Lupin was thinking out loud to him self, "What the hell am I looking for?"
He closed is eyes and in a scene flashed a full moon, a werewolf, obviously himself, and figure small in stature but oddly familiar draped in shadows pulling back from the wolf. Lupin opened his eyes wide shaking and in a cold sweat. He looked up at the moon and realized that it was just about full he had another two days before his night of torture began. He climbed into bed only to have the same vision in a more clearly defined dream.
The shadowed figure was a girl probably about age 28 with light brown hair and dazzling ice-blue eyes. She was small in stature about five feet four inches, and she was running from something when she came across Lupin in his wolf form unable to find a way to go around the werewolf and continue running she looked to the sky and saw that the moon was setting and the sun was rising. With this happening Remus's transformation from wolf to human started to occur the girl stood frozen in her spot as if she had grown roots to just watching as Remus went from wolf to human in a painful fit of thrashing and howling. When the transformation had ended and Remus was lying on the ground breathless and completely naked the girl took off her small coat kneeled beside him and laid it on Remus for any sort of warmth, brushed the hair off his face, and was suddenly seized at the upper arm and dragged away by man Tall, dark, and amazingly handsome with black shiny hair, electric green eyes flecked with red, and fair skin. She was pulling back screaming in pain, yelling for him to let her go, and he spun around meaning to slap her across the face when she ducked grabbed his other arm from hitting her and bit into it hard, the man let out a blood curdling cry, cursing her;
"Eve, You Bitch!" he took another swipe for her and succeeded this time in hitting her square across the face and knocking her to the ground as she hit with a shallow thump. Remus tried to move but he couldn't. Everything else went dark except for the girl,
"God she's tragically beautiful," Remus thought as even her features started to dim and fade with the last things to die were her piercing eyes both threatening and adoring.
With that Remus woke up to the dark sky still out with the innumerable stars dancing above and just a crack of late summer sun starting on the horizon. Looked down at him-self tangled in the sheets of his bed and just starting to realize how fast his heart was in fact beating.
"Phew" he sighed "Just a dream" he said to himself in an almost convincing tone. It took him a few minutes to untangle him self from his bed coverings get up and get dressed. He slowly walked down the stairs to the first floor landing and saw a light on in the kitchen, walking toward it he entered and saw Molly Weasley working on that mornings breakfast,
"Good morning Molly." Remus said jovially
"Good morning Remus, you ready for breakfast?" She asked "You'll need your strength to apparate over the ocean." She continued with a warm but apparently nervous smile.
"Oh no, Molly I should be fine I really have to get going I'm going to go pack a few things come down and say goodbye and I'm off." Remus said as he turned and walked out of the kitchen back up the stairs picked up his wand of the bed side table opened the trunk at the foot of the bed, with a smooth flowing wave of his wand his cloths, books, and a years supply of the wolfsbane potion as well as a compass and magical map of North America flew folded into the trunk. Remus nodded at his ability to pack his small shabby trunk as he picked up one of the handles and dragged it out of the room and down the stairs as not to break the potion he lifted it over the stairs so that it just barely hovered and floated smoothly down to the first floor.
"Molly, Remus called softly, I'm leaving now...I'll see you around Christmas probably."
"Remus, you wait right there, you're not walking out that door until I get a proper goodbye." Molly called from the kitchen as she emerged she walked to him gave him a hug looked at him directly in the eyes and said sternly, "Remus, you be very careful we're all counting on you."
"I know Molly, I know." He said softly "Will you tell Harry, Ron, and Hermione that I said goodbye and I'll see them at Christmas? Please." "Of course I will." She said holding her elbows in her hands
"Be safe Remus come back with whatever it is soon."
"Oh I'll find it and won't rest much till I do." With that he picked up his trunk and with a loud snap was gone
I hope that these edits help to make the story easier to read. Keep me posted on anything I can do to make this story more enjoyable :-)
He closed is eyes and in a scene flashed a full moon, a werewolf, obviously himself, and figure small in stature but oddly familiar draped in shadows pulling back from the wolf. Lupin opened his eyes wide shaking and in a cold sweat. He looked up at the moon and realized that it was just about full he had another two days before his night of torture began. He climbed into bed only to have the same vision in a more clearly defined dream.
The shadowed figure was a girl probably about age 28 with light brown hair and dazzling ice-blue eyes. She was small in stature about five feet four inches, and she was running from something when she came across Lupin in his wolf form unable to find a way to go around the werewolf and continue running she looked to the sky and saw that the moon was setting and the sun was rising. With this happening Remus's transformation from wolf to human started to occur the girl stood frozen in her spot as if she had grown roots to just watching as Remus went from wolf to human in a painful fit of thrashing and howling. When the transformation had ended and Remus was lying on the ground breathless and completely naked the girl took off her small coat kneeled beside him and laid it on Remus for any sort of warmth, brushed the hair off his face, and was suddenly seized at the upper arm and dragged away by man Tall, dark, and amazingly handsome with black shiny hair, electric green eyes flecked with red, and fair skin. She was pulling back screaming in pain, yelling for him to let her go, and he spun around meaning to slap her across the face when she ducked grabbed his other arm from hitting her and bit into it hard, the man let out a blood curdling cry, cursing her;
"Eve, You Bitch!" he took another swipe for her and succeeded this time in hitting her square across the face and knocking her to the ground as she hit with a shallow thump. Remus tried to move but he couldn't. Everything else went dark except for the girl,
"God she's tragically beautiful," Remus thought as even her features started to dim and fade with the last things to die were her piercing eyes both threatening and adoring.
With that Remus woke up to the dark sky still out with the innumerable stars dancing above and just a crack of late summer sun starting on the horizon. Looked down at him-self tangled in the sheets of his bed and just starting to realize how fast his heart was in fact beating.
"Phew" he sighed "Just a dream" he said to himself in an almost convincing tone. It took him a few minutes to untangle him self from his bed coverings get up and get dressed. He slowly walked down the stairs to the first floor landing and saw a light on in the kitchen, walking toward it he entered and saw Molly Weasley working on that mornings breakfast,
"Good morning Molly." Remus said jovially
"Good morning Remus, you ready for breakfast?" She asked "You'll need your strength to apparate over the ocean." She continued with a warm but apparently nervous smile.
"Oh no, Molly I should be fine I really have to get going I'm going to go pack a few things come down and say goodbye and I'm off." Remus said as he turned and walked out of the kitchen back up the stairs picked up his wand of the bed side table opened the trunk at the foot of the bed, with a smooth flowing wave of his wand his cloths, books, and a years supply of the wolfsbane potion as well as a compass and magical map of North America flew folded into the trunk. Remus nodded at his ability to pack his small shabby trunk as he picked up one of the handles and dragged it out of the room and down the stairs as not to break the potion he lifted it over the stairs so that it just barely hovered and floated smoothly down to the first floor.
"Molly, Remus called softly, I'm leaving now...I'll see you around Christmas probably."
"Remus, you wait right there, you're not walking out that door until I get a proper goodbye." Molly called from the kitchen as she emerged she walked to him gave him a hug looked at him directly in the eyes and said sternly, "Remus, you be very careful we're all counting on you."
"I know Molly, I know." He said softly "Will you tell Harry, Ron, and Hermione that I said goodbye and I'll see them at Christmas? Please." "Of course I will." She said holding her elbows in her hands
"Be safe Remus come back with whatever it is soon."
"Oh I'll find it and won't rest much till I do." With that he picked up his trunk and with a loud snap was gone
I hope that these edits help to make the story easier to read. Keep me posted on anything I can do to make this story more enjoyable :-)