Well hey ppl! im really happy about all this. This is my first piece of writing that i've shown to anybody i dont even know so id like for you to be nice when reviewing. i was just writing something and i wasn't trying to get something even remotly related to the Inu gang so i changed a few things and added a few things and this is want happened! Wats a girl gonna do? so...here's my story! Remember R&R!!!
Disclaimers: Oh, do you have to rub it in? Well i once had a dream that i owned InuYasha, What a nice dream ;stares off into space and starts drooling; Oh!! ummmmm.......... Oh ya!Reality Bites!
Summary: Well The End is upon us and this just happens to be how i've ended it.
An InuYasha POV
The Last Dance
My hands,
My skin,
My nails, no
Claws,
Red
Stained by blood.
Blood shed not from me,
Blood shed by me.
The flesh at which I tore,
Still fresh underneath my claws.
The screams at which I heard,
Still echo in my ear.
The words at which I said,
Unable to repeat,
Still linger on my lips.
The smell of rotting flesh,
Still fills the air.
The tears I should be crying,
Rip at my soul
Yet unable to shed one.
Unable to stop!
I just couldn't.
Neither can I watch.
The way their mangled bodies lay
In pieces on the ground.
Sickening.
Unable to retreat
I was not in control.
My body said kill,
My mind said no.
A battle where good could not prevail.
In the end,
I sit.
Sit in this pool of blood.
Down on my knees,
Praying it is not so.
Staring,
Straight at my bloodstained hands.
Trying to convince myself,
Saying "it was not me.
I am not the one to be held guilty."
Guilty of murder?
Murdering all who got in my way.
Friend or foe
In pieces,
Scattered everywhere.
All alone.
Again I am alone in this world.
This cruel, harsh world.
Alone, in this pool of blood.
The blood of a foe on the left,
And that of a friend on the right.
With the one at which I love
Lying motionless at my knees.
I remember...
The scrape of bone against claw,
Her horrifying scream,
The warm taste of her blood,
And the fall,
I remember...
The only one at which I love
Lying dead at my knees.
I can't go on.
I can't live with this.
As I stand,
I raised my sharpest claw towards the sunset.
My last sunset.
I stand towards the falling sun,
I whispered once
And yelled twice
"I'm sorry"
It took all my strength,
As I brought my hand towards my chest,
As hard and fast as I could!
But it was not enough
For as I hit the cold, bloody ground,
I was still awake.
In most ways, it was enough.
I lay beside her.
She never knew.
Never knew the way I felt for her.
There was only one thing left to do.
I leant over, towards her pale face,
Gently, but cold against her empty corpse,
A gentle kiss.
Laid upon her cold, dead lips
To say, "I love you"
And claim her as my own.
Even in death.
That had taken all remaining strength in me.
All my strength to show how just how much really I cared.
I could have never gone on.
I don't quite remember even laying my head back down.
As the last drop of life trickled from my veins,
It echoed as it landed
In the still pool of deep red.
Still echoing.
As my body lay,
Side by side,
With my love, no,
My Kagome.
Our souls took hands,
Clawed in tiny human,
For they had found each other,
And...
We danced.
We danced to the music of the night.
The last dance.
Our dance,
Before an eternity of death,
A dance in the
Unforgiving moonlight.
My hands,
My skin,
My nails, no
Claws,
Red
Stained by blood.
Blood shed not from me,
Blood shed by me.
The flesh at which I tore,
Still fresh underneath my claws.
The screams at which I heard,
Still echo in my ear.
The words at which I said,
Unable to repeat,
Still linger on my lips.
The smell of rotting flesh,
Still fills the air.
The tears I should be crying,
Rip at my soul
Yet unable to shed one.
Unable to stop!
I just couldn't.
Neither can I watch.
The way their mangled bodies lay
In pieces on the ground.
Sickening.
Unable to retreat
I was not in control.
My body said kill,
My mind said no.
A battle where good could not prevail.
In the end,
I sit.
Sit in this pool of blood.
Down on my knees,
Praying it is not so.
Staring,
Straight at my bloodstained hands.
Trying to convince myself,
Saying "it was not me.
I am not the one to be held guilty."
Guilty of murder?
Murdering all who got in my way.
Friend or foe
In pieces,
Scattered everywhere.
All alone.
Again I am alone in this world.
This cruel, harsh world.
Alone, in this pool of blood.
The blood of a foe on the left,
And that of a friend on the right.
With the one at which I love
Lying motionless at my knees.
I remember...
The scrape of bone against claw,
Her horrifying scream,
The warm taste of her blood,
And the fall,
I remember...
The only one at which I love
Lying dead at my knees.
I can't go on.
I can't live with this.
As I stand,
I raised my sharpest claw towards the sunset.
My last sunset.
I stand towards the falling sun,
I whispered once
And yelled twice
"I'm sorry"
It took all my strength,
As I brought my hand towards my chest,
As hard and fast as I could!
But it was not enough
For as I hit the cold, bloody ground,
I was still awake.
In most ways, it was enough.
I lay beside her.
She never knew.
Never knew the way I felt for her.
There was only one thing left to do.
I leant over, towards her pale face,
Gently, but cold against her empty corpse,
A gentle kiss.
Laid upon her cold, dead lips
To say, "I love you"
And claim her as my own.
Even in death.
That had taken all remaining strength in me.
All my strength to show how just how much really I cared.
I could have never gone on.
I don't quite remember even laying my head back down.
As the last drop of life trickled from my veins,
It echoed as it landed
In the still pool of deep red.
Still echoing.
As my body lay,
Side by side,
With my love, no,
My Kagome.
Our souls took hands,
Clawed in tiny human,
For they had found each other,
And...
We danced.
We danced to the music of the night.
The last dance.
Our dance,
Before an eternity of death,
A dance in the
Unforgiving moonlight.
If anybody has any ideas on things that i could
add/change/remove would be greatly appretiated if you tell me.
Or if anybody wants me to go into a more story type with more detailes etc.
with this than thats great too.
Well? What'd you think?
How'd I do?
Plz plz plz
Review!!!
Thnx a bunch.