Authors Note: Hey people!
Disclaimer- I in no way own Dragonball Z/GT or Tenchi Muyo/Universe, Nope, those stories are true works of immortal minds!
Well I think that takes care of that. The character Tenoko is all mine so no stealing.
Key:
'…' = Thinking
~*~ = Different seen
*~*~*= Different POV
"…" = Talking
:::::::::= Telepathy conversation.
Ages:
Tenoko: 14 ½
Marron: 14 ½
Goten: 14 ½
Trunks 14 ½
SPECIAL THANKS TO:
Trunks' Girl 787
Sweetie Pie (You guessed right!)
Dr. Lauryl
Deathevn
FOR REVIEWING YESTERDAY!
~*~
Last time: Someone was knocking on the door, and Tenoko went to go open it.
"Hey! It's You!" Tenoko proclaimed, as she opened the door fully, exposing her first guest.
"Yeah, its me!" Goten announced walking in to Tenoko and Marron's new room. "Wow, you guys got one of the best rooms in the whole palace!" Goten pointed out as he went deeper into their room.
"Yup, that's cause I'm the guest of honor." Tenoko said, as she leaded him into the living room.
"Well I'd like to stay, but I just came to tell you that there is going to be a huge welcoming party and you are invited." Goten stated as he took a forceful seat on the couch. (Because Tenoko made him sit. ^-^)
"Who was at the door Tenoko?" Marron asked from the bedroom that she and her were going to share.
"Why don't you come an see for yourself?" Tenoko answered.
Marron walked over to the living room to find someone she never thought of meeting again…"Is that you Goten?" Marron questioned in a tone of disbelieve.
"Oh my gosh…I…Marron?" Goten stuttered, not knowing what to say when he saw his childhood friend…all pretty and well…grown up.
"I thought the King sent you to a back-water planet to destroy." Marron stated, still shocked to see one of her lost friends sitting in her living room.
"You two know each other?" Tenoko asked slightly confounded.
Marron and Goten didn't even hear the question…they were too busy staring at each other in unbelief. That is until Goten broke the silence in his unusual way. He got up and ran to her and grabbed her in a huge bear hug.
"I thought I would never see you again!" Goten cried out, squeezing poor Marron.
"Really?…I…missed…you…too…………can't…breathe…" Marron choked out, trying desperately to loosen his grip.
Goten realized the blue tinted color on Marron's face, and let her go…which resulted in Marron dropping on the floor, from lack of oxygen. (-_-) "Heheh…sorry." Goten apologized, at the same time helping her up.
"Ok………so, about that party." Tenoko tried to shake off what she just saw…'Since when did Royal Gards act like this?' Tenoko thought, but quickly turned her attention to a blushing Marron. 'I'll just have a little fun with her.' She contemplated in her mind.
"Oooooooo…Marron, would you like me to leave you and Goten alone for a while?" Tenoko teased.
"WHAT!? What are you saying…? Marron asked, feeling her face getting redder.
"Well look at you two, Goten, you haven't gotten your hand off of her hand…" Tenoko stated, pointing out what she meant with a sly mischievous smirk on her lips.
He let go of Marron's hand immediately, and just stood there with his face turning five different shades of crimson when she said that.
"You must be imagining things." Goten composed, trying to suppress his blushing.
"Oh…yeah right, me imagining things, well what do you think readers?" Tenoko asks all you who are reading.
READERS: Yup, Goten was holding Marron's hand long after she had already stood up.
"You see, I was not imagining things." Tenoko stated, warring a triumphant smirk.
"So what's this I hear about a huge welcoming party?" Marron asked, trying hard to change the subject…and it worked!
"Oh, that right! Well at 8:00 tonight all of the girls that came to prepare for the choosing are invited to come to a big party, so the both of you need to get ready… so I'll leave you." Goten announced, walking over to the front door.
"Where is it going to be?" Tenoko asked before Goten had the chance to step out.
"In the ball room." Goten answered as he closed the door behind him.
"Well that does it, now we have to get all pretty." Marron said to Tenoko.
"I wonder what kind of party this is going to be." Tenoko asked to no one in particular.
"Probably a fancy-pansy one." Marron answered as she got a towel and towelette out of a closet. "Want to go to the bath house with me?" Marron asked Tenoko before she closed the closet door.
"Sure." Tenoko answered, getting a towel and towelette herself.
Marron and Tenoko walked out of their room and into their small indoor backyard, where the bath house was kept. Tenoko opened the door to the bath and stood there shocked.
"They call that a bath house!?" Tenoko pointed and asked in utter bafflement.
Marron stuck her head in to see what was the problem but saw nothing that would make anyone act like Tenoko was acting. "What's wrong with it?" Marron asked, confused by the way Tenoko refereed to the bath.
"Are you kidding me, this is NOT a bath house…nope this simply won't do." Tenoko announced, whipping what seemed like a transparent laptop out of thin air, and started typing.
"What's that?" Marron asked, referring to the transparent laptop that Tenoko had made appear out of nowhere.
"Its just my computer………listen Marron, in a second we will be transported to my grandmother's lab ok." Tenoko said instead of asking.
