Disclaimer: Guess what? I still don't own Fushigi Yuugi.
Thanks to. . .
neppy: Yea. I love Shiriko, too. This chapter is 100% different too. Try and find the differences and make me feel like you pay attention. Please?
Songwind: You are my new favorite person! (Not really but that's ok.) You know, you're the only person who recognized that it was familiar? Isn't that just sad? I'm glad you pay attention. That makes me happy. And. . .I don't know if Yume can hear you. . .she's usually in her own little world. . .
Otaku Pitcher: I'm glad that I'm improving in your mind. And it's ok that it took you a few days to review. I'd rather have a review a days after than no review at all. ::nods:: Yup. I would.
Cortney: The other Seiryuu might make an appearance. I haven't decided if I want them to or not yet. They more than likely will.
Cortney (#2): Are you two the same person? Smack is confused. Anyway, I read your story and reviewed. It's great. I'm proud of you. Oh, it will only get more confusing, sorry. That's what happens in my world.
Author's Notes: Umm. . .this chapter is going to be a little confusing, and not just because I'm not going to explain anything again. Yume is going to be having a discussion with her mind so there is going to be some confusing mind dialogue, and I'm not separating the dialogue only because it's not really two separate people talking. I have my reasons for what I do. Trust me. ::innocent smile:: Oh, the characters that I created for neppy, Renee, Otaku Pitcher and RyogazGal are making their appearance in this chapter. It's a brief entrance, the next chapter is really when they are explained but whatever. I hope you enjoy my continuation of the last chapter.
'. . .' are dialogue heard only by Yume because it's in her head.
Chapter 23: . . .Can Never be Broken
"You're interrupting something even you cannot stop. Leave now or I'll have no choice but to kill you," an evil but innocent female voice declared. Four balls of light appeared and out of them, four girls stepped. "I have warned you so do not interfere. This has to happen and there is nothing you can do to stop it," she said. She had long, silver hair and piercing blue eyes (mini/neppy). "Although it'd be fun to watch you try."
"What, do you guys work for Nakago or something?" I asked.
"Us? Work for that fag?" the one that appeared from the red answered (Otaku Pitcher). They all laughed. This one had shoulder length light brown hair and blue eyes.
"We wouldn't even be caught dead in the same room with him yet alone work for him," the one from the green replied (RyogazGal). She had long black hair and deep aqua eyes. I looked at the last that had remained silent. She was watching me with deep, dark brown eyes and her face was framed by light brown hair (Renee).
The others arrived, took one look at the shield around Yume and the four girls and face faulted. "Now what?" Tamahome exclaimed in frustration. "All this trouble for Yume? She's not worth it!" I decided not to comment on that little remark. She was worth it, I think. Maybe she's not. I don't really know what to think about her anymore. I just need to talk to her.
"What's going on?" Chichiri asked me.
The one in from the red stepped forward. "We were sent here by Taiitsu-kun to make sure that no one interferes with the process," she explained.
"Process? What process?" I asked.
The silver haired one laughed an evil laugh. "You'll see. . .if she passes."
Three of the four girls walked through the shield. The only one that was left was staring at us intently, obviously not planning on letting us by. I walked towards the barrier that was the only thing keeping me from making sure Yume was all right. I attempted to pass through it like they did but was shot back, just like before. "You're just going to hurt yourself," the girl said.
"I don't care. I want to make sure Yume is ok," I snapped.
"Tasuki, you have to calm down, you know. Just hang in there. Yume will be ok. I'm sure she'll pass whatever it is she has to do," Chichiri instructed. "From what we've seen of her, I doubt that there is anything she can't do." I didn't want to just sit around and do nothing but I knew that that's all I really could do at the moment. I did as was told. But I wasn't happy about it. Nope, I was no happy camper.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Yume's Mind*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
I looked at the face of the man who was so confident that we should be able to go back to however we were before I did whatever I did. I tried really hard to make sense of the jumbled memories that were my own. Slowly, my memories of the past began to make sense to me. 'I had hurt him. Hurt him badly. Physically, not emotionally like I had done to Tasuki. And I had enjoyed it. I wonder why.' "No. We cannot go back to the way things were. We didn't have a relationship then, we don't have one now. I have always hated you. Nothing has changed," I managed to declare; attempting to sound confident although inside I was anything but.
"What are you talking about, Yume? I've always been helping you, from day one. You wouldn't even be in this world if it weren't for me. You wouldn't be alive right now if I didn't save your life. You owe me, Yume. You owe me," he said.
