Hey I had fun reading your reviews to figure out if I should continue. I
will be answering back to them also. Yay it's my first chapter and I don't
know why but I just found myself with all this free time!
To those who were positive about my story I thank you a lot: FireStarter10388, Loselen Snowstar, YAY!!!, Cheerful Oblivious(luv ur stories!), Tribe Kitten, and koolkatt101.
For you 411 OmegaPirate, I did not copy off your person. Yours is Darkstar and mine is DeathFire! Do you or do you not see the difference!
If you're not on here then you reviewed after I wrote this.
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Robin's Rival
The titans had just finished breakfast and had decided to go to the park. All of them were happy to have some time to relax since they had just finished defeating Slade.
One of them however was not feeling so happy. It was Starfire of course.
She was still thinking about that feeling she had felt during her breakfast.
'Did I really hear his voice?' She was interrupted by Beast Boy's yells. She was sitting on a bench with Raven.
"Hey Star! Stop sitting around and come play some ball!" He threw Starfire a football and then she smiled and faced Raven.
"Very well friends. I shall play ball with you. Raven however was still sitting silently and was reading a book.
"Raven? Would you care to join us in the game?" Starfire asked encouragingly.
"I'll be the annoying cheering fans and audience without all the noise." Raven replied calmly.
"Suit yourself Rae." Raven's vein pops. "RAVEN! I mean Raven alright?" Beast Boy sweat drops as he walks away slowly.
"Alright then! Let's play ball. Same teams as usual, touchdown at the garbage cans, and I think we're ready to play tackle then. 7, 24, HIKE!
The battle of the football raged on. So far Robin and Cyborg were winning. At the final needed touchdown, Robin caught the ball and started to run towards the garbage can. Starfire was flying right behind him and was gaining on him.
"Yes! I'm gonna make it! I'm almost there! Ouch!" Someone fell on him.
"Good job Star! You got him." Just as Beast Boy said this, Robin and Starfire tumbled down the hill. "AAAHHHHH!" They were yelling.
"You guys ok down there?" Starfire and Robin landed with a thud. "I'm a little dizzy but in other words I'm ok." Robin said as he rubbed his head.
"Oh please forgive me Robin. Are you undamaged?" She then helps Robin up.
"Don't worry Star. I'm fine." He says while wiping dirt off his shirt. Just then his radio in his belt starts beeping. He answers it and hears the police chief.
"Titans! We need you to investigate an unidentified flying object that's nearing the Earth's atmosphere. It will arrive at the mountains in about three hours. We want you to go and check it out."
"Don't worry we'll be there." He then turns it off. "UFO? Are they serious?" He looks at the other Titans.
"They got to be kidding me! We just beat up Slade and they want us to battle aliens? Don't they have the army, navy, and the air force for that kind of stuff?" Beast Boy exaggerated.
"What Beast Boy? Surprised to find other people that are just as lazy as you?" Raven asked with a faint smile. Beast Boy's vein starts to pop.
"Look, I'd just love to stay here and chat bout all of our 'unique' traits but we have a mountain to patrol alright?" He broke up their fight.
"Starfire? You haven't said anything about this. Do you know anything about aliens deciding to visit Earth?" Robin just noticed how quiet she was.
"Why no Robin, I do not know any of the sort. Why do you ask me?" She then sweat drops.
"Because it is your home area and you by being a person from there should know." Raven explained.
"That is not my home anymore. I do miss it but here I have learned that homes aren't places where you live but where you are welcomed and loved." She then walks away and takes off in flight toward the nearest mountain.
"Ok. What was that about?" Beast Boy looks at the other titans.
"I don't have a clue." Cyborg replied sheepishly. They then turned to look at Robin.
"What!?! Don't look at me like I'm the official Starfire translator! I'll talk to her but right now we have get to that mountain. They take off.
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"Master DeathFire. We will be arriving sooner than planned. We will be there in approximately 30 Earth minutes." A servant walked up his young master.
