Ok up earlier just for Pirate-Rose... Because she said so... and plus her wonderful story has been taken down off evil...
Spizzy the Headless Spaz:--- I'm so stupid some times. I can't believe I didn't know it was you!! Sorry.
Pirate-Rose:--- SORRY!!! I'M SO SORRY! I DIDN'T MEAN TO FORGET YOU!!!... anyway... I love the story... I'm drawing the pic for it at the moment but Jess' head keeps going weird so I keep starting again... it will be done soon though! Yes... that random person your brother added on msn was me... I saw you keep signing in with weird names like; don't know who this person is and I kind of clicked after a while... I'm sorry! I keep losing him!!! .x.takes leash.x. Thank you... .x.and 'Clone Care For Dummies.x. ... I'll read that later... YES! You should talk to the unknown person on msn because (after we finally found out) IT'S ME!!
Captainjack:--- Yea... no favourites... You'll see! All I due time!! Lolz... I like the whole petting of the DVD case!
Chantal J:--- Lolz thanks! Here's the new chapter!
Zeldagr1436:--- your so persistent! Your not going to give in are you?
Savi:--- Lolz a lot of questions there... here's the chapter anyway!
Disclaimer:--- I FOUND HIM!!! WILL CLONE IS BACK!!! I went after him and found him in the local duck pond... naked... but he's alive and well, and squeaky clean!!! I also got bored last night and drew a picture of Will naked in the duck pond... I'm not kidding here I did ask Pirate-Rose she'll prove it... she's seen it... well it's still sending to her.. I don't own PotC or any of the characters that appear in that... I do own my plot my characters... AND THE YMCA MAN!!
.x. Will's PoV .x.
"Rach! Give her time!"
"No! It'll make her worse!!"
She pulled her hand out of mine and ran off in the direction of Rk
"She's just going to make it worse!"
I felt Chris sit on the swing next to me
"Nah, look, if Rk's in a mood and walks off, she'll be even worse if she realises no ones gone after her"
"Why didn't you go then?"
"Pfft! She'll take it out on me!"
"You sure she won't go worse?"
"Trust me mate, I know what she's like. But that's what I love about her; her temper!"
I looked at him
"You really like her, don't you?"
He smiled
"Oh yea! More than anything!"
I felt for this guy... this was exactly how I felt for Elizabeth until I found out about... Norrington. Poor Chris... Rk's lied to him about loving Jack, and he doesn'e even suspect anything.
"I'm sorry mate"
He raised an eyebrow
"Huh? What for?"
U oh...
"I mean... er... I'm sorry... you got... er... stuck with Rk's temper!... yea, that's it!"
"Oh! Nah! It's fun to have a girl that fights back! It doesn't ever get boring!"
I laughed and decided I should think before I say things!
"So... how do you feel about Rachael?"
"Oh, she's great, except... well... I know never to mess with her again... she hurts!"
"Oh yea! How's your cheek?"
"It's ok... I think the swellings going down"
"She hit you really hard there didn't she?... funny, I've never seen her hit someone before... it's usually either Rk or Jess that throws the punches, and that's usually at each other. It takes a lot to set Rach off, she must really like you. Well, of course she does, you're exactly like Orlando Bloo..."
He looked down
Who the hell is Orlando Bloom?!
"Who is this Bloom guy?!"
"Maybe you should ask Rach"
I'm confused... I looked over to see Jess sitting on a fake horse attached to a spring singing the song about that guys balls... I looked back to Chris and nudged him.
"What?"
"Is she ok? Does she need medication or something?"
He laughed
"No, that's just the way Jess is; She has her weird days when she'll go hyper. But, if you sit and have a conversation with her she's really interesting"
I shook my head
"Rach's friends are weird".x. Rach's PoV .x.
Why did Will stay and Jack go?... I'm not complaining! But it's weird... Maybe something went worng with the wish.. of maybe... Will was suppose to stay..
I walked past the paddling pool and saw the cute little kids running about. I headed for the pirate ships Rk might be in a mood but she'll still think the same... I hope..x. Rk's PoV .x.