"I don't owe you a thing! It's true you brought me here but you've tried to kill me countless times since then! And don't you even try to deny it! I bet this world is some trick right now! This place can't be real and neither can you! Tasuki would never try to hurt me like this! No matter how mad or hurt I made him, he would never do the things he did in this hallucination!" I yelled. I regained my confidence and now I was pissed. I hate it when people think they can get away with lying to me. I don't care what their reasoning is. Honesty is very important to me (which is kind of funny seeing how I've been lying to everyone since I got here).
Nakago gave me a look of pure self-assurance. "Are you sure? How can you be? After what you did to him, I don't think it's possible for you to be sure about anything about him. Rejection can make people do terrible things."
"You'd know wouldn't you? I remember beating the crap out of you. I wouldn't have done that if I didn't have just cause," I replied. "So even if there was some basis for the way Tasuki acted, I still know that you're lying."
"Are you sure?"
"I am sure. You're full of shit and I know it."
The world around me began to black out I was held in suspension. I was so sick of being held in suspended animation. It's like being trapped in between dreams and reality. You never know what to expect in such a place. Nakago turned into a weird man, who had more makeup on than a lot of the girls in my school. (And them American high school girls sure do love their makeup.) He sneered at me from his spot in the black abyss. "Very good, Yume. You saw through my world," he said. His voice was just about as obnoxious as his appearance.
"Let me go, now," I demanded. He laughed.
"I'm afraid I can't do that unless you agree to come back to see Nakago with me. You two made a deal and you broke it. Not very wise," he taunted, waving his finger at me.
"Just who are you, anyway?" I demanded.
"Tomo of the Seiryuu seven. Nakago ordered me to get you back. You agreed to be a spy and come here. Around here, your word is your bond. In your case, your word is your ticket back to reality," he explained. "Although, you were exposed so he really doesn't have much use for you now, as a spy anyway. I'm sure he'll think of a new use fairly quickly." He was making me sick.
"If I'm no good as a spy, why does he want me back so bad?" I had a feeling I knew the answer but didn't exactly want to admit it. You wouldn't want to either if knew what I was thinking.
"He probably wants the pleasure of killing you himself or perhaps he wants to make up for the last time you two got together. You did hurt his feelings, leaving him like that." He was smiling a rather creepy smile now.
"Yea well tough shit. We don't always get what we want in life, do we? I'm not going back to him. I'd leave him there again if I had the chance."
"That's the spirit! Just keep throwing me excuses to kill you! Soi would be ever so sad if she were to be replaced by someone like you. You're just a child, a poor, weak, child. Though, I'd rather bring you back to him, if I had the choice. You did agree to something and I could get such pleasure out of watching your spirit being broken and hearing your screams."
'Oh my God this guy is nasty! Ok, Yume. Get back to the point. What exactly did you agree to?' I brought my mind back to the day I came here. 'Wait. . .I only agreed to go to Konan. I never agreed to be a spy!' I laughed and Tomo looked at me surprised. "I hate to break it to you, clown boy, but I found a flaw in your so-called prefect little plan."
"Oh? Please, tell me about this alleged 'flaw'."
"I only agreed to go to Konan. The words 'I agree to be a spy' never crossed my lips. Since I never agreed to that, I didn't break the deal. You have to let me go now," I declared, putting my hands on my hips. "The reason you're keeping me here is no longer valid." 'I should so be a lawyer when I grow up, even if everyone hates lawyers. I have a skill.'
He seemed to be thinking hard about something. I watched as the day I arrived played around me. Once we got to the part where I agreed to go, it stopped. "You may be right but I'm still not going to send you back." He disappeared, laughing.
Now I was stuck in this world of blackness. 'How am I going to get out of this place?' I wandered around the world but couldn't find any lovely red flashing "Exit" signs or even a break in the darkness. I tried pinching myself but all that did was make my arm hurt. 'Well, it was worth a shot. I guess I'm not asleep.' For some reason, I felt my mind go back to when Tomo played that portion of what happened. 'How could he do that? It seemed just like a memory,' I wondered. "A memory! That's it! Maybe this blackness is my mind! But is my mind really this dark?" I exclaimed. "But how can I be a prisoner of my own mind? That doesn't make sense. . .This is a long shot but I'm going to try and "think" myself out of here." I closed my eyes and concentrated really hard on leaving. I opened them to find myself still there. 'Damn. . .there must be a way out! I wish I could at least see what is around me!' My "mind" illuminated, revealing a much nicer place, full of light. At least half of it was. There was a portion that was a dark, intimidating looking forest. "How come that worked but when I tried to think myself out, it didn't?" I asked myself.
