"So...you're his girlfriend, huh?" asked Gwen casually-she was trying to
hide the pain and the hurt that she was suffering right now.
"What?" asked MJ as she snapped out of her reverie. She was so worried about Peter and at the same time, she was trying to think of a way to get rid of Gwen that she wasn't paying attention, "Can you repeat that?"
"I asked, 'so...you're his girlfriend, huh?' "
"Yeah," replied MJ dreamily; she just couldn't believe that she was finally Peter's girlfriend.
"You're really lucky, you know. Peter's a sweet, cute guy," said Gwen.
"Yeah," replied Mary Jane with a wide smile, "I know."
Gwen slowly nodded and stared up at the ceiling. After several seconds, she stared at her watch.
"Well," said Gwen, "I guess he is really busy. I'll just go."
"Yeah, OK," replied a relieved MJ, "It was nice meeting you, Gwen."
"Yeah...well, tell Peter I dropped by to say hi. OK...bye," said Gwen as she walked toward the green, wooden door.
Suddenly, just as Gwen reached for the doorknob, Spiderman swung in through the window. Gwen twirled around and just stared.
"Um..." said Peter, "Well...I'm lucky, aren't I? Two beautiful ladies waiting for me."
The two girls just continued to stare at him. Gwen's mouth was wide open, and her eyes looked like they were about to pop out of their sockets. MJ stared at Peter with worry and concern; she realized the deep cuts on his arms and legs.
"Come on, Parker, THINK!!!!" he thought.
Suddenly, he felt his spider-sense go off. He quickly jumped towards MJ and grabbed her and Gwen at the same time. Suddenly, there was a loud noise as Peter quickly shielded the two girls from the explosion with his body. He felt the fire singe the areas of his skin that were exposed. Due to his bruised rib cage, he stumbled and slowly rose to his feet. He turned around, and he couldn't believe it. "What is this?" he thought, "The return of the dead? I killed him yesterday!" There, standing in the doorway, was Doc Ock!
He snarled evilly as his tentacles reached for Spiderman. Peter tried to dodge Doc Ock's grip, but because of his sore rib cage, Otto easily captured him.
"GO!!!" he screamed at MJ and Gwen, but neither of them moved.
"Ah! You have company!" said Doc Ock with a smile.
"Don't touch them! This is between you and me!" Peter muttered angrily. Otto just smiled and squeezed Peter tighter with all four tentacles. Peter could hardly breathe due to the immense pressure from the metal limbs.
"Why shouldn't I? It makes things much more interesting and much more exciting!" replied Doc Ock.
While Spiderman and Doctor Octopus were talking, both Gwen and MJ grabbed two chairs.
"NOW!" screamed MJ as both girls flung their chairs at Doc Ock's face. Dr. Octopus-who was caught by surprise by the girls' attack-let go of Spiderman, who quickly, but clumsily ran towards MJ and Gwen and swung out of the window.
"I'LL GET YOU, SPIDERMAN!!!!!" screamed Otto Octavius as the dexterous metal limbs crawled out of the window and climbed down the building.
"Yeah, I'll be glad to see you again too!" screamed Spidey as he landed on top of an apartment building. He dropped MJ and Gwen off and asked, "Are you OK?"
Both nodded their heads.
"Have a fine day, ladies!" said Spiderman as he swung away from them. Both girls raced to the edge of the roof and watched him soar through the air and into the sky.
Author's Note: Thanks everyone for all of the really great reviews. I'm glad you guys liked the story. By the way, I do know that the blonde girl in the movie is NOT Gwen Stacy, but I personally like Gwen Stacy, and I just thought it'd be cool to add her. Yes, I know that the girl is Ursula, but Gwen Stacy was one of Peter's love interests in the comics, and I'm trying to mix stuff from the comics and the movie. I know someone was annoyed that Doc Ock didn't appear in the first chapter...well, here he is! I think he's one of Spidey's greatest villains. It's just a shame that they killed him off in the second movie. ( Oh well...ok...enjoy!
