Hi everyone! Sorry I haven't updated in like forever. Well I'm back now. So please read and review my poem and no flames. If you really didn't like it to tell me what you didn't like and use constructive critizim. Thank you.
To got to heaven
To get to heaven
You need strength
To help you fight off all the people
Who say lieing is the way
To get to heaven
You need faith
To believe in Jesus Christ
No matter what the people say
To get to heaven
You need love
Toy love you neibor as yourself
And the Lord above
To get to heaven
You need to pray
To help you find a way through life
Each and every day
A/n--this started out being a song but there was no chorus, verse or anything. It looked more like a poem to me. So I don't know if it will flow right since it was a song. Well, thanks for reading it and please review it.
To got to heaven
To get to heaven
You need strength
To help you fight off all the people
Who say lieing is the way
To get to heaven
You need faith
To believe in Jesus Christ
No matter what the people say
To get to heaven
You need love
Toy love you neibor as yourself
And the Lord above
To get to heaven
You need to pray
To help you find a way through life
Each and every day
A/n--this started out being a song but there was no chorus, verse or anything. It looked more like a poem to me. So I don't know if it will flow right since it was a song. Well, thanks for reading it and please review it.
