Well, I feel very nice today for a friend just called me and gave me a very
good personal review on the story. So I will count that as the one review I
need to put up this chapter, this chapter was easier to re-write then I
thought, although the chapter title isn't that great in my opinion.
Chapter Twelve: Nearing Completion
Yoshi had reached home; he was more tired than he had been in a long time. Still found it unbelievable that Yosher is actually a Smasher, he thought hard to see if his story could be verified, the only evidence there was that Yosher told of his father Yoshen and he knew who he was, their were history records about the island and village and he remembered reading about Yoshen once, but he could not ask him for he was dead, maybe the chief knows something he thought, but he decided not to complicate things more by just asking people these things out of nowhere. Yoshi began to wonder about the Master hand, was he really dead, what did he do to the beings that Yosher described? Was this new tournament a trap, it did not seem like it. The more Yoshi thought about the Master Hand the more worried he became, he had a very eerie feeling that night, he did not like it at all, it was the feeling one gets when one gets when they feel they are being watched by someone.or something.
**************************** Yoshi's training continued as normal for the rest of the six months. Yoshi became increasingly better in all his categories of training. He was nearly able to outrun Yosher at running, he was able to clear eight out of the nine trees in the agility, although now landing oh his feet, whenever he did not land on his feet in the cliff falling phase, he recovered usually in twenty seconds. Yoshi seemed to have mastered the egg roll attack, and in the jumping phase Yosher had to actually force Yoshi off the platform himself in order to keep him from completing the phase. Yoshi was becoming more powerful, and was a much better fighter than he was before, but also at the same time, Yosher was seemingly becoming weaker. It was true that Yosher was in fact the oldest Yoshi on the Island, but he had seemed to stop aging around the age of 81 in yohsi Years, some expected him to live longer since he did look younger for his age of 193 in human years.
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There were two weeks of training remaining. Yoshi was now being taught how to further power his smash attack. By stalling a smash attack, a smasher could gain power and energy for a much more powerful smash attack. One could tell the difference between the attacks by the more powerful smash attack having to stall and the smasher would glow yellow with power. Yosher told Yoshi that any smasher could perform these formidable attacks, so he should not fully rely on it. The second attack, Yosher could not show Yoshi, he said he was too old to perform it. He explained that if he performed one of his special abilities while focusing harder than he ever did, he as well as any smasher could perform a mega smash attack. These attacks usually included a smasher's special abilities, which for Yoshi included his Yoshi bomb and his egg attacks, but Yosher explained that new powers could be found from these attacks. Yosher also warned him that he was only to try to perform a mega smash special in a moment of dire panic or greatest of determination, These attacks were not to be used often, otherwise serious injuries would occur from stress on the body. Yoshi was easily able to master the regular smash attack, but heeded Yosher's advice and did not even attempt a mega smash special.
The last few days were devoted to basic training exercises to avoid any possible injuries; Yosher even seemed to let his harsh attitude drop. On the morning previous to the tournament Yosher received an expected letter.
Dear potential Smasher, This letter is to inform you that it has been six months from the day that our representative informed you of the upcoming tournament. If you plan on entering you are to be at the following town: Toad Town by tomorrow at noon for registration. We do hope that you will attend.
Sincerely,
Super Smash Brothers Tournament of Melee
Judges and Sponsors.
Yoshi was both excited and anxious as he read the letter, of course he would be more than willing to fight in a one-dimensional tournament, but how could he ever forget what had happened at the previous Smash Brothers tournament? How would people respond to him showing his face in Toad Town after his outbreak six months earlier? Another nagging thought was why was there no signature from a head judge or sponsor?
Well so ends another chapter, I will require a total of TRHEE 3 reviews to put up the next chapter, why you may ask? Because A. it is a very long chapter, and B. it is the final chapter of part one and after part one there will finally be some long awaited action! Yaaay! So if you reviewed once already, do it again, I don't care if you review every chapter in the story, all reviews make me happy. The next chapter will be put up on Tuesday if I don't get the three reviews, and even earlier if I do get them. More to come soon.