"Excellent. I await the time when I see her beautiful face again." He said as he sat in a throne like chair. He alone and his servants had made the journey from Tamaran all the way to Earth. He was to arrive in one of Tamaran's battle ships in case there was need to attack.
"Sir. We have visuals on Planet Earth. It is our landing site. We have spotted five individuals. They appear to be expecting us. "Well then let's disappoint them. Don't change our landing site. I wish to see the thieves that have stolen her away from me."
In front of him there was a screen of a highly magnified picture of the Titans in a clearing in the forest. Three were males and two were females. Aside the picture was pieces of info he had taken from BlackFire.
"Well then. All of them appear to have special abilities. That is peculiar. There she sits on a tree stump and she does not make an attempt to escape. Could they be too powerful for her to overtake?" He sat wondering as he looked at the image.
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"We've been waiting for 2 hours! Can't I just quickly get back to the tower and grab a soda?" BB was complaining. (a/n I'm too lazy to type his full name so I'm using his initials.)
"No you can't. The time they gave us was estimated not precise. So you're just gonna have to keep you little butt planted on the ground till we detect something." Robin said as he gazed through binoculars at the sky.
"Aha! Good thing I packed a soda into my arm before leaving." Cyborg was haughtily drinking a soda while BB just watched while drooling.
"Robin I sense something nearing over there to the west." Raven has finally spoken as she pointed towards the shy over the sea and the tower.
"It's some sort of flying ship with spikes all over it." Robin whispered as he continued to look through the little device.
Starfire looked up. "That is what a Tamaranian ship looks like." She whispered. "No." She silently whispered as the ship neared and now all of them could see it.
"What is that thing?" BB yelled. "It looks like it's covered in thorns.
"It is a Tamaranian ship that belongs to a wealthy boy by the name of DeathFire." Starfire whispered.
"DeathFire? Whose that and what kind of kid owns something like that?" BB had a puzzled look on his face.
"Let us hope you do not find out." Starfire's head then lowered.
"Ok Titans get ready. We don't know if he is an enemy or not." Robin said as he pulled out his staff.
The ship was right above them. It was huge. It was the size of a house and more. When it had finally landed they all held their breath while the door shaft opened.
"You must be the Titans. I'm DeathFire. DeathFire from Tamaran." A voice came from a shadow that was walking down the platform.
"Really. What brings you so far from home?" Robin asked with a smirk. Starfire had also wanted to know.
"Something was taken from me and I want it returned. That is all." He now could be viewed fully. He was built just like Aqualad but the only thing different was his eyes and outfit. He wore black. His pants were black and so was his shirt. He had silver on the edges. His eyes were mixed with purple and black. Right now they were studying the Titans. His eyes were then drawn to the owner of the next voice.
"Nothing has been taken. You will leave now." Starfire's eyes were starting to glow. The other titans were amazed. They had never seen her get mad so soon.
"Starfire! How pleased I am to see you. I thought I had lost you for a while. If indeed nothing was taken then I'd just prefer to spend some time on Earth and you know, see its culture for myself." He remained calm.
'Why is he acting like this. He would normally be charging at every enemy he sees. Why does he change in his actions now?' Starfire thought to herself.
"As you Titans can see I come bearing peace. You can ask Starfire yourselves." He said as he pointed at Starfire. All eyes turned to her.
She didn't know what had caused her to say the next words but they just came out. "He can stay." She just said.
"Well now that all of that is fixed I should retire now. It has been a long journey." He then yawned and went inside. The door shaft closed.
"Ok. So did that really happen?" BB asked with his mouth hanging open.
"He seems like a nice guy. I don't think there's a problem." Cyborg looked at Robin.
"He can stay for now. I'm still not convinced of his plans. I'll alert the authorities to report any mischief that is caused by him." Robin said as they started to walk away.
As they arrived at the tower, Starfire remained silent. Everybody was too tired to notice. 'Why is he here? How did he change so much? I still don't trust him. The past won't repeat itself. I promise myself that.' She then fell asleep.
