Dark Sides and
True Feelings
A/N: This is the last chapter of my first but not final story. Heh, I already have some ideas for this sequel and a couple more fanfictions. By the way, there is a tiny Inuyasha/Kagome romance I hope you don't mind.
Disclaimer: I don't own Inuyasha, if I did; the entire series would be Miroku/Sango only.
Chapter 18
Inuyasha and Miroku ran until they got very tired due to their wounds. The full moon was already up and they were running for hours. They decided to set up camp in a forest and rest up. Inuyasha placed the sleeping Kagome gently on the ground and smiled warmly at her.
'Kagome, I can finally rest knowing that Kikyou is at peace and Naraku is in hell. Maybe I can tell you how I truly feel now.'
Inuyasha blushed at that thought and looked at Miroku who set Sango near a tree. Inuyasha could tell that Miroku was still shaken up by the incident and was purposely avoiding everyone. He sighed and walked to Miroku quietly so he wouldn't disturb the girls.
"Miroku, are you okay?" Inuyasha asked. He might be rude and arrogant most of the time, but that does not mean that he doesn't care for his comrades.
Miroku looked startled but quickly regained his composure. "Inuyasha, I am fine, really" he lied. He felt weird without his Wind Tunnel on his hand anymore, maybe a little more venerable. Still, he is far from hopeless since he still has his staff and oufdas.
Inuyasha growled in annoyance and said, "Miroku, you're lying, I can tell. Now, are you okay?" Miroku sighed and remembered all the people killed in his darker form. It wasn't like he was possessed either; he did it in his own free will. Miroku gritted his teeth tightly remembering every soul he killed and the blood that he spilled. And how much that he enjoyed it too.
"Inuyasha, when you were in your demon form, did you have the urge to kill everything in sight?" Miroku asked and looked at him dead in the eye. Inuyasha cringed slightly, remembering the bandits that he killed when Gatenmaru showed up.
"Yeah, I can remember everything when I killed them. The blood that I felt on my claws and how much I wanted to kill all of you." Inuyasha responded solemnly. Miroku nodded, Demon Inuyasha and his Dark form were very similar indeed.
"That was exactly how I felt when I was in my darker form. I couldn't control myself at all and I felt the need to kill everything in sight." Miroku replied with guilt in his heart.
Inuyasha nodded, he knew the pain of spilling blood from humans. "You can't let it get you down. We already forgave you and that runt and old hag will probably too. So don't feel guilty all day, if you do, I would beat you up."
Miroku smirked and nodded slowly. "Yeah, thanks Inuyasha, I don't feel as guilty as I did before." With that, Miroku walked to a different tree than Sango's and fell asleep.
Inuyasha grinned at his friend and jumped to a tree, ignoring his wounds and replied,
"Keh, whatever. You can talk to me any time. Just don't go crying on me."
He heard Miroku snort and he smiled to himself. 'Glad to have you back, my friend.' Inuyasha thought and went to sleep on his tree with a peaceful expression.
The morning
Kagome was the first to wake up and she smiled at her sleeping friends. She crawled to Miroku and looked at him worried. She shook his shoulder until he woke up. Miroku looked at her tiredly and asked,
"Is there something you need Kagome-sama?"
Kagome shook her "no" and asked him, "Miroku-sama, are you okay?"
Miroku smiled at her and answered, "Yes, thank you for your concern Kagome-sama." 'I'm lucky to have such good and forgiving friends.'
"That's good, I really missed you. All of us have, especially Sango-chan. We are really glad to have you back." Kagome said and went to cook food.
Miroku smiled at her and responded, "Yeah, I'm glad to be back."
At that moment, Inuyasha jumped from his tree and landed next to Kagome. His wounds have healed; in fact everyone's wounds were healed do to a good rest. Sango groggily woke up and walked to her friends. Miroku walked towards Sango and asked her,
"Sango, did you have a good rest?"
Sango nodded and asked him the same question. Miroku nodded too and both of them walked to their friends.
"Good morning everyone!" Kagome chirped happily. Inuyasha grunted and said,
"Woman, do you have to be so damn loud? My ears can't take your loud hollering!"
Kagome's smile instantly turned into a frown and her eyes blared up in anger. Inuyasha backed away slowly and was about to speak when Kagome shouted,
"SIT!"
Crash
Miroku sighed sadly at his hanyou friend and looked at Sango carefully. He then proceeded to do in what he did best.
