This has my own orginal charachters in it and is based off my and my sister's AL rp. Also guys can play AL too!

Episode One: The First Battle

Venus Natsume walked out off the Piffle Princess,after just creating her first angel which she had named Flame. Flame had black hair and a red mask on with a red and orange top and yellow skirt followed by black combat boots. Flame was a speed type angel. Venus' older brother Yuki Natsume was already an advanced Angelic Layer player and had two angels,Yuu and Cassandra. She wanted to be a great player just like him.

She walked down the sidewalk towards her house with Flame on her shoulder and her angel card in her right hand. "Oh this is great" she said. "Now I've got to live up to my brothers fame and glory". "Im never going to be good at Angelic Layer". Venus sat down on the sidewalk,she was almost home. She knew if she went home,her brother would just tease her,and her mother would tell her that Angelic Layer was a waste of time and that she needed to stop being so lazy.

Flame looked up at Venus. Flame knew what why Venus' did'nt want to go home. She felt sorry for her,but knew their was nothing she could do to help her Deus. She then looked down at the ground. Venus got up and started walking home. She then stoped herself,she decided to go see her friend Yumi who lived just down the street.

Yumi Hasagawa loked out of her window to see her bestfriend Venus right down the street. She ran out of her house and gave Venus a hug,that ended up turing into a tackle. "Hi Venus!" Yumi cried. "Hello" Yumi replied. So I see you made your first angel, Yumi said looking over at Flame. Her name is Flame Venus told her. Flame,thats a cool name Yumi replied,jumping up and down.

You had sweetarts again did'nt you? Venus asked. Whatever gave you that idea? Yumi asked still jumping around. Well,theirs this guy at the Piffle Princess in Hiroshima whos challenging Deus' Yumi said. Really? Venus asked. "I think I'm going to challenge my borther first thought,Venus said. Lets go over to my house then Venus asked. Okay,Yumi said following her. They entered through they front gate and opened the fornt door.

Yuki watched as they bothed walked into the house. So little sister is this your angel?. Yuki said as he walked over towards Venus. Y--Yes she stamered. Well we must have an Angelic Fight Yuki said. Sure, Venus replied. Venus and Yumi followed Yuki into the basement were they had their own angelic arena,just like the ones at the Piffle Princess. Yumi grabed a seat a few inchs away from the arena as Yuki took the seat to the left and Venus took the one to the right.

The Angel type head gear was placed on both of their heads. they quickly threw their angels into the arena. A score screen appeared above the arena with the time limit and hit point markers shown. "Come on Flame" Venus cried. "Even though this is our first fight,were going to make it our best" she said. "Hmm...Yuki's using Yuu,this should be interesting " Yumi said on the sidelines. "Yuu..where going to crush them" Yuki said. Flame and Yuu stared each other down. Yuu was an angel with White hair and a white cape along with a white buisness suit.

"Yuu use your Silver Wind attack!" Yuki cried. A silver tornado headed straight towards Flame. "Flame dodge it" she cried. Flamne quickly moved out of the way. "Flame punch!" she cried. Flame managed to nick Yuu's shoulder but,he quickly pulled away. "Hmm...Yuu's a speed type,like Flame but his speed is faster then Flame's."Venus thought. "Yuu attack her with an uppercut attack" Yuki cried. Flame was shocked by the uppercut attack,and her hitpoints went down. "Oh no" Yumi gasped.

"Come on Flame you can do it" Venus cried. "I know use your Flame Chain attack" She said. A chain made of fire appared in Flame's hand,she then whiped Yuu with it."Yuu,Oh no" Yuki cried. His hitpoints had gone down alot. He only had about three hitponts left. "Now Flame finsh him" Venus commanded. Flame dashed over to Yuu who was hunched over and punched him. He then fell completly over. A computer voice came over and announced that Venus was the winner. Ten points were then transfered to Venus' angel card after she won the match. "That was some great battling for your first time" Yuki said picking Yuu up.

"Thanks" she said picking Flame up. "Great job" Yumi cheered. "Now you only have to win seven more battles to enter the Kanto Tournament" Yumi told her. "Thats awesome" Venus said. "Only a few more battles Flame and we can be enter the Kanto Tournament just like Yuki and other great Deus" Venus said. "Yeah you should bring her to school tomorrow and show Satoshi" Yumi suggested. "I think I'll do that"Venus said. "Well do you want to go watch a movie?" Yumi asked. "Well,sure" Venus said following Yumi"

"I know Flame and I will do our best" Venus said walking into the living room.

End-

Next Episode: Next time Venus takes Flame to school and almost looses her. And she gets challenged by her boyfriend Satoshi.

Next: Episode Two: School Yard Challenge.

Don't forget to RR please!