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A/N: This chapter is long-ass and it took me three days to write/type. I hope you like it. R+R! Thank you to: fireangel (two reviews!), Legolasgrl, and Tomismine for your positive reviews. I really appreciate it you have no idea. (Reviewers on D-C)
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Lily and her mom took the train to the leaky cauldron. As she walked in she saw a young bartender named Tom. He winked at her when she walked in but her mom didn't notice. Lily just rolled her eyes at him. Then Mrs. Evans gave Lily her wizard money and then they departed. (No muggles are allowed in Diagon Alley.) As Lily walked out the other side of the leaky cauldron she noticed several eyes of guys follow her out. She reached the brick wall and tapped in the pattern which was the passageway to Diagon Alley.
This first place she went to was Madam Malkin's robes. She found many new robes and dress robes that looked good on her, including shoes and Gryffindor things too, and she bought them. Next she went to buy a cat and an owl because her old ones died at different times last year. She saw a white cat with black stripes and sparkly lime-green eyes. She was very nice and playful so she decided to get the cat along with kitty toys and treats and a mini-kitty bed. Next she found a black owl that has blue speckles on it and it is fairly large. His eyes are aqua colored. She bought the owl and purchased its food, cage, and toys. She decided to name her new cat, Limelle, for her eyes; and her owl, Vodesko. Lily gently put a kitty collar that was black with silver glitter on her. On the medallion was a star with 'Limelle' magically engraved on it. She then left the pet store and Lily held Vodesko in his cage with one hand and her bags full of other things in the other. Limelle followed her.
Next, Lily went to 'Gambol and Japes Wizarding Joke Shop' and bought things so she could seek revenge by pulling pranks. Lily then saw Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, and Peter Pettigrew WITHOUT James. Sirius is tall, dark (the black hair), and has blue eyes, very handsome, and the other most wanted guy in Hogwarts. Remus has sandy-brown hair, light brown eyes, is average height, also handsome (third most wanted guy.)
Peter is short, fat, has rough skin, rat-like, not good looking, very cowardly, and not loyal at all. In fact, why he hangs around the other marauders is a mystery to all but the marauders themselves. James, Sirius, Remus and Peter make up a group called 'the marauders' and they are the most well known group in Hogwarts to all people who go there with them now. They play pranks every day and have the largest record of detentions in all of Hogwarts past. Sirius is the crazy-stupid and fun-loving one. James is the leader and would do anything for a safe prank. Remus is the sensible one which spots the errors and danger in the prank plans. Peter is just cowardly, and always sides with the person that will benefit him. Sirius and James are on the quidditch team. (Quidditch is a dangerous wizard sport played on brooms, it has three hoops per-side, two beaters on a team, three chasers on a team, one seeker on a team, and one keeper on a team. The keepers defend the hoops to keep the other team from scoring a goal in the hoop. The chasers hit the quaffles (large balls) in the hoops of the other team. The beaters hit bludgers (medium-sized balls) (there are around two) at the opposing team's players and defends the players on their team from getting hit by a bludger. The most important player on their team is the seeker. A golden snitch (a small ball with wings) fly's around and is very fast and hard to catch. It hardly ever stays in the same spot for long. When it eventually is caught (with no time limit) the game ends, and it can not end unless the snitch is caught. It is around 250 points (A/N: I think that was it O_O) to the team that catches the snitch. The other team can still win if their chasers scored more than what the other team scored even if the snitch wasn't caught on their team. (So basically it is just whoever has more points.)) James is a seeker, Sirius is a beater, and Remus plays quidditch very well but for some unknown reason does not wish to be on the team. Peter does not play quidditch at all and does not do well with sports in general.
