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Chapter Two: The Search Begins
Saturday morning, in some park
"So what's this assignment Koenma has for us?" The five were gathered near a tree. Kurama was leaning against the tree, Hiei was sitting on a branch, Kuwabara was sitting on the ground, and Yusuke and Botan were standing. Kurama was, of course, the one who wanted as much information as he could get before he headed into the assignment.
Botan answered Kurama's question, "you probably know that there are tears between the human world and Makai, but they usually are only small enough that only small demons can pass through. Other demons somehow manage to squeeze past. Recently, we discovered a tear large enough for a human-sized demon to pass through easily. Even more recently, we have a report that one demon escaped through that tear, but the good news is that the large tear has somehow sealed back up. The assignment is to find that demon and return him to Makai." Botan pauses to catch her breath.
"Okay, so what's this demon look like?" Yusuke was not to thrilled at having to spend his weekend searching for a demon.
"All we know is that his eyes are crimson. The only surviving guard said that he was wearing a cloak over his body, so he couldn't provide much of a description of the demon."
Kuwabara spoke up with usual stupid question that everyone else wanted to know, "so how are we supposed to find a demon that we have no description on?"
Hiei finally spoke up, "simple, you fool. You walk around asking them if they are a demon." Hiei's response was obviously a sarcastic one meant to insult Kuwabara.
"Hiei that wasn't very nice."
"Hmph."
"Guess we'll just have to lay low until the guy decides to get bold enough to do something. After all, if he isn't going to anything harmful, then there's no real point in bringing him back, is there?"
Botan was wide-eyed at Yusuke's logic, "you do have a point Yusuke."
"So then our plan is to lay low?"
"Yes, Kurama. We're going to wait for him to make the first move," Yusuke replied.
"Are you saying that because of actual logic or are you saying that because you have a date with Keiko?" Hiei jumped down from the branch.
"Why do you ask that?"
"Because there's Keiko right now." Hiei points behind Yusuke. Yusuke turns to see Keiko walking their direction.
Yusuke looks at his watch. "Oh man. I told her 3:00 not 2:00."
Everyone heads off in their own direction, and Yusuke is dragged along by Keiko.
Monday, at school
"Hey, Urameshi!"
"Yeah?"
"You find anything out about the escaped demon yet?"
"No. I don't suppose you did?"
"No. I've even been walking around the alleys hoping I could even just a little lead."
"What are you? A detective?"
"Do you want my help or not?!" Kuwabara's voice raised and students passing by turned to stare at them.
"Okay. Okay. Calm down."
"Hey. There's that kid again."
"What you mean the one who's always staring at me?" Yusuke turns around to find Hideki leaning against his locker staring at him. Yusuke walks over to him and looks him in the eyes, "do you have some sort of a problem?"
Again he spoke with a calm voice that gave the hint that he was in complete control, "do you? I'm not the one making so much noise that everyone is staring at me."
"Look, either you stop staring at me or I'll find something else for you to stare at."
"Like what?"
"Like my finger." Yusuke flips him the bird and walks off.
"You know, maybe he's got a thing for you."
Next thing Kuwabara knew was that he was in the nurse's office.
That night, in the park
The four were gathered together in the same place they were. Botan had other things she needed to do and could not join. They were going over things they thought might be out of place or odd.
Kurama was currently talking, "the only thing I see out of place is that Kuwabara has a large bruise on his face."
"I, uh, smacked myself on accident."
Hiei was amused at his response, "how do you smack yourself on accident? What were you doing dancing around like a hyper little child and suddenly you run into a wall?"
"I WAS PRACTICING WITH MY SPIRIT SWORD, SO GET OFF MY CASE!!!!!!!"
"Would you two cool it? I noticed something strange today when I was talking with the new kid at school."
"You mean when you were trying to come on to him?"
Kuwabara gained another bruise on the other side of his face making him look like a raccoon. Hiei couldn't help but laugh (Of course we all know it must take a lot to make Hiei laugh.), "so that's how he got it."
"Anyway. If I can proceed without interruption. . ." Yusuke glares at Kuwabara, "I noticed this guy's eyes were red."
Kuwabara, as usual, had to make the stupid suggestion, "maybe he just didn't get enough sleep."
"They weren't red like that. The eye color was red."
"You mean crimson?" Kurama added.
"Yeah."
"Maybe he's the demon." Kuwabara was still rubbing his face.
Kurama added his logic, "we can't just automatically assume that because he has crimson eyes that he's the demon. While it's not common, there have been some cases where human's eye color was a crimson color. However, I think that it would be wise to keep an eye on this person you're talking about."
"Gotcha." Yusuke looks at his watch. "Hey, it's getting late. I think we should call it a day." They all say their goodbyes, with the exception of Hiei who just simply left.
Someplace dark
"I found your weakness Yusuke. Now you'll die. I trust the plague won't kill you before I do."
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Again I warn that flamers have a special place in my heart, but it isn't the kind of place you want to be in.