Grope
"GAH, PERVERT!"
Smack
Thud
Well, everything is almost back to normal....... At least as normal it can be......
After everyone ate Kagome's cooking, they proceeded back to Kaede's village. Kirara was healed so Miroku and Sango rode her while Kagome rode Inuyasha.
2 hours later
After a nonstop walk to Kaede's village, they made it there in 2 hours. Inuyasha and the group walked to her hut to find Kaede and Shippo sitting on the floor. Shippo looked at Kagome and smiled instantly.
"KAGOME!" The little fox demon jumped into Kagome's arms and snuggled into her chest. Kagome pet his head while everyone sat down near Kaede. Kaede nodded and the group but then set her gaze at Miroku.
"I see that you were able to set him free from the spell. Can ye guys leave Miroku and I to talk?" Kaede asked. The group nodded and walked out of the hut.
"Is there something you need from me Lady Kaede?" Miroku asked. Kaede nodded and sat closer to the young monk.
"Yes, did ye like it when you were in your demon form?" Miroku shook his head "no," but a little part of him liked it. It scared Miroku beyond belief that even a little bit of him liked it. Kaede narrowed her eye and said,
"You're lying, I can see it in your face. A part of you liked it when you were full demon."
Miroku lowered his head and answered "yes." Kaede head her gaze and told him,
"Since ye have experienced the power of a full demon, there is always a part of you that likes it. Now, since your darkness left you, I doubt it you will ever become a crazed full demon again. However, your alter ego is the part of you that liked becoming the demon. It is stronger than ever and it will not ever escape you, for it is a part of you."
Miroku nodded solemnly and answered back, "Yes, but my alter ego wouldn't rise up suddenly. Only another spell can make it come out again."
Kaede nodded and stood up slowly. Miroku stood up too and looked at Kaede worried. She sighed sadly and looked at him with worried eyes,
"That might be true, but if it did happen, what would your alter ego be like?"
He grabbed his staff and put on his slippers and headed towards the door. Miroku turned his back to Kaede and began to walk out.
"I don't know what my alter ego is like, it can be something you would not except or it can by my crazy and bloodthirsty side." With that, Miroku walked out the door to leave Kaede to her own thoughts.
Miroku walked to his friends but noticed a certain fox demon running to him. Shippo jumped into Miroku's arms and he looked at the monk happily.
"Miroku! I'm so glad that you're back with us! I was worried that you would never be the same again!"
Miroku smiled at the fox and walked towards his friends with Shippo in his arms.
"I'm glad to be back, little one."
Shippo jumped onto his shoulder and smiled happily. Inuyasha and the rest smiled at the two and walked towards them. Miroku set down Shippo near Kagome and walked to Sango carefully.
"Hey Sango, can I talk to you privately?"
Sango looked startled by his request but nodded and walked with Miroku to a river nearby. Inuyasha and Kagome looked at each other but decided to leave them alone this time. Shippo muttered something about "grownup talk" and jumped on Kagome's shoulder.
Inuyasha looked at Kagome and smiled at her. 'This is the perfect time to tell her how I feel. I need to get rid of the fox first.'
"Hey Shippo, can you run to Kaede's house and stay there for awhile?" Inuyasha asked kindly. Shippo looked at him weird, but compiled and ran to Kaede's house.
Kagome looked at him strange and asked, "Is there something you need Inuyasha?"
Inuyasha looked at her with a warm smile and clasped her hands with his. Kagome blushed and looked at Inuyasha shyly.
"Kagome, I need to tell you how I feel now. I didn't want to tell you before because of Kikyou and Naraku, but since they are both gone, I will tell you now."
Kagome looked at Inuyasha with hope as he tightened his hold on her hands. Inuyasha sighed deeply and thought, 'Now or never, I must do it now before someone walks in.'
"Kagome, I truly care about for who you are and I never saw you as Kikyou's copy. I never meant any of the things I said to you and I always loved you. You were the first person I truly trusted and you never judged me because I was a hanyou. I wanted to say, that I love you more than I ever loved anybody."
Kagome by now, had tears of joy running down her cheeks. Kagome hugged him and Inuyasha hugged her back.
"Inuyasha, you don't know how long I waited for you to say that. I love you too, Inuyasha."
With that, Inuyasha and Kagome walked hand in hand to Kaede's hut.
To Miroku and Sango
They continued to walk until they reached a river with grass and flowers blooming beautifully. They both sat down and looked at each other intently.
