Material Girl
Thank you for all the reviews! I have to thank everyone individually. I'm sorry if I skip anyone, but I don't want to be too repetitive. Also, There's so many.
Annala: I think they're lovely names too! At some point I thought about legally changing my name to Narcissa (don't ask. Lol!). I think Bellatrix is just a sweet name even if it belongs to evil herself, lol! And Andromeda is just quite a different name that you can't help but like.
Weasleylover: Thank you so much for reviewing!!! As I always say in my reviews, I love your fic. J I'll read the new chapter as soon as possible. Also, I'm not sure if I am siding with Bellatrix… Hm… I suppose we'll see!
Krissy: I think there are more mental notes in this chapter. :)
Funkylover69: I have read ootp, but I started writing this before I finished reading it. Narcissa probably wouldn't like him because… Well… I'm not sure. :\ Let's just say she prefers blondes?
Anonymous: I apologise for the bad grammar, etc. I only installed Microsoft word after I uploaded it. I will re-format the first chapter soon though.
Peeves: Thanks for the good points. I can give answers and reasons for both. The title was named after a song that inspired me to write this. The family are not very strict for their own reasons. Charles is strict but he's also soft if you get what I'm saying. Costosa is just… Well…a bit dippy! Andromeda is slightly disliked because she is such good friends with Sirius and she likes muggles. Bellatrix…Ah. I have plans for her. And Narcissa… She's just a strong girl with a mind of her own. Okay. Never mind.
Fernie: I'll probably add more Nicknames later! We'll see! Thanks for reviewing!
Leibling: I think Nissa's quite a cute nickname too. It's a bit like the nickname of one of my friends, We call her nessy. Lol! Never mind. Also, The typos SHOULD stop. :)
Siri's Angel: The Sirius dissing was in no way intentionally! I really like Sirius so I won't insult him badly. I'm glad you find it funny.
Chapters will now be formatted in Microsoft word!!! That means less typos and Grammar mistakes! *Shock horror*
Disclaimers: Most of the characters do not belong to me. Thank you.
(Narcissa's Thoughts are in Brackets.)
Narcissa and her sisters got their coats then slowly put them back as they Remembered the temperature.
"Are we ready?" their father called as he entered the room. The girls nodded and Picked up their broomsticks (I so need that new Nimbus 1002. My Shooting star has The flying capacity of a muggle.)
"Remember to fly low and together." he ordered as they exited the door. The Sunshine was bright and hot.
"Let's go!!!" The all mounted their broomsticks and flew.
They arrived in a London Alleyway. They crept around and entered a pub called
The Leaky Cauldron. The sign had been freshly painted.
"Hi Mister and missus Black!" a Young boy over the counter called. "And Daughters!" He winked at Bellatrix.
"Hi Tom!" Bellatrix smiled at him in a flirty fashion. (Ugh. This display is Making me sick.)
"Come, Bellatrix. We've got a lot to do this morning. We can come back later." Costosa snapped grabbing Bellatrix's arm.
Charles pushed through and tapped some bricks in the back wall of the pub with a Cane he carried.
"Come on everyone!" he called gruffly. Narcissa and Andromeda walked over Automatically but Costosa was having trouble dragging Bellatrix.
"Ah! Smell the air! We're here! Diagon Alley!!!" Charles shouted. He breathed in
The air. (Man, Does he have to do that in public? It's embarrassing.)
The alley was packed with Witches and Wizards. Mostly Hogwarts Students Purchasing supplies for the year ahead.
"Oh! Father! Look over there! It's the latest Broomstick! I'm sure all the PREFECTS have one!" Narcissa hinted. She put extra emphasise on Prefects.
"Oh? You became a prefect? We might as well get you one. Want one, Bellatrix?" Charles replied.
"Sure!!!" Bellatrix replied evilly.
"Uh! Mummy! She isn't even a prefect! I AM a prefect and I didn't get anything When I became one!!!" Andromeda whined.
