*Thank you! *
I just want to say before I go any further is that I was inspired from the fanfic "Sky Dweller." Also sorry for leaving on cliffhangers but that's how it is. Aaah, don't kill me, give me mercy!!!
Lets us continue where we left:
Kaoru's eyes glinted fiercely as they were fixed tightly on the hooded creature. It had a strong grip, and some sort of fragment was submerging in her skin, blood was beginning to drip slowly down her flesh, her heart- shaped face beginning to turn into a ghostly pale.
She looked at him deeper, trying to reveal and unfold the kidnapper that wanted her. No villager wanted one thin fingernail from her, why would he want her whole body, including a tempered soul.
The creature slowly revealed its hood, Kaoru stood quiet as it had a blade in its sheath, it bang harshly on its thigh or whatever it was in legs.
Slowly, the hood slid off the creature, until it was left lapped against his back.
Before her black thick eyelashes could blink, her raven hair even move in the slightest, she felt a nailing claw on her jaw, cringed on her high cheekbones, she yelped.
The last thing she remembered was a raspy moan and her eyelids slowly fell, and it was pitch black. Sleep was claiming her, and unconsciousness slithered through her whole body.
~~~
Change will come
cold and warm
male and woman
will merge.
Love will slide
Through hatred
And despise
Love will claim them both
All they need to complete
Is faith and trust, themselves
Will they be able
To complete the task?
Love will claim them both
Love will claim them both
Love will give them joy
Love will give them anguish
Love will come from both
Love will have them both.
~~~
It was a strange chant Kaoru never heard. It seemed to flow out of the thin mist, flowing smoothly through her ears, and yet it was so smooth, but so much emotion came from just the utter of the words.
A thin ivory mist slowly was drifting in a dull grayish sky, and then suddenly a graceful, pure dove flying slowly in the sky, caught Kaoru's bewilder eyes.
Its wings vigorously flapped and its muscles slowly moved back and forth in elegant motion as it was lifting in the mist of dull gray.
Its eyes were a gleaming azure that was like thin, turquoise, beady rubies, its radiant glow, was astonishing and precious.
Suddenly a crimson slash whipped on the dove's breast, as gushing blood was thrashing quickly out of its delicate body. Then a quick whip slipped on its ivory, thin throat.
The bird squealed death, a horror sound that ringed out in the sky.
Slowly the bird began to fly slower, still screaming out its death, its last moment of breathing life. Kaoru stared in complete horror, for she stood there still, the only thing that moved was her breast, for she was breathing hard.
Then the smell came, metallic formed, and the sickening smell of dribbling blood, and a sense of anguish.
"No, No!!!" Kaoru shrieked in horror suddenly regaining her voice.
A black raven then appeared its eyes gold, no irises, or pupils, just utter gold. Blood sappy, blood hung from its sharp beak, and she saw a twisted grin form.
It seemed to pleasure this, the horror that she had taken, it seamed to pleasure her tears that were like sparkling diamonds, glimmering weakly.
The blood suddenly disappeared, and its gray beak flashed, but its eyes glowed stronger, till it blinded Kaoru's lapis eyes.
Kaoru staggered back, her pale hands were protecting her red-splotched face, and eyes that ringed in puffy, irritating cerise, but her face was a trembling magenta, almost resembling a rose.
Her nose was pint-tip; another diamond ebbed off her face, and she looked at it fiercely.
"You made it rain blood.. you made it rain blood."
The dream slowly dissolved around her, turning into a mesh blur, she was traveling away through the void of dreams until reality.
~~~
It was a strange dream; Kaoru suddenly woke, a cold dry tear spewing from her soggy eyes.
She was hanging on a rough, bold shoulder, and looking at mahogany trunks, others were a reddish-brown and others had cinnamon twisted branches.
She saw the crescent moon, but it was rimmed with a creamy tawny.
She struggled to look back, but the grip was rough and firm, and she was paralyzed from her position.
She swallowed and felt her cheeks burning crimson. "W where am I?"
The hooded creature did not answer but kept walking through the strange trails of trees.
A tender wind blew, and she managed to see a thick, ruby tendril.
It had red hair, or red fur, or red tentacles, or red something. That was her first description of the hood creature.
"Where are we going?" Kaoru tried to crack the silence, and get some answers.
