Sorry this chapter took so long... I had to type it all up again and I went shopping... then I went shopping again. Then I went to a fair! So... you get why I'm so late? Yea?... Anyway, this chapter is completly new! Other people had read all the others when I had uploaded this story twice before it kept getting removed, but now I've passed that stage! So for all my great reviewers who have read all my other chapters twice and kept reviewing... here it is... FINALLY!

There's only 4 chapters left of this story so enjoy it! But then there's the sequel! But I'm going to Athens to watch the Olympics with the school then I come back and go straight on my hols with my parents so I won't be updating for 2 weeks in the middle of August.

Nessa Inwe:--- :O .x.Ties Will to a bench so you can't monkey swing and steal him.x. Ha!

Pirate-Rose:--- I think I had a fight with one of my other mates the last time I posted it so that's where most of it came from... I don't think I've ever had a major fall-out with Rk... .x.Ponders.x. ... Or with Jess... That would be so cool if you wrote a story about you meeting up with us! Jess and Rk are easy... they're crazy and sarcastic. Those candies were like these little jelly things in different shapes and colours in a small packet. I think they were called Haribo. Oh god I learned all the words to finding nemo too!! I love it when Dory and Merlin were asleep in the goggles and Dory is talking in her sleep! "The sea monkey took my money... Watch that hammer... are you gonna eat that?... yes, I'm a natural blue!" Lolz.

Goth Princess:--- lolz, Rk needs a pimpin' hat like Will's got at the end of the movie! Aw poor Will... maybe I shouldn't have hit him... that hard. Lolz. Erm... .x.Messes with hands.x. Whats that bus?... Lolz. I know you said not to ask... but if you say that them I am!

LadyGlory:--- Lolz... kids ay?... let them watch the simplest things and they think they're super man or even an X-men!

Carn:--- .x.Points at Rk.x. Blame her! She provokes me!

Rk: EXCUSE ME!

Rach: You're excused... .x.Dismisses by waving hand.x.

Lonaargh:--- HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! ... that's if I miss it... What have you had pierced?.... I wanted Will to be in hands evily.x.

Zeldagr1436:--- lolz you still want them together? You're hard to persuade!

Alori Kesi Aldercy:--- Lolz Glad you like it! .x.Pry's Will form you're death grip.x. Mine... even though I have my Will clone... .x.Pats Will's head.x. Ok... Where's his lead gone...

LiTtLe SpArRoW:--- My kiss thingi worked! Yay I am pleased of myself now!

Carrianne:--- Lolz... .x.See's Will on settee trying to fly off it.x. FOR GODS SAKE! GIVE ME THAT SILLY STRING CAN NOW!!! .x.Pulls Will off settee.x. What did I tell you?!

PinkRoseB:--- Lolz I promise that I won't bop Jack on the head anymore! .... Dark chocolate?... Oh Willllllll?

Spizzy the Headless Spaz:--- WELCOME BACK! Lolz. Away for so long and still manage to review every chapter! Hey! He deserved it.... Ok so maybe he didn't!!! ... I feel guilty now!

Captainjack:--- Lolz here!

Disclaimer:--- ...... I own the plot... .x.Hear smashing.x. ... my characters... noises.x.... WILL CLONE!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!.... I do not own PotC... .x.BANG!.x. IF YOU ARE TRYING TO JUMP OF THE BED TO FLY I WILL CHAIN YOU UP AGAIN... DON'T THINK I WON'T!!.... I own my Will clone and Pirate-Rose.

DUCK!! PVC floor, Mother Calls!

.x. Rk's PoV .x.

"Oh my god... Rach actually hit someone!! Wow! I want a replay!!!"

"JESS! SHUT UP! Will... are you ok?"

"S...she hit me!!"

Will was sat on a bench cupping the cheek that was really red

"I'll try to talk some sense into her... if I can find her!"

I walked away in search of Rach and heard Chris trying to cheer Will up.

I headed up to the Billabong shop knowing Rach would be close.

I went into the shop but I couldn't see her.

Hm. Where would I be if I were Rach and thought Will had cheated with my best mate?

I went to walk out when I heard...

"GOD DAMNED FRIENDS!!"

I think that might be her...

I walked to the back of the shop to the changing rooms.

"Rach? Is that you?"

A pair of jeans flew over the door and skimmed my head

"Hey! Those had a button!!"

"GO AWAY!"

"No, not until you realise nothing is going on!"

"Nothing? NOTHING?! Why are you two always together and shut up whenever I walk into the room?!"

"It's something else!"

"You're sleeping with him Rk ADMIT IT!"

A top flew over the door and landed on my head

"Stop throwing things at me! Listen, nothing is going on between me and Will. I do have some taste!!"

Rach seemed to stop and think for a second

"I need that top in a smaller size"

I looked at the tag

"It is the smallest"

"Oh"

"So you believe me?"

"Yea, I mean that top was pretty small anyway"

"Not the top! About me and Will?"

"I don't know... If you were just 'talking' then let me what about!"

Uh oh... How can I get Rach to believe me without telling her about Jack?

"Er...How, I don't love someone!"

