A/N:The contest is now over. The scores of Dirpeck's punishment are as following:
An ±Underwater home in the Bog of Stench- 2 Torture him A LOT- 1 Make him Shenya's slave- 3 Kill him, make him live Aboveground, or other things- 0
In this chapter, I will put in arguements as to why most of these would be a bad idea. Please remember to review.
Chapter 7
Sarah froze. She had come back to find a knife to a sleeping Jareth's throat, held by none other than her little brother, Toby.
"I'm going to kill him, Sarah. I'm going to kill the wicked Goblin King that kidnapped me and made you run that horrible Labyrinth," Toby said quietly, without turning around.
"Toby, he's not really evil. I only made him evil so that there would be a bad guy in my story. He didn't really kidnap you, I wished you away." Sarah replied. Toby sheathed his knife and pulled Sarah away from camp.
"Then explain it to me," Toby said, searching her eyes. And she told him the truth of what really happened in the Labyrinth.
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Jareth awoke to find Shenya out cold, the fox and his dog nowhere around, and Sarah talking to Toby outside the camp, apparently teling a story.
Jareth, finding everyone else in their own little world, turned his thoughts to ore important matters. What to do with Dirpeck.
He enetertained many methods of punishment, before discarding most of them.
Killing the goblin would bring him greatjoy, but the traitor was Shenya's friend and he didn't want shenya hating him for killing her friend.
He could torture him, but that would eventuaslly lead to killing the goblin. Same problem as before.
Jareth thought about making him an underwater home in the Bog of Eternal stench. But then, the inhabitants of his kingdom would compain of the smell everytime he was around.
The he had a revoulution. What if he made Dirpeck Shenya's slave? Shenya could see the goblin whenever she wanted, and iyt would be a great birthday present. How old was his cousin? Fifteen? Sixteen? Jareth had lost count.
"Oh, you're awake," Shenya said as she yawned and got up. Jareth noticed it was almost dawn.
"Why did you come back?" Jareth asked cooly. Shenya tensed.
"You are my cousin. And the only family I have left. I had to come. Even if you do hate me," Shenya replied, and left to go get some food.
Hate her? Where did she get that impression? I sent her away for protection, not hatred. I need to make it up to her somehow. But how?' Jareth wondered.
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Didymus had fallen into yet another oubliette. He wondered around for hours until he came upon a sweet, fragrent smell.
Why, that smells like . . . home!' the fox thought. He hurried around a corner and ran into his house.
It was a gatekeeper's house, but it suited his purposes. There was a bed, a fireplace, a desk and a dresser in the one-room gatehouse. The privy was out back.
Then he saw the apple. Sir Didymus noticed it was time for breakfast, so he took a bite out of the apple.
It tasted strange, and Didymus became dizzy. He stumbled onto the bed and fell asleep.
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Didymus was entered in a jousting tornament. He was wearing Sarah's favorite color, blue. Jareth was on the other end, also wearing blue.
Jareth stood on a great black warhorse, with red eyes. Didymus sat on his dog, Ambrosius, who seemed very small at the moment.
Didymus suddenly knew that they were fighting over Sarah, who he had long desired. He knew this couldn't end well.
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A/N: A little clarifacation on the apple. There's a plant called Dreamweed that grows inside different fruits in the Underground. Each fruit has a different dream,( i.e. Apple= fight over someone, Peach= ballroom scene, banana= moonlit beach.) Each fruit lasts around nine hours, or until the person dreaming realizes that it's a dream, and want to get out of that dream. This information becomes important in later chapters. I even finished the story, it just needs to be typed up.
Okay, enough about the story, now about me! I had a horrible week last week. I went to Cedar Point, and got home Thursday and went camping on the same day. I have to share a bed with two other people, because I don't feel like sleeping in a tent. Unfortunately, we had beans for dinner on the last night. That is why the area around the bed smelled like the Bog of Eternal Stench.
My week would have gone fine, except for the fact that my friend wanted me to call her when I got home Saturday afternoon. She wanted me to know that my ex-boyfriend was dead. Hit and Run driver. He was on a bike on the way home on Thursday. He was fifteen. I had to go to his funeral yesterday. I almost didn't recognize him for all the make-up on his face. That's what really made me cry.
Oh, yes. Please review, here are the replies.
Replies:
Captain Rogue Blade- Thanks for the vote, but just think of how stinky that would be! Anyways, Jareth threatened to send Hoggle there if he even THOUGHT he was being betrayed. So Maybe a little something more extreme.
Normal?- You're doing it again. You can bribe me. Maybe by reviewing my other stories. (hint hint) Nice evil laugh by the way. Oh, Are you my evil/good twin? It would explain a lot.
MorganLeFay99- Well, I haven't heard that Toby couldn't remember, and if that's the way it is/was, Sarah told him stories of the Labyrinth and he found out they were true somehow.
wings- trust me, I had it all planned out. mostly. Toby's only eight, so I don't think he could really kill someone, so of course he has to hesitate. In which time Sarah shows up . . .
Draco's Daughter- Who says I hurt Didymus? He just got a little lost. i needed him out of the picture for a while, and didn't feel like adding more bad guys in.
