Thank you to everyone who has reviewed my poem's so far. All reviews are deeply cherished. I hope you like this one as much as you have like the others. Sorry I took so long in posting it.
Helms deep
For hours now we've been here tonight
I've seen the pain I've seen the fright
Upon the faces of those who lie
Upon the ground waiting to die
For death to finally let them be
To enclose their body and set them free.
We have shot and we have slashed
Hopes of peace have long been dashed
Against such evil how can we hope to do good
Destroy all darkness I wish that I could
But instead all I can do is stay here and kill
Stop these creatures doing evil at will.
My job here was to stay and defend
Any allie up until the end
I look down; see bodies stained in blood
Half buried in earth, covered in mud
Beside my feet lies my cousin Haldir
An arrow in his back, his face showing fear
Thousands of dead lie scattered on the floor
There could never be less, only more
The good and the bad lie next to each other
Young and old, father and brother
Nothing we can do will change the fact
This is all down to evil- and nothing but that.
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