Hi everyone! I got some more reviews :) ! Please keep it up! I would have
added more to this chapter,but couldn't think of any creative ideas, which
would result in boring you. Ah yes, I almost forgot I will be including
songs in some chapters. Hope you enjoy them. This is song is Nirvana's
Heart-Shaped Box. Let me know what you think.
Translations:
Aphado nin: Follow me
Daro an idh si: Stop for rest here.
Daro: Stop or halt
I think it is time to reply to the reviewers!
Nykimstar: Nope, it is not over, as I am sure you already know :) What does your screen name mean? Thanks for reviewing! Hope you read the rest of the story.
del_kaidin: Ah, my beta reading person! Thanks for doing that and thanks for all the encouragement!
depressed-girl001: Uh...... glad you liked it so much! I HAVE A DERANGED FAN!YES!!!! KIDDING!! Thanks for reading and enjoying the story!
Tiranth: THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!
Shippo1: You loved it? :) That is soooooooooo awesome!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
kilanna: You have a lot of pleases in there. THANK YOU FOR LIKING THE STORY!!!!!!
robin_bird: Thank you for the applause :) I think they fixed those symbol things,but I don't add the accents over the letters just in case.
Viciousbeb0p: I wanted it to be that way because, my expreience has been when you have what both characters are doing, which you called "jumping scenes" About Kagome it is a little thing I call ( well humankind for that matter) EMOTIONS. Thanks for the review and I really enjoyed your story :)
Kinneko: YOU LIKE? Not quite a Lord Of The Rings crossover,but I might write one :) To find out about Sesshomaru, you must read more ;p Glad you like Kagome's character! Yes, I do love ALL things that are iridescent :) The Shippo thing is cute ;p
lilablue7: Yeah, I agree the sentences in the beginning are a bit choppy,but remember this is my first fic! Thanks for the reviewi!
kilanna: YES! YOU LOVE THE STORY??? You are asking me to hurry up and update? THANK YOU SO MUCH! :) ^.^
~Tsuki~no~Hikari~ What in the world does your screen name mean? Yes, I am REALLY into the LOTR! Just a reminder, the Two Towers comes out on DVD and VHS on August 26! The extended version comes out November 12! No, Mae govannen means well met. Thanks for the encouragement!
Well, that is it for the reviews! Keep em coming! Now, for the disclaimers!
DISCLAIMER: Hmmmmmm.........what to use as a disclaimer? Lets try this one. I kind of pulled it out of the magic hat. Greenleaf sees Inuyasha and gang walking down a road. "Hey, guys! Wait for me!" Greenleaf yells. Inuyasha turns and sees who it is and mumbles and rolls his eyes and says, "Feh."
Sango is quiet.
Miroku: "What a fine lady." Walks up to Greenleaf and grips her hands and asks, " Would you do me the honor of having my child?"
Greenleaf looks very shocked.
Sango strolls up quietly and takes her boomerang and smacks Miroku over the head and whispers evilly, " So I am the only of you,huh?"
Miroku: Laying on ground with Xs on his eyes and legs sticking up in the air.
Kagome: "NOT HER AGAIN!"
A very large dinosaur comes strolling down the road and yells," You guys from the show Inuyasha?"
Inuyasha: " Yeah, who's askin?"
Dinosaur: Cartoon Network, you guys need to head back to the studio. New episodes will be airing August 25, and they need you."
Inuyasha: " Come on Kagome." Grabs Kagome and puts her behind him on the dinosaur, Sango drags Miroku and the rest of the gand hop on too.
Greenleaf: "Can I come?"
Kagome looks really pissed. She sticks her nose up into air and the large dinosaur starts moving,slowly,slowly,slowly,slowly, until they go over that hill and disappear.
Greenleaf: "Well, that was totally pointless,but hey, did you enjoy it? Oh yeah, I don't own Inuyasha or the characters related to the show, but this story is mine and some the characters are mine. So don't steal anything. I don't own Nirvana either. So don't sue me. I just like their music, even if Kurt is gone. Well, enjoy the chappie and please review! I don't own the lyrics to Heart Shaped Box either, so DON'T SUE ME!