An ±Underwater home in the Bog of Stench- 2 Torture him A LOT- 1 Make him Shenya's slave- 3 Kill him, make him live Aboveground, or other things- 0
In this chapter, I will put in arguements as to why most of these would be a bad idea. Please remember to review.
Chapter 7
Sarah froze. She had come back to find a knife to a sleeping Jareth's throat, held by none other than her little brother, Toby.
"I'm going to kill him, Sarah. I'm going to kill the wicked Goblin King that kidnapped me and made you run that horrible Labyrinth," Toby said quietly, without turning around.
"Toby, he's not really evil. I only made him evil so that there would be a bad guy in my story. He didn't really kidnap you, I wished you away." Sarah replied. Toby sheathed his knife and pulled Sarah away from camp.
"Then explain it to me," Toby said, searching her eyes. And she told him the truth of what really happened in the Labyrinth.
#####
Jareth awoke to find Shenya out cold, the fox and his dog nowhere around, and Sarah talking to Toby outside the camp, apparently teling a story.
Jareth, finding everyone else in their own little world, turned his thoughts to ore important matters. What to do with Dirpeck.
He enetertained many methods of punishment, before discarding most of them.
Killing the goblin would bring him greatjoy, but the traitor was Shenya's friend and he didn't want shenya hating him for killing her friend.
He could torture him, but that would eventuaslly lead to killing the goblin. Same problem as before.
Jareth thought about making him an underwater home in the Bog of Eternal stench. But then, the inhabitants of his kingdom would compain of the smell everytime he was around.
The he had a revoulution. What if he made Dirpeck Shenya's slave? Shenya could see the goblin whenever she wanted, and iyt would be a great birthday present. How old was his cousin? Fifteen? Sixteen? Jareth had lost count.
"Oh, you're awake," Shenya said as she yawned and got up. Jareth noticed it was almost dawn.
"Why did you come back?" Jareth asked cooly. Shenya tensed.
"You are my cousin. And the only family I have left. I had to come. Even if you do hate me," Shenya replied, and left to go get some food.
Hate her? Where did she get that impression? I sent her away for protection, not hatred. I need to make it up to her somehow. But how?' Jareth wondered.
#####
Didymus had fallen into yet another oubliette. He wondered around for hours until he came upon a sweet, fragrent smell.
Why, that smells like . . . home!' the fox thought. He hurried around a corner and ran into his house.
It was a gatekeeper's house, but it suited his purposes. There was a bed, a fireplace, a desk and a dresser in the one-room gatehouse. The privy was out back.
Then he saw the apple. Sir Didymus noticed it was time for breakfast, so he took a bite out of the apple.
It tasted strange, and Didymus became dizzy. He stumbled onto the bed and fell asleep.
#####
Didymus was entered in a jousting tornament. He was wearing Sarah's favorite color, blue. Jareth was on the other end, also wearing blue.
Jareth stood on a great black warhorse, with red eyes. Didymus sat on his dog, Ambrosius, who seemed very small at the moment.
Didymus suddenly knew that they were fighting over Sarah, who he had long desired. He knew this couldn't end well.
#####
A/N: A little clarifacation on the apple. There's a plant called Dreamweed that grows inside different fruits in the Underground. Each fruit has a different dream,( i.e. Apple= fight over someone, Peach= ballroom scene, banana= moonlit beach.) Each fruit lasts around nine hours, or until the person dreaming realizes that it's a dream, and want to get out of that dream. This information becomes important in later chapters. I even finished the story, it just needs to be typed up.
Okay, enough about the story, now about me! I had a horrible week last week. I went to Cedar Point, and got home Thursday and went camping on the same day. I have to share a bed with two other people, because I don't feel like sleeping in a tent. Unfortunately, we had beans for dinner on the last night. That is why the area around the bed smelled like the Bog of Eternal Stench.
My week would have gone fine, except for the fact that my friend wanted me to call her when I got home Saturday afternoon. She wanted me to know that my ex-boyfriend was dead. Hit and Run driver. He was on a bike on the way home on Thursday. He was fifteen. I had to go to his funeral yesterday. I almost didn't recognize him for all the make-up on his face. That's what really made me cry.
Oh, yes. Please review, here are the replies.
Replies:
Captain Rogue Blade- Thanks for the vote, but just think of how stinky that would be! Anyways, Jareth threatened to send Hoggle there if he even THOUGHT he was being betrayed. So Maybe a little something more extreme.
Normal?- You're doing it again. You can bribe me. Maybe by reviewing my other stories. (hint hint) Nice evil laugh by the way. Oh, Are you my evil/good twin? It would explain a lot.
MorganLeFay99- Well, I haven't heard that Toby couldn't remember, and if that's the way it is/was, Sarah told him stories of the Labyrinth and he found out they were true somehow.
wings- trust me, I had it all planned out. mostly. Toby's only eight, so I don't think he could really kill someone, so of course he has to hesitate. In which time Sarah shows up . . .
Draco's Daughter- Who says I hurt Didymus? He just got a little lost. i needed him out of the picture for a while, and didn't feel like adding more bad guys in.