Hi its Pai again, I only have 1 Review please review people it'll make Pai very happy. OK, some things have happened since I started my story,
1 Umi changed her name to Ryoko(Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!),
2 Ed is planing on changing her name(:*-(),
3 Pai wanna stay Pai(Pai feel all alone),
4 I now have to friends who are Rini and Gohan and I have no idea how I'm going to get them in the
story(Pai is so confused),
5 Tough luck they most likely wont be in the story(Thats the way the ball bounces as my dad
says).
Please R&R, even if you don't like it say something.
Oh... I kind of forgot something, Ryoko and Ed are staying Umi and Ed in Pai's story so it don't get confusing, K?
Pai doesn't own Gundam Wing just Pai and Tamara, Ryoko owns Umi and Naomi, and Ed owns Ed and Cori.
. . . Though we wouldn't mind owning Heero(Pai), Quatre(Ryoko), and Duo(Ed) he he he
ahem... on with the fic
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~*~Later at School~*~
It was math class and Tamara was bored as ever.
'Will this class ever end' thought Tamara sleepily
~*~Flashback~*~
"Mommy I'm home" said Tamara as she entered the living room. The room was mostly filled with old junk, a couple of her fathers old guns hear and there, newspaper clippings of when he was a Gundam Pilot, and a few jars of candy, but to the Yuy family it was home.
"Hi Mr. and Mrs. Maxwell" said Mara
"Hey Mara" said Duo giving her a hug.
"Eny news on my daddy" said Tamara happily, she liked Mr. Maxwell, he is one of daddy's friends, he is also Cori's daddy, and always had candy on hand.
"He got the access codes to the base yesterday, and he should be done with his mission next weak at the latest"
"Daddy gonna be home soon" said Tamara looking at her mother who was playing rock, paper, sizers with Ed
"Yup, then we go to Disneyland. Ed, Umi, Naomi, Cori, Quatre, Duo, Trowa, and Wufei are coming with us" said Pai, it wasn't just going to Disneyland Tamara wanted her father to come home because she had a bad feeling about this mission and she wanted him home.
~*~ End Flashback~*~
Tamara awoke to the slamming of a book 'I hate it when teachers do that to wake people up' thought Tamara
"Thank you for joining us Miss Yuy" said her teacher
"Is that you Mrs. Cohan I had a dream you got old and died" said Tamara as her eyes adjusted to the light.
"I can take that as a death treat and get you..."
"Expelled" said Tamara finishing her sentence 'I hate this lady she's way to predictable, oh well, she'll be fired before the years over anyway he he he..." Tamara's thoughts were interrupted by the ringing of the school bell.
"I want you all to give me your tests before you leave" said Mrs. Cohan as the students left the class room. "I sapose you didn't get eny of it done since you sleept the hole time" said Mrs. Cohere as Tamara came up to her desk
'Didn't get eny of it done?, she thinks I would fall asleep with out doing my test first' thought Tamara angrily "Actually I got all of it done, and you'll find it that I got all of them correct"
As Tamara stomped down the hall she slowed down as her friends caught up with her
"Your gonna get detention you know" said Naomi
"I don't care" said Tamara angrily
"And you wonder why you need Therapy" said Cori
"I Do Not Need Therapy!" shouted Tamara 'Stupid Therapist always taking away time that could be used blowing up stuff, Ahhh, I almost forgot' thought Tamara "That reminds me" said Tamara "We start mass Destruction at nine o'clock"
"Oh... Why" wined her two friends
"Because I have Therapy after school" said Tamara 'I beat up a couple people and all of a sudden I need Therapy, Err...'
"But all the really hard people to beat will be gone by then" wined her friends more
"I know but I got Therapy"wined Tamara 'Stupid Therapist always ruining are fun' "I gotta go now see you guys at nine o'clock
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Yay, another chapter comes to a close, next chapter Mara goes to the Therapist Lady.
Please tell me what I'm lacking for people to want to read it.
Thank You!!! Angel of Halo for my first Review. I'm so happy!!! (Does a happy dance)
To answer Angels Questions about Chapter 1
1.Heero was smiling because...uh I guess because... they were gonna go to Disneyland or its because his daughter was being cute
2.Heero got Married at the age of 21(A.C.201) which would make the story in A.C.217
3. To answer the Question how he got a daughter, you have to think how are babies born (In case you were wondering Tamara was born in A.C. 203)
Please R&R even if they are telling me my story sucks I wanna know if people are reading it.