Chapter 18- Heart Shaped Box
Etain felt the blood pulsing vibrantly through her temples as they dropped to a walk as they approached the waterfall. The pungent smell of the exotic flowers filled her nostrils, a smile spread across her flushed face.She closed her eyes and sighed deeply.This was her peaceful spot,where she came when she wanted to be alone.Celeblim and Naurlach kept moving forward,encroaching on the sparkling waterfall, as it misted the entire area.The sun glittered across her face, as she felt water mist her face.She opened her eyes slowly and beheld the image that was more precious than anything in the world to her. Trees of unknown height draped over the quiet pool that the waterfall dispensed of the rapid flowing water.Their branches reached to the sky and some hung over the pool.Old moss swayed slowly with the breeze that was coming from the ocean.Orchid trees mixed with old oaks, their blooms of all colors. Faded purple,Christmas red, and canary yellow mingled together. As leaves and brightly colored flowers fell they fluttered towards the surface, making small ripples as they hit the smooth surface.
Etain looked amusingly over at Frealaf who looked like he was about to fall off Naurlach in a complete state of awe. She just realized how much she enjoyed looking at his fair face, with the golden eyes ever so curious in their surroundings.
She eyes me like a pisces when I am weak
I've been locked inside your Heart-Shaped box for weeks
I've been drawn into your magnet tar pit trap
I wish I could eat your cancer when you turn back (Alt: ... when you turn black)
Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Hey! Wait! (Alt: Hate! Haight!)
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Your advice Meat-eating orchids forgive no one just yet
Cut myself on angel's hair and baby's breath
Broken hymen of your highness I'm left black
Throw down your umbilical noose so I can climb right back
Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Your advice
She eyes me like a pisces when I am weak
I've been locked inside your Heart-Shaped box for weeks I've been drawn into your magnet tar pit trap
I wish I could eat your cancer when you turn back (Alt: ... when you turn black)
Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Hey! Wait! I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Your advice (x3)
Frealaf tore his eyes away from the blissful image before him to stare at one of equal beauty, if not more,Etain. He went over her features slowly, her long goldish silver hair was blown back from the relaxing,light wind. Her eyes were sparkling, and her face was flushed from the flying race. She had a refulgent smile. His eyes sparkled at her. " Shall we dismount and give the horses a rest?"
Etain's response was " Aphado nin." Her smile widened at Frealaf's confused face. " Why must you confuse me?" Frealaf cried out in dismay, in a humorous way. " Follow me." She was grinning from ear to ear, as she and Celeblim took off across the small field that surrounded the waterfall. Etain whispered to Celeblim, " Noro lim, Noro lim, Celeblim." Celeblim in response increased his stride, easily easing himself into a gallop. The waterfall's basin was shallow for several feet,then it gradually became deeper. Celeblim launched himself into the air.
Frealaf gasped as Etain took off in Celeblim, heading directly towards the waterfall. His gasped deepened as Celeblim flung himself straight up into the air, the sun glistening off of his silver coat making it shimmer in every direction.Etain's was blown sideways with Celeblim's, silver, and goldish silver intertwining with each other.His gasp turned into a sigh as Celeblim landed softly in the water barely disturbing the water..
Etain sensed Celeblim's glee as the cool water refreshed him.She looked at Frealaf and Naurlach, who were still standing fifty feet away from them. "Daro an idh si." She yelled.
Frealaf couldn't make out what she said, he feared she had been injured.He tried to speak as calmly as he could to Naurlach, but the fear cracked over the calm.He inhaled the fresh air, trying to stake out any scent that would be redolent of blood. All he could smell was the blooms from the flowers and the fresh spring grass. " Noro lim, Noro lim, Naurlach." Naurlach was happy to reply to the command. He appeared as a fiery red chestnut blur as he bolted forward.His hooves barely skimmed the ground, it felt like they were flying, again.He moved easily with Naurlach's pace, it was so comfortable, just like Etain told him it would be. Naurlach's long stride covered the fifty feet in no time. As they neared the waterfall, he could see the grin on Etain's face.He was going to slow Naurlach down,but he had all ready launched himself into the air, just as Celeblim had done. Frealaf closed his eyes, reminiscing about his dragons back at home. He felt a pang in his stomach, he truly missed his home,land, and most of all the dragons. He was jolted out of his thoughts as cold water splashed his face.
Etain noticed Frealaf had gone elsewhere, and she wanted him to return to the present, so she reached down and scooped water into her hands and flung the cool liquid at Frealaf. His eyes fluttered open immediately. Her grin widened at the shock in his eyes. " What was that for?"
