, the atmosphere of the Neb was a little happier. But Tank dying had brought gloom to everyone..
1 hour later,
" We need to go into the matrix. "
" Why? "
" Because the agent's have got hold of one of the other captains... "
" Who? "
" Millennium. "
" Millennium? Who the heck? "
" The red-head you took such a dislike to Trinity. "
" Oh, her. Yeah, I remember now Morpheus. she expects me to help her? She called me a lot of horrible things, so I kicked her. "
" I shall not ask what she called you. I have a feeling I don't want to know. "
" No, you don't. "
" But the agents have her, so surprisingly they're trying to get into her brain for the Zion access codes. "
" How'd I guess. Want me to go get the rest of 'em. Is Oria still in the Med. bay? "
" Yep. "
" O.K. I'll go get everyone else. "
I headed off to the mess, it was about lunch time so that's where they'd all be. I'm there,
" We're going in. "
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Cinn: This is just setting the scene for the next chappie really, so this is rather pointless. Anyways, thanks to: -
Trinity on the run: You managed to totally confuse me, but that's not hard. Erm, I try to do the thought patterns of who ever's p.o.v. it is, but it's a little confusing (even to me, the author) when I keep switching... Solution, stop switchin p.o.v.'s so much. Anyways, what was it you said about Sparks, if I thought he was a little OOC make him tell more jokes? That is where I'm not very skilled, I'm RUBBISH at jokes, and I'm not very fimialiar with the character of Sparks. But I know a bit about him. And a point your review made me think of, is the fact that I haven't seen 'The Matrix' for ages and the last two films I saw with any actors/actress's in 'em were just plain hilaious and had nothing to do with it. I think I need to refresh my memory. After all that, the review was much apreciated. Thanks.
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Setting a scene,
Anything can set a scene, but nothing can change it once it's been set. Trinity' p.o.v.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
1 week later,
I've just about got used to the fact Tank's dead. It wasn't easy, but I'm getting there.
" One thing I definately miss from the matrix is better food. "
" That's the only thing? "
" Pretty much, you don't notice much else... " I replied.
" I suppose, but there's a lot more that I miss. "
" what, being superman in the matrix? " I joked.
" Jealous I can fly? "
" No, I prefer motorbikes.. "
" I'd noticed... "
" What? Just because I drive a little dangerously.. "
" A 'little' dangerously? "
" Neo, shut-up. "
" Nope. "
" Why not? Not like there's anything to talk about anymore.. "
" Suppose. " You're favorite word.
" I'm gonna go see if there's anything else that needs doing.. "
" O.K. "
I headed off, the atmosphere of the Neb was a little happier. But Tank dying had brought gloom to everyone..
1 hour later,
" We need to go into the matrix. "
" Why? "
" Because the agent's have got hold of one of the other captains... "
" Who? "
" Millennium. "
" Millennium? Who the heck? "
" The red-head you took such a dislike to Trinity. "
" Oh, her. Yeah, I remember now Morpheus. she expects me to help her? She called me a lot of horrible things, so I kicked her. "
" I shall not ask what she called you. I have a feeling I don't want to know. "
" No, you don't. "
" But the agents have her, so surprisingly they're trying to get into her brain for the Zion access codes. "
" How'd I guess. Want me to go get the rest of 'em. Is Oria still in the Med. bay? "
" Yep. "
" O.K. I'll go get everyone else. "
I headed off to the mess, it was about lunch time so that's where they'd all be. I'm there,
" We're going in. "
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Cinn: This is just setting the scene for the next chappie really, so this is rather pointless. Anyways, thanks to: -
Trinity on the run: You managed to totally confuse me, but that's not hard. Erm, I try to do the thought patterns of who ever's p.o.v. it is, but it's a little confusing (even to me, the author) when I keep switching... Solution, stop switchin p.o.v.'s so much. Anyways, what was it you said about Sparks, if I thought he was a little OOC make him tell more jokes? That is where I'm not very skilled, I'm RUBBISH at jokes, and I'm not very fimialiar with the character of Sparks. But I know a bit about him. And a point your review made me think of, is the fact that I haven't seen 'The Matrix' for ages and the last two films I saw with any actors/actress's in 'em were just plain hilaious and had nothing to do with it. I think I need to refresh my memory. After all that, the review was much apreciated. Thanks.