"WHA-!?" Marron was cut off by the sudden wind that came from no where, and the darkness that followed.
"Oh, so I see you came to visit me…kinda soon don't you think?" Washu asked her beloved granddaughter. "Hummm, and you brought a friend." She finished when she saw the blond girl.
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WOW! I bet you weren't expecting them to go to Washu so fast huh?
Heres a sneak peek of what's coming tomorrow:
Marron meets Washu!
Tenoko and Marron get a HUGE bath, you know…like the one in Tenchi Muyo.
They arrive at the party.
Ok, that's enough of an overview. PLEASE REVIEW!!
UPDATING NOTE!!:
I update everyday at 1:30 or so, by this Friday I will have chapter 10 out!
After the 10th chapter I will work on "ALONE" for two weeks, of course updating every day too. I am not including weekends, that's when I rest, and come up with ideas.
I NEED MORE REVIEWS!! I AM DESPERATE!!
If I don't get enough reviews I'll be forced to stop writing this story……AND I REALLY DON'T WANT TO DO THAT!!
I'm gonna start having higher expectations of all you readers…I at least want 20 reviews by this coming Monday or else…no chapter updates for three weeks.
::Dose a double take:: whoa, did I just say that? I must be getting a little desperate if I result in threatening ya'll…what am I saying…I AM DESPERATE FOR REVIEWS!
Imagine if you will, a desert and put yourself in it…you haven't had water for a week…except for 10 gulps…wouldn't you be desperate for more? Well you can apply the same analogy for me. There. I think I justified myself…I hope. ^-^!
Tenoko: YOU'RE SO PATHETIC! You're not suppose to tell them you're desperate!
Me: Really?
Tenoko: Duh!
Me: Hey, you could be nicer about it!
Tenoko: Well I'm sorry but you sounded so weak and helpless when you said that.
Me: Well without reviews I am weak and helpless.
Tenoko: well duh! But that doesn't mean you have to go and announce it!
Me: So how would you have done it?
Tenoko: Easy, I'd threaten all the readers.
Me: But then they'll hate you.
Tenoko: There are people that are Vegeta fans, and all Vegeta does all day is boss people around and blow off their heads if they don't do what he says.
Me: I guess……but I think I have a better idea, I think I'll just get ::shudders:: Kyro to torment them it they don't review.
Tenoko: ::shudders:: Are you serious, Kyro? That's the uttermost baddest thing anyone could receive! What about the people that don't know who Kyro is?
Me: OK all of you that want to know who Kyro is, just read my reviews on my other story and look under the name of Kyro.
PLEASE REVIEW!!
Over and out,
Kioko
Disclaimer- I in no way own Dragonball Z/GT or Tenchi Muyo/Universe, Nope, those stories are true works of immortal minds!
Well I think that takes care of that. The character Tenoko is all mine so no stealing.
Key:
'…' = Thinking
~*~ = Different seen
*~*~*= Different POV
"…" = Talking
:::::::::= Telepathy conversation.
Ages:
Tenoko: 14 ½
Marron: 14 ½
Goten: 14 ½
Trunks 14 ½
SPECIAL THANKS TO:
Trunks' Girl 787
Sweetie Pie (You guessed right!)
Dr. Lauryl
Deathevn
FOR REVIEWING YESTERDAY!
~*~
Last time: Someone was knocking on the door, and Tenoko went to go open it.
"Hey! It's You!" Tenoko proclaimed, as she opened the door fully, exposing her first guest.
"Yeah, its me!" Goten announced walking in to Tenoko and Marron's new room. "Wow, you guys got one of the best rooms in the whole palace!" Goten pointed out as he went deeper into their room.
"Yup, that's cause I'm the guest of honor." Tenoko said, as she leaded him into the living room.
"Well I'd like to stay, but I just came to tell you that there is going to be a huge welcoming party and you are invited." Goten stated as he took a forceful seat on the couch. (Because Tenoko made him sit. ^-^)
"Who was at the door Tenoko?" Marron asked from the bedroom that she and her were going to share.
"Why don't you come an see for yourself?" Tenoko answered.
Marron walked over to the living room to find someone she never thought of meeting again…"Is that you Goten?" Marron questioned in a tone of disbelieve.
"Oh my gosh…I…Marron?" Goten stuttered, not knowing what to say when he saw his childhood friend…all pretty and well…grown up.
"I thought the King sent you to a back-water planet to destroy." Marron stated, still shocked to see one of her lost friends sitting in her living room.
"You two know each other?" Tenoko asked slightly confounded.
Marron and Goten didn't even hear the question…they were too busy staring at each other in unbelief. That is until Goten broke the silence in his unusual way. He got up and ran to her and grabbed her in a huge bear hug.
"I thought I would never see you again!" Goten cried out, squeezing poor Marron.
"Really?…I…missed…you…too…………can't…breathe…" Marron choked out, trying desperately to loosen his grip.
Goten realized the blue tinted color on Marron's face, and let her go…which resulted in Marron dropping on the floor, from lack of oxygen. (-_-) "Heheh…sorry." Goten apologized, at the same time helping her up.