"What?" asked MJ as she snapped out of her reverie. She was so worried about Peter and at the same time, she was trying to think of a way to get rid of Gwen that she wasn't paying attention, "Can you repeat that?"
"I asked, 'so...you're his girlfriend, huh?' "
"Yeah," replied MJ dreamily; she just couldn't believe that she was finally Peter's girlfriend.
"You're really lucky, you know. Peter's a sweet, cute guy," said Gwen.
"Yeah," replied Mary Jane with a wide smile, "I know."
Gwen slowly nodded and stared up at the ceiling. After several seconds, she stared at her watch.
"Well," said Gwen, "I guess he is really busy. I'll just go."
"Yeah, OK," replied a relieved MJ, "It was nice meeting you, Gwen."
"Yeah...well, tell Peter I dropped by to say hi. OK...bye," said Gwen as she walked toward the green, wooden door.
Suddenly, just as Gwen reached for the doorknob, Spiderman swung in through the window. Gwen twirled around and just stared.
"Um..." said Peter, "Well...I'm lucky, aren't I? Two beautiful ladies waiting for me."
The two girls just continued to stare at him. Gwen's mouth was wide open, and her eyes looked like they were about to pop out of their sockets. MJ stared at Peter with worry and concern; she realized the deep cuts on his arms and legs.
"Come on, Parker, THINK!!!!" he thought.
Suddenly, he felt his spider-sense go off. He quickly jumped towards MJ and grabbed her and Gwen at the same time. Suddenly, there was a loud noise as Peter quickly shielded the two girls from the explosion with his body. He felt the fire singe the areas of his skin that were exposed. Due to his bruised rib cage, he stumbled and slowly rose to his feet. He turned around, and he couldn't believe it. "What is this?" he thought, "The return of the dead? I killed him yesterday!" There, standing in the doorway, was Doc Ock!
He snarled evilly as his tentacles reached for Spiderman. Peter tried to dodge Doc Ock's grip, but because of his sore rib cage, Otto easily captured him.
"GO!!!" he screamed at MJ and Gwen, but neither of them moved.
"Ah! You have company!" said Doc Ock with a smile.
"Don't touch them! This is between you and me!" Peter muttered angrily. Otto just smiled and squeezed Peter tighter with all four tentacles. Peter could hardly breathe due to the immense pressure from the metal limbs.
"Why shouldn't I? It makes things much more interesting and much more exciting!" replied Doc Ock.
While Spiderman and Doctor Octopus were talking, both Gwen and MJ grabbed two chairs.
"NOW!" screamed MJ as both girls flung their chairs at Doc Ock's face. Dr. Octopus-who was caught by surprise by the girls' attack-let go of Spiderman, who quickly, but clumsily ran towards MJ and Gwen and swung out of the window.
"I'LL GET YOU, SPIDERMAN!!!!!" screamed Otto Octavius as the dexterous metal limbs crawled out of the window and climbed down the building.
"Yeah, I'll be glad to see you again too!" screamed Spidey as he landed on top of an apartment building. He dropped MJ and Gwen off and asked, "Are you OK?"
Both nodded their heads.
"Have a fine day, ladies!" said Spiderman as he swung away from them. Both girls raced to the edge of the roof and watched him soar through the air and into the sky.
Author's Note: Thanks everyone for all of the really great reviews. I'm glad you guys liked the story. By the way, I do know that the blonde girl in the movie is NOT Gwen Stacy, but I personally like Gwen Stacy, and I just thought it'd be cool to add her. Yes, I know that the girl is Ursula, but Gwen Stacy was one of Peter's love interests in the comics, and I'm trying to mix stuff from the comics and the movie. I know someone was annoyed that Doc Ock didn't appear in the first chapter...well, here he is! I think he's one of Spidey's greatest villains. It's just a shame that they killed him off in the second movie. ( Oh well...ok...enjoy!