Thank you Kynstar. I'm glad you found it tear jerking as well.
Well this most likely will be the last chapter..but you never know I just might add another if I get lots of sweet reviews from sweet people like you!!!
Alright, I know enough flattering..hehe....
Chapter 9-
Qui-Gon raced through the chaotic halls. He had heard the grand news. Everyone that recieved the bacta was no longer dying, but was still very sick. Qui-Gon now ran to tell Obi-Wan the good news. As he got to Kira's door, it opened.
Qui-Gon knew instantly by Obi-Wan's face what had happened. Obi-Wan's eyes were bloodshot and puffy and tear stains streaked down his face. Qui-Gon stepped closer and pulled the younger man into a hug.
"I'm so sorry, Obi-wan,"Qui-Gon said quietly," I wish she would've been saved."
"Thank you Master," Obi-Wan said shakily.
Qui-gon held him for a few minutes, much to Obi-Wan's relief. Then he looked Obi-Wan in the face.
"You were right. The bacta has worked, everyone who was sick is out of danger!"
Obi-Wan smiled a bit and replied," That's good. Where is Anakin?" "Sleeping on a bed. At dawn we leave to Coruscant."
Obi-Wan nodded and looked back at the room. He felt Qui-Gon's hand on his shoulder.
"I'll make sure she has a proper funeral. Come on, we should tell Lin."
They left the corridor and spotted Lin. They told her the news and Obi-Wan was once again hugged. Obi-Wan gave his thanks and they went to where Anakin was laying. He wasn't sleeping, but staring at the ceiling.
"Ani?"
Qui-Gon sat in one chair while Obi-Wan took the other. Anakin kept staring at the ceiling. Obi-Wan met Qui-Gon's eyes. Through their bond he felt Qui- Gon's uncertainty. He also felt something else. Anakin's annoyance. Qui-Gon smiled as he felt it, too.
"What is it Anakin, tired of laying about?" Obi-Wan asked amused. Anakin turned his head to them.
"No," he said hoarsely," I'm tired of being here. When are we leaving?"
"Soon," Qui-Gon answered," Just rest."
Anakin locked his gaze with Obi-Wan. Obi-Wan felt a most strangest feeling, like Anakin was seeing through him. Abruptly he blinked and Anakin returned his gaze to the ceiling.
"I'm sorry," he whispered.
Qui-gon looked puzzled and Obi-Wan asked," For what?"
Anakin didn't say another word.
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Dawn came fast and soon the Jedi made a fast trip back to the Jedi Temple. There Anakin was admitted to the Healer's Ward and Obi-Wan and Qui-gon rested.
A couple days later while Qui-Gon was sleeping, Obi-wan went to The Room of a Thousand Fountains. He often went here when he felt sad or nervous. It had a calming affect on people and he knew Anakin went here almost all the time.
He sat on his favorite bench and closed his eyes. Kira instantly popped into his mind along with fresh tears. He opened his eyes to wipe away the tears when he detected a some one in here with him. Sure enough Anakin soon appeared, having spotted Obi-Wan sat down beside him.
Obi-Wan felt a little embarrassed about crying but Anakin seem to take no notice. Suddenly something he had forgotten about sprung into his senses.
"Yesterday, why did you say you were sorry?"
Anakin looked at him, his eyes shiny with unshed tears. Obi-Wan stayed silent.
"I knew about Kira. I know she..died right in your arms that day."
Obi-Wan looked away as some tears leaked through again. This time he didn't bother to wipe them off. Anakin sniffed and cleared his throat.
"When I was sick, I know I hurt you guys, but you don't know what it was like. Everything, all emotions came pouring to me. It was over- whelming."
Obi-wan looked back at Anakin. The boy was struggling with something, debating whether or not to say. Obi-Wan put his hand on Anakin's left shoulder and Anakin broke down completely.
"Remeber that time you came to see me, when I was on the floor? I know you thought I was crazy, seeming to look at nothing. I wasn't looking at nothing. It was..a person. A man. He was the one who caused all this. He marked all the ones who got sick. He kept saying that we belong to him."
Obi-Wan sat shocked.
"Anakin..you were probably just halluci-.."
"NO!," Anakin yelled," I wasn't hallucinating. He was real. He was the shadow making everyone sick. He was evil..he was awful. He.."
Anakin looked away. Obi-wan didn't know what to do. Luck seemed to be on his side because a few seconds later Qui-Gon was standing there. From the look on his face he had heard the entire conversation and Obi-Wan could feel tears once again.
Qui-Gon knelt down and took Anakin's hand. "Ani, I'm sorry you had to go through this. I'm sorry we all had to go through this," he said as he looked at Obi-Wan," but it won't do to dwell on things. Let it go and you will feel better."
Obi-Wan's lip trembled as he blurted out," She knew she was dying. She told and a few mere minutes later she died. Right in my arms."
Anakin looked at him through his tears. Friendship, love and sorrow filled those blue orbs. Obi-Wan smiled a little and got one back. Anakin slammed him into a hug, which he returned back after getting over the brief shock. Qui-Gon laughed and it spread. Soon they were all laughing like lunatics. Maybe things weren't okay now, but Obi-Wan knew they would be.
Split personalities, he thought, were kind of like feelings. They changed without knowing. Most of the time for the better.
THE END!!!!!!!!!!!
A BIG WARM HUG AND LOTS OF CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES FOR ALL MY REVIEWERS. ALSO A FREE GLASS OF MILK! HEHE....
STAY TUNED FOR MY NEXT STORY. THIS TIME IT WILL PROBABLY BE LORD OF THE RINGS..
