Because of weird formating on ,
the Shift(plus)8 will be replaced with (this)
i apollogize to any convience, and
im sorry for this inconviencnce, especally
to Mr. Gorsky.
-chomperz
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Hi! Im Moonbay!
I want some money dammit!
Today we are gonna celebrate Rudolf's birthday
At some warehouse or something!..
This sounds like a bad Scooby-doo episode!
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(title) Zoids: Gamma Force in a nutshell
(author) Chomperz
(DISCLAMER) Zoids no own Omochao no own
(fanfic start) (Chapter #: 8)
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Rudolf: so your gonna celebrate my birthday! Im so…COMFUSED!
Van: don't worry… your in a bad dream in a bad world!..
Fiona: ummmm…
Omochao: here we are! At the warehouse. I hid the cake and you have to find it till (explodes)
Irvine: …like usual …
(Omochao is Gone forever!)
All: yay!
(as the Guardian Force people goes inside, some people outside are watching)
(nearby bush)
FanPPL: hey! shh! They cant know were hiding here!!
(wrong thing…)
Hiltz: Have you tried Homestyle Hump?
Rhyss: ….What?
Hiltz: heres the plan! I wired this whole area with firecrackers, bombs, TNT, and rats! The combinations of the four sensational forces will crumple the warehouse and kill all The good guys, so then we can rule the earth!
Rhyss: three problems… this aint earth, and where would we be?
Hiltz: um…In.. the warehouse?
Rhyss: and wouldn't the rats eat the wires, diffusing the bombs?
Hiltz: …. TO PROTECT THE WORLD FROM DEVISTATION!!!!ii!!one!
Rhyss: idiot.
Rudolf: I want my cake now!
Van: we have to look for it still.
Dr.D: if my calculations are correct, fiona will fall into a hole, setting up a rope that would catch van's leg and knocking a pole into moonbay which can make the whole floor fall, blowing up any chances of exits.
Fiona: your Bluffing! (falls into a hole…and the rest happens)
Thomas: (magicly appears) what I miss? (walls falls on him) AJKFDH!!!
Van: (flying up) I CAN FLYYY!
Moonbay: oh shi(POW)
(Building Crumples)
Hiltz: well look at that, my plan worked.
Rhyss: lucky shot, idiot..
Hiltz: now we go down there and stomp them!! Like bugg!!..or speedos or something..
Van: is everyone okay?
Moonbay: just because my arm is now bent backwards and squirts blood means is absolutely fine!
Van: that's good to hear!
Moonbay: …reeetart.
Thomas: lets get out of here! (opens the door and..)
Raven: (on the toilet) UHHHH!!HHEDYH (PFTTTTTT)
Thomas: Oh GOD! (slams the door)
Dr.D: we have ten minutes before we are done for!
Irvine: for what?
Dr.D: … we need to get out!
Van: Fungus! look!
Fiona: we can climb the vines to get out of this place!
(and so everyone does)
Van: im at the top, just need to remove these planks and..
Raven: (on the toilet) UHHHH!!HHEDYH (PFTTTTTT)
Van: aegjsbagui!! (falls, making everyone else fall)
Moonbay: Van!
Van: GET THE IMAGES OUT OF MY HEAD!!
Rudolf: ill shoot! (van gets shot)
Dr.D: well… lets go there! (points to a led which points to the exit)
And we only got 6 minutes! Go!
(they all run until)
Hiltz and Rhyss: BOO!
All: ahhh!
Hiltz: your all done for!
Rhyss: the only thing that blocks your escape,…is us!
Hiltz: and we have the perfect weapon!
Van: what is it?
(FBI!!!)
Van: Noo! Not the (male monochromic voiceover): Federal Bureau of Investigation
FBI: it is I! The (male monochromic voiceover): Federal Bureau of Investigation
Moonbay: what business you got here mister?
FBI: I cannot tell you!, AND YOU WONT LIVE TO KNOW CAUSE THE The (male monochromic voiceover): Federal Bureau of Investigation WILL HUNT YOU DOWN LIKE THE DIRTY DOG YOU ARE!!! Dr.D: liar! Your name is jeen and you work at the 7-11!
FBI: uhh damn! (evaporates)
Rhyss: I cant believe you defeated the The (male monochromic voiceover): Federal Bureau of Investigation Man! However.. The organioidz will take care of you all! Go!
(Ambient and Specular attacks Rudolf and Thomas.. And everyone else goes out)
Van: should we save Thomas and rudolf?
Irvine: why should we? Like anthrax, they wont go away.
(everyone stares at Irvine)
Irvine: what? I was kidding..
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Fiona: that end another messed up chapter of this story, coming soon is chapter 9, Raven vs. Van, the infamous ballerina kickboxing speedo competition!.. K bye! And review this!
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Raven: (on the toilet) UHHHH!!HHEDYH (PFTTTTTT) ahh! All done! (looks in the toliet) eww! All bloody! And uh hey! (notices the spy camera, with dr.d labled on it) GERR! (punches it) ILL GET YOU ALL IF IT'S THE LAST THING I DOOO!
