Hi!!!!!

Spizzy the Headless Spaz:---
Lolz we all have our weird moments!!

Captainjack:--- Lolz I had to have it in here somewhere!

Carn:--- Lolz I love the shockwave it's my favourite ride... at Drayton Manor.

Goth Princess:--- Lolz I love roller coasters and the bigger the better! Only my best mate doesn't and my other one is always sick so she can't go on them... So I'm on my lonesome... O My God! I think I should just let you write my story! You've got such cool Ideas!!... .x.Sulks.x. Not fair...

Zeldagr1436:--- Everyone has to do it sometime!... Only Jack can't wait...

Carrianne:--- Lolz I'd knew you'd find them good! Oh, not only does the pizza still taste like cardboard... they now make us pay 85p!

Gbmarie:--- Lolz! WOW! You can see into the future! .x.Swishes hands round.x.... Ahem... Well lolz. You'll just have to wait and see who Rk favours more.

Diclaimer: Erm... nope... nothing to put here I mean I'm sure it says here in my contract...

.x.Gets out screwed up napkin.x.

...Ahem...Excuse me one moment... .x.Smooths it out.x.

... That I own... NOTHING?!... Ok! Who messed with the napkin?!... .x.Waves round in peoples faces.x. Anyone?... ok so maybe I own Rk, Jess and Wil... I mean Chris! AND THE PLOT!!!!



I can't breathe!, CRAP!, DAMNIT!!!

"EWWWWWWWW!" We all leaned away from Jack

.x.BEEEEEEEP!.x.

The bars all lifted up to let us out.

"YAY!!"

We all jumped out of our seats and ran to the exit.

"Oi! Wait! Why hasn't mine gone up?!"

I turned to see RK still sitting in her seat pulling the bar.

"Oh well... your loss!!! Come on people I'm starving!!!"

"Jess!!!! Hold on Rk"

I walked over to Rk's seat and started to mess with it

"Stop squirming!!"

"I can't help it! I can't breathe!!!"

"You shouldn't have pulled it so tight!!"

"Well I thought I was going to fall out!!!"

I started to pull the bar up but I wouldn't move.

"Mm... I think it needs to go down to go up"

"No!"

I pushed it down

"I...can't...breathe!!!"

"Rk! Shush!"

I looked at her face

"O mi god!!! She's turning blue!!!"

I tried to pull the bar back up but it wasn't moving!

"WELL YOU CAN JUST STAND THERE YOU KNOW DON'T EVEN BOTHER TO HELP!!!!!"

Chris, Will and Jack ran over to help me pull. We all pulled the bar and it moved up a tiny bit so it was back where it was and Rk could now breathe.

"Almost there Rk."

.x.BEEEEEEEEEEP!!!.x.

All of the other bars around us went down and the ride started to make creaking noises.

"Rach? Whats happening? You loosened it?"

"I...I dunno"

"I think I pushed a button"

Chris turned to Jess.

"Jess, What you pushed?!"

"I pushed this big green one that...says...U oh..."

"What u oh Jess?!... Fix the U oh!!"

"I pushed the button that says start"

Rk started to struggle even more

"WHAT?! NO RACH! GET ME OUT NOW!!!!"

"I'm trying!!!"

It started to move forward and I lost balance and jumped off

"RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACH!!!!!!"

All we could do was watch Rk ride the roller coaster in the dark.

"Oh no! Rach, what if it stops again?!"

I looked at Chris

"We'll have to wait for her"

It got to the drop, started to go down then stopped

"AWWWWW CRAP!!!!!"

.x.40 Minutes Later.x.

The ride had finally moved and went back to the start. We then managed to get Rk out of her chair after we had found that under each chair there was an emergency open button.

We were now wondering about trying to find the exits as it was too dark to see the signs.

"This place is loads different in the dark!"

"Oh no! I've seen this bush before!!!! We're going round in circles!!!"

"Aw! Chris! You got us lost!!!"

"What?!...ME?!"

"Where's Jess?!"

"I dunno"

"You lost her?!"

"You were supposed to watch her not me!!!"

"OUCH!!!! THAT WAS MY FOOT!!"

"Soz luv!"

"OUCH! JACK STOP IT!!!"

"That wasn't me!"

"Soz, Rach"

"It's ok Jess...JESS?!"

"HI!"

"WHERE DID YOU GO?!"

"Sweet shop... you know they don't lock the shops at night!"

"Really? Kewl!!!"

.x.BANG.x.

"What was that?"

"I walked in to a pole! Who would leave poles about!!"

"Rk, that's not a pole... it's the exit!!!"

"WHOOO!"

.x.10 Minutes Later.x.

"Jess put... your foot... No! Not there!"

"Whoa! Almost went then!!!"

We had discovered that there was no way through the gate, we also found there was no was under having got various objects stuck...i.e.... Jess' head, so we were now climbing over the gate.

"Jack! Move your hand!!"

"I would! But I'd slip savvy?!"

"Why are we all climbing at the same time?!"

"Because we're thick now MOVE CHRIS!!!"

"NO! DON'T PUSH RK!!! STO...WHOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!"

"O! SUGAR! CHRIS YOU OK?!"

He was on his back lying on the floor

"No..."

"Oh good"

We all managed to get down safely after Chris' fall, except Jess who slipped and threw handfuls of sweets everywhere.

"Ok! So...where's the car?!"

Rk said rubbing her hands together. I looked at her

"Well I don't know Rk...maybe its that one there seeing as it's the only one here!!!!"

We ran over to it

"Yes! RADIO!!!"

"COMFY SEATS!"

"BOOOOOOOOOT!!!"

"Chris open it up I'm freezing!"

Chris just looked at me

"You've got the keys!"

"Nooooo! I gave them to you just before we got on the shockwave!"

He checked his pockets...

"AWWWWW DAMNIT!!!!!!"

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