"Sango, are you okay from what happened a few days ago?" he asked her gently.
Sango smiled back to him and nodded truthfully. "How about you, Miroku?"
Miroku smiled back at her and answered, "Yes, thanks to you Sango. You and the others forgave me and everyone that I killed was revived. Naraku is dead and my Wind Tunnel is gone forever."
Sango nodded and asked him, "Miroku, what did you need to talk to me about?"
Miroku took a deep breath and asked her, "Sango, did you truly meant what you said back there? Do you truly love me?"
Sango blushed deeply and said, "Of course Miroku, I would never lie about something like that."
Miroku smiled warmly at her and replied, "Sango, I must confess something." Sango looked at him and told him to go on.
"Well, now that my Wind Tunnel is gone, I can truly tell you how I feel. The reason why I hit on other girls is because I didn't want you to become too attached to me. Still, that doesn't mean I don't like to grope you." To that, Sango glared at him. "Anyways, now that the Wind Tunnel is gone, I need to tell you how I truly feel." With that, Miroku held her hands in his and looked at her dead in the eye with the most serious expression Sango had ever seen.
"Sango, I truly care about you and I loved you ever since I laid eyes on you. When you had the will to go on after Naraku killed your village and family, I was impressed by your determination and strength. Yet, you had the compassion to be a great friend and didn't let vengeance to overcome your every action. You cared for others and helped them without a second thought. Even if you are scarred, I still find you the most beautiful person in the inside and out. I never felt this way to any other girl in my life. I love for who you are and my fondness for you grows everyday."
Sango smiled happily at him and hugged him tightly. Miroku hugged back and after awhile, they broke out of their embrace. They looked at each other dead in the eye and slowly brought their heads together. Their lips met each other and they kissed for the first time.
When they finished kissing, Miroku pulled Sango to his lap and wrapped his arms around her. Sango leaned back to him and they both watched the river flow by.
"Miroku, I'm glad that you admitted your feelings to me"
"I'm glad I did too, Sango, my love." Sango blushed and replied,
"I love you forever, now and even in death." Miroku nodded and spoke,
"I love you too, now and in death." Sango smiled at him then went back in watching the shimmering river with her beloved. Miroku smiled at her and watched the river with his one and only love.
Somewhere else
"So, those two got together?" a voice asked. A shadow appeared and nodded.
"I want my revenge in what he did to me." The shadow said angrily. Another figure appeared and answered,
"Don't worry, we'll all get our revenge."
"Yes and I know the perfect way to make them suffer." the voice said and the other two nodded and disappeared from sight.
A/N: Yep, then my story continues in its sequel, "The Demons Dark Revenge." Yes I know, a crappy title, but I can't think of anything else. I hope you enjoyed my first fanfiction story and look for my upcoming fanfics, "The Long Path to his Heart" and "Appearances CAN be deceiving." Now, a thank you to all of my reviewers!
Yuya- Thank you so much for reviewing my story. I hope you get your account back!
Tache-Thanks, for you were the first person I didn't know who reviewed my story!
Lisa aka Couchpotato44- Thank you for reviewing every single chapter!
Demon-Slayer13- Thank you! I'm glad that you liked my story!
Silver Mirror- Thank you for reviewing my chapters!
DarkHeartKeyblade- I'm glad that you reviewed my story! I like Kingdom Hearts too.
Saori- Thanks for reviewing!
Sango0808- I'm glad that you read my story!
Gamja the Wolf's Fang- Thank you again for those suggestions! Can't wait to read the next chapter in your fic!
Sango- Thanks a bunch!
Meryl The Stampede- Thanks for reviewing! I like Trigun a lot too.
Sango0808- Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad that I didn't kill of Rin. Sometimes, my fingers have a mind on their own.
SangoLancer200- I'm glad you thought it wasn't a horrible cliffy and thank you for reviewing!
Brett- Thanks for reading my story!
Marie Marko- Thanks for reviewing my story, it helps!
genkai1314- I'm glad that you read my story and I like Yu Yu Hakusho too.
kitana-nata- I don't know why people call them a cliffy and I'm glad that you liked chapter 16!
AmberEyez06- I'm glad that my story was suspenseful to you! Glad you don't hate me!
Suicidalslayer- I'm glad that you liked my story and thank you for those compliments!
And a final thank you to all my reviewers! Don't forget to review this chapter!