" A reality check." Etain bubbled out.
Frealaf raised an eyebrow at her sudden laughing fit. " Hey, what does 'Daro an idh si mean?"
Etain tamed her laughing fit, and wiped tears off her face,that had spilled out with the laughing. " It........... it means 'Stop for rest here.' The horses can cool down and so can we."
"What do you mean "we"?"
" I mean, we can go swimming in here, you know in the water. It is a very hot day even with the breeze,and there is much to show you yet, Westman."
Frealaf noted the amusement in her eyes, and her teasing smile. Her father's words echoed in his mind. ' Get to know her during your stay here' He remembered the rest of his words. Etain could be his, if he wished, but wouldn't Etain despise him for that? He knew she would run, if forced to wed him.Never had he desired one as much as Etain. "Frealaf." Frealaf snapped his head up looking directly into Etain's concerned face. "Huh?"
" That is the second time, you have gone somewhere. Are you okay?"
Frealaf smiled and shook his head up and down " I am fine."
Etain's smiled returned. " Good. Now, lets get moving."She removed her boots and and threw them towards the bank,they landed in a nice heap. She swung her left leg over and moved her body so she posed her herself, bracing herself with her arms back and her hands lightly gripping Celeblim.He moved sideways slowly, taking her deeper into the pool. " Daro." Celeblim flicked his ears in response and stopped. Etain flung herself into the cool,aqua, clear water. She looked at Celeblim and flung his head sideways to let her know he understood. She had told him to do whatever he wished while they were here. Celeblim walked slowly out into the cool water and cooled off. He stood silently waiting for Naurlach.
Frealaf removed his boots as Etain had done, and threw them right next to hers.Frealaf took an easier approach than Etain, he lifted his right leg in a quick movement over Naurlach's back and landed in knee deep water. He patted Naurlach on the neck and said, "Okay boy, go ahead and have fun." Naurlach lifted his head and neighed in response as he took off into the water to cool off, he then raced up to Celeblim. The two stallions reared in union, as they landed softly onto the smooth sandy bottom of the pool. They lowered their heads for a drink, they drunk deeply, then spun around as if they were dancing, they took off towards the bank.They galloped off into the emerald meadow, racing and playing. Frealaf grinned at the sight, he continued to wade out into the deeper water. Etain grinned at him.
Translations:
Aphado nin: Follow me
Daro an idh si: Stop for rest here.
Daro: Stop or halt
I think it is time to reply to the reviewers!
Nykimstar: Nope, it is not over, as I am sure you already know :) What does your screen name mean? Thanks for reviewing! Hope you read the rest of the story.
del_kaidin: Ah, my beta reading person! Thanks for doing that and thanks for all the encouragement!
depressed-girl001: Uh...... glad you liked it so much! I HAVE A DERANGED FAN!YES!!!! KIDDING!! Thanks for reading and enjoying the story!
Tiranth: THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!
Shippo1: You loved it? :) That is soooooooooo awesome!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
kilanna: You have a lot of pleases in there. THANK YOU FOR LIKING THE STORY!!!!!!
robin_bird: Thank you for the applause :) I think they fixed those symbol things,but I don't add the accents over the letters just in case.
Viciousbeb0p: I wanted it to be that way because, my expreience has been when you have what both characters are doing, which you called "jumping scenes" About Kagome it is a little thing I call ( well humankind for that matter) EMOTIONS. Thanks for the review and I really enjoyed your story :)
Kinneko: YOU LIKE? Not quite a Lord Of The Rings crossover,but I might write one :) To find out about Sesshomaru, you must read more ;p Glad you like Kagome's character! Yes, I do love ALL things that are iridescent :) The Shippo thing is cute ;p
lilablue7: Yeah, I agree the sentences in the beginning are a bit choppy,but remember this is my first fic! Thanks for the reviewi!
kilanna: YES! YOU LOVE THE STORY??? You are asking me to hurry up and update? THANK YOU SO MUCH! :) ^.^
~Tsuki~no~Hikari~ What in the world does your screen name mean? Yes, I am REALLY into the LOTR! Just a reminder, the Two Towers comes out on DVD and VHS on August 26! The extended version comes out November 12! No, Mae govannen means well met. Thanks for the encouragement!
Well, that is it for the reviews! Keep em coming! Now, for the disclaimers!