"All right! Charles, Get her one too." Costosa growled.
Narcissa heard her father angrily mutter something like "Might as well buy Brooms for the entire Quittitch team!" She knew he was being sarcastic though.
They walked into the Quidditch supplies shop.
A young sporty looking witch greeted them. "Welcome! Do you need any Assistance?" she asked.
"Yes, as matter of fact. We would like three of those Nimbus thingies." Charles Grunted (Tut! He knows NOTHING about Quidditch! He was always too snobby to care.)
Narcissa was at the window stroking the smooth wooden handle of the Nimbus 1001. Bellatrix quickly pulled a twig from the end and started poking Andromeda with it.
A Few minutes later, Charles and Costosa had filled in the order forms. "Come on You three. Stop fussing over the broom, You'll be getting your own when we get Home." Charles snapped. Beaming, they left the shop.
They walked along until Charles came across someone he knew from work.
"AH!!! Draco! How are you?!?!" Charles shouted as he shook the hand of a tall Stern man with long slick blonde hair and a thin pale face.
"How are you Charles? And Costosa?" he smiled in a way that was friendly for such a stern looking person.
"Very good. Very Good. Ah! Have you met my daughters? Andromeda, Bellatrix and Our youngest, Narcissa." Charles beamed proudly.
"Nice to meet you all. This is my son, Lucius!!!" he said signalling towards a Teenage boy with long blonde hair tied back in a bow.
Narcissa backed away in repulse.
"Hello Narcissa." he sneered holding out his hand for her to shake.
"Good morning Lucius." she replied shaking his hand against her will.
"Oh yes! You two know each other from school, don't you? Marvellous!" Draco sneered.
"You look beautiful today, Narcissa." Lucius smiled sadistically while kissing her hand. (Creep. Double Creep. Super Creep.)
"Thank you. Maybe it's something to do with this." she said holding up her prefects badge.
"Perfect! I was worried that my companion would be someone ghastly!" he jeered.
"Lucius, What are you talking about?" she asked.
"Snap!" he sneered while holding up his badge.
Draco and Charles smiled. Narcissa knew better than to complain.
"Terrific!" she said with a fake smile.
"How about we all go to Florean Fortesques for Ice cream? I hear they've got a new flavour, Chocolate and Raspberry with chopped nuts." Charles cheered.
"Good idea! Lucius and Narcissa can talk about... whatever comes to their minds!" Draco sneered. (Great. Might as well buy my wedding dress now, Shall we?)
Narcissa threw herself quite dramatically on a dining chair in front of the Ice cream parlour. Lucius sat opposite.
"It's going to be so much fun, being prefects! We can give detentions freely, boss people around and be best friends!" he smiled maliciously.
"Go hug a Lethifold." she snorted. (He is so annoying, So Arrogant, So Power mad. It's such a pity that he's so gorgeous as well. Still. He deserves all the aggression I give him.)
"Hm? Feisty." Lucius sniggered.
Narcissa chose to completely ignore him.
Thank you for all the reviews! I have to thank everyone individually. I'm sorry if I skip anyone, but I don't want to be too repetitive. Also, There's so many.
Chapters will now be formatted in Microsoft word!!! That means less typos and Grammar mistakes! *Shock horror*
Disclaimers: Most of the characters do not belong to me. Thank you.
(Narcissa's Thoughts are in Brackets.)
Narcissa and her sisters got their coats then slowly put them back as they Remembered the temperature.
"Are we ready?" their father called as he entered the room. The girls nodded and Picked up their broomsticks (I so need that new Nimbus 1002. My Shooting star has The flying capacity of a muggle.)
"Remember to fly low and together." he ordered as they exited the door. The Sunshine was bright and hot.
"Let's go!!!" The all mounted their broomsticks and flew.
"Hi Mister and missus Black!" a Young boy over the counter called. "And Daughters!" He winked at Bellatrix.
