I would like this short section to thank the readers who have reviewed. I think I will do this every few chapters. This will be short, however.
-Mercury Gold.: Thank you. I like the fact you like my work. I am also a fan of your work. Also, thanks again for permission to write this story. You made the first vampire fic on Golden Sun, as far as I know.
-lilTyphoon: Yeah, Isaac does make a nice Vampire. Though I haven't seen Queen of the Damned.
-the Mastah Classah: You noticed the chain-smoker part? It was a little detail I thought would be funny.
-Dark Elf 6: I am glad I got you to read another thing then just Yu-Gi-Oh!. Also, you shouldn't have played the game to be able to read this part, though you might miss a few names that are "hidden" in the story.
-Flamethrowerqueen: Well, I am glad you like vampires. They are also my favourite mythic creatures (if you can call them like that). And I agree that Dodonpa being a hunter is funny, but I needed some antagonists.
That will be all. I know some others have reviewed, but I can't reply to all. Keep replying, it means a lot. Oh, and to make sure...I DO NOT OWN GOLDEN SUN. thank you for your time.
Shadow in the NightThe Queen
The man ran through the dark hallway. It was decorated with drapes, showing scenery's of wars and bloodbaths. The only source of illumination where the torches, that hung to the wall every ten meters. It didn't gave off much light, but the visitor didn't need it.
None of the inhabitants would ever need it.
The man had blue hair, and was dressed in black trousers, with a light-blue shirt and a leather jacket. He was a special messenger, sent by the Counsel. He was the only one they trusted with such important messages. Therefore, he was rather respected by the other vampires.
The great wooden door in front of him was guarded by two vampires with axes, red from all the un cleaned blood.
"Halt, who goes there."
"How old fashioned. Don't you have something better to say then those stupid lines? I am Piers, the Messenger. I am here to inform the Queen, about her follow-up. The Counsel has send me."
"Wait here." The smallest of the two said, which wasn't little at all. He opened the door and closed it after him. Piers waited patiently. The guard who had remained there kept his eye on him.
The door opened, and the first guard reappeared. He stood aside, making room for the Messenger to walk through.
He entered a great room, gold and crystal chandeliers hanging from the ceiling, a great fire burning in the fireplace. The carpet was a blood red colour. Servants and slaves where walking from one hall to another. When he entered, a loud, high voice called out.
"Leave, everybody. The Messenger has news from the Counsel."
Everybody quickly ran, and soon the owned of the voice became visible. It was a purple-haired young girl, sitting against a throne. She looked like she was only 17 to 18, but the Messenger knew better then that. She was the Queen of the vampires. But even for a vampire, she looked very pale.
"How are you today, mistress. Are you feeling any better?"
"Damn it, Piers. You know I'll never feel well again. The poison is starting to take it's effect. I am in no mood for formalities. Call me by my name."
"Very well, Feizhi. I have come with news from the Counsel. They have located the man you asked us to find."
Feizhi's face cleared up a little. "They have found Isaac? Good. We need him, I need him."
Piers bowed. "Forgive me for my curiosity, but..."
Feizhi understood the question. "Master Felix spoke very high of him. You know that Felix was a very good friend of mine. And he has lived longer then most Vampires can ever hope of becoming, since they are not skilled enough.. His Apprentice has also exceeded our expectations. And once developed, his powers are like no other. There is no saying how old he could become."
"I am sorry for bringing this up. Master Felix was a great warrior, and a good man."
"It is a tragedy he had to die like this, and I will soon follow him. I'll even die the same way he has, by the poison. I want Isaac to be the next prince of Darkness. When he has found his mate, he will become the King, and lead our people."
"But did you not say that his powers are not yet developed?"
Feizhi dropped her head. "I know, but I have no time to train him on that level. Besides, I am like you, a "Regular" vampire. The most powerful normal, yes, but still, I am no stronger then a mediocre Higher one. He will become top class. But he isn't yet, so no word about his fate, for should this information leak out, the hunters will chase him before he comes to his full potential. And they will know I am weak. Do I have your word, Piers?"
Piers stood straight. "I promise, this information will not be revealed to any one but the counsel and Isaac himself." Feizhi had to laugh about his formal ways. "You are funny, Piers. I haven't laughed like this for quite some time. Thank you." "You are welcome, my Queen."
Piers turned serious again. "But how about your Court? How do they react to this news?"
"The current Vampire Court will be disbanded. They have enough power to survive on their own. Isaac has to find his own friends to bind to himself and granting them power. The blood bond I have with my court will be dispelled, and they will lose their additional powers. But there is nothing they can do about it. Now tell me, where is Isaac?"
