I re-read the chapter and found some grammer mistakes (.) so I fixed them and updated the chapter

CHAPTER 2
MATCHED IN WILL, MATCHED IN POWER

Standing alone on the top of the museum was a girl. She wore a dark green cape, and a small black body suit under, her hair was around shoulder length and had a grey-blue tint in it.

Back on the ground there was a crowd growing, all talking and pointing. Near the edge of the roof was a girl looking down. She looked about 15 or so, she stood almost on the edge it was a miracle she hadn't fallen yet. Raven and Starfire flew up to the roof while Robin, Cyborg and B.B. were inside the building running up the stairs to the roof. "Please do not jump, it is not worth it. Think about all the people you'd be hurting," Star said in a quiet pleading voice to the strange girl. The girl muttered something under her breath and made a swiping motion with her arm, black jets of power came zooming from her palm. One of the jets hit Star; she did a backwards summersault in the air.

Raven narrowed her eyes as she watched Starfire's summersault. She landed softly on the roof top, "Something tells me you aren't a suicide case," the strange girl laughed and made the same swiping motion with her arm, but Raven was ready and extended her right arm. A black power shield was made, the black jets bounced harmlessly off. Raven spoke slowly "You're from Azarath too eh?" she said with a weak sarcastic smile, the strange girl smiled sarcastically too "How'd you guess," she closed her eyes, when she opened them they were glowing white, she muttered and levitated car from on the ground, it came zooming at Raven. Raven repeated the blocking shield, grunting slightly "I guess it was a lucky guess," Raven closed her eyes; This girl is getting all the offence advantages. She's so powerful, Raven thought, Time to step it up a bit. Raven grunted again she yelled "AZARATH METRION ZINTHOS" Raven put so much effort the car broke into a thousand pieces. The hunks of metal came raining down; Raven took advantage of these and sent the pieces at the girl. The girl leaped up as the pieces came flying towards her. Raven growled, What's taking the guys so long to get up here?

"TEEN TITANS GO!" she heard the familiar voice of Robin and Cyborg yelling. Robin threw a power disc and Cyborg shot at it with his cannon. The girl screamed and shielded her eyes from the bright light. The 'sonic boom' blasted the girl off her feet.

Starfire had recovered herself and was high above the building shooting star bolts at the girl. But she seemed to ignore the fiery bolts by simply using the same shield-like thing Raven used before to block her jets. She focused her attention to Raven, waving her arms in clockwise position, Raven gasped and yelled "GET DOWN!" as black shockwaves shot out everywhere melting the boxes B.B. was laying behind with his hands on the back of his neck "Holy!" he yelled. He touched the top of his head and felt, the hair on the top of his head was fringed and blackened. He stood up "You-screwed-my-do!" he yelled charging at her. B.B. changed into a rhino attempting to head-butt her. But the girl jumped up and did a flip over the rhino, even Robin was impressed.

"You guys let me handle this one," Raven shouted still not moving her eyes from the strange girl from Azarath, "This one is more... personal" she said quietly. The green robed girl laughed harshly "Damn-straight," leaping into the air she sent a steady stream of energy at Raven, but Raven matched it. It seemed it forever the two of them were standing there fighting trying to force the energy at the person. But the energies met at the middle of them and barely moved; Damn, thought Raven, I have to get the advantage...somehow. This battle has already weakened me, I'm sure for her too. We are so equal, none of us can win. "AZARATH METRION ZINTHOS!" twin voices yelled at the same time. There was a blinding white light, "Huh?" Raven groaned rubbing her eyes "Where am I?" she asked, looking around she saw she was in a big white room. It seemed to be as high as the sky and length wise it seemed to never end. Raven looked up just in time to see the girl in the air come towards her in a kicking stands. Raven grabbed the girl's foot and flung her a good ten-feet "Your gonna have to do better than that, Aquilus." Said Raven quietly. Aquilus, who had just landed lightly on her feet from the toss, sent black energy jets at Raven. Raven blocked them easily enough.

Starfire walked over to Raven and Aquilus. She waved her hand infront of Raven's face. Both girls' faces were blank as stone and there bodies where as hard as stone. "What is wrong with them?" Robin walked over to were Star, Raven and Aquilus were, "I don't know," he said simply. B.B. walked over too, his eyes wide from the flash. B.B. walked rather clumsy, still blinded. Cyborg held his right arm in front of him "My scanners say she's alright, she just looks like she is in a trance of some sort." Starfire stood in front of Raven waving her arms frantically in front of Raven's face.

Raven gathered her strength and started waving her arms in clockwise position and screamed the words "AZARATH METRION ZINTHOS!" huge black shockwaves exploded from her palms. Instead of hitting Aquilus, something seemed to be blocking them. Aquilus smiled and laughed, in a far away place she heard a faint scream, she knew that scream "Starfire!" she gasped. Slowly the white endless room faded away into the roof top. The cold heartless reality of Starfire flying into the air and hitting hard the building's wall next to the museum "Ugh," Starfire managed to groan before she pasted out, blood was pouring out a gash in her head. Raven bit her lip and had that sinking feeling in her stomach. Aquilus giggled "'Till we meet again Raven!" she said taking a bow then vanishing.

I'll be posting the next chapter on Saturday

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