I don't own any of these characters…but I Do wish I owned Orlando Bloom…or Will Turner…or Johnny Depp…or Captain Jack Sparrow…(haha! Van-that'd be a lovely match, that…me and Jack…hehehehe…imagine the types of fun we'd have…not in a nasty sort of way…but, you know me…no one would ever believe me and Jack Sparrow…hehehehe!)
A/N: This is an alternate ending to the movie-I'm sure that if you read the preceding chapters, you'll know what's been going on and whatnot. Savvy? *-*
A/N #2: This is the chapter you wanted…and I'm giving it to you…Savvy? *-* (I love saying that…)
Summary: This is like an alternate ending to the movie…I'm at the spot where well…read the "previously" thing….
Previously on Defeat:
Actually, you know what? I might as well just put the whole chapter up since it was so short-you know? Just…if you absolutely need to refresh your memory, go back and read the last chapter-it's short enough that you aren't really wasting any time…Savvy? *-*
Will and Jack were roughly escorted aboard the battered Black Pearl. Jack was subdued at the thought of never getting his ship back and maybe even going to his death, but that was nothing compared to what Will felt.
Will felt terrible, his hand hurt like hell, and his other hand hurt as well, and both were bleeding freely, which wasn't good… But his head felt the worst. He had gone over the thought about him being the one to basically kill Elizabeth's father. If he hadn't stalled and reflected upon everything…he wouldn't be here right now… But when he thought about it for a little while, he realized he'd probably be at the hangman's noose, alongside Jack, with Elizabeth watching in the crowd…so either way, he actually wasn't much better off…Nonetheless, it wasn't himself that he cared about…why had he risked death and more? Elizabeth. And now she was somewhere with Barbossa and he was doing god-knows-what with her…Inwardly he was kicking the hell out of himself, and his face showed it.
The two pirates "escorting" them down were terribly rough with their captives. They had had the two walk in front of them and every now and again they would prod their prisoner' backs with the tips of their swords so as to make them go faster. One of the escorts even hit Jack on the side of his head with the side of his sword for staggering along too slowly.
Finally, when Jack and Will had reached the bottom of the stairs leading to the brig, they both had a large collection of red dots of blood on their backs. The two escorts each took a prisoner and led them to separate cells. There were six cells, but only five working ones since a cannon had blown one of them open, and Will and Jack's were opposite of each other, with an aisle between them.
The pirate holding Will threw Will into the open cell door and closed it quickly. It left Will on the ground with the wind knocked out of him. It wasn't pleasant-for him to feel or for Jack to see.
Jack's pirate threw him into his cell too, but Jack surprisingly caught his balance before he fell. Before the one pirate could close the door, Jack spoke up.
"Do you think you can untie us, mate?"
The pirate looked at him doubtfully.
Jack then continued, "Seeing as we won't be going anywhere, what with these iron bars and I don't' know…locks and all…it wouldn't do much harm if you untied us, now would it, mate?" He smiled convincingly as he looked at the two pirates.
The one pirate was still looking at him doubtfully when the other, who was locking Will in, spoke. "Oi! Ye can untie 'im, but I got stric' orders not ter unie 'im-from the cap'n."
Jack looked at the speaker. "Hey mate, why can't you untie him?"
"He's been givin' us trouble, so Barbossa decided ter give 'im trouble-spoke 'bou' it earlier."
"That's a load…I didn't see you spedak to him at all," Jack retorted.
The pirate looked mad and it crept in his voice too, "Listen, Sparrow- if yer don't want ter be untied, then keep talkin'."
Jack looked indifferent.
Then he raised his eyebrows. "All right, well, just trying ta do a mate some help…doesn't matter ta me. I could care less, since he got me into this…" Jack looked at Will sternly. " But hey, I'm wonderin'…what's he gonna do when he has to take a piss? Eh?" Jack smiled his golden grin.
" 'E's gonna 'ave ter wet 'is self or somin' cuz we're not untyin' 'im-'e's a bloody littl' blighter; can't trust 'im to stop strugglin' or nothin'."
Jack's grin was still there, "Well, then…it'll be an interesting sight to see when it comes, eh, Will?"