Chapter Two: The Search Begins
Saturday morning, in some park
"So what's this assignment Koenma has for us?" The five were gathered near a tree. Kurama was leaning against the tree, Hiei was sitting on a branch, Kuwabara was sitting on the ground, and Yusuke and Botan were standing. Kurama was, of course, the one who wanted as much information as he could get before he headed into the assignment.
Botan answered Kurama's question, "you probably know that there are tears between the human world and Makai, but they usually are only small enough that only small demons can pass through. Other demons somehow manage to squeeze past. Recently, we discovered a tear large enough for a human-sized demon to pass through easily. Even more recently, we have a report that one demon escaped through that tear, but the good news is that the large tear has somehow sealed back up. The assignment is to find that demon and return him to Makai." Botan pauses to catch her breath.
"Okay, so what's this demon look like?" Yusuke was not to thrilled at having to spend his weekend searching for a demon.
"All we know is that his eyes are crimson. The only surviving guard said that he was wearing a cloak over his body, so he couldn't provide much of a description of the demon."
Kuwabara spoke up with usual stupid question that everyone else wanted to know, "so how are we supposed to find a demon that we have no description on?"
Hiei finally spoke up, "simple, you fool. You walk around asking them if they are a demon." Hiei's response was obviously a sarcastic one meant to insult Kuwabara.
"Hiei that wasn't very nice."
"Hmph."
"Guess we'll just have to lay low until the guy decides to get bold enough to do something. After all, if he isn't going to anything harmful, then there's no real point in bringing him back, is there?"
Botan was wide-eyed at Yusuke's logic, "you do have a point Yusuke."
"So then our plan is to lay low?"
"Yes, Kurama. We're going to wait for him to make the first move," Yusuke replied.
"Are you saying that because of actual logic or are you saying that because you have a date with Keiko?" Hiei jumped down from the branch.
"Why do you ask that?"
"Because there's Keiko right now." Hiei points behind Yusuke. Yusuke turns to see Keiko walking their direction.
Yusuke looks at his watch. "Oh man. I told her 3:00 not 2:00."
Everyone heads off in their own direction, and Yusuke is dragged along by Keiko.
Monday, at school
"Hey, Urameshi!"
"Yeah?"
"You find anything out about the escaped demon yet?"
"No. I don't suppose you did?"
"No. I've even been walking around the alleys hoping I could even just a little lead."
"What are you? A detective?"
"Do you want my help or not?!" Kuwabara's voice raised and students passing by turned to stare at them.
"Okay. Okay. Calm down."
"Hey. There's that kid again."
"What you mean the one who's always staring at me?" Yusuke turns around to find Hideki leaning against his locker staring at him. Yusuke walks over to him and looks him in the eyes, "do you have some sort of a problem?"
Again he spoke with a calm voice that gave the hint that he was in complete control, "do you? I'm not the one making so much noise that everyone is staring at me."
"Look, either you stop staring at me or I'll find something else for you to stare at."
"Like what?"
"Like my finger." Yusuke flips him the bird and walks off.
"You know, maybe he's got a thing for you."
Next thing Kuwabara knew was that he was in the nurse's office.
That night, in the park
The four were gathered together in the same place they were. Botan had other things she needed to do and could not join. They were going over things they thought might be out of place or odd.
Kurama was currently talking, "the only thing I see out of place is that Kuwabara has a large bruise on his face."
"I, uh, smacked myself on accident."
Hiei was amused at his response, "how do you smack yourself on accident? What were you doing dancing around like a hyper little child and suddenly you run into a wall?"
"I WAS PRACTICING WITH MY SPIRIT SWORD, SO GET OFF MY CASE!!!!!!!"
"Would you two cool it? I noticed something strange today when I was talking with the new kid at school."
"You mean when you were trying to come on to him?"
Kuwabara gained another bruise on the other side of his face making him look like a raccoon. Hiei couldn't help but laugh (Of course we all know it must take a lot to make Hiei laugh.), "so that's how he got it."
"Anyway. If I can proceed without interruption. . ." Yusuke glares at Kuwabara, "I noticed this guy's eyes were red."
Kuwabara, as usual, had to make the stupid suggestion, "maybe he just didn't get enough sleep."
"They weren't red like that. The eye color was red."
"You mean crimson?" Kurama added.
"Yeah."
"Maybe he's the demon." Kuwabara was still rubbing his face.
Kurama added his logic, "we can't just automatically assume that because he has crimson eyes that he's the demon. While it's not common, there have been some cases where human's eye color was a crimson color. However, I think that it would be wise to keep an eye on this person you're talking about."
"Gotcha." Yusuke looks at his watch. "Hey, it's getting late. I think we should call it a day." They all say their goodbyes, with the exception of Hiei who just simply left.
Someplace dark
"I found your weakness Yusuke. Now you'll die. I trust the plague won't kill you before I do."
Beware: The rating will soon increase. Keep an eye out for my next warning, for I'll tell you when I'll do it. Please review.
Again I warn that flamers have a special place in my heart, but it isn't the kind of place you want to be in.