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Chapter 9 (Robin) Poke,poke,poke(think when Jack is poking Brown in Blacksmiths)I'm laying on something and I felt someone poking my shoulder.Poke,poke,poke "Will you stop poking the MORDOR OUT OF ME ?" I yelled. The poking stopped. I turned over and opened my eyes. Jack Sparrow, again?
Jack, all of a sudden notices I am awake. I start feeling light-headed and feel like last time I fainted. Jack grabs my arm. "No, luv not again. Sit up! Drink this!" He puts his arm around my shoulder and puts a bottle to my lips. I sip it slowly. Definitely, rum, I think as I taste it. The light- headedness suddenly disappears. "Better?" I nod slowly. I stare into his eyes. His eyes are more gorgeous in real life. Jack moves his face closer as if studying me. He leans closer and closer, our faces inches apart.
Suddenly, the door bursts open. Will steps into the room. Will? "Jack?" Will sounded worried. Jack pulled away and muttered something that sounded liked Bloody whelp!
"What Will?" Jack didn't look concerned, but annoyed. Will led him outside and closed the door. They talked outside for a while. I studied the room. I could tell it was the Swann Mansion, I was in. The room gave away everything. The room was Elizabeth's old room.
Just as I figured out where I was, Jack came into the room. "Well, luv, ye have some friends 'ere to see ye. Do ye want 'em to come in?" I nod graciously.
Jack steps aside from the door. Erindi and Mamorumi rush into the room and sit on the sofa, right next to me. They hug me close. We are all talking at once. I could see Will wince of the sound of our banter.
Jack watches from the other end of the room and smiles at the site. Reminds me of Will and Liz; he thinks to himself.
"I hate to interrupt, but we have some bad news for you girls. Very bad news." Will interrupts our reunion. We sit up and stare at Will.
"The girl, you were with Robin, is missing." How does he know my name and why is Ella missing? "Missing? Missing! Missing! How can that be?!?!?" I demand, almost shouting. I bang my fist on the table. "Well, luv, I carried ye to Will's house and dropped ye there for awhile. I went back to thee beach to get yer friend was gone! Either she was taken or she walked off. Either way she is gone. I'm sorry, luv." Jack looks at the floor.
I could feel my eyes start to get hot and tears drip down my cheeks. How can he rescue one, but not the other? This is the first time Jack has ever let me down. Why did he have to start now?
Wow, really tense. Robin almost got KISSED! Will there be a thing between Robin and Jack? Who knows? I do and not telling. Any way, Remember to R&R. Luv-ya, Ella
Chapter 9 (Robin) Poke,poke,poke(think when Jack is poking Brown in Blacksmiths)I'm laying on something and I felt someone poking my shoulder.Poke,poke,poke "Will you stop poking the MORDOR OUT OF ME ?" I yelled. The poking stopped. I turned over and opened my eyes. Jack Sparrow, again?
Jack, all of a sudden notices I am awake. I start feeling light-headed and feel like last time I fainted. Jack grabs my arm. "No, luv not again. Sit up! Drink this!" He puts his arm around my shoulder and puts a bottle to my lips. I sip it slowly. Definitely, rum, I think as I taste it. The light- headedness suddenly disappears. "Better?" I nod slowly. I stare into his eyes. His eyes are more gorgeous in real life. Jack moves his face closer as if studying me. He leans closer and closer, our faces inches apart.
Suddenly, the door bursts open. Will steps into the room. Will? "Jack?" Will sounded worried. Jack pulled away and muttered something that sounded liked Bloody whelp!
"What Will?" Jack didn't look concerned, but annoyed. Will led him outside and closed the door. They talked outside for a while. I studied the room. I could tell it was the Swann Mansion, I was in. The room gave away everything. The room was Elizabeth's old room.
Just as I figured out where I was, Jack came into the room. "Well, luv, ye have some friends 'ere to see ye. Do ye want 'em to come in?" I nod graciously.
Jack steps aside from the door. Erindi and Mamorumi rush into the room and sit on the sofa, right next to me. They hug me close. We are all talking at once. I could see Will wince of the sound of our banter.
Jack watches from the other end of the room and smiles at the site. Reminds me of Will and Liz; he thinks to himself.
"I hate to interrupt, but we have some bad news for you girls. Very bad news." Will interrupts our reunion. We sit up and stare at Will.
"The girl, you were with Robin, is missing." How does he know my name and why is Ella missing? "Missing? Missing! Missing! How can that be?!?!?" I demand, almost shouting. I bang my fist on the table. "Well, luv, I carried ye to Will's house and dropped ye there for awhile. I went back to thee beach to get yer friend was gone! Either she was taken or she walked off. Either way she is gone. I'm sorry, luv." Jack looks at the floor.
I could feel my eyes start to get hot and tears drip down my cheeks. How can he rescue one, but not the other? This is the first time Jack has ever let me down. Why did he have to start now?
Wow, really tense. Robin almost got KISSED! Will there be a thing between Robin and Jack? Who knows? I do and not telling. Any way, Remember to R&R. Luv-ya, Ella