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Can you think of a cheesier ending to a chapter? It sucked. It'll get better I assure you. I'll update soon. REVIEW!
To those who were positive about my story I thank you a lot: FireStarter10388, Loselen Snowstar, YAY!!!, Cheerful Oblivious(luv ur stories!), Tribe Kitten, and koolkatt101.
For you 411 OmegaPirate, I did not copy off your person. Yours is Darkstar and mine is DeathFire! Do you or do you not see the difference!
If you're not on here then you reviewed after I wrote this.
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Robin's Rival
The titans had just finished breakfast and had decided to go to the park. All of them were happy to have some time to relax since they had just finished defeating Slade.
One of them however was not feeling so happy. It was Starfire of course.
She was still thinking about that feeling she had felt during her breakfast.
'Did I really hear his voice?' She was interrupted by Beast Boy's yells. She was sitting on a bench with Raven.
"Hey Star! Stop sitting around and come play some ball!" He threw Starfire a football and then she smiled and faced Raven.
"Very well friends. I shall play ball with you. Raven however was still sitting silently and was reading a book.
"Raven? Would you care to join us in the game?" Starfire asked encouragingly.
"I'll be the annoying cheering fans and audience without all the noise." Raven replied calmly.
"Suit yourself Rae." Raven's vein pops. "RAVEN! I mean Raven alright?" Beast Boy sweat drops as he walks away slowly.
"Alright then! Let's play ball. Same teams as usual, touchdown at the garbage cans, and I think we're ready to play tackle then. 7, 24, HIKE!
The battle of the football raged on. So far Robin and Cyborg were winning. At the final needed touchdown, Robin caught the ball and started to run towards the garbage can. Starfire was flying right behind him and was gaining on him.
"Yes! I'm gonna make it! I'm almost there! Ouch!" Someone fell on him.
"Good job Star! You got him." Just as Beast Boy said this, Robin and Starfire tumbled down the hill. "AAAHHHHH!" They were yelling.
"You guys ok down there?" Starfire and Robin landed with a thud. "I'm a little dizzy but in other words I'm ok." Robin said as he rubbed his head.
"Oh please forgive me Robin. Are you undamaged?" She then helps Robin up.
"Don't worry Star. I'm fine." He says while wiping dirt off his shirt. Just then his radio in his belt starts beeping. He answers it and hears the police chief.
"Titans! We need you to investigate an unidentified flying object that's nearing the Earth's atmosphere. It will arrive at the mountains in about three hours. We want you to go and check it out."
"Don't worry we'll be there." He then turns it off. "UFO? Are they serious?" He looks at the other Titans.
"They got to be kidding me! We just beat up Slade and they want us to battle aliens? Don't they have the army, navy, and the air force for that kind of stuff?" Beast Boy exaggerated.
"What Beast Boy? Surprised to find other people that are just as lazy as you?" Raven asked with a faint smile. Beast Boy's vein starts to pop.
"Look, I'd just love to stay here and chat bout all of our 'unique' traits but we have a mountain to patrol alright?" He broke up their fight.
"Starfire? You haven't said anything about this. Do you know anything about aliens deciding to visit Earth?" Robin just noticed how quiet she was.
"Why no Robin, I do not know any of the sort. Why do you ask me?" She then sweat drops.
"Because it is your home area and you by being a person from there should know." Raven explained.
"That is not my home anymore. I do miss it but here I have learned that homes aren't places where you live but where you are welcomed and loved." She then walks away and takes off in flight toward the nearest mountain.
"Ok. What was that about?" Beast Boy looks at the other titans.
"I don't have a clue." Cyborg replied sheepishly. They then turned to look at Robin.
"What!?! Don't look at me like I'm the official Starfire translator! I'll talk to her but right now we have get to that mountain. They take off.
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"Master DeathFire. We will be arriving sooner than planned. We will be there in approximately 30 Earth minutes." A servant walked up his young master.
"Excellent. I await the time when I see her beautiful face again." He said as he sat in a throne like chair. He alone and his servants had made the journey from Tamaran all the way to Earth. He was to arrive in one of Tamaran's battle ships in case there was need to attack.