A/N: This is the last chapter of my first but not final story. Heh, I already have some ideas for this sequel and a couple more fanfictions. By the way, there is a tiny Inuyasha/Kagome romance I hope you don't mind.
Disclaimer: I don't own Inuyasha, if I did; the entire series would be Miroku/Sango only.
Chapter 18
Inuyasha and Miroku ran until they got very tired due to their wounds. The full moon was already up and they were running for hours. They decided to set up camp in a forest and rest up. Inuyasha placed the sleeping Kagome gently on the ground and smiled warmly at her.
'Kagome, I can finally rest knowing that Kikyou is at peace and Naraku is in hell. Maybe I can tell you how I truly feel now.'
Inuyasha blushed at that thought and looked at Miroku who set Sango near a tree. Inuyasha could tell that Miroku was still shaken up by the incident and was purposely avoiding everyone. He sighed and walked to Miroku quietly so he wouldn't disturb the girls.
"Miroku, are you okay?" Inuyasha asked. He might be rude and arrogant most of the time, but that does not mean that he doesn't care for his comrades.
Miroku looked startled but quickly regained his composure. "Inuyasha, I am fine, really" he lied. He felt weird without his Wind Tunnel on his hand anymore, maybe a little more venerable. Still, he is far from hopeless since he still has his staff and oufdas.
Inuyasha growled in annoyance and said, "Miroku, you're lying, I can tell. Now, are you okay?" Miroku sighed and remembered all the people killed in his darker form. It wasn't like he was possessed either; he did it in his own free will. Miroku gritted his teeth tightly remembering every soul he killed and the blood that he spilled. And how much that he enjoyed it too.
"Inuyasha, when you were in your demon form, did you have the urge to kill everything in sight?" Miroku asked and looked at him dead in the eye. Inuyasha cringed slightly, remembering the bandits that he killed when Gatenmaru showed up.
"Yeah, I can remember everything when I killed them. The blood that I felt on my claws and how much I wanted to kill all of you." Inuyasha responded solemnly. Miroku nodded, Demon Inuyasha and his Dark form were very similar indeed.
"That was exactly how I felt when I was in my darker form. I couldn't control myself at all and I felt the need to kill everything in sight." Miroku replied with guilt in his heart.
Inuyasha nodded, he knew the pain of spilling blood from humans. "You can't let it get you down. We already forgave you and that runt and old hag will probably too. So don't feel guilty all day, if you do, I would beat you up."
Miroku smirked and nodded slowly. "Yeah, thanks Inuyasha, I don't feel as guilty as I did before." With that, Miroku walked to a different tree than Sango's and fell asleep.
Inuyasha grinned at his friend and jumped to a tree, ignoring his wounds and replied,
"Keh, whatever. You can talk to me any time. Just don't go crying on me."
He heard Miroku snort and he smiled to himself. 'Glad to have you back, my friend.' Inuyasha thought and went to sleep on his tree with a peaceful expression.
The morning
Kagome was the first to wake up and she smiled at her sleeping friends. She crawled to Miroku and looked at him worried. She shook his shoulder until he woke up. Miroku looked at her tiredly and asked,
"Is there something you need Kagome-sama?"
Kagome shook her "no" and asked him, "Miroku-sama, are you okay?"
Miroku smiled at her and answered, "Yes, thank you for your concern Kagome-sama." 'I'm lucky to have such good and forgiving friends.'
"That's good, I really missed you. All of us have, especially Sango-chan. We are really glad to have you back." Kagome said and went to cook food.
Miroku smiled at her and responded, "Yeah, I'm glad to be back."
At that moment, Inuyasha jumped from his tree and landed next to Kagome. His wounds have healed; in fact everyone's wounds were healed do to a good rest. Sango groggily woke up and walked to her friends. Miroku walked towards Sango and asked her,
"Sango, did you have a good rest?"
Sango nodded and asked him the same question. Miroku nodded too and both of them walked to their friends.
"Good morning everyone!" Kagome chirped happily. Inuyasha grunted and said,
"Woman, do you have to be so damn loud? My ears can't take your loud hollering!"
Kagome's smile instantly turned into a frown and her eyes blared up in anger. Inuyasha backed away slowly and was about to speak when Kagome shouted,
"SIT!"
Crash
Miroku sighed sadly at his hanyou friend and looked at Sango carefully. He then proceeded to do in what he did best.