"You didn't do it right. Duh," an innocent sounding voice answered from behind me. I turned and found myself face to face with. . .me? A lot younger me but it was definitely me. She was smiling and holding a stuffed wolf. "You have to do it the right way."
"Well, could you tell me how to do it?" I asked her nicely.
"Not exactly but the ugly old floating lady told me you have to have something to go back to," she replied, hugging her wolf.
"The ugly old floating lady? You mean Taiitsu-kun? Why'd she tell you that?" I was really confused now. 'First I'm trapped in a dream, then I'm stuck in my mind and now, I'm talking to myself, literally. I guess it's just another day in my life.'
"She told me to tell you if you got this far. I don't know why," the little girl explained. Total innocence. I remember when I was like that. How long ago that was.
'Something to go back to? What do you have there?' a voice whispered into my mind. 'You lost your chance with Tasuki. He probably hates you now, just like Tomo showed you. Nuriko isn't even alive anymore. Who's going to back you up now? You're cover has been blown. They'll never trust you again,' it continued. 'You have a good point. I don't have much waiting for me there,' I thought. 'But it's not my nature to give up. Sure, there's nothing for me there but there wasn't anything for me before, either. Besides, Shiriko's with them. He'll always be there for me.' 'What if they killed him?' it asked.
'They wouldn't!' my mind yelled. 'How can you be sure? You did betray them. Anger can make people do things they wouldn't normally do. Do you want to take that sort of chance? What if you go back only to find that he's dead? Who will protect you then? You'll be completely alone. Isn't it better not to know than to lose the one you care about most in the world?' It was hitting some pretty good points. That hadn't crossed my mind before. What if they did kill him? I couldn't even think it. I'd be so lost without him. 'Maybe it would be better not to know. . .I just need some sort of clue!' I felt something materialize in my hand. I looked down and found the picture we took on the boat. The one I took of Tasuki (the good one) was under it. "No! I have to trust them! They were my friends! They would never betray me like that! The ties that bind us can never be broken!" I yelled. "And if Tasuki hates me, so be it! He has every right to after what I said to him. They're my friends. They'll let me explain myself. That's what I have to go back to. My friends!"
"Congratulations, Yume. You beat yourself," the voice said. I felt extreme pain and screamed in agony.
My forehead felt like it was being burned; the same thing was happening to my hands and lower neck. I felt like I was being hit with hot iron. 'Guess I know how a cow feels,' I managed to think before the pain began so relentless that no rational thoughts could form in my mind. My world started to whirl around me and then flew past. My eyes closed themselves and felt a jolt go through my body. I opened my eyes slowly to find myself lying in the shelter I had built before surrounded by a strange light. I couldn't move because the pain was so severe. I managed to turn my head to the side and saw three girls I didn't know. "What's going on?" I asked them.
Author's Note: Mwahahaha ha haha ha. Hm. ::clears throat:: Ok, I'm done. Yup. I'm leaving you with another cliffhanger type thing but it's not as bad as the last few. You have to wonder, what will the group do with Yume now? Will they actually let her explain herself or will they do what the voice and Tomo said? And what purpose do the girls have in all of this? Scratch that, what purpose does Yume have in all of this? What's with the burning sensation? Is that enough questions for you? Did I leave any out? I'm trying a new thing, by the way. I'm trying to give you the questions to think about. That way, you might actually think about the important points that I want you to. Yea. So, I guess that's it. The next chapter is probably my favorite so I might get it up fast. No promises though cause it's my spring break and I might want to relax.
Quote:
"Oh my God! You look like a leprechaun!"
Hehe. That's not my favorite line but it's up there on my list. The other one I like is "That sounded like a bad soap opera" and "His eyes got big like a little kid when you tell them they can go to the zoo." Oh, I have a small request for any Harry Potter fans out there. My friend neppy wrote an awesome story (at least I think so) that involves some Harry Potter characters and several original, including the main character but no one is giving it a chance because it involves original people. One of my people in a different fic, of course, is in it (Nephiro from "Itsuka"). I was just wondering if you could give it a shot. She's feeling down so. . .yea. That's all I ask.
