I don't own any of these characters…but I Do wish I owned Orlando Bloom…or Will Turner…or Johnny Depp…or Captain Jack Sparrow…(haha! Van-that'd be a lovely match, that…me and Jack…hehehehe…imagine the types of fun we'd have…not in a nasty sort of way…but, you know me…no one would ever believe me and Jack Sparrow…hehehehe!)
A/N: This is an alternate ending to the movie-I'm sure that if you read the preceding chapters, you'll know what's been going on and whatnot. Savvy? *-*
A/N #2: This is the chapter you wanted…and I'm giving it to you…Savvy? *-* (I love saying that…)
Summary: This is like an alternate ending to the movie…I'm at the spot where well…read the "previously" thing….
Previously on Defeat:
Then she walked over to the door and knocked. The door opened immediately and the guard pirate led her away towards the dining hall.
Meanwhile, in the kitchen of the Dauntless, two members of the pirate crew were talking in hushed voices.
"D-d-d-do ye think we should tell somebo'y?" one said.
"No! Are ye daft? 'Abe ye lost yer mind? We tell some bo'y and they'll kill us for not sayin' som'in sooner. 't's best we just shut up 'bout it and not say nothing'," the other pirate whispered furiously.
"yer sure 'bout that?"
" 'Course I am! We ain't gonna tell nobody 'bout that boat. Ye hear? No one can hear about that one littl' boat that was afloat. Besides, I didn't see nothin' in it! 'Cept it was kinda dark… 'Twas prol'ly jus' one that fell durin' the raid," the second pirate said, doubt creeping into his voice. "Now shut up about it-I tol' ye!"
"But I di'n't say nuthin'!"
A/N: Told ya it was short…but it's vital…told ya that too…now I won't tell you anymore… *-* Ok-gotta go now…I'll leave you guessing for a while… Evil me, right? *-*
Cheers!
Tati Bloom aka Elf Girl
PS: I love Orlando Bloom
PPS: I'll thank all the reviewers in my next chapter since I don't have a lot of time…but KEEP REVIEWING!!!!!! (Remember-it's open to everybody!)
PPPS: How am I doing with the majorly THICK pirate accents? Can you all understand them all right? If not, I can post this conversation in a regular, normal type of spelling…just ask/say the word…Savvy? *-*
THANK YOU TO EVERYONE WHO REVIEWED!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE YA ALL!!!!!! *-*
A Very Special, and Magnificent Thanks To (I'm thanking in the order that I got them, so a couple of you might be thanked a couple of times…Savvy?):
*The Serious Padfoot (for the review on Chp. 4): Thank you soooo much! I'm happy I didn't offend you guys! Yes, the video WAS stupid…plus, my friends killed me after making them stay for like 20 minutes after the movie till the credits were done… Poor Siri, I liked him soooo much…Him and Lupin are my favorite characters (but NOT in that "slashy" kind of way…no…) *tearfest* for poor Siri…
*Ankhesanamun (for the review on Chp. 5): I tried to make up for it with the Elizabeth chapter….an I know, I know, THIS chapter is way too short, but it didn't go with any of the other chapters…so yeah…And I will stop doing the bracket thing-I just wasn't sure if everyone could understand who I was talking about, since they were all men…I suppose I could describe them a bit more…
*Mistress of Mordor (for the review on Chp. 4 & 5): Yay! You did it!!! And yes, I'll just ignore that last one…good thing you aren't confused anymore! Yeah-it made me wonder if the chapter posted itself at all….good thing it did though….
*Sunny 18 (for the review on Chp. 5): Hey!!! Yeah-I LOVED your review! That's alright that you didn't get to review the last one-what matters is that you thought that they were both excellent! Yay!!! I'm sooo happy you thought that, and that you're enjoying this!!!! I'm not going to reveal anything about the upcoming chapters though…where would be the fun in that, I wonder??? *-* Well, thanks a million! I'm sooooo ecstatic that you like it!!!!!!!! *-*
*Spirit 3 (for the review on Chp. 5): I know, I know, he IS so unlucky…So sad that he can't do anything right…he's just a little too rash…
*The Serious Padfoot (for the review on Chp. 6): Thanks…I'm happy ya liked it! Hope you liked this one as well… *-*
*Spirit 3 (for the review on Chp. 6): Thanks!!!! Yes, it IS longer than the last one…by like 300%! But then, this chappy is really short…the next one'll be longer… Yeah-'savvy' is THE coolest word!!! All my mates hate it too…but they put u with it since I'm so obsessed with Orlando (and now, Johnny too…). Nah-you're not a freak! If anyone is…it's me, just ask my friends…j/k! Thanks again! Glad ya liked it! This chappy is a twist in the plot! Hope you liked it!
*Mistress of Mordor (for the review on Chp. 6): Yes, I know…very short…I'm getting to the time where I don't have um…pre-written chapters (if you haven't read my previous A/N's, I usually write in a notebook, and I've had the first like7 or so chapters written out before I started posting…but then, I never had the time to type them all…which was a major bummer…but I'm catching up now…and now after the next chapter, I'll have to start writing them out again…) Wow…I was just reading your review again (like I always do, so that I can reply to them… *-* ) and I have to say, that's one of the best reviews I have ever gotten…like EVER! I love you so much! I'm basically rendered speechless! I'm so happy that you really like this story. I've done my best to try and augment my characters' personalities and movements so that they seem real, and I guess it's paying off! Yeah-I agree, the movie was a bit "skin-deep" on the characters-if you know what I mean. They didn't elaborate a ton, so I guess that's where I come in… *-* And yes, I'll try to pick up my thesaurus more…I do realize that my word usage gets a bit repetitive…ok…maybe a lot…but, yeah-I'll be sure to fix that in my next chapters. And yes, Elizabeth is in quite a predicament… *-* Alright…hope you liked this chapter!!!!
*Gothic-Tinkerbell (for the review on Chp. 2): Thanks!!! What more is there to say? Hm….lets think….nah! Just joshin' ya! *-* : )~ I hope ya like this chapter too!
*Danny (for the review on Chp.6): Hey-thanks for loving it! I love you for loving it! And yeah… I did realize those little mistakes only after I posted the chapter…But yeah…Thanks for telling me! *-* And thanks for saying it rocks-that made my day-really.
*Kari 8 (for the review on Chp. 5): Ok…got it now…asher = different person…
*Asher (for the conjoined review w/ Kari on Chp. 5): Sorry it was soooo short….Chapter 6 is longer…but alas…this one is short too….the next one'll be longer than this one though…though I can't say how much longer….
*Lil Yaten Fae (for the review on Chp. 6): Thanks! I'm glad ya like it! And I promise to continue…
*Legolas 19 (for the review on Chp. 6): Thanks! I'm delighted that you loved it-like I say…I love you for loving it…and I'm updating now…so you should be pleased!!!!
KEEP REVIEWING!!!! I LOVE EACH AND EVERY REVIEW THAT COMES MY WAY!!!! XOXO!!!!