"Who?!"

"Will and Jack!"

"Oh... I don't know if I believe you"

I slumped against the door

"Rach... We've been friends for years, do you really think I would throw that all away because of a guy?"

"..."

"So are you going to go and talk to Will?... I mean you really socked him there! Made his eyebrow bleed and everything!!"

"Oh yea, his eyebrow... he got that done just because I asked, well told him to"

"And you think he's cheating?"

Rach opened the door and I staggered up.

"I suppose I was overreacting"

"Nah, you were just making sure"

She smiled and hugged me.... And hugged me... and the shop attendant gave us a weird look...

"WHAT YOU LOOKING AT?!"

.x. At The Oasis Market .x.

"Where are they?!"

"Over there! Look, I told you, you made his eyebrow bleed!"

"...I didn't think I hit him that hard!"

"Well you did! It was so funny!... I mean after woods"

She smiled and looked over to Will sitting on a bench next Chris, still holding his cheek.

"I feel kind of sorry now..."

"Well go and... I don't know hug him!"

I pushed her over to Will, he stood up and looked at the floor. Rach went to hug him and he flinched... thinking she was back for round two... Aww, Rach has got him flinching!

"Oh Will! I just wanted to hug you and say I'm sorry!"

"Oh!..."

He threw his arms around her.

"Erm... Will I can't breathe!"

He went to loose

"No! Don't let go!"

He hugged her again...

"Ok! Break it up! I've got shopping to do!"

Rach took Will's hand

"So, you coming downstairs Rk, Chris?"

"Yep!"

I followed Rach and Will down the stairs holding Chris' hand.

.x. Rach's PoV .x.

We walked down the stairs to the bottom level of the Oasis market. Rk pinched her nose and said;

"Now going down to the bottom floor... a.k.a PVC lovers dream!...TUT CHRIS!"

I laughed. As we got to the end of the stairs Jack jumped round the corner scaring us all to death.

"I WANT THESE!!!"

Jack was wearing black baggy jeans with a chain on the side, a black vest top, skater trainers and various cuffs and bracelets.

"Er... ok, Jack"

He ran off, still with the tags hanging out the back of his new clothes and I saw Rk look at his ass, so I elbowed her

"Rk!"

She raised her hands in defence

"Its gone quiet,... Where's Jess?"

"Like TOTALLY!!"

"Oh god! Please do not say she is talking like a Barbie doll again trying to blend in!"

We walked over to a shop where Jess was sitting on the counter surrounded by skater guys

"And she was all like 'Nuh uh' and was all like 'UH huh!"

The skaters nodded in understanding

We all exchanged glances

"I wonder why they like her so much?"

"Probably because of her Vaseline hair"

"Chris! We washed it out!"

"Her hairs naturally like that?"

Chris tilted his head and looked at Jess

"I want to get some food... Rk, get Jess"

"HEY!!... NO! NOT YOU! I DON'T EVEN KNOW YOU!... JESS?!"

"Hey dude!"

"O...k, look Jess we're going to Maccy D's"

"Cool!"

"You coming?"

"TOTALLY!"

"JESS! CUT THE CRAP TALK YOU DON'T TALK LIKE THAT!!"

We watched as Jess' skater guys rounded in on Rk

"RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!"

.x. 10 Minutes Later .x.

"Totally!"

We were all sitting in McDonalds eating. Jess had still not managed to get her normal way of speaking back yet and it was really stressing Rk out... we kept telling her to shut up but this is Jess, she never listens!

"So. Like who did those so totally cool beads in you're hair?"

She lent over Jack

"...Erm, me self luv"

"Really?! No way! You gotta, like, do me some, ok?!"

"Er, ok"

"KOOL!... So, you got a girlfriend?"

"I don' think so"

"Oh...."

Rk squeezed her ketchup so it flew over her shoulder and on to the floor. I nudged Chris and nodded to Rk. He just nodded and smiled.

I felt Will jump next to me and moan... after Rk had kicked out when Jess had started to play with Jack bandana. He rubbed his shin... the looked at my leg shocked.

"Er, Rach? You legs shaking"

"Oh! It my mobile!"

Rk and Chris gave me weird looks

"...It's on vibrate!"

"Oh!"

I got it out my pocket and answered it

"Hi mom!... yea I'm fine!"

"Alright luv leave the hair!"

I looked at Rk at waved my hands at Jack.. she shoved her hands over his mouth

"...Oh, it was no one mom!... WHAT?!"

Everyone jumped and I froze....

"Hello?... Rachael dear?"

Rk leaned over and took the phone

"Hi Mrs. H!... yeah... uh huh... ok I'll tell her! Bye!"

She put my phone on the table

"You're mom said she and you're dad are coming back home tonight"

"Yeah, I know"

"What's up with you? You look shocked!"

"I am... my parents are coming home early"

"And you're shocked about that?!"

"No! Well yea! It's just that... Will and Jack are going to have to go back"

We all looked at Will and Jack

"Bummer Dudes!"

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So sorry this took so long!!!! I promise never EVER to take this long again... except the two weeks when I'm on my hols... but that can't be helped! Lol.

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