~Smack
Thanks to. . .
neppy: Yea. I love Shiriko, too. This chapter is 100% different too. Try and find the differences and make me feel like you pay attention. Please?
Songwind: You are my new favorite person! (Not really but that's ok.) You know, you're the only person who recognized that it was familiar? Isn't that just sad? I'm glad you pay attention. That makes me happy. And. . .I don't know if Yume can hear you. . .she's usually in her own little world. . .
Otaku Pitcher: I'm glad that I'm improving in your mind. And it's ok that it took you a few days to review. I'd rather have a review a days after than no review at all. ::nods:: Yup. I would.
Cortney: The other Seiryuu might make an appearance. I haven't decided if I want them to or not yet. They more than likely will.
Cortney (#2): Are you two the same person? Smack is confused. Anyway, I read your story and reviewed. It's great. I'm proud of you. Oh, it will only get more confusing, sorry. That's what happens in my world.
Author's Notes: Umm. . .this chapter is going to be a little confusing, and not just because I'm not going to explain anything again. Yume is going to be having a discussion with her mind so there is going to be some confusing mind dialogue, and I'm not separating the dialogue only because it's not really two separate people talking. I have my reasons for what I do. Trust me. ::innocent smile:: Oh, the characters that I created for neppy, Renee, Otaku Pitcher and RyogazGal are making their appearance in this chapter. It's a brief entrance, the next chapter is really when they are explained but whatever. I hope you enjoy my continuation of the last chapter.
'. . .' are dialogue heard only by Yume because it's in her head.
Chapter 23: . . .Can Never be Broken
"You're interrupting something even you cannot stop. Leave now or I'll have no choice but to kill you," an evil but innocent female voice declared. Four balls of light appeared and out of them, four girls stepped. "I have warned you so do not interfere. This has to happen and there is nothing you can do to stop it," she said. She had long, silver hair and piercing blue eyes (mini/neppy). "Although it'd be fun to watch you try."
"What, do you guys work for Nakago or something?" I asked.
"Us? Work for that fag?" the one that appeared from the red answered (Otaku Pitcher). They all laughed. This one had shoulder length light brown hair and blue eyes.
"We wouldn't even be caught dead in the same room with him yet alone work for him," the one from the green replied (RyogazGal). She had long black hair and deep aqua eyes. I looked at the last that had remained silent. She was watching me with deep, dark brown eyes and her face was framed by light brown hair (Renee).
The others arrived, took one look at the shield around Yume and the four girls and face faulted. "Now what?" Tamahome exclaimed in frustration. "All this trouble for Yume? She's not worth it!" I decided not to comment on that little remark. She was worth it, I think. Maybe she's not. I don't really know what to think about her anymore. I just need to talk to her.
"What's going on?" Chichiri asked me.
The one in from the red stepped forward. "We were sent here by Taiitsu-kun to make sure that no one interferes with the process," she explained.
"Process? What process?" I asked.
The silver haired one laughed an evil laugh. "You'll see. . .if she passes."
Three of the four girls walked through the shield. The only one that was left was staring at us intently, obviously not planning on letting us by. I walked towards the barrier that was the only thing keeping me from making sure Yume was all right. I attempted to pass through it like they did but was shot back, just like before. "You're just going to hurt yourself," the girl said.
"I don't care. I want to make sure Yume is ok," I snapped.
"Tasuki, you have to calm down, you know. Just hang in there. Yume will be ok. I'm sure she'll pass whatever it is she has to do," Chichiri instructed. "From what we've seen of her, I doubt that there is anything she can't do." I didn't want to just sit around and do nothing but I knew that that's all I really could do at the moment. I did as was told. But I wasn't happy about it. Nope, I was no happy camper.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Yume's Mind*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
I looked at the face of the man who was so confident that we should be able to go back to however we were before I did whatever I did. I tried really hard to make sense of the jumbled memories that were my own. Slowly, my memories of the past began to make sense to me. 'I had hurt him. Hurt him badly. Physically, not emotionally like I had done to Tasuki. And I had enjoyed it. I wonder why.' "No. We cannot go back to the way things were. We didn't have a relationship then, we don't have one now. I have always hated you. Nothing has changed," I managed to declare; attempting to sound confident although inside I was anything but.
"What are you talking about, Yume? I've always been helping you, from day one. You wouldn't even be in this world if it weren't for me. You wouldn't be alive right now if I didn't save your life. You owe me, Yume. You owe me," he said.