Thank You
1 Umi changed her name to Ryoko(Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!),
2 Ed is planing on changing her name(:*-(),
3 Pai wanna stay Pai(Pai feel all alone),
4 I now have to friends who are Rini and Gohan and I have no idea how I'm going to get them in the
story(Pai is so confused),
5 Tough luck they most likely wont be in the story(Thats the way the ball bounces as my dad
says).
Please R&R, even if you don't like it say something.
Oh... I kind of forgot something, Ryoko and Ed are staying Umi and Ed in Pai's story so it don't get confusing, K?
Pai doesn't own Gundam Wing just Pai and Tamara, Ryoko owns Umi and Naomi, and Ed owns Ed and Cori.
. . . Though we wouldn't mind owning Heero(Pai), Quatre(Ryoko), and Duo(Ed) he he he
ahem... on with the fic
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~*~Later at School~*~
It was math class and Tamara was bored as ever.
'Will this class ever end' thought Tamara sleepily
~*~Flashback~*~
"Mommy I'm home" said Tamara as she entered the living room. The room was mostly filled with old junk, a couple of her fathers old guns hear and there, newspaper clippings of when he was a Gundam Pilot, and a few jars of candy, but to the Yuy family it was home.
"Hi Mr. and Mrs. Maxwell" said Mara
"Hey Mara" said Duo giving her a hug.
"Eny news on my daddy" said Tamara happily, she liked Mr. Maxwell, he is one of daddy's friends, he is also Cori's daddy, and always had candy on hand.
"He got the access codes to the base yesterday, and he should be done with his mission next weak at the latest"
"Daddy gonna be home soon" said Tamara looking at her mother who was playing rock, paper, sizers with Ed
"Yup, then we go to Disneyland. Ed, Umi, Naomi, Cori, Quatre, Duo, Trowa, and Wufei are coming with us" said Pai, it wasn't just going to Disneyland Tamara wanted her father to come home because she had a bad feeling about this mission and she wanted him home.
~*~ End Flashback~*~
Tamara awoke to the slamming of a book 'I hate it when teachers do that to wake people up' thought Tamara
"Thank you for joining us Miss Yuy" said her teacher
"Is that you Mrs. Cohan I had a dream you got old and died" said Tamara as her eyes adjusted to the light.
"I can take that as a death treat and get you..."
"Expelled" said Tamara finishing her sentence 'I hate this lady she's way to predictable, oh well, she'll be fired before the years over anyway he he he..." Tamara's thoughts were interrupted by the ringing of the school bell.
"I want you all to give me your tests before you leave" said Mrs. Cohan as the students left the class room. "I sapose you didn't get eny of it done since you sleept the hole time" said Mrs. Cohere as Tamara came up to her desk
'Didn't get eny of it done?, she thinks I would fall asleep with out doing my test first' thought Tamara angrily "Actually I got all of it done, and you'll find it that I got all of them correct"
As Tamara stomped down the hall she slowed down as her friends caught up with her
"Your gonna get detention you know" said Naomi
"I don't care" said Tamara angrily
"And you wonder why you need Therapy" said Cori
"I Do Not Need Therapy!" shouted Tamara 'Stupid Therapist always taking away time that could be used blowing up stuff, Ahhh, I almost forgot' thought Tamara "That reminds me" said Tamara "We start mass Destruction at nine o'clock"
"Oh... Why" wined her two friends
"Because I have Therapy after school" said Tamara 'I beat up a couple people and all of a sudden I need Therapy, Err...'
"But all the really hard people to beat will be gone by then" wined her friends more
"I know but I got Therapy"wined Tamara 'Stupid Therapist always ruining are fun' "I gotta go now see you guys at nine o'clock
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Yay, another chapter comes to a close, next chapter Mara goes to the Therapist Lady.
Please tell me what I'm lacking for people to want to read it.
Thank You!!! Angel of Halo for my first Review. I'm so happy!!! (Does a happy dance)
To answer Angels Questions about Chapter 1
1.Heero was smiling because...uh I guess because... they were gonna go to Disneyland or its because his daughter was being cute
2.Heero got Married at the age of 21(A.C.201) which would make the story in A.C.217
3. To answer the Question how he got a daughter, you have to think how are babies born (In case you were wondering Tamara was born in A.C. 203)
Please R&R even if they are telling me my story sucks I wanna know if people are reading it.
Thank You