DISCLAIMER: Hmmmmmm.........what to use as a disclaimer? Lets try this one. I kind of pulled it out of the magic hat. Greenleaf sees Inuyasha and gang walking down a road. "Hey, guys! Wait for me!" Greenleaf yells. Inuyasha turns and sees who it is and mumbles and rolls his eyes and says, "Feh."
Sango is quiet.
Miroku: "What a fine lady." Walks up to Greenleaf and grips her hands and asks, " Would you do me the honor of having my child?"
Greenleaf looks very shocked.
Sango strolls up quietly and takes her boomerang and smacks Miroku over the head and whispers evilly, " So I am the only of you,huh?"
Miroku: Laying on ground with Xs on his eyes and legs sticking up in the air.
Kagome: "NOT HER AGAIN!"
A very large dinosaur comes strolling down the road and yells," You guys from the show Inuyasha?"
Inuyasha: " Yeah, who's askin?"
Dinosaur: Cartoon Network, you guys need to head back to the studio. New episodes will be airing August 25, and they need you."
Inuyasha: " Come on Kagome." Grabs Kagome and puts her behind him on the dinosaur, Sango drags Miroku and the rest of the gand hop on too.
Greenleaf: "Can I come?"
Kagome looks really pissed. She sticks her nose up into air and the large dinosaur starts moving,slowly,slowly,slowly,slowly, until they go over that hill and disappear.
Greenleaf: "Well, that was totally pointless,but hey, did you enjoy it? Oh yeah, I don't own Inuyasha or the characters related to the show, but this story is mine and some the characters are mine. So don't steal anything. I don't own Nirvana either. So don't sue me. I just like their music, even if Kurt is gone. Well, enjoy the chappie and please review! I don't own the lyrics to Heart Shaped Box either, so DON'T SUE ME!
Chapter 18- Heart Shaped Box
Etain felt the blood pulsing vibrantly through her temples as they dropped to a walk as they approached the waterfall. The pungent smell of the exotic flowers filled her nostrils, a smile spread across her flushed face.She closed her eyes and sighed deeply.This was her peaceful spot,where she came when she wanted to be alone.Celeblim and Naurlach kept moving forward,encroaching on the sparkling waterfall, as it misted the entire area.The sun glittered across her face, as she felt water mist her face.She opened her eyes slowly and beheld the image that was more precious than anything in the world to her. Trees of unknown height draped over the quiet pool that the waterfall dispensed of the rapid flowing water.Their branches reached to the sky and some hung over the pool.Old moss swayed slowly with the breeze that was coming from the ocean.Orchid trees mixed with old oaks, their blooms of all colors. Faded purple,Christmas red, and canary yellow mingled together. As leaves and brightly colored flowers fell they fluttered towards the surface, making small ripples as they hit the smooth surface.
Etain looked amusingly over at Frealaf who looked like he was about to fall off Naurlach in a complete state of awe. She just realized how much she enjoyed looking at his fair face, with the golden eyes ever so curious in their surroundings.
She eyes me like a pisces when I am weak
I've been locked inside your Heart-Shaped box for weeks
I've been drawn into your magnet tar pit trap
I wish I could eat your cancer when you turn back (Alt: ... when you turn black)
Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Hey! Wait! (Alt: Hate! Haight!)
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Your advice Meat-eating orchids forgive no one just yet
Cut myself on angel's hair and baby's breath
Broken hymen of your highness I'm left black
Throw down your umbilical noose so I can climb right back
Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Your advice
She eyes me like a pisces when I am weak
I've been locked inside your Heart-Shaped box for weeks I've been drawn into your magnet tar pit trap
I wish I could eat your cancer when you turn back (Alt: ... when you turn black)
Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Hey! Wait!
I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Hey! Wait! I've got a new complaint
Forever in debt to your priceless advice
Your advice (x3)
Frealaf tore his eyes away from the blissful image before him to stare at one of equal beauty, if not more,Etain. He went over her features slowly, her long goldish silver hair was blown back from the relaxing,light wind. Her eyes were sparkling, and her face was flushed from the flying race. She had a refulgent smile. His eyes sparkled at her. " Shall we dismount and give the horses a rest?"
