Hiya!!! well this is the second Chapter....Thanks for the reviews to far!!!
Kit-4ever2004 : I'm glad that it made you laugh!!! I hope that this chapter will make you laugh too!!
Angelic-behaviour: I watched Mulan the movie..Anyway...I hope that you like this chapter.....
Awai-umi: Thanks again for reminding me!! Once i fixed it, It took ages to change...but it's been sorted now.... oh! and the mirical thing.....? Thanks!
Angelblossom247: Its only based on the story! although...I can understand where you are coming from. Tomoyo is obviously known for her Videocamera obsession...but i couldn't resist putting it in...Its mainly about CardCaptors...But with the Mulan theme...Not really set in that time....
Bennie Babbie: Yeh...but i aint gonna say anything because i don't wanna give away what i have instore for later!
Please review and i will update more often! Anyway...Here is the second chapter....
"speaking"
' thinking'
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'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'= flashback
........................................................................................................... Sakura was infront of Kahn (A/N: for people who can't remember who Kahn was, it's her horse.) who was leaning over a stone, playing nought and crosses with himself in the dirt, chewing on a piece of grass looking at Sakura.
"Okay, so how does this sound?" Sakura walked, with her chest up high and her fists clenched swinging high....
"Er Hi!, I'm new!!!! oh i see you have a sword, i have one too!!!!!!....." she goes to grab her sword but misses..."There very manly and tough....!" Kahn laughed and rolled over. Sakura chucked a shoe at his head!!! "I'm working on it!!!!!!!!! it's going to take a mirical to get into there" she folded back the leaves and looked at the camp. She took in one deep breath and sighed. Then a big puff of fire burst from behind a big stone and between the trees. A big scary shadow formed on the massive stone inbetween the trees. and then the voice spoke...
"DID I HEAR SOMEONE ASK FOR A MIRACAL?!!!LET ME HEAR YOU SAY AH!!!!" The shadow spoke.Sakura screamed...
"AH!!" and ran to hide behind her horse who hid behind a stone.
"THAT'S CLOSE ENOUGH!!!!! YOUR ANCESTORS SENT ME TO PROTECT YOU AND ONCE YOUR PARENTS FIND OUT THAT YOU ARE GONE, YOU ARE GONNA WISH THAT YOU COULD GET A MIRACAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
'It's a ghost' Sakura shouted, then she thought for a second....'Ancestors?' "MY ANCESTORS SENT....YOU!"
"THAT'S RIGHT SAKURA!!!!" The shadow said as powerful as he could possible be to get her attention.
"W-who are you???!" Sakura stuttered, nervously. The flames started dying out. The shadow disappeared for a second. He spoke quietly to the other living being behind the stone.
"Listen, if your gonna stay with me, your gonna have to work...." to Suppi. The flames grew bigger."EXCUSE ME?!who am i?WHO AM I?! WHY, I AM THE GOD IN THE LOST SOULS, I AM THE POWERFUL...." The Shadow pulled Muscles in his arms.."...THE PLEASURABLE!......" he started walking from behind the stone, the shadow getting smaller, Sakura beginning to smile..."THE UNDESTRUCTABLE....." she grew an even bigger smile on her face ".......KERO!" her face dropped her smile as she looked at the figure holding his hands out. "I'm pretty hot huh!? you miss me?" Kahn stamped all over him.
"KERO!!!!!" Sakura ran out to go and hug him. He was literatly suffercating. "MY ANCESTORS SENT YOU!!??"
"YEP! YOU GOTTA GO HOME SAKURA!" Sakura shook her head violently.
"I'M NOT GOING HOME! I HAVE TO TAKE MY FATHERS PLACE IN THE WAR!!!" Kero gave in to the fact that she wasn't going to return home with him until the war had finished and she had achieved her goal. Kero gave one big smirk on his face and said....
"Okay, i'll stay with you." Then a figure came out from behind the stone, it was Suppi. "So will I!!"
"Ermmmm.....you said my ancestors sent you here watch over me?....well your......" Sakura started to explain
"Intimidating? Kawaii?......" Kero said looking at her
"Tiny...!" Sakura said with a smirk on her face.
"Of course i am, I'm Travel size, now if i was my REAL size then your sheep here (A/N:KAHN) would die of fright!" Kero stated as Kahn went to bite him. "DOWN SHEEPY! now your ancestors sent me cos i have unimaginable powers,as you know, like i can see straight through your armor....." Sakura slapped him.