A/N: Hey everybody!!! I know I always ask this, but what'd ya think of it??? This is probably going to be one of the LAST short chapters….Yay!!!! Bring out the champagne!!!!! Yeah-cuz I was looking over my next chapter (and for those of you who're dying to know about it…it'll be with Elizabeth and Barbossa-so you get to see what happens!!!!) and I found a way to lengthen it and add more detail to certain aspects…so yeah…I'll try to post again soon, but seeing as I have to read a book (The Deerslayer) for school and school starts in like less than a week, I probably don't have much time to write…but I'll try-just for you guys…Savvy?
Cheers!
Tati Bloom aka Elf Girl
PS: I love Orlando Bloom!
A HUGE and WONDERFUL Thanks to:
*The Serious Padfoot- Yes, yet another cliffhanger…what a nasty habit I have of doing that… *-* And thanks for saying it was great…I was a bit worried about how I should do it, but I did and well…I hope it turned out great for everyone else! That totally sux for Kathryn! She missed it! I mean, there wasn't much to miss, but still, she missed it! So-yeah…I'm still sniffling about Siri too… Nah-you don't need help…I'm the one who needs it…you should see my drafts of the chapters before I post them…they've got mistakes all over the place (I bet they still do…*-* hehe) but it's because I'm typing in my basement and it's fricking cold, so I'm shivering like mad all the time, which REALLY impairs my typing…. So yeah…glad ya think it's cool!!! And yeah-I have a little 7 year old bother…oops…my bad…BROTHER…who I have to babysit…plus, since he can read, I can't really type this story with him here…which also sux…So yeah…must go reply some more!!!
*English Mystic- Thanks! And yes, you'll get more! In the next chapter! It's a lot longer than this old one….
*Spirit 3- Yes…I did leave you guessing…so sorry…but indeed, it was necessary… *-* Yeah- I'm updating now, and as soon as I type up the next chapter…I'll post! Hopefully that'll be soon though! Yes, poor Will, can't seem to do anything right, eh? Well, just as the tides of the ocean change, his luck should too… *-* And thanks about the pirate talk…god, I was so worried about it…but now that's all I type! I swear, I've had to revise my chapters (and review replies!) just to make sure that there's no extra "ye"s or "yer"s or "arrrrr matey"s…. *-* But not so much of the last one…tee hee….
*Kari 8- Yes, I know I'm a tease….I'm sorry…they'll get longer….
*Asher- Yes, I'm sorry to you too…I'll make them longer…. *-* Just hang in there-savvy?
*Mistress of Mordor- Yes, I liked that review very much, indeed… *-* Yes, I know this chapter was short…and yes, I know that it was probably too short as well…I'm sorry….I'll make up for it with the next chapter (I hope…) To answer your question…I think it should update within like 15 minutes or so…or at least that's what it says it does, and like REALLY quickly after I posted, The Serious Padfoot reviewed, so I think it updates rather quickly…and yah-I think that we're in 2 different time zones….I'm in Central-if it's any help….but shhhh….don't tell anybody… *-* (although it's not as if they don't already know now….oh-but if you mean about me WRITING (in my notebook…) the new chapters at 1 in the morning, YES, I do do that. Bad habit, I know…but hey-it's boring at 1 in the morning and you can't sleep…
*Nibintaur Greenleaf- Cool name!!! Does it mean anything? So yes….dun dun dun….a cliff hanger that will not be answered for a long time….And yes…I know this one was short….sorry…..but yes….it does get people to read, but that's not the reason I do it….it's actually just how I write…I really don't mean for there to be such HUGE cliff hangers at the ends of these chapters…it just HAPPENS!!! Like MAGIC!!!! *plays with Gandalf's staff and sparks fly out….* *-*
PLEASE KEEP REVIEWING!!!! IT HELPS ME WRITE AND GET THINGS UP SOONER, IT'S LIKE A MORAL BOOSTER (if that's what they're called…). SO PLEASE. PLEASE KEEP REVIEWING! THE MORE REVIEWS I GET, THE SOONER THE NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE UP. ALSO, SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY IN GETTING THIS ONE UP…I THOUGHT THAT I'D POSTED IT ALREADY, BUT TURNS OUT IT'S JUST BEEN SITTING IN MY DOCUMENT MANAGER…I'M REALLY, REALLY SMART…..*-*