Etain's response was " Aphado nin." Her smile widened at Frealaf's confused face. " Why must you confuse me?" Frealaf cried out in dismay, in a humorous way. " Follow me." She was grinning from ear to ear, as she and Celeblim took off across the small field that surrounded the waterfall. Etain whispered to Celeblim, " Noro lim, Noro lim, Celeblim." Celeblim in response increased his stride, easily easing himself into a gallop. The waterfall's basin was shallow for several feet,then it gradually became deeper. Celeblim launched himself into the air.
Frealaf gasped as Etain took off in Celeblim, heading directly towards the waterfall. His gasped deepened as Celeblim flung himself straight up into the air, the sun glistening off of his silver coat making it shimmer in every direction.Etain's was blown sideways with Celeblim's, silver, and goldish silver intertwining with each other.His gasp turned into a sigh as Celeblim landed softly in the water barely disturbing the water..
Etain sensed Celeblim's glee as the cool water refreshed him.She looked at Frealaf and Naurlach, who were still standing fifty feet away from them. "Daro an idh si." She yelled.
Frealaf couldn't make out what she said, he feared she had been injured.He tried to speak as calmly as he could to Naurlach, but the fear cracked over the calm.He inhaled the fresh air, trying to stake out any scent that would be redolent of blood. All he could smell was the blooms from the flowers and the fresh spring grass. " Noro lim, Noro lim, Naurlach." Naurlach was happy to reply to the command. He appeared as a fiery red chestnut blur as he bolted forward.His hooves barely skimmed the ground, it felt like they were flying, again.He moved easily with Naurlach's pace, it was so comfortable, just like Etain told him it would be. Naurlach's long stride covered the fifty feet in no time. As they neared the waterfall, he could see the grin on Etain's face.He was going to slow Naurlach down,but he had all ready launched himself into the air, just as Celeblim had done. Frealaf closed his eyes, reminiscing about his dragons back at home. He felt a pang in his stomach, he truly missed his home,land, and most of all the dragons. He was jolted out of his thoughts as cold water splashed his face.
Etain noticed Frealaf had gone elsewhere, and she wanted him to return to the present, so she reached down and scooped water into her hands and flung the cool liquid at Frealaf. His eyes fluttered open immediately. Her grin widened at the shock in his eyes. " What was that for?"
" A reality check." Etain bubbled out.
Frealaf raised an eyebrow at her sudden laughing fit. " Hey, what does 'Daro an idh si mean?"
Etain tamed her laughing fit, and wiped tears off her face,that had spilled out with the laughing. " It........... it means 'Stop for rest here.' The horses can cool down and so can we."
"What do you mean "we"?"
" I mean, we can go swimming in here, you know in the water. It is a very hot day even with the breeze,and there is much to show you yet, Westman."
Frealaf noted the amusement in her eyes, and her teasing smile. Her father's words echoed in his mind. ' Get to know her during your stay here' He remembered the rest of his words. Etain could be his, if he wished, but wouldn't Etain despise him for that? He knew she would run, if forced to wed him.Never had he desired one as much as Etain. "Frealaf." Frealaf snapped his head up looking directly into Etain's concerned face. "Huh?"
" That is the second time, you have gone somewhere. Are you okay?"
Frealaf smiled and shook his head up and down " I am fine."
Etain's smiled returned. " Good. Now, lets get moving."She removed her boots and and threw them towards the bank,they landed in a nice heap. She swung her left leg over and moved her body so she posed her herself, bracing herself with her arms back and her hands lightly gripping Celeblim.He moved sideways slowly, taking her deeper into the pool. " Daro." Celeblim flicked his ears in response and stopped. Etain flung herself into the cool,aqua, clear water. She looked at Celeblim and flung his head sideways to let her know he understood. She had told him to do whatever he wished while they were here. Celeblim walked slowly out into the cool water and cooled off. He stood silently waiting for Naurlach.
Frealaf removed his boots as Etain had done, and threw them right next to hers.Frealaf took an easier approach than Etain, he lifted his right leg in a quick movement over Naurlach's back and landed in knee deep water. He patted Naurlach on the neck and said, "Okay boy, go ahead and have fun." Naurlach lifted his head and neighed in response as he took off into the water to cool off, he then raced up to Celeblim. The two stallions reared in union, as they landed softly onto the smooth sandy bottom of the pool. They lowered their heads for a drink, they drunk deeply, then spun around as if they were dancing, they took off towards the bank.They galloped off into the emerald meadow, racing and playing. Frealaf grinned at the sight, he continued to wade out into the deeper water. Etain grinned at him.