"Sir. We have visuals on Planet Earth. It is our landing site. We have spotted five individuals. They appear to be expecting us. "Well then let's disappoint them. Don't change our landing site. I wish to see the thieves that have stolen her away from me."
In front of him there was a screen of a highly magnified picture of the Titans in a clearing in the forest. Three were males and two were females. Aside the picture was pieces of info he had taken from BlackFire.
"Well then. All of them appear to have special abilities. That is peculiar. There she sits on a tree stump and she does not make an attempt to escape. Could they be too powerful for her to overtake?" He sat wondering as he looked at the image.
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"We've been waiting for 2 hours! Can't I just quickly get back to the tower and grab a soda?" BB was complaining. (a/n I'm too lazy to type his full name so I'm using his initials.)
"No you can't. The time they gave us was estimated not precise. So you're just gonna have to keep you little butt planted on the ground till we detect something." Robin said as he gazed through binoculars at the sky.
"Aha! Good thing I packed a soda into my arm before leaving." Cyborg was haughtily drinking a soda while BB just watched while drooling.
"Robin I sense something nearing over there to the west." Raven has finally spoken as she pointed towards the shy over the sea and the tower.
"It's some sort of flying ship with spikes all over it." Robin whispered as he continued to look through the little device.
Starfire looked up. "That is what a Tamaranian ship looks like." She whispered. "No." She silently whispered as the ship neared and now all of them could see it.
"What is that thing?" BB yelled. "It looks like it's covered in thorns.
"It is a Tamaranian ship that belongs to a wealthy boy by the name of DeathFire." Starfire whispered.
"DeathFire? Whose that and what kind of kid owns something like that?" BB had a puzzled look on his face.
"Let us hope you do not find out." Starfire's head then lowered.
"Ok Titans get ready. We don't know if he is an enemy or not." Robin said as he pulled out his staff.
The ship was right above them. It was huge. It was the size of a house and more. When it had finally landed they all held their breath while the door shaft opened.
"You must be the Titans. I'm DeathFire. DeathFire from Tamaran." A voice came from a shadow that was walking down the platform.
"Really. What brings you so far from home?" Robin asked with a smirk. Starfire had also wanted to know.
"Something was taken from me and I want it returned. That is all." He now could be viewed fully. He was built just like Aqualad but the only thing different was his eyes and outfit. He wore black. His pants were black and so was his shirt. He had silver on the edges. His eyes were mixed with purple and black. Right now they were studying the Titans. His eyes were then drawn to the owner of the next voice.
"Nothing has been taken. You will leave now." Starfire's eyes were starting to glow. The other titans were amazed. They had never seen her get mad so soon.
"Starfire! How pleased I am to see you. I thought I had lost you for a while. If indeed nothing was taken then I'd just prefer to spend some time on Earth and you know, see its culture for myself." He remained calm.
'Why is he acting like this. He would normally be charging at every enemy he sees. Why does he change in his actions now?' Starfire thought to herself.
"As you Titans can see I come bearing peace. You can ask Starfire yourselves." He said as he pointed at Starfire. All eyes turned to her.
She didn't know what had caused her to say the next words but they just came out. "He can stay." She just said.
"Well now that all of that is fixed I should retire now. It has been a long journey." He then yawned and went inside. The door shaft closed.
"Ok. So did that really happen?" BB asked with his mouth hanging open.
"He seems like a nice guy. I don't think there's a problem." Cyborg looked at Robin.
"He can stay for now. I'm still not convinced of his plans. I'll alert the authorities to report any mischief that is caused by him." Robin said as they started to walk away.
As they arrived at the tower, Starfire remained silent. Everybody was too tired to notice. 'Why is he here? How did he change so much? I still don't trust him. The past won't repeat itself. I promise myself that.' She then fell asleep.
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Can you think of a cheesier ending to a chapter? It sucked. It'll get better I assure you. I'll update soon. REVIEW!