"Hi Tom!" Bellatrix smiled at him in a flirty fashion. (Ugh. This display is Making me sick.)
"Come, Bellatrix. We've got a lot to do this morning. We can come back later." Costosa snapped grabbing Bellatrix's arm.
Charles pushed through and tapped some bricks in the back wall of the pub with a Cane he carried.
"Come on everyone!" he called gruffly. Narcissa and Andromeda walked over Automatically but Costosa was having trouble dragging Bellatrix.
The alley was packed with Witches and Wizards. Mostly Hogwarts Students Purchasing supplies for the year ahead.
"Oh! Father! Look over there! It's the latest Broomstick! I'm sure all the PREFECTS have one!" Narcissa hinted. She put extra emphasise on Prefects.
"Oh? You became a prefect? We might as well get you one. Want one, Bellatrix?" Charles replied.
"Sure!!!" Bellatrix replied evilly.
"Uh! Mummy! She isn't even a prefect! I AM a prefect and I didn't get anything When I became one!!!" Andromeda whined.
"All right! Charles, Get her one too." Costosa growled.
Narcissa heard her father angrily mutter something like "Might as well buy Brooms for the entire Quittitch team!" She knew he was being sarcastic though.
They walked into the Quidditch supplies shop.
A young sporty looking witch greeted them. "Welcome! Do you need any Assistance?" she asked.
"Yes, as matter of fact. We would like three of those Nimbus thingies." Charles Grunted (Tut! He knows NOTHING about Quidditch! He was always too snobby to care.)
Narcissa was at the window stroking the smooth wooden handle of the Nimbus 1001. Bellatrix quickly pulled a twig from the end and started poking Andromeda with it.
A Few minutes later, Charles and Costosa had filled in the order forms. "Come on You three. Stop fussing over the broom, You'll be getting your own when we get Home." Charles snapped. Beaming, they left the shop.
"AH!!! Draco! How are you?!?!" Charles shouted as he shook the hand of a tall Stern man with long slick blonde hair and a thin pale face.
"How are you Charles? And Costosa?" he smiled in a way that was friendly for such a stern looking person.
"Very good. Very Good. Ah! Have you met my daughters? Andromeda, Bellatrix and Our youngest, Narcissa." Charles beamed proudly.
"Nice to meet you all. This is my son, Lucius!!!" he said signalling towards a Teenage boy with long blonde hair tied back in a bow.
Narcissa backed away in repulse.
"Hello Narcissa." he sneered holding out his hand for her to shake.
"Good morning Lucius." she replied shaking his hand against her will.
"Oh yes! You two know each other from school, don't you? Marvellous!" Draco sneered.
"You look beautiful today, Narcissa." Lucius smiled sadistically while kissing her hand. (Creep. Double Creep. Super Creep.)
"Thank you. Maybe it's something to do with this." she said holding up her prefects badge.
"Perfect! I was worried that my companion would be someone ghastly!" he jeered.
"Lucius, What are you talking about?" she asked.
"Snap!" he sneered while holding up his badge.
Draco and Charles smiled. Narcissa knew better than to complain.
"Terrific!" she said with a fake smile.
"How about we all go to Florean Fortesques for Ice cream? I hear they've got a new flavour, Chocolate and Raspberry with chopped nuts." Charles cheered.
"Good idea! Lucius and Narcissa can talk about... whatever comes to their minds!" Draco sneered. (Great. Might as well buy my wedding dress now, Shall we?)
Narcissa threw herself quite dramatically on a dining chair in front of the Ice cream parlour. Lucius sat opposite.
"It's going to be so much fun, being prefects! We can give detentions freely, boss people around and be best friends!" he smiled maliciously.
"Go hug a Lethifold." she snorted. (He is so annoying, So Arrogant, So Power mad. It's such a pity that he's so gorgeous as well. Still. He deserves all the aggression I give him.)
"Hm? Feisty." Lucius sniggered.
Narcissa chose to completely ignore him.