Konichi wa mina-san! Finally, I was able to make a third person fan
fiction. Now if you guyz, don't like it live it on the review thing, ok?
Anyway, I now present to you the fifth chapter of my first Rave fan
fiction!
But first, the disclaimer.
DISCLAIMER: I do NOT OWN ANY of the anime Rave, any of its characters and the like. They belong to their respective creators/owners. (What's wrong about wanting to own Musica-san and Seig-kun!)
NOW, finally the beginning of the 5th chapter!
The new Rave master Haru Glory has already found 2 out of 4Raves and another Rave known as the Rave of increasing abilities. Together with the girl who lost her memory and harvests the power of Ethelion, ELIE, Homolio Musica a silver claimer and searches for Silver Ray, Let from the Dragon Race, and Akira Blueruby who is a water priestess and searches for the 3rd Rave, the rave of healing, Haru Glory will fight demon card for truth, justice, love, and for hope. Will they succeed in destroying the mother dark bring, Sinclair?
I HOPE SO!!!!
Chapter 5: SUDDENLY
One afternoon, Hebi was cleaning the ship because Musica-sama was going to join them. They would also be going to the Forbidden City. It's almost two o' clock. Musica will soon arrive to prepare the blimp. Then while waiting for Musica, he noticed a beautiful girl with blue eyes, long braided brown wearing brown boots. She looked liked a princess with such beauty...er...for Hebi. He wanted to come near her sadly...but...
"ONLY MUSICA-SAMA HAS THE COURAGE TO DO THAT!!!" he yelled.
He looked at her. Her skin was without a blemish. Her lips were pink not red. And she looked cute while eating ice cream.
Then Hebi decided to make his move. So he waved at the girl. To his surprise, the girl waved back but not to him...
"ko-ni-ch-wa-mi...sss?" Hebi shaked.
"KONICHIWA, Musica-san" she then said "You're late!"
"Gomen, kid" Musica ran towards her.
"Now, give me a tour of your flying machine!" she said "so you can keep the prize."
"Alright, alright" Musica said
"Hey, Hebi." Musica continued. "This is Akira Blueruby."
"Ko...ni...ni...chi...wa..a.a...a, Blue-ru-by-sa-ma...ma...." Hebi said
He was, well he was very nervous. And he was disappointed. Musica was always the one who gets pretty girls. And of course, Hebi was surprised because she was more radiant at closer glance.
"BLUERUBY-SAMA! TAISUKI!" Hebi yelled ....
...
"Okay," Musica began, "This is the deck!"
"Aaahhh, Sugoi!" Aki exclaimed.
Poor Hebi. He has been forgotten.
After an hour Haru and ELIE arrived along with Griff and Plue. Now they were ready to go! Then suddenly when they were near The Forbidden City. A few sent assassins tried to shoot the zeppelin. And they were able to do it! Waaaaaaahhhhhhh!! Evacuate! There seems to be a problem! They're one parachute short! Poor Aki! She was the one who has no parachute!
"You can have my parachute, Blueruby-sama"
"That's yours, Hebi-san" She said, "Hey, Musica give me your parachute!"
"In your dreams, YOU LITTLE BRAT!"
Aki and Musica jumped together fighting over the parachute and seem to move away from the group. They were still fighting but they were able to open the parachute and manage to land safely.
"You little brat," Musica yelled. "You almost got us killed!"
"Like it my fault!" Aki argued, "If you calmly obeyed me and allow me to ride on your back this wouldn't happen"
"Like you said that Brat!"
"Baka!"
"Brat!"
"Baka!"
"Brat!"
Musica then said "Nothing will happen to us if we keep fighting."
"Yeah" Aki replied "Maybe your right. Hey, I heard there's a resort not far from here."
"All right! Let's go there and maybe we can stay there for the night."
"Come on, Baka let's go!" Aki said as cheerful as always.
"If you say so, BRAT!"
As they walk towards the resort or rather the hot springs, they were fighting...as usual.
Meanwhile, Haru, ELIE and the others were looking for Musica and Aki.
"Where could those to be?" ELIE wondered.
"WHERE COULD BLUERUBY-SAMA BE?!" Hebi yelled frantically.
"I know what those are doing right now," Haru said "I bet my life on it. They're fighting."