"Ok………so, about that party." Tenoko tried to shake off what she just saw…'Since when did Royal Gards act like this?' Tenoko thought, but quickly turned her attention to a blushing Marron. 'I'll just have a little fun with her.' She contemplated in her mind.
"Oooooooo…Marron, would you like me to leave you and Goten alone for a while?" Tenoko teased.
"WHAT!? What are you saying…? Marron asked, feeling her face getting redder.
"Well look at you two, Goten, you haven't gotten your hand off of her hand…" Tenoko stated, pointing out what she meant with a sly mischievous smirk on her lips.
He let go of Marron's hand immediately, and just stood there with his face turning five different shades of crimson when she said that.
"You must be imagining things." Goten composed, trying to suppress his blushing.
"Oh…yeah right, me imagining things, well what do you think readers?" Tenoko asks all you who are reading.
READERS: Yup, Goten was holding Marron's hand long after she had already stood up.
"You see, I was not imagining things." Tenoko stated, warring a triumphant smirk.
"So what's this I hear about a huge welcoming party?" Marron asked, trying hard to change the subject…and it worked!
"Oh, that right! Well at 8:00 tonight all of the girls that came to prepare for the choosing are invited to come to a big party, so the both of you need to get ready… so I'll leave you." Goten announced, walking over to the front door.
"Where is it going to be?" Tenoko asked before Goten had the chance to step out.
"In the ball room." Goten answered as he closed the door behind him.
"Well that does it, now we have to get all pretty." Marron said to Tenoko.
"I wonder what kind of party this is going to be." Tenoko asked to no one in particular.
"Probably a fancy-pansy one." Marron answered as she got a towel and towelette out of a closet. "Want to go to the bath house with me?" Marron asked Tenoko before she closed the closet door.
"Sure." Tenoko answered, getting a towel and towelette herself.
Marron and Tenoko walked out of their room and into their small indoor backyard, where the bath house was kept. Tenoko opened the door to the bath and stood there shocked.
"They call that a bath house!?" Tenoko pointed and asked in utter bafflement.
Marron stuck her head in to see what was the problem but saw nothing that would make anyone act like Tenoko was acting. "What's wrong with it?" Marron asked, confused by the way Tenoko refereed to the bath.
"Are you kidding me, this is NOT a bath house…nope this simply won't do." Tenoko announced, whipping what seemed like a transparent laptop out of thin air, and started typing.
"What's that?" Marron asked, referring to the transparent laptop that Tenoko had made appear out of nowhere.
"Its just my computer………listen Marron, in a second we will be transported to my grandmother's lab ok." Tenoko said instead of asking.
"WHA-!?" Marron was cut off by the sudden wind that came from no where, and the darkness that followed.
"Oh, so I see you came to visit me…kinda soon don't you think?" Washu asked her beloved granddaughter. "Hummm, and you brought a friend." She finished when she saw the blond girl.
:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
WOW! I bet you weren't expecting them to go to Washu so fast huh?
Heres a sneak peek of what's coming tomorrow:
Marron meets Washu!
Tenoko and Marron get a HUGE bath, you know…like the one in Tenchi Muyo.
They arrive at the party.
Ok, that's enough of an overview. PLEASE REVIEW!!
UPDATING NOTE!!:
I update everyday at 1:30 or so, by this Friday I will have chapter 10 out!
After the 10th chapter I will work on "ALONE" for two weeks, of course updating every day too. I am not including weekends, that's when I rest, and come up with ideas.
I NEED MORE REVIEWS!! I AM DESPERATE!!
If I don't get enough reviews I'll be forced to stop writing this story……AND I REALLY DON'T WANT TO DO THAT!!
I'm gonna start having higher expectations of all you readers…I at least want 20 reviews by this coming Monday or else…no chapter updates for three weeks.
::Dose a double take:: whoa, did I just say that? I must be getting a little desperate if I result in threatening ya'll…what am I saying…I AM DESPERATE FOR REVIEWS!
Imagine if you will, a desert and put yourself in it…you haven't had water for a week…except for 10 gulps…wouldn't you be desperate for more? Well you can apply the same analogy for me. There. I think I justified myself…I hope. ^-^!
Tenoko: YOU'RE SO PATHETIC! You're not suppose to tell them you're desperate!
Me: Really?
Tenoko: Duh!
Me: Hey, you could be nicer about it!
Tenoko: Well I'm sorry but you sounded so weak and helpless when you said that.
Me: Well without reviews I am weak and helpless.
Tenoko: well duh! But that doesn't mean you have to go and announce it!
Me: So how would you have done it?
Tenoko: Easy, I'd threaten all the readers.
Me: But then they'll hate you.
Tenoko: There are people that are Vegeta fans, and all Vegeta does all day is boss people around and blow off their heads if they don't do what he says.
Me: I guess……but I think I have a better idea, I think I'll just get ::shudders:: Kyro to torment them it they don't review.
Tenoko: ::shudders:: Are you serious, Kyro? That's the uttermost baddest thing anyone could receive! What about the people that don't know who Kyro is?
Me: OK all of you that want to know who Kyro is, just read my reviews on my other story and look under the name of Kyro.
PLEASE REVIEW!!
Over and out,
Kioko