Before I go any further, I'd like to say one thing. Whoever wrote that inflammatory comment about how sick I am obviously didn't read thoroughly enough. I haven't written anything that was related to sex or any of that nature, besides the intimation that some drunkard was suggesting he might rape Kel. There are plenty of other stories that actually write those things in detail. If you, whoever you are, are terribly offended merely by the fact that Kel drank herself silly in an attempt to get rid of her pain of what she had seen her past year, you condemn the entire human population. I'm sure there are people who don't drink because of their pain but there is still a lot of people who do, and I'm just categorizing Kel to be one of those who drink in sorrow. It's not according to the real book because this is a fan-fiction and I write what I think should happen. I don't see how it is sick to have Kel like Raoul considering the fact that Daine is Numair's lover. I think it was common practice back then and even if you do shun that sort of relationship, you are shunning the marriage practices back then and even now. You can't say that nowadays no one marries someone way above their age. I am extremely offended to consider my work a junk. Obviously the people who commented on my story thinks otherwise. Please keep your inflammatory opinions to yourself.