Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or any of it's characters. I do own all of the characters I introduce and the storyline of this fanfic.
Thanks
again for the reviews. En Satsu Koku Ryuu Ha: If you actual read my
notes you would see this: "I
got some ideas for this fanfic by reading other people's works so if
something sounds familiar, it probably is". It's the same basic
idea, Naruto leave with someone to become stronger. There are tons of
stories like that. If you would have read more then the first
chapter, you would notice that this story is different from "From
Cherub to Devil" (which is a very good story, may I add).
Sorry
for the ranting people, but comments like his just kind of take the
fun out of writing.
It
had been over a week since Naruto left Konoha with Hannoki. The
memories were still there, but he was trying hard to push them away.
His "friends" still showed up in his dreams, but he was
now able to ignore it somewhat.
He woke up at sunrise, just as his
teacher had instructed him. The one thing he couldn't get used to was
sleeping on the ground. He always woke up with a slight backache.
Hannoki was already awake and was getting some things out of his pack
to eat. "No warm food this time, I'm out of matches to make a
fire," the man informed Naruto as he tossed him a piece of
bread.
Naruto caught it and started eating. 'Great, after a bad
night, I now have to eat dry bread.' "Ne sensei, that means
we're heading back to the village, right?"
"No, I
still have plenty of things that don't have to be cooked. We'll be
checking up on our friend Kagai, I hope they found him already. I can
do that by myself, you can train by yourself."
"But
what should I train? I already did the Fire Blast technique."
"That's
true, but I have a little challenge for you."
Naruto raised
an eyebrow.
"Before I teach you a new technique, you have to
figure out a creative use for the previous one I taught. Combining it
with another technique you already know is also possible."
"That
shouldn't be too hard. Let's see, what can you do with a fireball."
It didn't take Naruto too long. "I can light the fire so we can
eat some cooked food!"
"You're correct, although I
made it pretty obvious for you. Do you think you would've come up
with that if I still had matches?"
"Hey, don't
underestimate me!"
"Whatever, kid. The next one is
also a fire jutsu, it's called Mythical Fire Flower. It's pretty high
level, so it should take some time." Hannoki proceeded to show
the hand seals and finished with a small demonstration.
"I'll
be able to do it before you return!" Naruto boasted.
"It's
not that hard once you have proper chakra control and are able to do
fire techniques. I'll be leaving now."
When Hannoki arrived at the spot where they had left Kagai, it was empty. To make sure nothing happened, we went into the Grass village. He tried not to draw attention, specifically staying away from the inn. Hannoki listened a bit to the chatter of some older women, they were talking about a strange man that was found tied to a log. He couldn't gather any more useful information from their conversation, so he decided to return to see how Naruto was doing. Before he left, he got a little "present" for Naruto.
Hannoki
was greeted by a swarm of flames coming at him. He looked pleased.
"Well done Naruto, I see you're already able to do it."
"Of
course, this is easy!"
"Remember the challenge, I
won't teach you anything new until you come up with something
creative. In case I forgot to mention, you can only use the same
trick once."
"Hmm," Naruto said while sitting
down. He was thinking hard.
"You better hurry up the
thinking, I don't have all day."
A few minutes later, Naruto
still hadn't come up with something.
"You really have no
talent for this, Naruto"
"Don't worry, I'll come up
with something." Naruto's mind started to drift off. He didn't
know why, but he remembered the chuunin exam. "I got it!"
"Oh,
tell me."
'I'll show you." He did the seals and
breathed the fire towards his sensei.
The teacher dodged the
flames. "So, what's so special?"
"Look at where
they hit."
Hannoki looked and saw that there were shurikens
stuck where the flames had burned a tree. "Oh, nice. Shurikens
hidden in the flames."
'Sasuke can be helpful at times too,'
Naruto thought to himself. Instantly the memories came back, but
Naruto suppressed them. That was all over now, he wasn't in Konoha
anymore. He didn't have to worry about those people anymore.
"I
won't teach anything new right now. I have a little something for
you, thought." A grin was visible behind his mask. He showed
Naruto the bag he had brought with him from the village.
"What
is it?" Naruto asked as he looked in the bag. It contained
addition weights.
"You're used to the current ones, so I
decided to make them a bit heavier."
