the aliens' way of speaking "Human talking" ( my additions, comments or thoughts ) {thoughts of both types characters} kadrish/ships' computer announcements means i will Tell you later time Diclaimer: I no own,
got no dough,
so you no sue,
all you'll get,
just an IOU. Thank you who ever (I have a terrible memory and forgot Your Name Sorry was it Jord?) gave me Pieter Smith. um whoever gave me this character's past is me (zandra) his commander or is it another. I used his past as with another ,okay, and i gave him a nickname. This chapter is for you. And if any of you guy went to Wynnebrook Elementry and know the guys PLEASE DON'T TELL 'EM THAT I WROTE THIS but do tell them that thier gurl Alex from 5th grade misses 'em. Okay please i still excepting charaters from reviewers. They don't need to fight in any chapter the can have a job you want on the kadrish ship. Oh and i now accept anomonus reviews. I any one gave me a character Before i must not seen it and can please send it again. Please review or flame please But dont be harsh I only one month away form being 14. I gonna make this a yu yu hakuso.

10 minutes before the meeting at the brige
Chapter 5
I want you to do me a favor

"Kadrish I want to call Pieter Smith please here please" Said Zandra. She was sitting a large black massage chair whichis working its magic.(i love those don't you)

Yes commander

three minutes later

Commander , Private Pieter he will be here .......( kadrish was cuttoff by)

" Right now" interupted by a 35 year old man with black hair & brown eyes and has with a robotic left underarm and hand, a robotic right leg, a implant for his right eye.

"Pie ! I have the perfect date for you friday" exclaimed Zandra as she slided out of her seat of comfort and padded over to the man she counts on a surregete dad. Happy to she because she didn't see him much 'cause he train most of the new recuits.

"Z what's the real reason for have our advanced computer system call me here"said Pieter inannoyed tone.

"Well that and I have favor I wish of you''Zandra paused took in a big breathe and said ''canyouwatchsomeofusbecauseonournewmissonwe're fightingnewxenos"

"What the hell you said say it again but slower"said Pieter.

"Okay"sighed Zandra in defeat ''can you watch some of us because on our new misson we're fighting new xenos"

"Fine I'll babysitt"Said Pieter.

"Yay"Zandra said.

"But on one condition"said Pieter

"What is it"Zandra said susipiusly.

" all weapon types that you would use for close combat"He replied

"Fine whatever"said Zandra."Kadrish order his new weapons"

Yes commander and You have only three minutes to get to your meeting

"Shit oh Pie I serois about the girl I found her on matchmaker.com and set you up on a date in the dark shejust like except they fired her instead of trying to you know"Zandra as she made the beheading symbol.

Authors words OKay reveiw please Flames are used to burn my enemies and weld my gunblade together