"I don't owe you a thing! It's true you brought me here but you've tried to kill me countless times since then! And don't you even try to deny it! I bet this world is some trick right now! This place can't be real and neither can you! Tasuki would never try to hurt me like this! No matter how mad or hurt I made him, he would never do the things he did in this hallucination!" I yelled. I regained my confidence and now I was pissed. I hate it when people think they can get away with lying to me. I don't care what their reasoning is. Honesty is very important to me (which is kind of funny seeing how I've been lying to everyone since I got here).
Nakago gave me a look of pure self-assurance. "Are you sure? How can you be? After what you did to him, I don't think it's possible for you to be sure about anything about him. Rejection can make people do terrible things."
"You'd know wouldn't you? I remember beating the crap out of you. I wouldn't have done that if I didn't have just cause," I replied. "So even if there was some basis for the way Tasuki acted, I still know that you're lying."
"Are you sure?"
"I am sure. You're full of shit and I know it."
The world around me began to black out I was held in suspension. I was so sick of being held in suspended animation. It's like being trapped in between dreams and reality. You never know what to expect in such a place. Nakago turned into a weird man, who had more makeup on than a lot of the girls in my school. (And them American high school girls sure do love their makeup.) He sneered at me from his spot in the black abyss. "Very good, Yume. You saw through my world," he said. His voice was just about as obnoxious as his appearance.
"Let me go, now," I demanded. He laughed.
"I'm afraid I can't do that unless you agree to come back to see Nakago with me. You two made a deal and you broke it. Not very wise," he taunted, waving his finger at me.
"Just who are you, anyway?" I demanded.
"Tomo of the Seiryuu seven. Nakago ordered me to get you back. You agreed to be a spy and come here. Around here, your word is your bond. In your case, your word is your ticket back to reality," he explained. "Although, you were exposed so he really doesn't have much use for you now, as a spy anyway. I'm sure he'll think of a new use fairly quickly." He was making me sick.
"If I'm no good as a spy, why does he want me back so bad?" I had a feeling I knew the answer but didn't exactly want to admit it. You wouldn't want to either if knew what I was thinking.
"He probably wants the pleasure of killing you himself or perhaps he wants to make up for the last time you two got together. You did hurt his feelings, leaving him like that." He was smiling a rather creepy smile now.
"Yea well tough shit. We don't always get what we want in life, do we? I'm not going back to him. I'd leave him there again if I had the chance."
"That's the spirit! Just keep throwing me excuses to kill you! Soi would be ever so sad if she were to be replaced by someone like you. You're just a child, a poor, weak, child. Though, I'd rather bring you back to him, if I had the choice. You did agree to something and I could get such pleasure out of watching your spirit being broken and hearing your screams."
'Oh my God this guy is nasty! Ok, Yume. Get back to the point. What exactly did you agree to?' I brought my mind back to the day I came here. 'Wait. . .I only agreed to go to Konan. I never agreed to be a spy!' I laughed and Tomo looked at me surprised. "I hate to break it to you, clown boy, but I found a flaw in your so-called prefect little plan."
"Oh? Please, tell me about this alleged 'flaw'."
"I only agreed to go to Konan. The words 'I agree to be a spy' never crossed my lips. Since I never agreed to that, I didn't break the deal. You have to let me go now," I declared, putting my hands on my hips. "The reason you're keeping me here is no longer valid." 'I should so be a lawyer when I grow up, even if everyone hates lawyers. I have a skill.'
He seemed to be thinking hard about something. I watched as the day I arrived played around me. Once we got to the part where I agreed to go, it stopped. "You may be right but I'm still not going to send you back." He disappeared, laughing.
Now I was stuck in this world of blackness. 'How am I going to get out of this place?' I wandered around the world but couldn't find any lovely red flashing "Exit" signs or even a break in the darkness. I tried pinching myself but all that did was make my arm hurt. 'Well, it was worth a shot. I guess I'm not asleep.' For some reason, I felt my mind go back to when Tomo played that portion of what happened. 'How could he do that? It seemed just like a memory,' I wondered. "A memory! That's it! Maybe this blackness is my mind! But is my mind really this dark?" I exclaimed. "But how can I be a prisoner of my own mind? That doesn't make sense. . .This is a long shot but I'm going to try and "think" myself out of here." I closed my eyes and concentrated really hard on leaving. I opened them to find myself still there. 'Damn. . .there must be a way out! I wish I could at least see what is around me!' My "mind" illuminated, revealing a much nicer place, full of light. At least half of it was. There was a portion that was a dark, intimidating looking forest. "How come that worked but when I tried to think myself out, it didn't?" I asked myself.