"The Counsel told me, they had located him in New York. He took a plane from Austria. He is currently in the area of Central Par, for there have been at least six murders there in less then 5 days."
"Six? Why would he kill that many in one place? Isaac should know not to just kill there."
"Apparently he hasn't just killed there, near identical murders have happened in the area surrounding it. And it aren't the regular vampires. He is up to something."
"So many. Oh well, let him. As long as he doesn't get caught. Go to the counsel. I want you to go and find him."
"Me? Feizhi, with all due respect I can't survive in the sunlight." "Then go out at night. You can travel with one of my airplanes. They have painted windows. Necro-proof, so don't worry. The pilots are human slaves. I'll send a snack with you. The plane will be waiting outside the Counsel building at sunset tomorrow. Inform the elders as quickly as possible. They will have to rehire a Messenger until you return."
"Yes, my Queen. I obey your orders. Farewell Feizhi. I hope to see you again. Try not to let the pain get too much."
Feizhi grinned. "Don't worry. I am not about to give in. Just bring him back, no matter what you have to do; Whether it is forcing him, or doing his bidding."
Piers bowed one last time and turned. Without looking back, he left the room. Once out of the castle, he went to the motor cycle in front of the castle. He let the engine roar, and raced down the mountain. The castle was located in Romania, and therefore there where not many people inhabiting. But there was a village at the bottom of the downhill road. He would have to stay there until next night.
Feizhi watched him ride down the road, then she returned to her throne room. As soon as she entered, four vampires appeared before her, seemingly out of nothing. There where two male, and two female ones.
"My Queen, is this Isaac truly worth the throne?" the blond male asked.
"Bernardo, at this point, there is no one better then he." She sighed. "I have no choice, you know. This poison will kill me in the next few weeks. And you will lose part of your strength. The part you gained after I bonded you to me. It had some disadvantages for you, but not being able to go somewhere when I say you can't isn't so bad, in exchange for becoming almost twice as strong."
Bernardo furiously shook his head, and a red-haired girl spoke. "Feizhi, we do not care about this power. We used it to help you, because we care for you. That is why we are your Court." All of them nodded.
"Thank you, my friends." She held back a tear.
-Mercury Gold.: Thank you. I like the fact you like my work. I am also a fan of your work. Also, thanks again for permission to write this story. You made the first vampire fic on Golden Sun, as far as I know.
-lilTyphoon: Yeah, Isaac does make a nice Vampire. Though I haven't seen Queen of the Damned.
-the Mastah Classah: You noticed the chain-smoker part? It was a little detail I thought would be funny.
-Dark Elf 6: I am glad I got you to read another thing then just Yu-Gi-Oh!. Also, you shouldn't have played the game to be able to read this part, though you might miss a few names that are "hidden" in the story.
-Flamethrowerqueen: Well, I am glad you like vampires. They are also my favourite mythic creatures (if you can call them like that). And I agree that Dodonpa being a hunter is funny, but I needed some antagonists.
That will be all. I know some others have reviewed, but I can't reply to all. Keep replying, it means a lot. Oh, and to make sure...I DO NOT OWN GOLDEN SUN. thank you for your time.
Shadow in the NightThe Queen
The man ran through the dark hallway. It was decorated with drapes, showing scenery's of wars and bloodbaths. The only source of illumination where the torches, that hung to the wall every ten meters. It didn't gave off much light, but the visitor didn't need it.
None of the inhabitants would ever need it.
The man had blue hair, and was dressed in black trousers, with a light-blue shirt and a leather jacket. He was a special messenger, sent by the Counsel. He was the only one they trusted with such important messages. Therefore, he was rather respected by the other vampires.
The great wooden door in front of him was guarded by two vampires with axes, red from all the un cleaned blood.
"Halt, who goes there."
"How old fashioned. Don't you have something better to say then those stupid lines? I am Piers, the Messenger. I am here to inform the Queen, about her follow-up. The Counsel has send me."
"Wait here." The smallest of the two said, which wasn't little at all. He opened the door and closed it after him. Piers waited patiently. The guard who had remained there kept his eye on him.
The door opened, and the first guard reappeared. He stood aside, making room for the Messenger to walk through.
He entered a great room, gold and crystal chandeliers hanging from the ceiling, a great fire burning in the fireplace. The carpet was a blood red colour. Servants and slaves where walking from one hall to another. When he entered, a loud, high voice called out.