BYE-BYE!!!!!
Well this most likely will be the last chapter..but you never know I just might add another if I get lots of sweet reviews from sweet people like you!!!
Alright, I know enough flattering..hehe....
Chapter 9-
Qui-Gon raced through the chaotic halls. He had heard the grand news. Everyone that recieved the bacta was no longer dying, but was still very sick. Qui-Gon now ran to tell Obi-Wan the good news. As he got to Kira's door, it opened.
Qui-Gon knew instantly by Obi-Wan's face what had happened. Obi-Wan's eyes were bloodshot and puffy and tear stains streaked down his face. Qui-Gon stepped closer and pulled the younger man into a hug.
"I'm so sorry, Obi-wan,"Qui-Gon said quietly," I wish she would've been saved."
"Thank you Master," Obi-Wan said shakily.
Qui-gon held him for a few minutes, much to Obi-Wan's relief. Then he looked Obi-Wan in the face.
"You were right. The bacta has worked, everyone who was sick is out of danger!"
Obi-Wan smiled a bit and replied," That's good. Where is Anakin?" "Sleeping on a bed. At dawn we leave to Coruscant."
Obi-Wan nodded and looked back at the room. He felt Qui-Gon's hand on his shoulder.
"I'll make sure she has a proper funeral. Come on, we should tell Lin."
They left the corridor and spotted Lin. They told her the news and Obi-Wan was once again hugged. Obi-Wan gave his thanks and they went to where Anakin was laying. He wasn't sleeping, but staring at the ceiling.
"Ani?"
Qui-Gon sat in one chair while Obi-Wan took the other. Anakin kept staring at the ceiling. Obi-Wan met Qui-Gon's eyes. Through their bond he felt Qui- Gon's uncertainty. He also felt something else. Anakin's annoyance. Qui-Gon smiled as he felt it, too.
"What is it Anakin, tired of laying about?" Obi-Wan asked amused. Anakin turned his head to them.
"No," he said hoarsely," I'm tired of being here. When are we leaving?"
"Soon," Qui-Gon answered," Just rest."
Anakin locked his gaze with Obi-Wan. Obi-Wan felt a most strangest feeling, like Anakin was seeing through him. Abruptly he blinked and Anakin returned his gaze to the ceiling.
"I'm sorry," he whispered.
Qui-gon looked puzzled and Obi-Wan asked," For what?"
Anakin didn't say another word.
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Dawn came fast and soon the Jedi made a fast trip back to the Jedi Temple. There Anakin was admitted to the Healer's Ward and Obi-Wan and Qui-gon rested.
A couple days later while Qui-Gon was sleeping, Obi-wan went to The Room of a Thousand Fountains. He often went here when he felt sad or nervous. It had a calming affect on people and he knew Anakin went here almost all the time.
He sat on his favorite bench and closed his eyes. Kira instantly popped into his mind along with fresh tears. He opened his eyes to wipe away the tears when he detected a some one in here with him. Sure enough Anakin soon appeared, having spotted Obi-Wan sat down beside him.
Obi-Wan felt a little embarrassed about crying but Anakin seem to take no notice. Suddenly something he had forgotten about sprung into his senses.
"Yesterday, why did you say you were sorry?"
Anakin looked at him, his eyes shiny with unshed tears. Obi-Wan stayed silent.
"I knew about Kira. I know she..died right in your arms that day."
Obi-Wan looked away as some tears leaked through again. This time he didn't bother to wipe them off. Anakin sniffed and cleared his throat.
"When I was sick, I know I hurt you guys, but you don't know what it was like. Everything, all emotions came pouring to me. It was over- whelming."
Obi-wan looked back at Anakin. The boy was struggling with something, debating whether or not to say. Obi-Wan put his hand on Anakin's left shoulder and Anakin broke down completely.
"Remeber that time you came to see me, when I was on the floor? I know you thought I was crazy, seeming to look at nothing. I wasn't looking at nothing. It was..a person. A man. He was the one who caused all this. He marked all the ones who got sick. He kept saying that we belong to him."
Obi-Wan sat shocked.
"Anakin..you were probably just halluci-.."
"NO!," Anakin yelled," I wasn't hallucinating. He was real. He was the shadow making everyone sick. He was evil..he was awful. He.."
Anakin looked away. Obi-wan didn't know what to do. Luck seemed to be on his side because a few seconds later Qui-Gon was standing there. From the look on his face he had heard the entire conversation and Obi-Wan could feel tears once again.
Qui-Gon knelt down and took Anakin's hand. "Ani, I'm sorry you had to go through this. I'm sorry we all had to go through this," he said as he looked at Obi-Wan," but it won't do to dwell on things. Let it go and you will feel better."
Obi-Wan's lip trembled as he blurted out," She knew she was dying. She told and a few mere minutes later she died. Right in my arms."
Anakin looked at him through his tears. Friendship, love and sorrow filled those blue orbs. Obi-Wan smiled a little and got one back. Anakin slammed him into a hug, which he returned back after getting over the brief shock. Qui-Gon laughed and it spread. Soon they were all laughing like lunatics. Maybe things weren't okay now, but Obi-Wan knew they would be.
Split personalities, he thought, were kind of like feelings. They changed without knowing. Most of the time for the better.
THE END!!!!!!!!!!!
A BIG WARM HUG AND LOTS OF CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES FOR ALL MY REVIEWERS. ALSO A FREE GLASS OF MILK! HEHE....
STAY TUNED FOR MY NEXT STORY. THIS TIME IT WILL PROBABLY BE LORD OF THE RINGS..
BYE-BYE!!!!!