"You didn't do it right. Duh," an innocent sounding voice answered from behind me. I turned and found myself face to face with. . .me? A lot younger me but it was definitely me. She was smiling and holding a stuffed wolf. "You have to do it the right way."
"Well, could you tell me how to do it?" I asked her nicely.
"Not exactly but the ugly old floating lady told me you have to have something to go back to," she replied, hugging her wolf.
"The ugly old floating lady? You mean Taiitsu-kun? Why'd she tell you that?" I was really confused now. 'First I'm trapped in a dream, then I'm stuck in my mind and now, I'm talking to myself, literally. I guess it's just another day in my life.'
"She told me to tell you if you got this far. I don't know why," the little girl explained. Total innocence. I remember when I was like that. How long ago that was.
'Something to go back to? What do you have there?' a voice whispered into my mind. 'You lost your chance with Tasuki. He probably hates you now, just like Tomo showed you. Nuriko isn't even alive anymore. Who's going to back you up now? You're cover has been blown. They'll never trust you again,' it continued. 'You have a good point. I don't have much waiting for me there,' I thought. 'But it's not my nature to give up. Sure, there's nothing for me there but there wasn't anything for me before, either. Besides, Shiriko's with them. He'll always be there for me.' 'What if they killed him?' it asked.
'They wouldn't!' my mind yelled. 'How can you be sure? You did betray them. Anger can make people do things they wouldn't normally do. Do you want to take that sort of chance? What if you go back only to find that he's dead? Who will protect you then? You'll be completely alone. Isn't it better not to know than to lose the one you care about most in the world?' It was hitting some pretty good points. That hadn't crossed my mind before. What if they did kill him? I couldn't even think it. I'd be so lost without him. 'Maybe it would be better not to know. . .I just need some sort of clue!' I felt something materialize in my hand. I looked down and found the picture we took on the boat. The one I took of Tasuki (the good one) was under it. "No! I have to trust them! They were my friends! They would never betray me like that! The ties that bind us can never be broken!" I yelled. "And if Tasuki hates me, so be it! He has every right to after what I said to him. They're my friends. They'll let me explain myself. That's what I have to go back to. My friends!"
"Congratulations, Yume. You beat yourself," the voice said. I felt extreme pain and screamed in agony.
My forehead felt like it was being burned; the same thing was happening to my hands and lower neck. I felt like I was being hit with hot iron. 'Guess I know how a cow feels,' I managed to think before the pain began so relentless that no rational thoughts could form in my mind. My world started to whirl around me and then flew past. My eyes closed themselves and felt a jolt go through my body. I opened my eyes slowly to find myself lying in the shelter I had built before surrounded by a strange light. I couldn't move because the pain was so severe. I managed to turn my head to the side and saw three girls I didn't know. "What's going on?" I asked them.
Author's Note: Mwahahaha ha haha ha. Hm. ::clears throat:: Ok, I'm done. Yup. I'm leaving you with another cliffhanger type thing but it's not as bad as the last few. You have to wonder, what will the group do with Yume now? Will they actually let her explain herself or will they do what the voice and Tomo said? And what purpose do the girls have in all of this? Scratch that, what purpose does Yume have in all of this? What's with the burning sensation? Is that enough questions for you? Did I leave any out? I'm trying a new thing, by the way. I'm trying to give you the questions to think about. That way, you might actually think about the important points that I want you to. Yea. So, I guess that's it. The next chapter is probably my favorite so I might get it up fast. No promises though cause it's my spring break and I might want to relax.
Quote:
"Oh my God! You look like a leprechaun!"
Hehe. That's not my favorite line but it's up there on my list. The other one I like is "That sounded like a bad soap opera" and "His eyes got big like a little kid when you tell them they can go to the zoo." Oh, I have a small request for any Harry Potter fans out there. My friend neppy wrote an awesome story (at least I think so) that involves some Harry Potter characters and several original, including the main character but no one is giving it a chance because it involves original people. One of my people in a different fic, of course, is in it (Nephiro from "Itsuka"). I was just wondering if you could give it a shot. She's feeling down so. . .yea. That's all I ask.
~Smack