So anyway, she thought she was seen briefly by Remus so she walked away quickly before either of them got to actually notice. Lily would have liked to play quidditch but she never had the figure for it like she has now. Next she made a stop to 'Quality Quidditch Supplies' and bought the all new, best model out now, Moontrimmer-broomstick. Now she can practice. She also bought a broomstick service kit. She left in a hurry out of fear of running into them. Lily looked at her supplies list and found books she needed and so she went to Flourish and Blotts to buy them. Next she went to the apothecary and bought her potions ingredients. But just before making it out of the store she ran into Lucius Malfoy- 7th year Head Boy (A/n: Yeah I know he is too old to be at Hogwarts but I want him there anyway.) and Severus Snape-6th year. They are her two least favorite Slytherins. Severus Snape has greasy black hair and hardly ever showers. He is very interested in DADA but does very well in Potions too. Lucius Malfoy has long blonde hair that is straight. He is fairly tall and thinks very highly of himself. They are also James, Sirius, and Remus's biggest enemies/rivals. Those two teased her most of all Slytherins (which she hates them all.) Lucius came up to her and smacked her ass -this is sexual harassment!-, Lily thought. Severus began to kiss her neck. Lily was appalled 'EWWWWW', she thought. Then she screamed out in terror "HELP! HELP!!!!!" -Nobody came- "Nobody will come and save you. So might I ask you what your name is?" Lucius said smugly very pleased with himself and this unknown hot 'chick'. Just then Limelle bit Lucius's balls and then bit Severus'. Lily escaped as fast as she could, running and holding all of her bags including Vodesko with Limelle trotting next to her. She quickly looked back and saw her attackers on the ground clutching their 'soft spots.' Lily ran into 'Florean Fortescues Ice Cream Parlor.'
Lily sat down and thanked Limelle sincerely for saving her life. "What would I have done if I didn't choose you?" Then she ordered Peppermint ice cream and split it with Limelle, Vodesko. Lily still had some time to spare. Then she headed down to the Leaky Cauldron warily to spend the remainder of her time. She saw four girls together, two in which she recognized and another two in which she did not. Lily sat alone at the bar and ordered a butterbeer. One of the girls she knew came up to her and offered Lily to sit wit them. Lily accepted, the two girls whom she knew never said anything mean to her or behind her so she had no reason to hold a grudge. Those were one of the few select nice girls. "Hi I am Allissa Woodran, and this is Casie Dartch, Alexis Torrie, and Shevella Nacksin, who are you?" Allissa said. "Oh me? I am Li...Lily Evans... I go to Hogwarts too and I know who two of you are." Lily stuttered. Allissa and Casie practically died of shock. "REALLY!? WOW! You look so different!" Casie said trying not to touch a soft spot. "Yeah..." Lily was feeling uncomfortable. The girls could sense this so they changed the subject and accepted her change. "Well anyways... hey Lily!" they said at different times. "Alexis and Shevella are our friends from Salem Witchcraft in the U.S. and they are going to Hogwarts now." Allissa explained. "Oh, hey guys it's nice to meet you." Lily smiled. Casie has straight, blonde hair; she is on the short side and has violet eyes. She is very pretty. Allissa has wavy/curly brown hair with copper streaks in it. She is also short and is a chaser on the quidditch team. She is partially athletic. Those two are both 6th year Gryffindors as well. Alexis has black hair that is mostly straight and long. She has aquamarine eyes and is fairly tall, also very pretty. Shevella has natural multi-colored hair. It is straight and medium length. She is also medium-height. Lily learned that Alexis was also athletic and would try out to be a keeper on the quidditch team. They were all good at different subjects. Lily got to know each of them and they became fast friends. There was very little they didn't know about each other now. "They did WHAT to you at the apothecary??!!!" Her new friends shouted in rage. "Let's get them back, prank style!" Lily announced. They all agreed.
An hour had passed and Lily's mother would come to get her soon. She parted from the girls and they all promised to write letters by owl and to get together again soon.
"Bye Lils'!" Lily met up with her mom outside the Leaky Cauldron and they went home. Once she got there she unpacked all 5 bags-full of things. Then she set out Limelle's bed and set up Vodesko's cage. Her mom liked Vodesko and Limelle but Lily didn't tell her about the sexual harassment she got earlier. Lily had nothing to do now but fall asleep because her dad was working late that night as a muggle businessman (he made a lot.) She got into her pajama pants and camisole (tank-top) from her dresser (new wardrobe! yay!) and then climbed into bed and fell asleep immediately. Not even dreams could disturb her deep slumber right now.
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Disclaimer: NO I have not bought it from JKR by the time I have finished the chapter! sheesh!
A/N: Thanks so much! R+R!!!!!!!!