I just noticed that I didn't end the last chapter in more to come soon.............. (Runs around the room) Augghhhhhhhghghghgh!, my symmetry is all screwed up!......Wait a minute (checks previous chapters) Wha!? I ended some chapters in more soon to come instead!! Aughghghgh!! my symmetry has been messed up ever since the beginning AUGHGHGHG!! (Runs away)
Chapter Twelve: Nearing Completion
Yoshi had reached home; he was more tired than he had been in a long time. Still found it unbelievable that Yosher is actually a Smasher, he thought hard to see if his story could be verified, the only evidence there was that Yosher told of his father Yoshen and he knew who he was, their were history records about the island and village and he remembered reading about Yoshen once, but he could not ask him for he was dead, maybe the chief knows something he thought, but he decided not to complicate things more by just asking people these things out of nowhere. Yoshi began to wonder about the Master hand, was he really dead, what did he do to the beings that Yosher described? Was this new tournament a trap, it did not seem like it. The more Yoshi thought about the Master Hand the more worried he became, he had a very eerie feeling that night, he did not like it at all, it was the feeling one gets when one gets when they feel they are being watched by someone.or something.
**************************** Yoshi's training continued as normal for the rest of the six months. Yoshi became increasingly better in all his categories of training. He was nearly able to outrun Yosher at running, he was able to clear eight out of the nine trees in the agility, although now landing oh his feet, whenever he did not land on his feet in the cliff falling phase, he recovered usually in twenty seconds. Yoshi seemed to have mastered the egg roll attack, and in the jumping phase Yosher had to actually force Yoshi off the platform himself in order to keep him from completing the phase. Yoshi was becoming more powerful, and was a much better fighter than he was before, but also at the same time, Yosher was seemingly becoming weaker. It was true that Yosher was in fact the oldest Yoshi on the Island, but he had seemed to stop aging around the age of 81 in yohsi Years, some expected him to live longer since he did look younger for his age of 193 in human years.
***********************
There were two weeks of training remaining. Yoshi was now being taught how to further power his smash attack. By stalling a smash attack, a smasher could gain power and energy for a much more powerful smash attack. One could tell the difference between the attacks by the more powerful smash attack having to stall and the smasher would glow yellow with power. Yosher told Yoshi that any smasher could perform these formidable attacks, so he should not fully rely on it. The second attack, Yosher could not show Yoshi, he said he was too old to perform it. He explained that if he performed one of his special abilities while focusing harder than he ever did, he as well as any smasher could perform a mega smash attack. These attacks usually included a smasher's special abilities, which for Yoshi included his Yoshi bomb and his egg attacks, but Yosher explained that new powers could be found from these attacks. Yosher also warned him that he was only to try to perform a mega smash special in a moment of dire panic or greatest of determination, These attacks were not to be used often, otherwise serious injuries would occur from stress on the body. Yoshi was easily able to master the regular smash attack, but heeded Yosher's advice and did not even attempt a mega smash special.
The last few days were devoted to basic training exercises to avoid any possible injuries; Yosher even seemed to let his harsh attitude drop. On the morning previous to the tournament Yosher received an expected letter.
Dear potential Smasher, This letter is to inform you that it has been six months from the day that our representative informed you of the upcoming tournament. If you plan on entering you are to be at the following town: Toad Town by tomorrow at noon for registration. We do hope that you will attend.
Sincerely,
Super Smash Brothers Tournament of Melee
Judges and Sponsors.
Yoshi was both excited and anxious as he read the letter, of course he would be more than willing to fight in a one-dimensional tournament, but how could he ever forget what had happened at the previous Smash Brothers tournament? How would people respond to him showing his face in Toad Town after his outbreak six months earlier? Another nagging thought was why was there no signature from a head judge or sponsor?
Well so ends another chapter, I will require a total of TRHEE 3 reviews to put up the next chapter, why you may ask? Because A. it is a very long chapter, and B. it is the final chapter of part one and after part one there will finally be some long awaited action! Yaaay! So if you reviewed once already, do it again, I don't care if you review every chapter in the story, all reviews make me happy. The next chapter will be put up on Tuesday if I don't get the three reviews, and even earlier if I do get them. More to come soon.
I just noticed that I didn't end the last chapter in more to come soon.............. (Runs around the room) Augghhhhhhhghghghgh!, my symmetry is all screwed up!......Wait a minute (checks previous chapters) Wha!? I ended some chapters in more soon to come instead!! Aughghghgh!! my symmetry has been messed up ever since the beginning AUGHGHGHG!! (Runs away)