"Listen to me!!" Kaoru shrieked in irritating anger. "The village." That was its short reply, it seemed emotionless but it had a low handsome voice as well.
"The village?" Kaoru whisper in awe to herself. There were other people as himself? Too many questions, and not enough answers.
Suddenly the ivory moon sailed through a couple of clouds, tiny, plumpish clouds, that gathered together in a tight-knit group.
Kaoru remembered the girls; at least the moon and silver stars did not give her sullen stares and unwelcoming glance of discomfort.
They welcome and pleasure with her for who she was and nothing else. She felt another beady tear lap on her thick, black eyelashes that rimmed her lazuli eyes so beautifully.
Though she blinked hard in anger, she suffered so much in her life; this was too much for her torn soul to bear.
Slowly the backgrounds around them changed, old, weeping trees to chopped stumps, and dewed, crisp, lime, flourishing flowers.
Some Kaoru never laid eyes in her life, one was mixed with royal blue, rimmed in sapphire, and flashy yellow, and the petals were dabbed in corpulent silver. Other even had pieces of strawberry, slices of the pinkish fruits piles flatly, and plump in the middle of the circle of the flower.
It was astonishing, and amazing; Kaoru gaped and gawked at the lovely delicacies.
Then the walking of the hooded mystery had begin to go in a slower, weary pace, until finally he stopped on a luscious green hill, the illumining emerald tips swaying in motion.
"We are here, the village." The hooded creature aforesaid raspy, and proud.
"The village...."
~~~
All they need to complete is thy faith, and trust
Themselves
Will they be
Able to complete
Thy task?
Along be trouble
The way.
~~~
I know, I know confusing, eh? But the story is beginning to unravel, wait for the next chapter okay. Also I need more reviews!! Also sorry for the bloody scenes but it had to come. Should I rate this PG13 should I? Thanks:
Magiabruxa, thanks for reviewing, also hope I spelled it right.
And: Nanakilover/Brukaoru, thanks also for reviewing for my story.
Also Lets no forget Elven Mischief: Thanks, all!
I just want to ask something is there something I can improve in my writing that others would like. Oh well, thanks I might do the next chap. For Saturday, look for it! Also I had problems putting this chap. On sorry..
Rock on!!
I just want to say before I go any further is that I was inspired from the fanfic "Sky Dweller." Also sorry for leaving on cliffhangers but that's how it is. Aaah, don't kill me, give me mercy!!!
Lets us continue where we left:
Kaoru's eyes glinted fiercely as they were fixed tightly on the hooded creature. It had a strong grip, and some sort of fragment was submerging in her skin, blood was beginning to drip slowly down her flesh, her heart- shaped face beginning to turn into a ghostly pale.
She looked at him deeper, trying to reveal and unfold the kidnapper that wanted her. No villager wanted one thin fingernail from her, why would he want her whole body, including a tempered soul.
The creature slowly revealed its hood, Kaoru stood quiet as it had a blade in its sheath, it bang harshly on its thigh or whatever it was in legs.
Slowly, the hood slid off the creature, until it was left lapped against his back.
Before her black thick eyelashes could blink, her raven hair even move in the slightest, she felt a nailing claw on her jaw, cringed on her high cheekbones, she yelped.
The last thing she remembered was a raspy moan and her eyelids slowly fell, and it was pitch black. Sleep was claiming her, and unconsciousness slithered through her whole body.
~~~
Change will come
cold and warm
male and woman
will merge.
Love will slide
Through hatred
And despise
Love will claim them both
All they need to complete
Is faith and trust, themselves
Will they be able
To complete the task?
Love will claim them both
Love will claim them both
Love will give them joy
Love will give them anguish
Love will come from both
Love will have them both.
~~~
It was a strange chant Kaoru never heard. It seemed to flow out of the thin mist, flowing smoothly through her ears, and yet it was so smooth, but so much emotion came from just the utter of the words.
A thin ivory mist slowly was drifting in a dull grayish sky, and then suddenly a graceful, pure dove flying slowly in the sky, caught Kaoru's bewilder eyes.
Its wings vigorously flapped and its muscles slowly moved back and forth in elegant motion as it was lifting in the mist of dull gray.
Its eyes were a gleaming azure that was like thin, turquoise, beady rubies, its radiant glow, was astonishing and precious.