A/N: This chapter is long-ass and it took me three days to write/type. I hope you like it. R+R! Thank you to: fireangel (two reviews!), Legolasgrl, and Tomismine for your positive reviews. I really appreciate it you have no idea. (Reviewers on D-C)
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Lily and her mom took the train to the leaky cauldron. As she walked in she saw a young bartender named Tom. He winked at her when she walked in but her mom didn't notice. Lily just rolled her eyes at him. Then Mrs. Evans gave Lily her wizard money and then they departed. (No muggles are allowed in Diagon Alley.) As Lily walked out the other side of the leaky cauldron she noticed several eyes of guys follow her out. She reached the brick wall and tapped in the pattern which was the passageway to Diagon Alley.
This first place she went to was Madam Malkin's robes. She found many new robes and dress robes that looked good on her, including shoes and Gryffindor things too, and she bought them. Next she went to buy a cat and an owl because her old ones died at different times last year. She saw a white cat with black stripes and sparkly lime-green eyes. She was very nice and playful so she decided to get the cat along with kitty toys and treats and a mini-kitty bed. Next she found a black owl that has blue speckles on it and it is fairly large. His eyes are aqua colored. She bought the owl and purchased its food, cage, and toys. She decided to name her new cat, Limelle, for her eyes; and her owl, Vodesko. Lily gently put a kitty collar that was black with silver glitter on her. On the medallion was a star with 'Limelle' magically engraved on it. She then left the pet store and Lily held Vodesko in his cage with one hand and her bags full of other things in the other. Limelle followed her.
Next, Lily went to 'Gambol and Japes Wizarding Joke Shop' and bought things so she could seek revenge by pulling pranks. Lily then saw Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, and Peter Pettigrew WITHOUT James. Sirius is tall, dark (the black hair), and has blue eyes, very handsome, and the other most wanted guy in Hogwarts. Remus has sandy-brown hair, light brown eyes, is average height, also handsome (third most wanted guy.)
Peter is short, fat, has rough skin, rat-like, not good looking, very cowardly, and not loyal at all. In fact, why he hangs around the other marauders is a mystery to all but the marauders themselves. James, Sirius, Remus and Peter make up a group called 'the marauders' and they are the most well known group in Hogwarts to all people who go there with them now. They play pranks every day and have the largest record of detentions in all of Hogwarts past. Sirius is the crazy-stupid and fun-loving one. James is the leader and would do anything for a safe prank. Remus is the sensible one which spots the errors and danger in the prank plans. Peter is just cowardly, and always sides with the person that will benefit him. Sirius and James are on the quidditch team. (Quidditch is a dangerous wizard sport played on brooms, it has three hoops per-side, two beaters on a team, three chasers on a team, one seeker on a team, and one keeper on a team. The keepers defend the hoops to keep the other team from scoring a goal in the hoop. The chasers hit the quaffles (large balls) in the hoops of the other team. The beaters hit bludgers (medium-sized balls) (there are around two) at the opposing team's players and defends the players on their team from getting hit by a bludger. The most important player on their team is the seeker. A golden snitch (a small ball with wings) fly's around and is very fast and hard to catch. It hardly ever stays in the same spot for long. When it eventually is caught (with no time limit) the game ends, and it can not end unless the snitch is caught. It is around 250 points (A/N: I think that was it O_O) to the team that catches the snitch. The other team can still win if their chasers scored more than what the other team scored even if the snitch wasn't caught on their team. (So basically it is just whoever has more points.)) James is a seeker, Sirius is a beater, and Remus plays quidditch very well but for some unknown reason does not wish to be on the team. Peter does not play quidditch at all and does not do well with sports in general.
