Hello everyone! Well, I guess there aren't that many peeps, lets try again, hello you few faithful readers! Much better. ok, so heres the next chapter, I think its one of my favorite that I have written so far. Ah revenge is sweet. Everyone check out my other story 2! I don't think I will be able to update this one until after the 4th, but we'll see. Here we go!
Shout outs!
Piratechic- Hey girl! Ill hopefully call you on Sat or sun b4 I go 2 camp.thanx 4 being a loyal reviewer! Love ya Film canisters full!
Splashey- when you upload ur chapters w/ doc manager it should bring up a screen that says something like up load was successful click here to continue. Click on the click here where its blue. Then it will show all the documents u've uploaded and next to each there will be a green link that says Edit/Preview click on that then you can edit it. (be sure to save it b4 you go to put it w/ ur story!) that's cool ur parents went to an eric clapton concert! I really like his songs, and u know wats really weird? After I got ur review saying that I went 2 ff.net and on the side it said something about click here to get cheap Eric clapton tickets! It was so weird!
NadaZimri-ok, so I thought u reviewed, but I guess you didn't. o, well. I know ull read this-hurry w/ ur next chappie!
Chatty-hey gurl! I think you need to straighten out ur stories!
Disclaimer: me doesn't own newsies(does that clear things up?)
Chapter 8
The night was pretty uneventful until around 10 when everyone was dancing. For about an hour or so I had been passed from boy to boy, trying desperately to remain with the Manhattan newsies longer because I knew the others did not simply want to dance. Each guy waited in turn their eyes roaming my body anticipating their turn when they could touch me. Ugh. Actually, the night hadn't been as bad as I was expecting, thank God. A few of the guys had made comments under their breath as we were dancing so I slapped them and went to another dancing partner. Now normally, these guys are really tough and anyone who dares to strike them is dead meat. However, I think that since I was a girl, they were just so stunned they didn't know what to do, and by the time they realized they were mad and wanted to beat the crap out of me, I was across the room dancing with someone else.
After a long run I was out of breath and had to pause. Laughter played on my lips as I watched the boys dance. I sipped at a glass of water that Boots had brought for me as I sat in a chair to the side of the dance floor. From behind me a voice spoke directly in my ear, "Car ta dance?"
I spewed water out of my mouth coughing and spluttering in surprise. "Give a poison (person) a little warnin Conlon!" trying to dry myself off.
"Sorry doll, I didn't mean ta scare ya. Do ya wanna dance?" he moved around in front of me and held out his hand.
"I don't think so."
"Oh, but we must dance-check one of those IOUs from da odda night."
I opened up my bag and pulled out one of the slips of paper, luckily I got the right one on my first try and sure enough it did say "I owe you a dance." I still didn't want to give in easily though, "Nah, I don't feel like it."
"Well, in that case do ya feel like doin something else?" Spot questioned with a suggestive tone and look.
"I choose dance first, then...maybe we'll see about the rest..." I smiled inwardly as I resumed the game I had been playing earlier. Spot was still not used to hearing this kind of stuff come out of my mouth and he stood staring at my chair even after I was out of it and walking onto the dance floor. I chuckled to myself. "Come on Spottie," I reached out and pulled him along with me, but I only had to do that for a few seconds before he snapped back into reality and swung me around to him. We began dancing to the music when all of a sudden we were twirling around the floor at an ungodly speed.
The ended and the musicians began just a quiet, slow, background song, but for some reason Spot and I were still standing there. He moved both his hands to the small of my back and pulled me closer to him. My hands rested on his shoulders near his neck. We rocked back and forth to the beat and the dance floor cleared out, both of us unaware no one was out there anymore.
"Well, Mr. Conlon that was fun"
"I'se glad ya liked it." He moved his head down and closed the gap between us. It was strong, but also had a gentleness I didn't know Spot was capable of. He pulled back leaving our foreheads together and smiled.
I giggled, Oh, god, what was that Leila? You don't giggle! "What was that for?" I questioned softly with a pleased smile.
"I owed you," A confused look must have crossed my face because he chucked and explained by simply saying, "Check the paper." I giggled again (what was wrong with me?), he must have written another IOU. "Leila?" looked up at him, "Will yous be me goil?" Ok, that was not what I was expecting. I panicked and looked around the room to see who was watching. The only person who seemed to be paying attention to us was Jack. His fists were clenched at his sides, a frown and furrowed eyebrows adorned his face. At seeing this I grinned, turned back to Spot and kissed him, hard. Long, and passionate.
He reluctantly pulled back, but I think he wanted an answer for sure. "I'll take that as a yes?" he asked smiling.
I nodded my head and we started dancing again, just rocking on the floor. I rested my head on his chest and snuck glances over his shoulder again. I looked at Jack and smiled in triumph. He still held all the anger and previously, but it was now accompanied with just as much astonishment. Then song and ended and Spot untwined us and led me towards a table. He sat with a sigh, but still held my hand. "Have a seat, pretty face," this name would have normally produced a black eye, but now I just smiled.
I spotted Jack walking towards the table, so I quickly sat, on Spots lap that is. Spot's face showed surprise, but pleasure. Spot started discussing something or other with the guys at the table. He placed his arms around me waist and I began to trace the well defined muscles in his upper arm. My fingers slid up to his shoulder, around his collar bone, and then down to his hard abs where his shirt had been unbuttoned a little because it was so hot in there. He shivered with pleasure as my fingers glided over his upper body. Jack stood there mouth open part way not believing what he was seeing. I smiled and continued my actions that produced totally different reactions from these two boys.
Please review!Ok, yeah, this chappie is my favorite. Please review! Sigh. Please review! Getting Spot, getting revenge on Jack, life is good! Please review! Ok, that's all for now! Please review! Please! Please! (Jack Black enters)
JB: Cad, if you review grub one more time
Sorry Dewey!