"You won't go
easy on me, will you?"
"Of course not." The grin
got bigger.
The weights were a lot heavier, at least double
the weight of the previous ones. He was barely able to stand.
"It
won't do you any good to stand still. Let's get moving!"
"Not
tag again." Naruto sighed.
"No, this time you can just
run a couple of rounds."
Naruto sweat dropped.
"Those
10 laps won't run themselves, move those legs!"
Naruto
slowly started running.
"You better hurry up. You won't get
any food before you finish."
It
was already afternoon when Naruto finally completed his task. He was
exhausted, he had to use chakra to be able to run.
"From now
on, you'll run 10 at the start of each day. This will help you build
up your stamina and chakra supply. Even though you already have a lot
of both, you will need all if it for the next couple of
techniques."
'I'm not happy about all this, but at least I'm
going to learn some kick-ass techniques.'
"We still have
plenty of time today. Let's do some taijutsu training now.
"Sensei,
can't I have a rest first? I just ran 10 laps!"
"In
real combat, you won't have time to rest after running."
Hannoki didn't wait for Naruto to respond and attacked with a right
punch.
Naruto managed a combination of dodge and block. The
weights prevented him from moving fast enough to dodge. He could
barely raise his arms for a block either. To make things worse, his
chakra supply wasn't high because of the running he had
done.
"Remember, this is taijutsu training, so you can't use
ninjutsu."
'He managed to place me at a disadvantage here,
again. If I don't do something fast, I'm going to get beaten up
badly.'
Hannoki didn't wait for Naruto to recover and continued
with a left kick, which send the boy flying back. The next move came
right afterwards.
Naruto ducked just in time for the punch to hit
the tree that he had been leaning against. He suddenly saw a opening
and used all his force to aim a punch at it.
The teacher caught
the fist and used his knee to hit the boy's abdomen.
Naruto had
trouble staying conscious after that last attack and stumbled back a
little. He managed to keep at it and move forward again. He threw a
couple of punches and a kick at his sensei, but none had any effect.
Hannoki moved towards Naruto in order to land a punch. Naruto managed
to dodge it, but his teacher finished the battle by hitting him on
the back of his neck.
It was already getting dark when Naruto
finally woke up.
"About time, I thought you were going to
stay like that until morning." He handed a bowl to Naruto. "Eat
up, you've worked hard today. Tomorrow I'll be teaching you something
completely new."
"What's that?"
"Genjutsu.
It'll probably keep you busy for a while."
Naruto sighed, he
had never been able to do any genjutsu.
Back
at Konoha, someone else was also training hard. During the day,
Hinata received training from Neji. She was improving greatly and her
self-confidence was growing. Right now, she was hitting a log using
the Gentle Fist the Hyuga clan was famous for. Her mind wasn't on the
training though, she was thinking about a certain boy.
"Hinata!"
a voice shook her out of her thoughts.
"Ah, Sakura-san. What
are you doing here?"
"I'm just walking a little to
relieve the stress of the day. Are you still training?"
Hinata
blushed a little. "H-Hai." She had improved, but was till
very shy.
"Your relation with Neji has improved. I heard
he's training you now."
"Yes. It seems that after the
past chuunin exam, he doesn't hate the main family that much."
"That
reminds me, the next one is in three months. Are you going to take
it?"
"Our team will probably give it another try, yes.
How about you?"
"Since we're missing a teammate, it
will be kind of hard."
An awkward silence fell between the
two. "S-Sorry about that," Hinata apologized.
"No
need for that, it's not your fault. Besides, I know you probably miss
him more than I do."
Hinata blushed a deep shade of
red.
They sat in silence for a while.
"Ano, I should be
heading home," Hinata said, while standing up.
"I
should be going too, see you, Hinata."
While Hinata was walking home, she kept thinking of Naruto. There had been no reports about Naruto or Itachi lately. There were even unconfirmed rumors that they were in the Grass country now. Nobody knew why Akatsuki wanted Naruto, but she felt that the adults were hiding something from her.
Author's
Notes:
I had to rewrite parts of this chapter because it was
extremely short at first. Even shorter then my previous chapters. The
next chapter will make a time jump and we'll see Naruto when he's a
lot stronger already.