Grope
"GAH, PERVERT!"
Smack
Thud
Well, everything is almost back to normal....... At least as normal it can be......
After everyone ate Kagome's cooking, they proceeded back to Kaede's village. Kirara was healed so Miroku and Sango rode her while Kagome rode Inuyasha.
2 hours later
After a nonstop walk to Kaede's village, they made it there in 2 hours. Inuyasha and the group walked to her hut to find Kaede and Shippo sitting on the floor. Shippo looked at Kagome and smiled instantly.
"KAGOME!" The little fox demon jumped into Kagome's arms and snuggled into her chest. Kagome pet his head while everyone sat down near Kaede. Kaede nodded and the group but then set her gaze at Miroku.
"I see that you were able to set him free from the spell. Can ye guys leave Miroku and I to talk?" Kaede asked. The group nodded and walked out of the hut.
"Is there something you need from me Lady Kaede?" Miroku asked. Kaede nodded and sat closer to the young monk.
"Yes, did ye like it when you were in your demon form?" Miroku shook his head "no," but a little part of him liked it. It scared Miroku beyond belief that even a little bit of him liked it. Kaede narrowed her eye and said,
"You're lying, I can see it in your face. A part of you liked it when you were full demon."
Miroku lowered his head and answered "yes." Kaede head her gaze and told him,
"Since ye have experienced the power of a full demon, there is always a part of you that likes it. Now, since your darkness left you, I doubt it you will ever become a crazed full demon again. However, your alter ego is the part of you that liked becoming the demon. It is stronger than ever and it will not ever escape you, for it is a part of you."
Miroku nodded solemnly and answered back, "Yes, but my alter ego wouldn't rise up suddenly. Only another spell can make it come out again."
Kaede nodded and stood up slowly. Miroku stood up too and looked at Kaede worried. She sighed sadly and looked at him with worried eyes,
"That might be true, but if it did happen, what would your alter ego be like?"
He grabbed his staff and put on his slippers and headed towards the door. Miroku turned his back to Kaede and began to walk out.
"I don't know what my alter ego is like, it can be something you would not except or it can by my crazy and bloodthirsty side." With that, Miroku walked out the door to leave Kaede to her own thoughts.
Miroku walked to his friends but noticed a certain fox demon running to him. Shippo jumped into Miroku's arms and he looked at the monk happily.
"Miroku! I'm so glad that you're back with us! I was worried that you would never be the same again!"
Miroku smiled at the fox and walked towards his friends with Shippo in his arms.
"I'm glad to be back, little one."
Shippo jumped onto his shoulder and smiled happily. Inuyasha and the rest smiled at the two and walked towards them. Miroku set down Shippo near Kagome and walked to Sango carefully.
"Hey Sango, can I talk to you privately?"
Sango looked startled by his request but nodded and walked with Miroku to a river nearby. Inuyasha and Kagome looked at each other but decided to leave them alone this time. Shippo muttered something about "grownup talk" and jumped on Kagome's shoulder.
Inuyasha looked at Kagome and smiled at her. 'This is the perfect time to tell her how I feel. I need to get rid of the fox first.'
"Hey Shippo, can you run to Kaede's house and stay there for awhile?" Inuyasha asked kindly. Shippo looked at him weird, but compiled and ran to Kaede's house.
Kagome looked at him strange and asked, "Is there something you need Inuyasha?"
Inuyasha looked at her with a warm smile and clasped her hands with his. Kagome blushed and looked at Inuyasha shyly.
"Kagome, I need to tell you how I feel now. I didn't want to tell you before because of Kikyou and Naraku, but since they are both gone, I will tell you now."
Kagome looked at Inuyasha with hope as he tightened his hold on her hands. Inuyasha sighed deeply and thought, 'Now or never, I must do it now before someone walks in.'
"Kagome, I truly care about for who you are and I never saw you as Kikyou's copy. I never meant any of the things I said to you and I always loved you. You were the first person I truly trusted and you never judged me because I was a hanyou. I wanted to say, that I love you more than I ever loved anybody."
Kagome by now, had tears of joy running down her cheeks. Kagome hugged him and Inuyasha hugged her back.
"Inuyasha, you don't know how long I waited for you to say that. I love you too, Inuyasha."
With that, Inuyasha and Kagome walked hand in hand to Kaede's hut.
To Miroku and Sango
They continued to walk until they reached a river with grass and flowers blooming beautifully. They both sat down and looked at each other intently.