-smiley
Shout outs!
Piratechic- Hey girl! Ill hopefully call you on Sat or sun b4 I go 2 camp.thanx 4 being a loyal reviewer! Love ya Film canisters full!
Splashey- when you upload ur chapters w/ doc manager it should bring up a screen that says something like up load was successful click here to continue. Click on the click here where its blue. Then it will show all the documents u've uploaded and next to each there will be a green link that says Edit/Preview click on that then you can edit it. (be sure to save it b4 you go to put it w/ ur story!) that's cool ur parents went to an eric clapton concert! I really like his songs, and u know wats really weird? After I got ur review saying that I went 2 ff.net and on the side it said something about click here to get cheap Eric clapton tickets! It was so weird!
NadaZimri-ok, so I thought u reviewed, but I guess you didn't. o, well. I know ull read this-hurry w/ ur next chappie!
Chatty-hey gurl! I think you need to straighten out ur stories!
Disclaimer: me doesn't own newsies(does that clear things up?)
Chapter 8
The night was pretty uneventful until around 10 when everyone was dancing. For about an hour or so I had been passed from boy to boy, trying desperately to remain with the Manhattan newsies longer because I knew the others did not simply want to dance. Each guy waited in turn their eyes roaming my body anticipating their turn when they could touch me. Ugh. Actually, the night hadn't been as bad as I was expecting, thank God. A few of the guys had made comments under their breath as we were dancing so I slapped them and went to another dancing partner. Now normally, these guys are really tough and anyone who dares to strike them is dead meat. However, I think that since I was a girl, they were just so stunned they didn't know what to do, and by the time they realized they were mad and wanted to beat the crap out of me, I was across the room dancing with someone else.
After a long run I was out of breath and had to pause. Laughter played on my lips as I watched the boys dance. I sipped at a glass of water that Boots had brought for me as I sat in a chair to the side of the dance floor. From behind me a voice spoke directly in my ear, "Car ta dance?"
I spewed water out of my mouth coughing and spluttering in surprise. "Give a poison (person) a little warnin Conlon!" trying to dry myself off.
"Sorry doll, I didn't mean ta scare ya. Do ya wanna dance?" he moved around in front of me and held out his hand.
"I don't think so."
"Oh, but we must dance-check one of those IOUs from da odda night."
I opened up my bag and pulled out one of the slips of paper, luckily I got the right one on my first try and sure enough it did say "I owe you a dance." I still didn't want to give in easily though, "Nah, I don't feel like it."
"Well, in that case do ya feel like doin something else?" Spot questioned with a suggestive tone and look.
"I choose dance first, then...maybe we'll see about the rest..." I smiled inwardly as I resumed the game I had been playing earlier. Spot was still not used to hearing this kind of stuff come out of my mouth and he stood staring at my chair even after I was out of it and walking onto the dance floor. I chuckled to myself. "Come on Spottie," I reached out and pulled him along with me, but I only had to do that for a few seconds before he snapped back into reality and swung me around to him. We began dancing to the music when all of a sudden we were twirling around the floor at an ungodly speed.
The ended and the musicians began just a quiet, slow, background song, but for some reason Spot and I were still standing there. He moved both his hands to the small of my back and pulled me closer to him. My hands rested on his shoulders near his neck. We rocked back and forth to the beat and the dance floor cleared out, both of us unaware no one was out there anymore.
"Well, Mr. Conlon that was fun"
"I'se glad ya liked it." He moved his head down and closed the gap between us. It was strong, but also had a gentleness I didn't know Spot was capable of. He pulled back leaving our foreheads together and smiled.
I giggled, Oh, god, what was that Leila? You don't giggle! "What was that for?" I questioned softly with a pleased smile.
"I owed you," A confused look must have crossed my face because he chucked and explained by simply saying, "Check the paper." I giggled again (what was wrong with me?), he must have written another IOU. "Leila?" looked up at him, "Will yous be me goil?" Ok, that was not what I was expecting. I panicked and looked around the room to see who was watching. The only person who seemed to be paying attention to us was Jack. His fists were clenched at his sides, a frown and furrowed eyebrows adorned his face. At seeing this I grinned, turned back to Spot and kissed him, hard. Long, and passionate.
He reluctantly pulled back, but I think he wanted an answer for sure. "I'll take that as a yes?" he asked smiling.
I nodded my head and we started dancing again, just rocking on the floor. I rested my head on his chest and snuck glances over his shoulder again. I looked at Jack and smiled in triumph. He still held all the anger and previously, but it was now accompanied with just as much astonishment. Then song and ended and Spot untwined us and led me towards a table. He sat with a sigh, but still held my hand. "Have a seat, pretty face," this name would have normally produced a black eye, but now I just smiled.
I spotted Jack walking towards the table, so I quickly sat, on Spots lap that is. Spot's face showed surprise, but pleasure. Spot started discussing something or other with the guys at the table. He placed his arms around me waist and I began to trace the well defined muscles in his upper arm. My fingers slid up to his shoulder, around his collar bone, and then down to his hard abs where his shirt had been unbuttoned a little because it was so hot in there. He shivered with pleasure as my fingers glided over his upper body. Jack stood there mouth open part way not believing what he was seeing. I smiled and continued my actions that produced totally different reactions from these two boys.
Please review!Ok, yeah, this chappie is my favorite. Please review! Sigh. Please review! Getting Spot, getting revenge on Jack, life is good! Please review! Ok, that's all for now! Please review! Please! Please! (Jack Black enters)
JB: Cad, if you review grub one more time
Sorry Dewey!
-smiley