So anyway, she thought she was seen briefly by Remus so she walked away quickly before either of them got to actually notice. Lily would have liked to play quidditch but she never had the figure for it like she has now. Next she made a stop to 'Quality Quidditch Supplies' and bought the all new, best model out now, Moontrimmer-broomstick. Now she can practice. She also bought a broomstick service kit. She left in a hurry out of fear of running into them. Lily looked at her supplies list and found books she needed and so she went to Flourish and Blotts to buy them. Next she went to the apothecary and bought her potions ingredients. But just before making it out of the store she ran into Lucius Malfoy- 7th year Head Boy (A/n: Yeah I know he is too old to be at Hogwarts but I want him there anyway.) and Severus Snape-6th year. They are her two least favorite Slytherins. Severus Snape has greasy black hair and hardly ever showers. He is very interested in DADA but does very well in Potions too. Lucius Malfoy has long blonde hair that is straight. He is fairly tall and thinks very highly of himself. They are also James, Sirius, and Remus's biggest enemies/rivals. Those two teased her most of all Slytherins (which she hates them all.) Lucius came up to her and smacked her ass -this is sexual harassment!-, Lily thought. Severus began to kiss her neck. Lily was appalled 'EWWWWW', she thought. Then she screamed out in terror "HELP! HELP!!!!!" -Nobody came- "Nobody will come and save you. So might I ask you what your name is?" Lucius said smugly very pleased with himself and this unknown hot 'chick'. Just then Limelle bit Lucius's balls and then bit Severus'. Lily escaped as fast as she could, running and holding all of her bags including Vodesko with Limelle trotting next to her. She quickly looked back and saw her attackers on the ground clutching their 'soft spots.' Lily ran into 'Florean Fortescues Ice Cream Parlor.'
Lily sat down and thanked Limelle sincerely for saving her life. "What would I have done if I didn't choose you?" Then she ordered Peppermint ice cream and split it with Limelle, Vodesko. Lily still had some time to spare. Then she headed down to the Leaky Cauldron warily to spend the remainder of her time. She saw four girls together, two in which she recognized and another two in which she did not. Lily sat alone at the bar and ordered a butterbeer. One of the girls she knew came up to her and offered Lily to sit wit them. Lily accepted, the two girls whom she knew never said anything mean to her or behind her so she had no reason to hold a grudge. Those were one of the few select nice girls. "Hi I am Allissa Woodran, and this is Casie Dartch, Alexis Torrie, and Shevella Nacksin, who are you?" Allissa said. "Oh me? I am Li...Lily Evans... I go to Hogwarts too and I know who two of you are." Lily stuttered. Allissa and Casie practically died of shock. "REALLY!? WOW! You look so different!" Casie said trying not to touch a soft spot. "Yeah..." Lily was feeling uncomfortable. The girls could sense this so they changed the subject and accepted her change. "Well anyways... hey Lily!" they said at different times. "Alexis and Shevella are our friends from Salem Witchcraft in the U.S. and they are going to Hogwarts now." Allissa explained. "Oh, hey guys it's nice to meet you." Lily smiled. Casie has straight, blonde hair; she is on the short side and has violet eyes. She is very pretty. Allissa has wavy/curly brown hair with copper streaks in it. She is also short and is a chaser on the quidditch team. She is partially athletic. Those two are both 6th year Gryffindors as well. Alexis has black hair that is mostly straight and long. She has aquamarine eyes and is fairly tall, also very pretty. Shevella has natural multi-colored hair. It is straight and medium length. She is also medium-height. Lily learned that Alexis was also athletic and would try out to be a keeper on the quidditch team. They were all good at different subjects. Lily got to know each of them and they became fast friends. There was very little they didn't know about each other now. "They did WHAT to you at the apothecary??!!!" Her new friends shouted in rage. "Let's get them back, prank style!" Lily announced. They all agreed.
An hour had passed and Lily's mother would come to get her soon. She parted from the girls and they all promised to write letters by owl and to get together again soon.
"Bye Lils'!" Lily met up with her mom outside the Leaky Cauldron and they went home. Once she got there she unpacked all 5 bags-full of things. Then she set out Limelle's bed and set up Vodesko's cage. Her mom liked Vodesko and Limelle but Lily didn't tell her about the sexual harassment she got earlier. Lily had nothing to do now but fall asleep because her dad was working late that night as a muggle businessman (he made a lot.) She got into her pajama pants and camisole (tank-top) from her dresser (new wardrobe! yay!) and then climbed into bed and fell asleep immediately. Not even dreams could disturb her deep slumber right now.
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Disclaimer: NO I have not bought it from JKR by the time I have finished the chapter! sheesh!
A/N: Thanks so much! R+R!!!!!!!!