"OKAY! DISHONOUR, DISHONOUR ON YOUR WHOLE FAMILY, DISHONOUR ON YOU, DISHONOUR ON YOUR SHEEP! DISHONOUR ON CLOW REED AND THE BRAT!!!" Sakura fell to the floor and cried. Kero looked at Suppi and looked down at his feet and they twitched a little. Kahn went to go and comfort Sakura.
"You really shouldn't have said that.....Kero...." Suppi whispered. Suppi walked over to Sakura and comforted her. Kero walked over and spoke...but Sakura interupted.
"I miss him Kero, i miss him so much....it hurts me bad....it's been 4 years now, and i'm 16. there has been no reply from him...i miss him....."
"Are you on about, who i think your on about?" Kero questioned.
Sakura nodded and a tear escaped her eye. She swiftly brought her self from the ground, and looked up at the sky....
"I miss little wolf, I miss Syaoran....." Sakura said with a faint smile on her face. Everyone hung their head, but then Kero flug his head up and smiled....
"Okay lets put all that behind us and lets get this show on the road! Suppi to the bags!!!!!! come on Sheepy!!" Kero said clapping his paws/hands together and walking with a strutt. Sakura nodded and followed. Kahn grunted (A/N: well you know that thing that horses do when they aren't very pleased with summat or are bored?)
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They arrived at the enterance of the camp and just before they were about to enter Kero climbed into Sakura's collar of her armor and Suppi and Kahn rode off to get a place to put up her tent. It was just Kero and Sakura.
"OKAY! FIRST things first, your gonna need to cast a spell on your self to hide your powers cos they are very strong and someone might sense them so do that first!" She nodded
"Okay!" she called out her key and then hid her aura.
"OKAY THIS IS IT..." he said peering out of her collar." now to show them your man look, shoulders back, chest high, feet apart, head up and STURTTT! 2,3,4,2,2,3,4 and work it!"
They went into the camp and Sakura looked as if she had bricks everywhere in her armor and she was going to knock out anyone in her way. Kero was proud of his work. Everyone stared at her and looked scared but she was just smiling saying "Hi" in her Manly voice. She saw a guy picking his nose....
"Beautiful isn't it!" Kero sarcastically remarked on what Sakura was seeing. And then they saw a guy biting off his toe nails with his teeth.
"They're Disgusting!" Sakura said with her top lip turned up and turning her head away from the stench.
"No, they're men, now that is exactly what you are gonna have to do so watch and learn, Sakura" Kero said laughing quietly under his voice.
"It isn't funny kero!" Sakura said until she walked to the practise field and then saw a guy with a big tatoo on his chest. He said
"This tattoo will protect me from harm!" smiling with a dumb look and a tooth missing from the front of his teeth. There were three guys next to him. The small one punched looked at the tall thin one and then back and punched the guy in the stomach, then kissed his fist after hitting him and then the tall thin one shouted...
"I hope you can get your money back!!" and burst out laughing.
"I don't think i can do this!" Sakura said staring after what she had just seen.
"It's all about attitude, you've gotta be tough, like this guy here...." she stared at him and he looked at her.
"WHAT are you looking at?" he said then turning away to spit on the ground and walk away.
"Punch him, it's how your ment to say hello....." She punched him and he went flying into his mate who was big and tall.
"Oh, you've made a friend" He said picking him and then putting him down to relax.
Sakura thought...'I know who they are! Oohh...No....this could spell out trouble......' before she could think....Kero Interupted......
"Slap him on the behind, he'd like that." She couldn't control her self and before she knew it...She slapped him on the arss and he grabbed her by her armor.
"I'm gonna hit you so hard, it's gonna make your ancestors dizzy..." he said but the he was picked up by the big and tall guy.
"Relax and chant with me...." He was so far off the ground that they both started to meditate to get calm again. Swinging him backwards and forwards.Sakura and the hidden Kero stared in amazment. Then the tall and big guy said...(A/N:i bet your thinking haven't they got names? They will later trust me.)
"Feeling better?" The small one nodded and walked away saying....
"ah...your not worth my time, chicken boy...." but Kero shot up out from Sakura's hood and hid while he said....
