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Chapter 3: A movie night
When she arrived at Star Hollows, She headed directly to Luke's. From the outside, she saw her mother bantering with the owner. Probably about coffee...She entered and as soon as her mother recognized her, she ran to her.
" Mini me, please help me. He wants to deprive me from the elixir of life. I tried everything. I even promised him to erect an altar in his honour in our living-room. We could have a cult for Luke, the man who provides us the best coffee in the world and every morning, we could pray for him. But the offer didn't tempt him"
That remark didn't lighten her mood. She was still hurt by Tristan's tone and by the fact that he didn't seem so eager to make the project with her.
Her mom was surpised by the absence of replies. It was unusual. Rory was always ready to support her in her eternal fight for the sacred beverage. But not that time. Something should disturb her . She had to find out...
" Luke, why don't you give us two extra large cups of coffee and two pieces of your marvellous chocolate cake. "
They sat and Rory was reluctant to tell the whole story. Finally, she explained everything. Perhaps her mother could solve that problem with Tristan... And she was quite delused when Lorelai said" It's difficult. I always thought he had a huge crush for you on account of all his tormenting but now, I' m lost. Either, he is extremely hurt, either he forgot you during the summer. "
As she hadn't guessed.. Her mother wasn't that helping. What could she do?
" Mini me, I just had a beautiful idea. Why don't we make a movie night? We could eat a bunch of junk food and watch some films related to your topic: the difficult love stories"
"That would be so great. Can I call Dean?"
"Of course, let's go. Luke, the god of coffee, can you...."
"Noooooooooooooo"
" Several minutes later, in the videostore..." So, Mini me, what did you pick?"
" Gone with the wind, Love story and you?"
" Spiderman , Pretty woman and Braveheart?"
" Braveheart? but the love story isn't that rilevant"
"Yeah, but there is Mel Gibson's butt. Come on, my favourite daughter...I beg you."
" Ok. But we have to hurry because Dean will wait."
Seven hours ago. After Braveheart and Gone with the wind.
" I don't know why I listen to you and participate to that movie night"
" For two reasons:first, because you are a great boyfriend and secondly, because you like love stories"
" But these two movies were so depressive. I can't understand why Rhett doesn't go back to Scarlett"
"And I can't get why Scarlett doesn' t realize that she was in love with him before"
" Ah, my two love birds, you will know when you will have a greater experience of life. I remembered at the end of the film, the first time I saw it, I was so pissed off. I wanted to complain to David Selznick but I learnt he was dead. Now, I' m aware that you can be in love and yet, can't forgive the person for the hurt she made you endure."
End of chapter 3. Please review .
Chapter 3: A movie night
When she arrived at Star Hollows, She headed directly to Luke's. From the outside, she saw her mother bantering with the owner. Probably about coffee...She entered and as soon as her mother recognized her, she ran to her.
" Mini me, please help me. He wants to deprive me from the elixir of life. I tried everything. I even promised him to erect an altar in his honour in our living-room. We could have a cult for Luke, the man who provides us the best coffee in the world and every morning, we could pray for him. But the offer didn't tempt him"
That remark didn't lighten her mood. She was still hurt by Tristan's tone and by the fact that he didn't seem so eager to make the project with her.
Her mom was surpised by the absence of replies. It was unusual. Rory was always ready to support her in her eternal fight for the sacred beverage. But not that time. Something should disturb her . She had to find out...
" Luke, why don't you give us two extra large cups of coffee and two pieces of your marvellous chocolate cake. "
They sat and Rory was reluctant to tell the whole story. Finally, she explained everything. Perhaps her mother could solve that problem with Tristan... And she was quite delused when Lorelai said" It's difficult. I always thought he had a huge crush for you on account of all his tormenting but now, I' m lost. Either, he is extremely hurt, either he forgot you during the summer. "
As she hadn't guessed.. Her mother wasn't that helping. What could she do?
" Mini me, I just had a beautiful idea. Why don't we make a movie night? We could eat a bunch of junk food and watch some films related to your topic: the difficult love stories"
"That would be so great. Can I call Dean?"
"Of course, let's go. Luke, the god of coffee, can you...."
"Noooooooooooooo"
" Several minutes later, in the videostore..." So, Mini me, what did you pick?"
" Gone with the wind, Love story and you?"
" Spiderman , Pretty woman and Braveheart?"
" Braveheart? but the love story isn't that rilevant"
"Yeah, but there is Mel Gibson's butt. Come on, my favourite daughter...I beg you."
" Ok. But we have to hurry because Dean will wait."
Seven hours ago. After Braveheart and Gone with the wind.
" I don't know why I listen to you and participate to that movie night"
" For two reasons:first, because you are a great boyfriend and secondly, because you like love stories"
" But these two movies were so depressive. I can't understand why Rhett doesn't go back to Scarlett"
"And I can't get why Scarlett doesn' t realize that she was in love with him before"
" Ah, my two love birds, you will know when you will have a greater experience of life. I remembered at the end of the film, the first time I saw it, I was so pissed off. I wanted to complain to David Selznick but I learnt he was dead. Now, I' m aware that you can be in love and yet, can't forgive the person for the hurt she made you endure."
End of chapter 3. Please review .