Suddenly a crimson slash whipped on the dove's breast, as gushing blood was thrashing quickly out of its delicate body. Then a quick whip slipped on its ivory, thin throat.
The bird squealed death, a horror sound that ringed out in the sky.
Slowly the bird began to fly slower, still screaming out its death, its last moment of breathing life. Kaoru stared in complete horror, for she stood there still, the only thing that moved was her breast, for she was breathing hard.
Then the smell came, metallic formed, and the sickening smell of dribbling blood, and a sense of anguish.
"No, No!!!" Kaoru shrieked in horror suddenly regaining her voice.
A black raven then appeared its eyes gold, no irises, or pupils, just utter gold. Blood sappy, blood hung from its sharp beak, and she saw a twisted grin form.
It seemed to pleasure this, the horror that she had taken, it seamed to pleasure her tears that were like sparkling diamonds, glimmering weakly.
The blood suddenly disappeared, and its gray beak flashed, but its eyes glowed stronger, till it blinded Kaoru's lapis eyes.
Kaoru staggered back, her pale hands were protecting her red-splotched face, and eyes that ringed in puffy, irritating cerise, but her face was a trembling magenta, almost resembling a rose.
Her nose was pint-tip; another diamond ebbed off her face, and she looked at it fiercely.
"You made it rain blood.. you made it rain blood."
The dream slowly dissolved around her, turning into a mesh blur, she was traveling away through the void of dreams until reality.
~~~
It was a strange dream; Kaoru suddenly woke, a cold dry tear spewing from her soggy eyes.
She was hanging on a rough, bold shoulder, and looking at mahogany trunks, others were a reddish-brown and others had cinnamon twisted branches.
She saw the crescent moon, but it was rimmed with a creamy tawny.
She struggled to look back, but the grip was rough and firm, and she was paralyzed from her position.
She swallowed and felt her cheeks burning crimson. "W where am I?"
The hooded creature did not answer but kept walking through the strange trails of trees.
A tender wind blew, and she managed to see a thick, ruby tendril.
It had red hair, or red fur, or red tentacles, or red something. That was her first description of the hood creature.
"Where are we going?" Kaoru tried to crack the silence, and get some answers.
"Listen to me!!" Kaoru shrieked in irritating anger. "The village." That was its short reply, it seemed emotionless but it had a low handsome voice as well.
"The village?" Kaoru whisper in awe to herself. There were other people as himself? Too many questions, and not enough answers.
Suddenly the ivory moon sailed through a couple of clouds, tiny, plumpish clouds, that gathered together in a tight-knit group.
Kaoru remembered the girls; at least the moon and silver stars did not give her sullen stares and unwelcoming glance of discomfort.
They welcome and pleasure with her for who she was and nothing else. She felt another beady tear lap on her thick, black eyelashes that rimmed her lazuli eyes so beautifully.
Though she blinked hard in anger, she suffered so much in her life; this was too much for her torn soul to bear.
Slowly the backgrounds around them changed, old, weeping trees to chopped stumps, and dewed, crisp, lime, flourishing flowers.
Some Kaoru never laid eyes in her life, one was mixed with royal blue, rimmed in sapphire, and flashy yellow, and the petals were dabbed in corpulent silver. Other even had pieces of strawberry, slices of the pinkish fruits piles flatly, and plump in the middle of the circle of the flower.
It was astonishing, and amazing; Kaoru gaped and gawked at the lovely delicacies.
Then the walking of the hooded mystery had begin to go in a slower, weary pace, until finally he stopped on a luscious green hill, the illumining emerald tips swaying in motion.
"We are here, the village." The hooded creature aforesaid raspy, and proud.
"The village...."
~~~
All they need to complete is thy faith, and trust
Themselves
Will they be
Able to complete
Thy task?
Along be trouble
The way.
~~~
I know, I know confusing, eh? But the story is beginning to unravel, wait for the next chapter okay. Also I need more reviews!! Also sorry for the bloody scenes but it had to come. Should I rate this PG13 should I? Thanks:
Magiabruxa, thanks for reviewing, also hope I spelled it right.
And: Nanakilover/Brukaoru, thanks also for reviewing for my story.
Also Lets no forget Elven Mischief: Thanks, all!
I just want to ask something is there something I can improve in my writing that others would like. Oh well, thanks I might do the next chap. For Saturday, look for it! Also I had problems putting this chap. On sorry..
Rock on!!