Or eat popcorn instead..
the Shift(plus)8 will be replaced with (this)
i apollogize to any convience, and
im sorry for this inconviencnce, especally
to Mr. Gorsky.
-chomperz
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Hi! Im Moonbay!
I want some money dammit!
Today we are gonna celebrate Rudolf's birthday
At some warehouse or something!..
This sounds like a bad Scooby-doo episode!
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(title) Zoids: Gamma Force in a nutshell
(author) Chomperz
(DISCLAMER) Zoids no own Omochao no own
(fanfic start) (Chapter #: 8)
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Rudolf: so your gonna celebrate my birthday! Im so…COMFUSED!
Van: don't worry… your in a bad dream in a bad world!..
Fiona: ummmm…
Omochao: here we are! At the warehouse. I hid the cake and you have to find it till (explodes)
Irvine: …like usual …
(Omochao is Gone forever!)
All: yay!
(as the Guardian Force people goes inside, some people outside are watching)
(nearby bush)
FanPPL: hey! shh! They cant know were hiding here!!
(wrong thing…)
Hiltz: Have you tried Homestyle Hump?
Rhyss: ….What?
Hiltz: heres the plan! I wired this whole area with firecrackers, bombs, TNT, and rats! The combinations of the four sensational forces will crumple the warehouse and kill all The good guys, so then we can rule the earth!
Rhyss: three problems… this aint earth, and where would we be?
Hiltz: um…In.. the warehouse?
Rhyss: and wouldn't the rats eat the wires, diffusing the bombs?
Hiltz: …. TO PROTECT THE WORLD FROM DEVISTATION!!!!ii!!one!
Rhyss: idiot.
Rudolf: I want my cake now!
Van: we have to look for it still.
Dr.D: if my calculations are correct, fiona will fall into a hole, setting up a rope that would catch van's leg and knocking a pole into moonbay which can make the whole floor fall, blowing up any chances of exits.
Fiona: your Bluffing! (falls into a hole…and the rest happens)
Thomas: (magicly appears) what I miss? (walls falls on him) AJKFDH!!!
Van: (flying up) I CAN FLYYY!
Moonbay: oh shi(POW)
(Building Crumples)
Hiltz: well look at that, my plan worked.
Rhyss: lucky shot, idiot..
Hiltz: now we go down there and stomp them!! Like bugg!!..or speedos or something..
Van: is everyone okay?
Moonbay: just because my arm is now bent backwards and squirts blood means is absolutely fine!
Van: that's good to hear!
Moonbay: …reeetart.
Thomas: lets get out of here! (opens the door and..)
Raven: (on the toilet) UHHHH!!HHEDYH (PFTTTTTT)
Thomas: Oh GOD! (slams the door)
Dr.D: we have ten minutes before we are done for!
Irvine: for what?
Dr.D: … we need to get out!
Van: Fungus! look!
Fiona: we can climb the vines to get out of this place!
(and so everyone does)
Van: im at the top, just need to remove these planks and..
Raven: (on the toilet) UHHHH!!HHEDYH (PFTTTTTT)
Van: aegjsbagui!! (falls, making everyone else fall)
Moonbay: Van!
Van: GET THE IMAGES OUT OF MY HEAD!!
Rudolf: ill shoot! (van gets shot)
Dr.D: well… lets go there! (points to a led which points to the exit)
And we only got 6 minutes! Go!
(they all run until)
Hiltz and Rhyss: BOO!
All: ahhh!
Hiltz: your all done for!
Rhyss: the only thing that blocks your escape,…is us!
Hiltz: and we have the perfect weapon!
Van: what is it?
(FBI!!!)
Van: Noo! Not the (male monochromic voiceover): Federal Bureau of Investigation
FBI: it is I! The (male monochromic voiceover): Federal Bureau of Investigation
Moonbay: what business you got here mister?
FBI: I cannot tell you!, AND YOU WONT LIVE TO KNOW CAUSE THE The (male monochromic voiceover): Federal Bureau of Investigation WILL HUNT YOU DOWN LIKE THE DIRTY DOG YOU ARE!!! Dr.D: liar! Your name is jeen and you work at the 7-11!
FBI: uhh damn! (evaporates)
Rhyss: I cant believe you defeated the The (male monochromic voiceover): Federal Bureau of Investigation Man! However.. The organioidz will take care of you all! Go!
(Ambient and Specular attacks Rudolf and Thomas.. And everyone else goes out)
Van: should we save Thomas and rudolf?
Irvine: why should we? Like anthrax, they wont go away.
(everyone stares at Irvine)
Irvine: what? I was kidding..
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Fiona: that end another messed up chapter of this story, coming soon is chapter 9, Raven vs. Van, the infamous ballerina kickboxing speedo competition!.. K bye! And review this!
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Raven: (on the toilet) UHHHH!!HHEDYH (PFTTTTTT) ahh! All done! (looks in the toliet) eww! All bloody! And uh hey! (notices the spy camera, with dr.d labled on it) GERR! (punches it) ILL GET YOU ALL IF IT'S THE LAST THING I DOOO!
Or eat popcorn instead..