I don't own any of these characters…but I Do wish I owned Orlando Bloom…or Will Turner…or Johnny Depp…or Captain Jack Sparrow…(haha! Van-that'd be a lovely match, that…me and Jack…hehehehe…imagine the types of fun we'd have…not in a nasty sort of way…but, you know me…no one would ever believe me and Jack Sparrow…hehehehe!)
A/N: This is an alternate ending to the movie-I'm sure that if you read the preceding chapters, you'll know what's been going on and whatnot. Savvy? *-*
A/N #2: This chapter is going to be incredibly short-just thought ye'd like to be forewarned…
Summary: This is like an alternate ending to the movie…I'm at the spot where well…read the "previously" thing….
Previously on Defeat:
The dagger came down and Barbossa opened Will's hand, then he dragged the dagger through the whole of Will's palm before stopping… In one swift movement, Barbossa picked up the blood soaked medallion and dropped it into the chest. It spun for what seemed like an eternity before it hit the others with a heavy thud.
Silence filled the cavern for minutes and everyone stood completely still.
Then, as he did before, Barbossa pulled out his pistol and shot one of the more lowly pirates. Blood started to leak from the wound and pretty soon, it engulfed his shirt and he fell over, dead… Barbossa was the one to finally break the silence. "Now…we feast!" (All right…I cut out some stuff, otherwise it'd be like having half of the last chapter…savvy?)
A great "hurrah" came from the newly un-cursed crowd, as they went out of the caves towards the boats, and their food.
Barbossa turned to the two goons standing nearest and said quietly, "Bind Turner and Cap'n Jack and put 'em in sep'rate cells below deck on the Pearl." The two goons nodded dumbly. "Oh-and if either o' these li'l lads gives ye any trouble, ye give them a bit o' trouble." Barbossa winked at the two goons before letting out a loud cackle and walking off.
"What about Elizabeth?!" Will shouted after Barbossa; he almost immediately regretted yelling.
"Oh-we do have to do som'in with her don't we? She'll be comin' with me then," he replied, grinning a rotten smile as he cackled again and grabbed Elizabeth's arm with his disgusting hands.
Will was just about to shout at Barbossa, but he didn't get the chance; one of the goons punched him in the mouth before he could utter a word. Will made a slight sound as the filthy fist met his mouth, making it bleed, but it wasn't loud enough for anyone to hear.
Jack looked at Will as he (Will) was being bound. He felt sorry for the boy; the boy was just too headstrong, and that wasn't going to help. If only he would concede his pride a bit, he, Captain Jack Sparrow: expert escapist, planner, sailor-or rather captain, and wooer of women everywhere, would think of a plan to get them all out of there. But for now, they would have to endure the hell before them aboard the Black Pearl, his one and only love…if only for a little while…
But what Jack hadn't counted on was Barbossa's ability to know what he would do (Jack) before he even knew…
A/N: Sorry this is soooooooooo short! I really wanted to get an update in today though…so at least it's something… *-* I'm kinda tired too, so yeah…I'll try to get another chapter up tomorrow (because it'll probably be short too), but no promises since I have play practice (I know, I know…not a very worthy excuse…but it IS, since I have it like every day!) and on Tuesday, I might not have an update at all, because I have this party…and you probably don't want to know my entire social life, so I'll shut up and thank everyone who reviewed. (Right after my goodbyes…)
Cheers!
Tati Bloom aka Elf Girl
PS: I love Orlando Bloom.
PPS: Have suggestions? Review…or email me @: TatiBloom@att.net
PPPS: I've decided to do something else…like have a little um…topic for discussion…you know what I mean? I'm not sure if it's allowed, so if it isn't…well…ok we don't have to deal with that now…but here it is:
Johnny Depp (my fav actor) said recently in GQ that he would buy his kids pot if they got hooked on it-you know to make sure that it wasn't laced or anything. What do you think?
PPPPS: Yes, I just said that Johnny is my fav actor, but that's for like ALL time, Orlando's my fav newcomer, y'know what I mean? I mean Johnny is so versatile, the way he can sink into ANY role and completely embody it. Orlando's still getting there, but I'm sure that his acting chops'll get better-not that they aren't great…but you know what I'm saying…maybe this was a bad idea….I'm writing more in my a/n's than my story….*-* Promise I'll write less a/n's and more story in the future!
A Wonderful and Special Thanks To:
* Sienna3 – Thanks for liking the story and calling it totally awesome! You are complementing me soooo much! Yeah-I thought that the Will/Elizabeth story line would be a great twist. I'm glad you liked that too! And beware! There' s sad stuff coming up in the chapters ahead…well…actually, not right away, but it'll be coming up in lemme see…maybe 5 or six chapters….but keep in mind my chapters are usually kinda short, so it won't take long….
* Kari 8 (& asher????) – Thanks…I thought about having more in the chapters, but it didn't seem right. Like the next chapter coming up wouldn't go with this chapter. So-here's the chapter-hope ya liked it!
And Asher-thanks (you are a different person than Kari, right? If not…then I probably look like an idiot right now….but thanks nonetheless!)
* Kayleigh-talitha – Yeah-still have the mixed feelings…but that doesn't really matter. I'm glad that you didn't like stop reading my story after my reply thing, I was worried it would um…offend you more or whatever. But I'm glad you reviewed! Yeah-so you were right about the anonymous reviews. I got well 1 more person (Mistress of Mordor) to review, and that was great…so BIG THANK YOU to you! (That was NOT sarcasm-I love every one of my reviews!) So yeah-basically no one likes my cliffhangers. They complain about them (which is fine!!! Keep complaining if you want!), but they don't like them….Thanks….I'm totally flattered that you like my plots! I know, poor Will! I hate to do this to him… Well, for now, Barbossa is locking Will (poor baby…) and Jack in the brig of the Pearl (poor Jack too, trapped once again in the brig of his own ship…). And what he's doing with Elizabeth, I'll leave to the next chapter… *-*
* Mistress of Mordor – You're absolutely welcome! And I thank YOU too! I LOVE all the reviews that I get! It really sucks that it won't let you sign on though… I'm sorry about my HORRIBLE, HORRIBLE updating habits… I'll try to honor your requests…For tomorrow, I have a longer chapter (though I'm not sure how long it'll be on the computer, since I write out every chapter in a notebook-long story short: I shouldn't be staying up til 1 in the morning writing, but I do, and I can't write on the coputer, cuz then my parents would know about my sleep deprevation and get mad…so that's why I write in a notebook. And plus in a notebook, it looks like a lot more than it really is…) and well…since I'm probably updating tomorrow, it'll be honoring your second request as well. Savvy? (I love saying that… *-* ) Sorry about this tiny little chapter…though…I'm reading you review again right now and you said you wanted a bigger chapter…well tomorrow ye'll get one. *-* And about Elizabeth-yes, there will be more of her, in fact the next chapter is mostly devoted to her and Barbossa. Right then…I have to go now, but ye'll be hearing from me again soon (tomorrow-for those of you who haven't already had it drilled into your minds…. *-* )
THANKS TO EVERYONE WHO REVIEWED!!!!!! (Remember-reviewing is open to everybody now-like you can review anonymously-but it'd be nice if you signed in…. *-*)
KEEP READING!!!!! THANKS!!!! LOVE YA!!!!
A/N: You know what I just realized? If I hadn't cut the "Previously" thing down, it'd probably be longer than this entire chapter! That's really bad…. Sorry….. *-*