"Plue-sama, I am afraid that Aki-san and Musica-san will kill each other." Griff was scared.
Anyway, let's go back to Musica and Aki. Oh, looks like they reached the resort.
"You're lucky, there's only one room left" The receptionist said, "and you are Mr. And Mrs.-?"
Aki and Musica were silent.
"Well, actually..." Musica said.
"This is your room. Please enjoy your stay."
"Waaah!! Why didn't you explained it to her!" Aki asked.
"LIKE I HAD A CHANCE TO DO IT! BRAT!"
"BAKA"
"BRAT"
"BAKA"
"Anyway, kid, I'm not going to waste my time arguing with you. I'm going to the hot springs!"
"Whatever you do is not my concern, Musica-san"
While Musica was in the bathhouse, Aki was left alone in the room. Then someone knocked on Aki and Musica's room. Aki opened the door. It was a demon card! She evaded the first blow and reached the corner of the room.
"Are you done attacking?" Aki laughed.
"Almost," he said, "But I'll let you attack first since that would be your last!"
"Whatever!" She yelled "BLAST OF WATER!!!"
"I knew you'd do that!"
The Demon Card then paused and stood up quite unaffected.
"Do you like my Dark Bring?" he then said. "It's called STOP."
"What does it do?" Aki asked.
"It shields its holder and paralyzes the attacker," he answered. "So can you move?!"
Damn, there was something wrong. Aki can't move. The demon Card came closer and tried to sexually assault Aki. Aki was about to lose hope. It's a good thing that Musica was done taking a bath. And when he saw the scene he attacked. At the blink of an eye, he defeated the Demon Card and saved Aki.
Musica comforted Aki after the incident. They were standing over a small bridge. The moon was bright. The fireflies were flying. It was a perfect setting. But not for Aki, she was traumatized from the experience. As a companion, Musica comforted he.
"Musica-san!" Aki wept. She hugged Musica.
"Daijobu Aki." Musica whispered.
Aki was wondering though, not a drop of tear fell during the incident. But when Musica came, she cried like crazy. Musica was also wondering too. He could have just saved aki. He didn't have to comfort her.
"Thanks for saving me." Aki said "I owe you one."
"No problem kid." Musica said.
They kept silent for a long time....
"hey, um-"one of them said.
Then when they looked at each other, they turned their heads at the same time and something happened. Their lips touched. But something was not right. Instead of pulling away, they stayed like that for a long time. Finally, Aki pulled away. They were both blushing!
"BAKA!" Aki yelled. "What was that for?!"
"Listen brat!" Musica shouted "After what I have done for you, this is what I get?!"
"How could you!" Aki shouted back. "That was my first kiss!"
Then suddenly a firefly landed on Aki's nose and it doesn't seem to fly away.
They laughed.
Then another silence came. This ti8me it was a meaningful silence. Musica stared at Aki's eyes. Aki did too. They were just both standing saying nothing. Despite of the silence they both knew what they felt, how they felt for each other.
It was the last thing Musica and Aki would expect to happen to them, to have feelings for each other. After all those quarrels, a simple incident had change the way looked at each other. After a simple kiss, they knew that something began to spark. Especially Musica, he was been with a hundred girls. But this was different.
Aki knew that this was different. Her father introduced her to many guys. What made Musica so different?
Sadly, they were too shy to admit to each other their feelings. They were afraid to say three simple words- I LOVE YOU.....
"Shouldn't you be going to bed now?" Musica suddenly asked.
"I think I'll stay here for a while," Aki replied "Shouldn't you be the one who's going to bed?" "Me? Bed?" Musica laughed. "Kid, the night is till young."
"So, what are you doing out here then?" Aki asked.
"Counting stars." Musica replied. "How about you?"
"Counting stars too." Aki said.
"Usutski." Musica laughed a bit.
"NO really!" Aki shouted.
"Really?" Musica whispered.
"Really."
"Really, Really?"
"Really, really." Aki said
"So I guess you heard the story?" Musica asked.
"I Guess I have."
And over that small bridge, a bond between two hearts formed. It was a mutual feeling. This feeling that could not be expressed by words but understood by two souls, which was united by the thread of destiny.
What do you guyz think? Is it nice?
