A Very Bad Day – Harsh Realizations.
Elrohir:
"No!"
'Dan!
"You're going to pay for this!"
I charge forward in pure fury, they hurt him! They hurt 'Dan! He tried to protect me!
How could I miss it? I slay one and another and another, I have to tend to 'Dan, I have to!
After a while I stop abruptly, there's not even one alive, that's good
"Elladan!"
I am now free to tend to my twin and do just that, I hover over him and check his injuries,
Damn!
He has an arrow embedded in his chest, frightened out of my wits I shakily check for pulse, and sigh in relief to find one, but my joy does not last long since it is way too slow and faint.
I painfully pull the arrow out' and what a surprise it's poisoned,
He didn't even stir.... he's bleeding furiously... I swallow the lump that settled in my throat, he's dying
"No 'Dan you can't die!" I half plead half sob, while trying to stop the bleeding, in his new and old wounds that have re-opened
"Don't you dare die, you hear me?"
He'd better, I can't live without him, don't even want to try, I snap at the sounds of chocking sounds and farsightedly realize he's probably ruptured a lung.
I try to resuscitate him but realize that I can't!
"Valar!No!Saes! Don't leave me!" I chock out as the sounds stop abruptly, I collapse on top of him, I will not let him go!
"You are not leaving me like Nanath, Elladan, I will not let you go! I can't!"
Silently I pray to whoever Valar listening to keep my twin alive
"Valar, give me the strength to help him, I'd give my life for him"
is this really me crying?
I don't really care I just want El to live!
"Saes!"
I pleaded again before all went really really bright, and than... darkness....
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Got your attention?! Good! , now I'm coming closer to rid you guys of your misery , meanwhile, how did you like this cliffy?!
See ya all next time! Love! Bye!
P.S.: the next chap. Hold a bit more elvish would you like a translation? Please reply in the reviews!
Hugs
Lynn.
Reviews:
Hyperactive forever: I really apologize for the cliffy, who am I kidding? I'm not! But don't worry everything will work out...eventually. ( I'll let you in on a little secret though, I never kill my characters at least not those I've developed a very strong liking for... hope you'll like this one too, I'm really trying with my tight schedule and all. Till next time!
Veritas and Aequitas: Thank you! And you can relax it's the only story I have written so far in first person and it's not fully told in first person it changes towards the end. Hope you like this one too!
Aronoiiel: well first I thank you for the compliments, I know bad cliffy it's getting better, really. I hope you like this one as well. Till next time!