The purity of love, the cycle of hate
Hello all you people out there! The name's Hexx-Averek, welcome to "The purity of love, the cycle of hate". I'm Hexx-Averek, one of the 3 planned authors of this story. Yes, it is a group effort on this story. The first chapter is mine, the second chapter is written by Zodiac. So, you will see an odd mix of writing styles.
Feel free to Review. In fact, I encourage it. Just, don't flame. I understand if you have CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. However, don't Review this story and say "Omg this is teh suxorz". Tell me what we did wrong, so we can build and become better writers.
This story is based in many universes, but is mostly set in the Sonic-Adventure setting. The other side of the story (There's a few sides, lol) is based on Zodiac's own story line. Praise his "l33t" ness.
Any who, enjoy the fairly short entering chapter!
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Chapter 1
Hexx-Averek
Station square. A place to be noticed, and a place to be social. Unless your anti-social or running from the cops, then It's just best to avoid the city altogether.
However, for one hedgehog, it seemed he never really grasped this concept.
He walked down station square, his head down, his eyes lost in thought. His purple dreads and red vest gently blew in the direction of the wind, his red tennis shoes barley making a sound as he walked down the sidewalk.
''Look at his hair.. and his skin color.. he's.. purple.."
''And his clothes.. could they be any more tackier?"
Two female hedgehogs had passed by a male one. He could hear them talking among themselves, spouting insults about him. He stopped, and turned to face the both of them.
''You want to keep talking about me, or am I interrupting your insulting conversation?" The male hedgehog mummered, looking at the two of them.
''Like oh my god! Your that freak the police are after, aren't you?" One of the girls shrieked out.
''He looks just like the guy! What was his name.. Hexx?" The other one said. ''This guy is Hexx? Yeah, right."
The male kicked off the ground, and within a second was standing next to the one who spoke last. He quickly spun on his right foot, sending his elbow into the back of her neck with a force that sometimes even surprised the hedgehog. The girl's neck shattered, and she quickly fell limp to the ground, dead, drowning in a pool of her own blood.
The other girl shrieked. She began to run.
''Where are you going?" He lightly mummered, as he disappeared and rapidly phased in front of the female hedgehog. He sent a nice, clean punch right into the gut of the female, and as she fell to the ground, he brought his leg down, his foot stepping on her torso. "I want to hear more of what you have to say." His foot pressed down harder on the girl, who began to scream in pain.
Mobians ran in horror. One of the fleeing called the police on his cell phone.
With one final step, Hexx had crushed the girls torso. He was smirking the entire time.
''What's wrong with my clothes anyway? They look nice to me.." He mumbled, starting to walk off. This is when he heard the oncoming chopper blades. He sighed, then screamed out in agony. The helicopter had quickly fired a electrical net.
Wow.. These police aren't playing around anymore. I need to start to be more careful.
"Phase!" Hexx yelled, his entire body disappearing, the net going flat. The officers after Hexx were left to report again the failure to capture him.