Thanks for the comment, Bluebell. I do know that 9 is more than 5 but I
kept on forgetting my floppy to update it at school and this is the first
chance I have had to get on at home so here it goes. You may have already
read this and I'm sorry but I'm doing this one at a time.
Disclaimer- All the characters belong to Tamora Pierce, not me.
Thanks- Thanks to Bluebell of Mindelan who wrote a bit of the first chapter and half of this chapter (The part in * * are written by her.) I recommend her work to all of you. Thanks also to everyone who reviewed. This chapter was written during my French lesson (Bluebell was sitting next to me) so I could add it today.
Chapter 2- Love at first sight.
Jon was taken aback. He had come to the meeting for the fun of it, knowing his cousin was head over heels in love with Lady Cynthera of Elden. Jon didn't know that Gary's fiancée was so beautiful. Thom had never referred to his sister as pretty. He had always said she was the type of person that liked fighting and had thought she would look rougher.
Instead * her copper hair was a cascade of curls, tumbling over her shoulders. The black velvet gown she was wearing clung to her body, accenting her curvy, slim figure. It had pearly, semi-transparent white sleeves, which billowed, but clung around her wrists. Her violet eyes were full of fire, and her face was pale and perfect. He looked away a second before her violet eyes met his sapphire blue ones. *
Gary didn't miss her looks, but still thought Cynthera looked better. As his father suggested he, Thom, and Jon took Alanna for a tour he tried to hide his disappointment. He put on a false smile and offered Alanna his arm. She took it gracefully but Gary missed the face she pulled at Thom for having to act like a lady. Thom smiled to himself. He knew as soon as his sister stepped out of the room her lady like air would disappear and she would demand to be taken to the practise courts. He wasn't far off either.
Did you like it? Sorry it's so short but I didn't have much time. I'll try to do better next time. Review PLEASE.
Disclaimer- All the characters belong to Tamora Pierce, not me.
Thanks- Thanks to Bluebell of Mindelan who wrote a bit of the first chapter and half of this chapter (The part in * * are written by her.) I recommend her work to all of you. Thanks also to everyone who reviewed. This chapter was written during my French lesson (Bluebell was sitting next to me) so I could add it today.
Chapter 2- Love at first sight.
Jon was taken aback. He had come to the meeting for the fun of it, knowing his cousin was head over heels in love with Lady Cynthera of Elden. Jon didn't know that Gary's fiancée was so beautiful. Thom had never referred to his sister as pretty. He had always said she was the type of person that liked fighting and had thought she would look rougher.
Instead * her copper hair was a cascade of curls, tumbling over her shoulders. The black velvet gown she was wearing clung to her body, accenting her curvy, slim figure. It had pearly, semi-transparent white sleeves, which billowed, but clung around her wrists. Her violet eyes were full of fire, and her face was pale and perfect. He looked away a second before her violet eyes met his sapphire blue ones. *
Gary didn't miss her looks, but still thought Cynthera looked better. As his father suggested he, Thom, and Jon took Alanna for a tour he tried to hide his disappointment. He put on a false smile and offered Alanna his arm. She took it gracefully but Gary missed the face she pulled at Thom for having to act like a lady. Thom smiled to himself. He knew as soon as his sister stepped out of the room her lady like air would disappear and she would demand to be taken to the practise courts. He wasn't far off either.
Did you like it? Sorry it's so short but I didn't have much time. I'll try to do better next time. Review PLEASE.