I sat there just looking at the kids running round and playing and falling over... When I felt someone sit next to me, I turned to shove him or her off but saw Rach
"Oh, hey"
"Hey... so, urm you feeling ok?"
"I don't know"
"Ok, well do you want me to leave or not?"
"Stay if you want... I don't care"
I watched a little boy trying to swim in about 2 inches of water... pathetic little twerp.
"Rk, I'm sorry that Jack left and Will didn't"
"Its not you're fault... I think anyway"
"I hope not!"
I sighed
"Want to go back?... I bet Chris is getting lonely"
She smiled and winked
"You only want to get back to Will"
"Well, that as well!"
We laughed and started to walk back
"Rk!"
"What?!"
"Don't what me! I saw you trip that little boy over!!"
"He was in my way!".x. Will's PoV .x.
I was still sitting on the swing bored and messing with my new piercing...
"OH MY GOD!! OH MY GOD!! IT'S IT'S..."
I looked up to see a girl looking at me and pointing... and now jumping up and down
"...ORLANDO BLOOM!!"
Oh god
"Hey! He's NOT Orlando Bloom!"
Oh good Rach is back
"OH! He sooo is!! And I saw him first so push off!!"
"OH!! WHO ARE YOU TELLING TO PUSH OFF?! I'LL BLOODY PUSH YOU OFF! I'LL PUSH YOU OFF THE PATH INTO THE ROAD COME HERE!!!"
"Rach! Wait I'll deal with it!"
Jess stepped forward
"Like, if you were even a real Orlando Bloom fan girl you would be able to like, tell the difference! Plus, he's is in L.A... DUH!!! So push off... LOSER!"
"Oh..."
The fan girl walked off embarrassed
"Go Jess!!"
She smiled...
"Can we go? I'm bored!"
Rk and Chris walked off in front
"Hold on! Where can Will stay?!"
Chris turned round
"Er... I think my mom will let him stay with me"
Rk's jaw dropped
"WHAT?! YOU SAY THIS NOW?!!"
She grabbed him by the collar
"Rk!"
Rach pulled her off
"Look Chris' mom might let him have Will stay but she won't let two people stay! Calm down please"
Rk nodded her head and took Chris' hand again and walked out the gates
Rach walked back to me and shook her head, I put my arm round her (A:N: ...What?!) Jess followed us
"Erm.. Rach?"
She looked up at me
"Yea?"
"Who is Orldy Bloom?"
She laughed
"It's ORLANDO Bloom"
"Oh... so, who is he?!"
"He's just a guy who kind of looks like you.. That's all"
"Oh..."
"THE CARS BEEN STOLEN!!!"
Rk and Chris were standing in the road with their hands in their hair
"Er, Chris?...we didn't..."
"I CAN'T BELIEVE ANYONE WOULD WANT TO STEAL THAT RUST BUCKET!!"
"Rk! Chris! Listen!... do you remember driving here?"
"Er... no..."
Rk put her hands over her mouth
"IT WAS STOLEN AT THE YMCA!!!"
"RK! FOR GODS SAKE GIRL!!... do you remember driving to the YMCA?!"
"No... we... walked"
"DUH!!"
Rk whacked Chris around his head
"YOU THICK SHIT!!"
"OUCH! RK!! THAT HURTS!!"
"YOU MADE ME RUN ALL THE WAY TO THE YMCA... THEN WLAK ALL THE WAY DOWN HERE WHEN YOU KNEW WE HAD THE CAR!!!"
"I FORGOT!!"
"YOU SHOULD BE BLONDE!!"
Jess looked offended
"Hey!"
I looked down at Rach who was laughing
"Do you think we should head back to the car and leave them?"
She nodded. We headed back; Jess following... in the middle of the road, leaving Chris and Rk still standing half on the path arguing
"I AM NOT WALKING!!"
"FINE! STAY HERE AND WE'LL COME BACK!!"
"PFFT! I THINK NOT!! YOU CAN CARRY ME!!"
"WHAT?!!"xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Okies! Done!!!I think there is two chapters left but that's it... ah, never mind I can still bore you all with the sequel!Buh bi xREVIEW!!!XxXxXxXxXxXxX