"Leave, everybody. The Messenger has news from the Counsel."
Everybody quickly ran, and soon the owned of the voice became visible. It was a purple-haired young girl, sitting against a throne. She looked like she was only 17 to 18, but the Messenger knew better then that. She was the Queen of the vampires. But even for a vampire, she looked very pale.
"How are you today, mistress. Are you feeling any better?"
"Damn it, Piers. You know I'll never feel well again. The poison is starting to take it's effect. I am in no mood for formalities. Call me by my name."
"Very well, Feizhi. I have come with news from the Counsel. They have located the man you asked us to find."
Feizhi's face cleared up a little. "They have found Isaac? Good. We need him, I need him."
Piers bowed. "Forgive me for my curiosity, but..."
Feizhi understood the question. "Master Felix spoke very high of him. You know that Felix was a very good friend of mine. And he has lived longer then most Vampires can ever hope of becoming, since they are not skilled enough.. His Apprentice has also exceeded our expectations. And once developed, his powers are like no other. There is no saying how old he could become."
"I am sorry for bringing this up. Master Felix was a great warrior, and a good man."
"It is a tragedy he had to die like this, and I will soon follow him. I'll even die the same way he has, by the poison. I want Isaac to be the next prince of Darkness. When he has found his mate, he will become the King, and lead our people."
"But did you not say that his powers are not yet developed?"
Feizhi dropped her head. "I know, but I have no time to train him on that level. Besides, I am like you, a "Regular" vampire. The most powerful normal, yes, but still, I am no stronger then a mediocre Higher one. He will become top class. But he isn't yet, so no word about his fate, for should this information leak out, the hunters will chase him before he comes to his full potential. And they will know I am weak. Do I have your word, Piers?"
Piers stood straight. "I promise, this information will not be revealed to any one but the counsel and Isaac himself." Feizhi had to laugh about his formal ways. "You are funny, Piers. I haven't laughed like this for quite some time. Thank you." "You are welcome, my Queen."
Piers turned serious again. "But how about your Court? How do they react to this news?"
"The current Vampire Court will be disbanded. They have enough power to survive on their own. Isaac has to find his own friends to bind to himself and granting them power. The blood bond I have with my court will be dispelled, and they will lose their additional powers. But there is nothing they can do about it. Now tell me, where is Isaac?"
"The Counsel told me, they had located him in New York. He took a plane from Austria. He is currently in the area of Central Par, for there have been at least six murders there in less then 5 days."
"Six? Why would he kill that many in one place? Isaac should know not to just kill there."
"Apparently he hasn't just killed there, near identical murders have happened in the area surrounding it. And it aren't the regular vampires. He is up to something."
"So many. Oh well, let him. As long as he doesn't get caught. Go to the counsel. I want you to go and find him."
"Me? Feizhi, with all due respect I can't survive in the sunlight." "Then go out at night. You can travel with one of my airplanes. They have painted windows. Necro-proof, so don't worry. The pilots are human slaves. I'll send a snack with you. The plane will be waiting outside the Counsel building at sunset tomorrow. Inform the elders as quickly as possible. They will have to rehire a Messenger until you return."
"Yes, my Queen. I obey your orders. Farewell Feizhi. I hope to see you again. Try not to let the pain get too much."
Feizhi grinned. "Don't worry. I am not about to give in. Just bring him back, no matter what you have to do; Whether it is forcing him, or doing his bidding."
Piers bowed one last time and turned. Without looking back, he left the room. Once out of the castle, he went to the motor cycle in front of the castle. He let the engine roar, and raced down the mountain. The castle was located in Romania, and therefore there where not many people inhabiting. But there was a village at the bottom of the downhill road. He would have to stay there until next night.
Feizhi watched him ride down the road, then she returned to her throne room. As soon as she entered, four vampires appeared before her, seemingly out of nothing. There where two male, and two female ones.
"My Queen, is this Isaac truly worth the throne?" the blond male asked.
"Bernardo, at this point, there is no one better then he." She sighed. "I have no choice, you know. This poison will kill me in the next few weeks. And you will lose part of your strength. The part you gained after I bonded you to me. It had some disadvantages for you, but not being able to go somewhere when I say you can't isn't so bad, in exchange for becoming almost twice as strong."
Bernardo furiously shook his head, and a red-haired girl spoke. "Feizhi, we do not care about this power. We used it to help you, because we care for you. That is why we are your Court." All of them nodded.
"Thank you, my friends." She held back a tear.