Anyway the story bout the stars goes like this. I wasn't able to insert it in the story. It is said that there are a billion stars in the universe and by counting one million stars without repeating a single star will make your wish come true.
But first, the disclaimer.
DISCLAIMER: I do NOT OWN ANY of the anime Rave, any of its characters and the like. They belong to their respective creators/owners. (What's wrong about wanting to own Musica-san and Seig-kun!)
NOW, finally the beginning of the 5th chapter!
The new Rave master Haru Glory has already found 2 out of 4Raves and another Rave known as the Rave of increasing abilities. Together with the girl who lost her memory and harvests the power of Ethelion, ELIE, Homolio Musica a silver claimer and searches for Silver Ray, Let from the Dragon Race, and Akira Blueruby who is a water priestess and searches for the 3rd Rave, the rave of healing, Haru Glory will fight demon card for truth, justice, love, and for hope. Will they succeed in destroying the mother dark bring, Sinclair?
I HOPE SO!!!!
Chapter 5: SUDDENLY
One afternoon, Hebi was cleaning the ship because Musica-sama was going to join them. They would also be going to the Forbidden City. It's almost two o' clock. Musica will soon arrive to prepare the blimp. Then while waiting for Musica, he noticed a beautiful girl with blue eyes, long braided brown wearing brown boots. She looked liked a princess with such beauty...er...for Hebi. He wanted to come near her sadly...but...
"ONLY MUSICA-SAMA HAS THE COURAGE TO DO THAT!!!" he yelled.
He looked at her. Her skin was without a blemish. Her lips were pink not red. And she looked cute while eating ice cream.
Then Hebi decided to make his move. So he waved at the girl. To his surprise, the girl waved back but not to him...
"ko-ni-ch-wa-mi...sss?" Hebi shaked.
"KONICHIWA, Musica-san" she then said "You're late!"
"Gomen, kid" Musica ran towards her.
"Now, give me a tour of your flying machine!" she said "so you can keep the prize."
"Alright, alright" Musica said
"Hey, Hebi." Musica continued. "This is Akira Blueruby."
"Ko...ni...ni...chi...wa..a.a...a, Blue-ru-by-sa-ma...ma...." Hebi said
He was, well he was very nervous. And he was disappointed. Musica was always the one who gets pretty girls. And of course, Hebi was surprised because she was more radiant at closer glance.
"BLUERUBY-SAMA! TAISUKI!" Hebi yelled ....
...
"Okay," Musica began, "This is the deck!"
"Aaahhh, Sugoi!" Aki exclaimed.
Poor Hebi. He has been forgotten.
After an hour Haru and ELIE arrived along with Griff and Plue. Now they were ready to go! Then suddenly when they were near The Forbidden City. A few sent assassins tried to shoot the zeppelin. And they were able to do it! Waaaaaaahhhhhhh!! Evacuate! There seems to be a problem! They're one parachute short! Poor Aki! She was the one who has no parachute!
"You can have my parachute, Blueruby-sama"
"That's yours, Hebi-san" She said, "Hey, Musica give me your parachute!"
"In your dreams, YOU LITTLE BRAT!"
Aki and Musica jumped together fighting over the parachute and seem to move away from the group. They were still fighting but they were able to open the parachute and manage to land safely.
"You little brat," Musica yelled. "You almost got us killed!"
"Like it my fault!" Aki argued, "If you calmly obeyed me and allow me to ride on your back this wouldn't happen"
"Like you said that Brat!"
"Baka!"
"Brat!"
"Baka!"
"Brat!"
Musica then said "Nothing will happen to us if we keep fighting."
"Yeah" Aki replied "Maybe your right. Hey, I heard there's a resort not far from here."
"All right! Let's go there and maybe we can stay there for the night."
"Come on, Baka let's go!" Aki said as cheerful as always.
"If you say so, BRAT!"
As they walk towards the resort or rather the hot springs, they were fighting...as usual.
Meanwhile, Haru, ELIE and the others were looking for Musica and Aki.
"Where could those to be?" ELIE wondered.
"WHERE COULD BLUERUBY-SAMA BE?!" Hebi yelled frantically.
"I know what those are doing right now," Haru said "I bet my life on it. They're fighting."
"Plue-sama, I am afraid that Aki-san and Musica-san will kill each other." Griff was scared.
