Disclaimer: I don't own any of these characters but I wish I owned Chad....mmm hah
Well this is my first fic so go easy on me please. I would highly appreciate any comments on how to improve my writing. Please try to keep away from writing flames. Remember its my first fic ever! So this story sets place at Chilton after the whole Dean dance marathon thing. Its been awhile and Rory and Tristan have been spending time together but are just friends so I guess this is a story about them. Life may seem perfect but things go wrong just when they seem perfect. So here goes...
chapter one
Rory sits alone on her bed. She's in the dark so her face is hidden. However, beneath all that darkness are tears. Tears that have been rolling down her face for hours. There are many thoughts going through her head.
How?...how can he do this to me. All those times we spent together? I thought he changed. What am I saying? People don't change. Especially Tristan. I mean he's the "King of Chilton."
Rory hear the phone ring but didnt get up to answer. She figured it was Tristan, calling to ask if she wanted to hang out. He was the last person she wanted to see, be with or even talked to at the moment.
Why do I care so much. I think I should just put it behind. It's none of my business anyway. Its not like we're together or dating or anything. We're just friends that hang out. Buy why?
Rory lets out a long sigh and hears a knock on her bedroom door.
"Hon, Bibleboy...." Lorelei was beginning to say but was cut off by Rory.
"Tell him I don't feel like talking right now. I'll call him later."
"He's not on the phone, Ror, he's at the door."
"Oh. Then tell him I'll be out soon."
"Umm ok. Is something wrong? Because usually when I say Tristan or anything near his name you're up in seconds!"
"No, nothing's wrong. Im just a little tired."
"Ok. Well I'll tell Tristan you're getting ready." Lorelei said as she left the room
"I guess I won't mention anything just yet since he doesn't know I know what I know." Rory said with a sigh."
A/N: well I don't really like the first chapter. Please review. I wont ask if I should continue yet because I don't feel like I got the point out there just yet.
Well this is my first fic so go easy on me please. I would highly appreciate any comments on how to improve my writing. Please try to keep away from writing flames. Remember its my first fic ever! So this story sets place at Chilton after the whole Dean dance marathon thing. Its been awhile and Rory and Tristan have been spending time together but are just friends so I guess this is a story about them. Life may seem perfect but things go wrong just when they seem perfect. So here goes...
chapter one
Rory sits alone on her bed. She's in the dark so her face is hidden. However, beneath all that darkness are tears. Tears that have been rolling down her face for hours. There are many thoughts going through her head.
How?...how can he do this to me. All those times we spent together? I thought he changed. What am I saying? People don't change. Especially Tristan. I mean he's the "King of Chilton."
Rory hear the phone ring but didnt get up to answer. She figured it was Tristan, calling to ask if she wanted to hang out. He was the last person she wanted to see, be with or even talked to at the moment.
Why do I care so much. I think I should just put it behind. It's none of my business anyway. Its not like we're together or dating or anything. We're just friends that hang out. Buy why?
Rory lets out a long sigh and hears a knock on her bedroom door.
"Hon, Bibleboy...." Lorelei was beginning to say but was cut off by Rory.
"Tell him I don't feel like talking right now. I'll call him later."
"He's not on the phone, Ror, he's at the door."
"Oh. Then tell him I'll be out soon."
"Umm ok. Is something wrong? Because usually when I say Tristan or anything near his name you're up in seconds!"
"No, nothing's wrong. Im just a little tired."
"Ok. Well I'll tell Tristan you're getting ready." Lorelei said as she left the room
"I guess I won't mention anything just yet since he doesn't know I know what I know." Rory said with a sigh."
A/N: well I don't really like the first chapter. Please review. I wont ask if I should continue yet because I don't feel like I got the point out there just yet.