"Sango, are you okay from what happened a few days ago?" he asked her gently.
Sango smiled back to him and nodded truthfully. "How about you, Miroku?"
Miroku smiled back at her and answered, "Yes, thanks to you Sango. You and the others forgave me and everyone that I killed was revived. Naraku is dead and my Wind Tunnel is gone forever."
Sango nodded and asked him, "Miroku, what did you need to talk to me about?"
Miroku took a deep breath and asked her, "Sango, did you truly meant what you said back there? Do you truly love me?"
Sango blushed deeply and said, "Of course Miroku, I would never lie about something like that."
Miroku smiled warmly at her and replied, "Sango, I must confess something." Sango looked at him and told him to go on.
"Well, now that my Wind Tunnel is gone, I can truly tell you how I feel. The reason why I hit on other girls is because I didn't want you to become too attached to me. Still, that doesn't mean I don't like to grope you." To that, Sango glared at him. "Anyways, now that the Wind Tunnel is gone, I need to tell you how I truly feel." With that, Miroku held her hands in his and looked at her dead in the eye with the most serious expression Sango had ever seen.
"Sango, I truly care about you and I loved you ever since I laid eyes on you. When you had the will to go on after Naraku killed your village and family, I was impressed by your determination and strength. Yet, you had the compassion to be a great friend and didn't let vengeance to overcome your every action. You cared for others and helped them without a second thought. Even if you are scarred, I still find you the most beautiful person in the inside and out. I never felt this way to any other girl in my life. I love for who you are and my fondness for you grows everyday."
Sango smiled happily at him and hugged him tightly. Miroku hugged back and after awhile, they broke out of their embrace. They looked at each other dead in the eye and slowly brought their heads together. Their lips met each other and they kissed for the first time.
When they finished kissing, Miroku pulled Sango to his lap and wrapped his arms around her. Sango leaned back to him and they both watched the river flow by.
"Miroku, I'm glad that you admitted your feelings to me"
"I'm glad I did too, Sango, my love." Sango blushed and replied,
"I love you forever, now and even in death." Miroku nodded and spoke,
"I love you too, now and in death." Sango smiled at him then went back in watching the shimmering river with her beloved. Miroku smiled at her and watched the river with his one and only love.
Somewhere else
"So, those two got together?" a voice asked. A shadow appeared and nodded.
"I want my revenge in what he did to me." The shadow said angrily. Another figure appeared and answered,
"Don't worry, we'll all get our revenge."
"Yes and I know the perfect way to make them suffer." the voice said and the other two nodded and disappeared from sight.
A/N: Yep, then my story continues in its sequel, "The Demons Dark Revenge." Yes I know, a crappy title, but I can't think of anything else. I hope you enjoyed my first fanfiction story and look for my upcoming fanfics, "The Long Path to his Heart" and "Appearances CAN be deceiving." Now, a thank you to all of my reviewers!
Yuya- Thank you so much for reviewing my story. I hope you get your account back!
Tache-Thanks, for you were the first person I didn't know who reviewed my story!
Lisa aka Couchpotato44- Thank you for reviewing every single chapter!
Demon-Slayer13- Thank you! I'm glad that you liked my story!
Silver Mirror- Thank you for reviewing my chapters!
DarkHeartKeyblade- I'm glad that you reviewed my story! I like Kingdom Hearts too.
Saori- Thanks for reviewing!
Sango0808- I'm glad that you read my story!
Gamja the Wolf's Fang- Thank you again for those suggestions! Can't wait to read the next chapter in your fic!
Sango- Thanks a bunch!
Meryl The Stampede- Thanks for reviewing! I like Trigun a lot too.
Sango0808- Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad that I didn't kill of Rin. Sometimes, my fingers have a mind on their own.
SangoLancer200- I'm glad you thought it wasn't a horrible cliffy and thank you for reviewing!
Brett- Thanks for reading my story!
Marie Marko- Thanks for reviewing my story, it helps!
genkai1314- I'm glad that you read my story and I like Yu Yu Hakusho too.
kitana-nata- I don't know why people call them a cliffy and I'm glad that you liked chapter 16!
AmberEyez06- I'm glad that my story was suspenseful to you! Glad you don't hate me!
Suicidalslayer- I'm glad that you liked my story and thank you for those compliments!
And a final thank you to all my reviewers! Don't forget to review this chapter!