Anyway, let's go back to Musica and Aki. Oh, looks like they reached the resort.
"You're lucky, there's only one room left" The receptionist said, "and you are Mr. And Mrs.-?"
Aki and Musica were silent.
"Well, actually..." Musica said.
"This is your room. Please enjoy your stay."
"Waaah!! Why didn't you explained it to her!" Aki asked.
"LIKE I HAD A CHANCE TO DO IT! BRAT!"
"BAKA"
"BRAT"
"BAKA"
"Anyway, kid, I'm not going to waste my time arguing with you. I'm going to the hot springs!"
"Whatever you do is not my concern, Musica-san"
While Musica was in the bathhouse, Aki was left alone in the room. Then someone knocked on Aki and Musica's room. Aki opened the door. It was a demon card! She evaded the first blow and reached the corner of the room.
"Are you done attacking?" Aki laughed.
"Almost," he said, "But I'll let you attack first since that would be your last!"
"Whatever!" She yelled "BLAST OF WATER!!!"
"I knew you'd do that!"
The Demon Card then paused and stood up quite unaffected.
"Do you like my Dark Bring?" he then said. "It's called STOP."
"What does it do?" Aki asked.
"It shields its holder and paralyzes the attacker," he answered. "So can you move?!"
Damn, there was something wrong. Aki can't move. The demon Card came closer and tried to sexually assault Aki. Aki was about to lose hope. It's a good thing that Musica was done taking a bath. And when he saw the scene he attacked. At the blink of an eye, he defeated the Demon Card and saved Aki.
Musica comforted Aki after the incident. They were standing over a small bridge. The moon was bright. The fireflies were flying. It was a perfect setting. But not for Aki, she was traumatized from the experience. As a companion, Musica comforted he.
"Musica-san!" Aki wept. She hugged Musica.
"Daijobu Aki." Musica whispered.
Aki was wondering though, not a drop of tear fell during the incident. But when Musica came, she cried like crazy. Musica was also wondering too. He could have just saved aki. He didn't have to comfort her.
"Thanks for saving me." Aki said "I owe you one."
"No problem kid." Musica said.
They kept silent for a long time....
"hey, um-"one of them said.
Then when they looked at each other, they turned their heads at the same time and something happened. Their lips touched. But something was not right. Instead of pulling away, they stayed like that for a long time. Finally, Aki pulled away. They were both blushing!
"BAKA!" Aki yelled. "What was that for?!"
"Listen brat!" Musica shouted "After what I have done for you, this is what I get?!"
"How could you!" Aki shouted back. "That was my first kiss!"
Then suddenly a firefly landed on Aki's nose and it doesn't seem to fly away.
They laughed.
Then another silence came. This ti8me it was a meaningful silence. Musica stared at Aki's eyes. Aki did too. They were just both standing saying nothing. Despite of the silence they both knew what they felt, how they felt for each other.
It was the last thing Musica and Aki would expect to happen to them, to have feelings for each other. After all those quarrels, a simple incident had change the way looked at each other. After a simple kiss, they knew that something began to spark. Especially Musica, he was been with a hundred girls. But this was different.
Aki knew that this was different. Her father introduced her to many guys. What made Musica so different?
Sadly, they were too shy to admit to each other their feelings. They were afraid to say three simple words- I LOVE YOU.....
"Shouldn't you be going to bed now?" Musica suddenly asked.
"I think I'll stay here for a while," Aki replied "Shouldn't you be the one who's going to bed?" "Me? Bed?" Musica laughed. "Kid, the night is till young."
"So, what are you doing out here then?" Aki asked.
"Counting stars." Musica replied. "How about you?"
"Counting stars too." Aki said.
"Usutski." Musica laughed a bit.
"NO really!" Aki shouted.
"Really?" Musica whispered.
"Really."
"Really, Really?"
"Really, really." Aki said
"So I guess you heard the story?" Musica asked.
"I Guess I have."
And over that small bridge, a bond between two hearts formed. It was a mutual feeling. This feeling that could not be expressed by words but understood by two souls, which was united by the thread of destiny.
What do you guyz think? Is it nice?
Anyway the story bout the stars goes like this. I wasn't able to insert it in the story. It is said that there are a billion stars in the universe and by counting one million stars without repeating a single star will make your wish come true.