Sorry this is an authors note...
This story received many bad reviews. so I was wondering how many people want me to continue. If I don't get a lot of people then I am going to stop writing it and wasting my time.
Oh "reality check" and/or "reality check 2"
I don't live in Hartford so I wouldn't know if there was a Vons in there or what but I was just trying to be specific. If you don't like my story that much... than don't read it! I forgot to use spell check. so what? You and some other people got this wrong. I didn't say " he took her car" I said " he took *the* car" ok? He picked her up! Remember? Gosh get off my back Jeeze!
This story received many bad reviews. so I was wondering how many people want me to continue. If I don't get a lot of people then I am going to stop writing it and wasting my time.
Oh "reality check" and/or "reality check 2"
I don't live in Hartford so I wouldn't know if there was a Vons in there or what but I was just trying to be specific. If you don't like my story that much... than don't read it! I forgot to use spell check. so what? You and some other people got this wrong. I didn't say " he took her car" I said " he took *the* car" ok? He picked her up! Remember? Gosh get off my back Jeeze!