"CHICKEN BOY?!!! SAY THAT TO MY FACE YOU LIMPING NOODLE!!!!!" The small fat one when around to hit Sakura, but she ducked and he hit his best friend, the tall thin one and he fell to the floor.
"Sorry" he said. Sakura scurried out of the fighting mess so no one would notice she was gone but they were on top of the big and tall on when they noticed...
"THERE HE GOES!!!!!!" They all chased after Sakura, but Sakura being a Athletic person even when she was younger....she out ran then all. She hid in the tent but they all ran past her and accidently ran into the dinner cue. The small one stopped dead in his tracks, the tall and thin one just barely stopped without touching him and the big one came with his hands all interlocked with each other and knocked both of them. They all fell like domino's and knocked over the cook and his pot of rice all over the grass. They all started to fight. Including Sakura.
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Meanwhile in the generals tent they were planning out a stratagy on how to come abouts of the war and where to go. The two generals were deciding the plans and figuring out what to do. One was an amber eyed General and the other was the blue-Haired boy, Eriol.
"The huns have struck here, here and here......" Eriol pointed at the places on the map. The amber eyed boy listen carefully. " I will take the main troops into the Nibleheim and stop the enemy from destroying this village, you will stay and train the new recrutes, when we are ready then, you will join us, captain."
"Okay, I will." The Amber eyed boy looked up from the map and called his sword out saying his incantation. He had a serious facial expression by that point because it was a big responsablity but he thought 'it will be hard work but all my troops are commited and stay out of trouble.....yeh...it will be kinda easy.....' he nodded and he got up to leave. The tent was empty apart from him, he looked at the sword and then back up and smirked. He stepped out of the tent to see everyone fighting in a grassy area smothered with rice. He looked at Eriol and said..."Thanks" They smiled. He smiled. A troop saluted to the new general and fainted on the floor. The other General got on a horse and spoke...
"Good Luck Captain, i'll see you in a few weeks." And he rode off with his troops. The Captain sighed. and stood up tall.
"MEN!!!!!!!" They all froze in their positions. and pointed at Sakura on the floor.
"He started it!!" The Captain walked over to Sakura and picked her up.Kero hid. She brushed her self off.
"I don't want anyone causing trouble while i'm here, do you understan......" He looked in her eyes and they looked familular but he couldn't sense the aura. 'is it her? no, only men are allowed in this camp, don't be stupid!'
'He looks so famiular! I can sense something...but it can't possibly be......him can it? NO! he went back to Hong Kong!' "Iuh uh..." in a womans voice but then she changed it to a boys voice. and puffed up her shoulders and chest swinging her arms. The Captain folded his arms and watched. "I uh i'm sorry you had to see that but you know...when you get those manly urges......and you've just got to kill someone?" she punched his arm. He looked at it then back at her. (A/N: still unaware that she was a he. ) "...and you know....fix things..."
He rushed forward...."WHATS YOUR NAME!" looking serious and angry.
"I uh.....I've got a name...and it's a boys name too.... "
Kero hid behind her neck thinking and whispering "ah choo, how about ah choo?"
"Ah choo!" Sakura shouted
"Ah choo?" The captain stared at her.
" That's so funny isn't it......." Kero was laughing...
"Kero......"Sakura wispered
"KERO?!!!!How do you know about Kero???!!" The captain stared at her even more. everyone started to whisper....."Who's Kero??"
"It's not! I don't know where Kero Came from! No! my names not Kero!"
"Then what is it?!"
" Ah my stomachs rumbling......" Kero mumbled
" IT'S RUMB LING" Sakura announced, Kero shuffled around. Sakura's head was sweating
" RUMB LING?"
" Yes, my name is Rumb Ling!" Sakura decided that was going to be her final boys name.
" OKAY GENTLEMEN! thanks to your new friend Rumb Ling (A/N: :-) ) you will spend the whole of tonight picking up every single grain of rice....and then tomorrow.....the real work begins............." he said walking off.
All the guys started punching the palms of their hands and looking at Sakura.....
"You know Sakura, i think we need to work on the way you act....." Sakura replied
"I have to agree, that was hell!, Kero!, and plus his eyes....they looked familular, but i can't see much with his helmet on."
"Oh well you need a good nights rest. That should do you good." Kero looked out of he corner of his eye, eyeing up the pudding section. "....because tomorrow is going to be one hell of a day for you!......."
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